Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPTFZWW01CR9736EJG0QFR

Run Details

Duration:
25.4s
Cost:
$0.003830
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon raven flickered like a dying thought as Rory pushed through the door of *The Raven’s Nest*, the hinge groaning in protest. The bar smelled of aged whiskey and old secrets—polished wood, damp wool, the faint metallic tang of the rain that had just stopped outside. She shook the water from her jacket, the black fabric clinging to her shoulders, and scanned the room. Silas was behind the bar, wiping a glass with slow, deliberate strokes, his signet ring catching the low light. He didn’t look up, but she knew he’d clocked her the second she walked in. She slid onto a stool, the wood smooth beneath her palms, worn down by decades of restless hands. “You’re open late.” Silas set the glass down. “You’re out late.” Rory exhaled through her nose, a half-laugh. “Delivery to Whitechapel. Some banker with a craving for dumplings at midnight.” She reached for the bowl of peanuts between them, cracked one between her fingers. The salt stung the small scar on her wrist, a ghost of childhood clumsiness. Silas poured her a finger of whiskey without asking. “You look like hell.” “Thanks.” She took the glass, let the amber burn settle in her chest. The bar was quiet tonight—just a couple of regulars hunched over their drinks in the corner, the hum of their voices low and indistinct. The kind of night where the past could slip in unnoticed. Then the door opened again. A gust of wind sent a scatter of rain across the threshold, and for a second, Rory didn’t recognize the man who stepped inside. He was taller than she remembered, broader in the shoulders, his dark hair cropped short at the sides, the top left long enough to fall into his eyes. But it was the eyes that did it—sharp, assessing, the same deep brown she’d once known better than her own reflection. Evan. Her fingers tightened around the glass. He hesitated just inside the door, blinking against the dim light, and when his gaze landed on her, something flickered across his face—surprise, then something darker, something like guilt. For a heartbeat, neither of them moved. Then he shut the door behind him and walked toward the bar, his steps measured, like he was giving her time to bolt. Rory didn’t. Silas glanced between them, his expression unreadable, but his fingers stilled on the glass he’d been drying. He knew. Of course he knew. Evan took the stool two down from hers, leaving the one between them empty, a no-man’s-land of cracked leather and old grudges. “Rory.” Her name in his voice was a punch to the sternum. She swallowed, forced her fingers to relax. “Evan. Fancy seeing you here.” He almost smiled. Almost. “Yeah. Wild coincidence.” Silas set a tumbler in front of him, neat, no ice. Evan didn’t thank him. His hands were different—thicker, knuckles scarred, the left one wrapped in a faded leather bracelet she didn’t recognize. No wedding ring. Not that it meant anything. “You’re in London,” she said, because someone had to say something. “For a few months.” He took a sip, winced slightly. “Work.” “What kind of work?” His lips quirked. “The kind that pays.” She should’ve left it at that. Should’ve slid off the stool, tossed a few quid on the bar, and walked out into the rain. But the whiskey was warm in her veins, and the old, reckless part of her—the part that had once thought she could outrun her own mistakes—whispered, *Ask him.* “You look different.” Evan set his glass down. “So do you.” She didn’t touch her face, but she felt it—the way her cheekbones were sharper now, the dark circles under her eyes that no amount of sleep ever quite erased. “Life’ll do that.” “Yeah.” He rubbed his thumb along the rim of his glass. “Heard you left Cardiff.” “People talk.” “Not as much as you’d think.” A pause. “Your dad still giving you hell about it?” Rory laughed, sharp and humorless. “Every Christmas card.” Evan’s mouth twisted. He knew Brendan Carter’s particular brand of disappointment—how it settled in your bones, heavy as a second skeleton. “You always did hate law.” “And you always did love pointing that out.” Silence. The kind that stretched too thin, too tight, like a wire about to snap. Silas cleared his throat. “You two need another round, or are we just torturing ourselves tonight?” Evan exhaled, rough. “Yeah. Another.” Rory didn’t object. The whiskey burned less the second time. “So,” Evan said, turning slightly toward her, “what’ve you been up to? Besides dodging your father’s calls.” She considered lying. Considered giving him the polished version—the one she told acquaintances, the one that didn’t include the flat above a bar, the delivery job, the way she still sometimes woke up gasping, her sheets tangled like ropes. But this was Evan. Or it had been, once. And the whiskey was doing its work. “I run deliveries for a Chinese place in Chinatown. Live above this bar.” She tilted her head toward Silas, who gave her the barest nod of acknowledgment. “It’s… fine.” Evan’s brow furrowed. “You’re working at a restaurant?” “Part-time.” “And the rest of the time?” She swirled her drink. “Surviving.” He looked like he wanted to argue, but he just nodded, jaw tight. “And Eva? She still in Cardiff?” Rory’s chest ached. “No. She’s in Manchester now. Teaching.” “She always wanted to do that.” “Yeah.” Rory traced the rim of her glass. “She’s good at it.” Another silence. Evan broke it. “I’m sorry, Rory.” The words hit her like a physical blow. She set her glass down carefully, because if she didn’t, she might throw it. “For what, exactly?” He didn’t flinch. “For everything.” She laughed, high and brittle. “That’s a hell of a lot to apologize for, Evan.” “I know.” “Do you?” Her voice was rising, but she couldn’t stop it. “Because last I checked, *sorry* doesn’t fix much.” Silas shifted, just slightly, his weight settling onto his bad leg. A warning. She ignored it. Evan’s hands were fists on the bar. “I was an arsehole. I know that. But I was—” He cut himself off, shook his head. “It doesn’t matter. I was wrong. And I’m sorry.” Rory stared at him. The boy she’d known—the one who’d made her laugh until her sides ached, who’d held her hair back when she was sick, who’d known her better than anyone—was gone. This man in front of her was a stranger with familiar eyes. “What happened to you?” she asked, quieter now. Evan looked down at his hands. The scars. The bracelet. “Life,” he said. “Same as you.” She wanted to press. Wanted to demand answers, to peel back the years like layers of old wallpaper and see what was underneath. But the weight of it all—the exhaustion, the whiskey, the way her pulse still jumped when he looked at her—settled over her like a blanket. She finished her drink in one swallow. Silas was already reaching for her coat, holding it out. She slipped her arms into the sleeves, the wool damp from the rain. Evan didn’t try to stop her. The hinge groaned again as she pushed the door open, the neon raven flickering one last time before she stepped into the night. The rain had started again, a fine mist that beaded on her lashes. She didn’t look back. Behind her, she heard the clink of glass, the low murmur of Silas’ voice. Then Evan’s, too quiet to make out the words. She walked faster.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.26
leniency0.52
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1275
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.02% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1275
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"unreadable"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"furrowed"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"weight"
count2
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"scanned"
2"measured"
3"unreadable"
4"silence"
5"furrowed"
6"traced"
7"weight"
8"familiar"
9"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences101
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences138
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords6
totalWords1258
ratio0.005
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"Ask him."
2"sorry"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1029
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.36
worstName"Evan"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Rory9
Raven1
Evan14
Brendan1
Carter1
Silas9
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Evan"
3"Brendan"
4"Carter"
5"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore0.82
windowScore0.667
68.03% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"something like guilt"
1"looked like he wanted to argue, but he ju"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1258
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences138
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs64
mean19.66
std19.21
cv0.977
sampleLengths
0100
121
28
347
413
548
65
773
81
96
1059
112
1223
1323
1423
157
1641
1711
1811
194
207
2152
223
238
2432
2515
262
2716
288
2926
308
3115
3216
335
3410
3517
3655
3729
388
391
406
415
4219
439
446
4512
468
4725
485
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences101
matches
0"was gone"
94.18% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs189
matches
0"was giving"
1"was doing"
2"was rising"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences138
ratio0.08
matches
0"The bar smelled of aged whiskey and old secrets—polished wood, damp wool, the faint metallic tang of the rain that had just stopped outside."
1"The bar was quiet tonight—just a couple of regulars hunched over their drinks in the corner, the hum of their voices low and indistinct."
2"But it was the eyes that did it—sharp, assessing, the same deep brown she’d once known better than her own reflection."
3"He hesitated just inside the door, blinking against the dim light, and when his gaze landed on her, something flickered across his face—surprise, then something darker, something like guilt."
4"His hands were different—thicker, knuckles scarred, the left one wrapped in a faded leather bracelet she didn’t recognize."
5"But the whiskey was warm in her veins, and the old, reckless part of her—the part that had once thought she could outrun her own mistakes—whispered, *Ask him.*"
6"She didn’t touch her face, but she felt it—the way her cheekbones were sharper now, the dark circles under her eyes that no amount of sleep ever quite erased."
7"He knew Brendan Carter’s particular brand of disappointment—how it settled in your bones, heavy as a second skeleton."
8"Considered giving him the polished version—the one she told acquaintances, the one that didn’t include the flat above a bar, the delivery job, the way she still sometimes woke up gasping, her sheets tangled like ropes."
9"The boy she’d known—the one who’d made her laugh until her sides ached, who’d held her hair back when she was sick, who’d known her better than anyone—was gone."
10"But the weight of it all—the exhaustion, the whiskey, the way her pulse still jumped when he looked at her—settled over her like a blanket."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1034
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.035783365570599614
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0038684719535783366
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences138
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences138
mean9.12
std7.9
cv0.867
sampleLengths
024
124
218
319
415
518
63
75
83
97
1026
1114
129
134
1413
1524
1611
175
1824
1928
2021
211
226
2329
247
2523
262
2717
282
294
3022
311
3211
337
345
353
361
373
3811
394
4018
413
425
4311
4410
451
464
473
484
496
51.45% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.32608695652173914
totalSentences138
uniqueOpeners45
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences90
matches
0"Then the door opened again."
1"Then he shut the door"
2"Of course he knew."
3"Then Evan’s, too quiet to"
ratio0.044
64.44% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences90
matches
0"She shook the water from"
1"He didn’t look up, but"
2"She slid onto a stool,"
3"She reached for the bowl"
4"She took the glass, let"
5"He was taller than she"
6"Her fingers tightened around the"
7"He hesitated just inside the"
8"Her name in his voice"
9"She swallowed, forced her fingers"
10"He almost smiled."
11"His hands were different—thicker, knuckles"
12"she said, because someone had"
13"He took a sip, winced"
14"His lips quirked."
15"She should’ve left it at"
16"She didn’t touch her face,"
17"He rubbed his thumb along"
18"He knew Brendan Carter’s particular"
19"She considered lying."
ratio0.389
54.44% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences90
matches
0"The green neon raven flickered"
1"The bar smelled of aged"
2"She shook the water from"
3"Silas was behind the bar,"
4"He didn’t look up, but"
5"She slid onto a stool,"
6"Silas set the glass down."
7"Rory exhaled through her nose,"
8"She reached for the bowl"
9"The salt stung the small"
10"Silas poured her a finger"
11"She took the glass, let"
12"The bar was quiet tonight—just"
13"The kind of night where"
14"A gust of wind sent"
15"He was taller than she"
16"Her fingers tightened around the"
17"He hesitated just inside the"
18"Silas glanced between them, his"
19"Evan took the stool two"
ratio0.811
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
46.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The bar smelled of aged whiskey and old secrets—polished wood, damp wool, the faint metallic tang of the rain that had just stopped outside."
1"A gust of wind sent a scatter of rain across the threshold, and for a second, Rory didn’t recognize the man who stepped inside."
2"But it was the eyes that did it—sharp, assessing, the same deep brown she’d once known better than her own reflection."
3"But the whiskey was warm in her veins, and the old, reckless part of her—the part that had once thought she could outrun her own mistakes—whispered, *Ask him.*"
4"Silas was already reaching for her coat, holding it out."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.08
leniency0.16
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.6294%