Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPVWGFMWKCHZM3YQFHVVQQ

Run Details

Duration:
30.0s
Cost:
$0.000710
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The distinctive green neon sign of The Raven's Nest cast a soft glow on the rain-slicked pavement as Aurora Carter, her black hair damp from the evening drizzle, pushed open the heavy wooden door. The bar was dimly lit, the air thick with the scent of aged whiskey and the low hum of conversation. The walls were adorned with old maps and black-and-white photographs, each telling a story of their own. She scanned the room, her bright blue eyes taking in the familiar yet foreign atmosphere. It had been years since she'd set foot in this place, years since she'd seen the man who owned it. Silas Blackwood stood behind the bar, his hazel eyes scanning the room with a quiet intensity. His grey-streaked auburn hair was neatly combed, matching the neatly trimmed beard that framed his face. He wore a simple black shirt, the sleeves rolled up to reveal forearms corded with strength and age. A slight limp in his left leg was the only hint of the old knee injury that had ended his career in the field. His right hand, resting on the polished wood of the bar, bore a silver signet ring, a constant reminder of the life he once led. Aurora approached the bar, her boots clicking softly on the worn wooden floor. She slid onto a stool, her eyes never leaving Silas. He looked up, his gaze meeting hers, and for a moment, time seemed to stand still. Recognition flickered in his eyes, followed by a warmth that softened the hard lines of his face. "Rory?" Silas's voice was a low rumble, a sound that seemed to resonate through the very air. He leaned forward, his eyes narrowing slightly as if he couldn't quite believe what he was seeing. "Is that really you?" Aurora nodded, a small smile playing at the corners of her mouth. "It's been a while, Si." Silas's eyes flicked over her, taking in the changes time had wrought. The girl he remembered had been all sharp angles and defiant spirit, a fire that burned too brightly. The woman before him was different, her features softened by time and experience, her bright blue eyes holding a depth of knowledge that hadn't been there before. Yet, there was something familiar in the set of her shoulders, the tilt of her chin. "Too long," Silas agreed, his voice gruff. He reached beneath the bar and pulled out a bottle of whiskey, pouring two glasses. He slid one towards her, his eyes never leaving her face. "You look... different." Aurora picked up the glass, her fingers tracing the rim. "We all change, Si." Silas grunted in agreement, taking a sip of his whiskey. "So, what brings you back to The Raven's Nest? I thought you'd left London for good." Aurora's eyes flickered to the side, a shadow passing over her face. "I did. But life has a way of bringing you back, doesn't it?" Silas studied her, his gaze sharp. "Trouble?" Aurora met his eyes, a small, bitter smile on her lips. "Isn't it always?" Silas chuckled, a low sound that held no humor. "Ain't that the truth." He leaned back, his eyes never leaving her face. "So, what kind of trouble are you in this time, Rory?" Aurora took a sip of her whiskey, the liquid burning a path down her throat. "The usual. Bad choices, worse company." Silas nodded, his expression understanding. "You always did have a knack for picking the wrong men." Aurora's eyes flashed, a spark of the old fire. "I was young and stupid. I've learned my lesson." Silas raised an eyebrow. "Have you now?" Aurora met his gaze, her eyes steady. "I think so." Silas studied her for a moment longer, then nodded slowly. "Alright, Rory. I believe you." Aurora exhaled, a small smile tugging at her lips. "Thanks, Si." Silas leaned forward, his elbows resting on the bar. "So, what are you doing now? Still delivering food for Yu-Fei?" Aurora shook her head. "No, I left that job a while back. I'm... freelancing." Silas raised an eyebrow. "Freelancing? What kind of freelancing?" Aurora hesitated, her fingers tracing the rim of her glass. "The kind that pays well and asks few questions." Silas's eyes narrowed. "Rory, if you're—" Aurora held up a hand, cutting him off. "I'm not doing anything illegal, Si. I promise." Silas studied her for a moment, then nodded slowly. "Alright. I believe you." Aurora exhaled, a small smile on her lips. "Thanks, Si." Silas leaned back, his eyes never leaving her face. "So, what brings you back to London? And to The Raven's Nest specifically?" Aurora's eyes flickered to the side, a shadow passing over her face. "I needed a place to stay. Somewhere safe." Silas nodded, his expression understanding. "You're welcome to stay here, Rory. You know that." Aurora met his eyes, a small smile on her lips. "I know, Si. Thank you." Silas leaned forward, his eyes searching her face. "But that's not the only reason you're here, is it?" Aurora hesitated, her fingers tracing the rim of her glass. "No, it's not." Silas waited, his gaze steady. "So, what is it, Rory? What do you need?" Aurora met his eyes, her expression serious. "I need your help, Si. I need information." Silas raised an eyebrow. "Information? About what?" Aurora hesitated, her fingers tracing the rim of her glass. "About a man. A dangerous man." Silas's eyes narrowed. "Who is he, Rory? What does he want with you?" Aurora exhaled, her fingers tightening around her glass. "His name is Evan. He's... he's from my past. And he wants me to pay for it." Silas's expression darkened. "What did he do to you, Rory?" Aurora's eyes flickered to the side, a shadow passing over her face. "It's a long story, Si. And not a pleasant one." Silas reached out, his hand covering hers. "I'm here, Rory. I'm listening." Aurora met his eyes, a small smile on her lips. "Thank you, Si. That means a lot." Silas nodded, his expression serious. "So, what do you need from me, Rory? How can I help?" Aurora exhaled, her fingers tightening around her glass. "I need to know who he is, Si. Who he really is. And what he's capable of." Silas studied her for a moment, then nodded slowly. "Alright, Rory. I'll see what I can find out." Aurora met his eyes, a small smile on her lips. "Thank you, Si. I owe you one." Silas chuckled, a low sound that held no humor. "You owe me more than one, Rory. But I'll take it." Aurora smiled, a genuine smile that lit up her face. "I'll make it up to you, Si. I promise." Silas nodded, his expression softening. "I know you will, Rory. I know you will." They sat in silence for a moment, the weight of the past and the uncertainty of the future hanging heavy in the air. But there was also a sense of comfort, of familiarity, a knowledge that no matter what happened, they would face it together. Aurora took a sip of her whiskey, her eyes meeting Silas's. "So, what about you, Si? How have you been?" Silas leaned back, his eyes never leaving her face. "I've been alright, Rory. The bar keeps me busy. And I still have my... contacts." Aurora raised an eyebrow. "Your contacts? You mean your network of spies?" Silas chuckled, a low sound that held no humor. "Something like that." Aurora smiled, a genuine smile that lit up her face. "I'm glad you're doing alright, Si. I really am." Silas nodded, his expression softening. "I'm glad you're back, Rory. I've missed you." Aurora met his eyes, a small smile on her lips. "I've missed you too, Si. More than you know." They sat in silence for a moment, the weight of the past and the uncertainty of the future hanging heavy in the air. But there was also a sense of comfort, of familiarity, a knowledge that no matter what happened, they would face it together. Aurora took a sip of her whiskey, her eyes meeting Silas's. "So, what now, Si? What do we do?" Silas leaned forward, his eyes searching her face. "We do what we've always done, Rory. We face it head on. Together." Aurora met his eyes, a small smile on her lips. "Together." Silas nodded, his expression serious. "Together." And with that, they clinked their glasses, the sound echoing through the dimly lit bar. The weight of the past and the uncertainty of the future still hung heavy in the air, but there was also a sense of hope, of determination, a knowledge that no matter what happened, they would face it together. Outside, the rain continued to fall, the neon sign of The Raven's Nest casting a soft glow on the slick pavement. Inside, the bar was quiet, the low hum of conversation a comforting backdrop to the weighty silence between two old friends. The past and the future hung heavy in the air, but for now, in this moment, they were together. And that was enough.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He leaned back [back]"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.033
leniency0.066
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.033
70.43% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1522
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count3
4
adverb"slowly"
count3
highlights
0"softly"
1"very"
2"slightly"
3"really"
4"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1522
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"intensity"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count4
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"tracing"
count4
9
word"eyebrow"
count4
10
word"silence"
count3
11
word"weight"
count3
12
word"sense of"
count3
13
word"echoing"
count1
14
word"comforting"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"familiar"
2"scanning"
3"intensity"
4"reminder"
5"flickered"
6"warmth"
7"flicked"
8"tracing"
9"eyebrow"
10"silence"
11"weight"
12"sense of"
13"echoing"
14"comforting"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
1
label"hung in the air"
count2
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"hung heavy in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences90
matches
0"a sense of hope"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences90
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences148
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1517
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions71
wordCount1071
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity3.17
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity7
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Aurora31
Carter1
Blackwood1
Silas34
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Carter"
4"Blackwood"
5"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
81.51% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sound that seemed to resonate through the very air"
1"quite believe what he was seeing"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1517
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences148
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs66
mean22.98
std19.36
cv0.842
sampleLengths
0106
199
256
338
417
573
636
714
826
925
107
1114
1233
1321
1416
1518
167
1710
1815
1911
2020
2114
229
2319
246
2516
2613
2710
2822
2920
3014
3115
3218
3313
3414
3515
367
3716
3813
3925
4010
4122
4212
4317
4417
4525
4618
4717
4820
4919
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences90
matches
0"were adorned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs171
matches
0"was seeing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences148
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1075
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.027906976744186046
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.010232558139534883
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences148
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences148
mean10.25
std6.25
cv0.61
sampleLengths
034
120
217
315
420
516
616
718
824
925
1013
1110
1216
1317
1417
1517
164
1712
185
1912
2018
2127
2216
237
2415
2511
263
2710
284
2910
3016
3112
3213
336
341
3511
363
379
3813
3911
4015
416
425
4311
449
459
464
473
487
493
47.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.25675675675675674
totalSentences148
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences90
matches
0"She scanned the room, her"
1"It had been years since"
2"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
3"He wore a simple black"
4"His right hand, resting on"
5"She slid onto a stool,"
6"He looked up, his gaze"
7"He leaned forward, his eyes"
8"He reached beneath the bar"
9"He slid one towards her,"
10"He leaned back, his eyes"
11"They sat in silence for"
12"They sat in silence for"
ratio0.144
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount83
totalSentences90
matches
0"The distinctive green neon sign"
1"The bar was dimly lit,"
2"The walls were adorned with"
3"She scanned the room, her"
4"It had been years since"
5"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
6"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
7"He wore a simple black"
8"A slight limp in his"
9"His right hand, resting on"
10"Aurora approached the bar, her"
11"She slid onto a stool,"
12"He looked up, his gaze"
13"Recognition flickered in his eyes,"
14"Silas's voice was a low"
15"He leaned forward, his eyes"
16"Aurora nodded, a small smile"
17"Silas's eyes flicked over her,"
18"The girl he remembered had"
19"The woman before him was"
ratio0.922
55.56% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences90
matches
0"Yet, there was something familiar"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"His grey-streaked auburn hair was neatly combed, matching the neatly trimmed beard that framed his face."
1"He leaned forward, his eyes narrowing slightly as if he couldn't quite believe what he was seeing."
2"The woman before him was different, her features softened by time and experience, her bright blue eyes holding a depth of knowledge that hadn't been there befor…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Silas agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.016
leniency0.033
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.033
78.4931%