Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPXRYJ729BXRJ9D0Q2QAWN

Run Details

Duration:
23.0s
Cost:
$0.004490
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon raven flickered like a dying thought as Rory pushed through the door of the Nest, the evening’s chill clinging to her coat. Inside, the air was thick with the scent of aged whiskey and the low hum of conversation—some hushed, some too loud, all of it blending into the kind of ambient noise that made a person feel both invisible and exposed. She exhaled, watching her breath dissipate in the dim light, and made her way toward the bar. Silas was polishing a glass with the methodical precision of a man who had spent decades perfecting the art of looking busy while observing everything. His hazel eyes flicked up as she approached, the corners crinkling just slightly. “Late shift at the Empress?” Rory slid onto a stool, the wood worn smooth by years of restless patrons. “Yu-Fei’s got a new chef. Thinks I’m his personal courier service.” She tugged off her gloves, flexing her fingers. The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the light for a second before she tucked her hand under the bar’s edge. “I’d kill for something warm.” Silas set down the glass and reached for a bottle of Irish whiskey—her father’s favorite, though she’d never told him that. The amber liquid splashed into a tumbler, and he pushed it toward her without a word. Rory wrapped her fingers around it, letting the heat seep into her skin. The bar was quiet for a Thursday, the usual crowd of off-duty journalists and ex-spooks thinning out as the hour grew late. Rory took a slow sip, the whiskey burning a path down her throat, grounding her. She was about to ask Silas if he’d heard from Eva when the door opened again, letting in a gust of wind and the sharp, unmistakable scent of rain-soaked wool. Rory didn’t turn. She didn’t need to. The weight of the silence that followed was enough. Silas’s fingers stilled on the glass he’d been drying. His gaze shifted past her, his expression unreadable, but his grip tightened just slightly on the cloth. Rory took another sip, the whiskey suddenly bitter on her tongue. Footsteps paused behind her. Hesitant. Then, softer, as if the person had decided to retreat. She turned. Evan stood just inside the door, his dark hair damp from the rain, his overcoat dripping onto the floorboards. He looked older—of course he did. Five years had a way of etching lines into a person’s face, especially when those years were spent carrying the kind of weight that didn’t just disappear. His jaw was sharper now, his shoulders broader, but his eyes were the same: that unsettling, too-perceptive green that had once made her feel like he could see straight through her. For a heartbeat, neither of them moved. Then Evan exhaled, a sound that might have been a laugh if it weren’t so hollow. “Rory.” Her name on his lips sent a jolt through her, sharp and unwanted. She set the glass down carefully, the whiskey sloshing just shy of the rim. “Evan.” Silas’s gaze flicked between them, his voice low. “You two know each other?” Evan’s mouth quirked, though there was no humor in it. “You could say that.” Rory’s fingers curled around the glass again, her knuckles white. She could feel Silas’s attention on her, heavy with questions he wouldn’t ask. Not here. Not now. But the air between them had shifted, the easy rhythm of their usual exchanges replaced by something taut, something watchful. Evan took a step forward, then another, until he was close enough that she could see the faint shadow of stubble along his jaw, the way his left hand—his dominant hand—twitched at his side before he forced it still. “I didn’t know you were in London.” “Funny,” she said, her voice steady despite the way her pulse hammered in her throat. “I didn’t know you were either.” He didn’t flinch. Didn’t look away. “I moved back. Six months ago.” Six months. She had been here for three years. The math was simple, the implications less so. He could have run into her at any point. The tube. A café. The bloody grocery store. But he hadn’t. Until now. Silas cleared his throat, the sound deliberate. “You want a drink, or are you just here to make my regulars uncomfortable?” Evan’s gaze flicked to him, then back to Rory. “Whiskey. Neat.” Silas poured, his movements precise, but his attention remained on Rory. She could feel the weight of his concern like a physical pressure, but she didn’t look at him. Couldn’t. Not when Evan was standing there, close enough that she could reach out and touch him if she wanted to. Close enough that she could see the faint scar above his eyebrow—the one he’d gotten playing rugby in uni, the one she’d teased him about for years. He took the glass Silas offered, his fingers brushing the bar’s surface. “Thanks.” Silas nodded, then stepped back, giving them the illusion of privacy. Rory knew better. Silas missed nothing. But for now, he was letting her handle this. Evan took a sip, his throat working as he swallowed. “You look good, Rory.” She almost laughed. Almost. But the sound died before it could escape, because what was there to say to that? *You look like hell*? *You look like the kind of man who’s spent too many nights staring at the ceiling, wondering*? She settled for, “You look like you’ve been sleeping in your clothes.” A ghost of a smile touched his lips. “Perceptive as ever.” She shouldn’t have said it. Shouldn’t have engaged. But the words were out now, hanging between them like the last stubborn leaves of autumn, clinging to branches long after they should have fallen. Evan set his glass down. “I was in Cardiff last month. Saw your dad.” Rory’s fingers tightened around her own glass. “How is he?” “Same. Still telling anyone who’ll listen about the time he won that case in ’98.” Evan’s voice was careful, measured. “He misses you.” She looked away, her gaze landing on the wall behind the bar—a black-and-white photo of some long-forgotten street in Prague, the cobblestones slick with rain. “I miss him too.” “Then why haven’t you gone back?” The question was quiet. Too quiet. She could hear the unspoken layers beneath it: *Why haven’t you answered his calls?* *Why did you leave without telling anyone?* *Why did you let me become the villain in a story you never bothered to correct?* Rory took a slow breath, the whiskey’s warmth doing little to ease the cold knot in her chest. “You know why.” Evan’s jaw tightened. “I know what you *think* happened. That’s not the same.” She turned back to him, her voice low. “You put your hands on me, Evan. More than once. Or did you forget that part?” His face paled, just slightly, but his gaze didn’t waver. “I remember every second of it. And I remember the night you left, when you wouldn’t even look at me. When you let me believe—” He cut himself off, shaking his head. “It doesn’t matter.” “It *does* matter.” The words were out before she could stop them, sharp and raw. “You think I wanted to leave like that? You think I wanted to disappear and never look back? But you didn’t give me a choice.” Evan’s hands clenched into fists at his sides, his voice rough. “I *begged* you to talk to me, Rory. For weeks. And then you were just—gone. No note. No call. Nothing. Just a half-packed suitcase and a flat that smelled like your perfume.” The memory of it hit her like a physical blow: the way the morning light had slanted through the curtains that last day, the way her hands had shaken as she’d thrown clothes into a bag, the way she’d stood in the doorway for one endless second, willing herself to turn around. To face him. To tell him— But she hadn’t. And she couldn’t now. Rory stood abruptly, the stool scraping against the floor. “I should go.” Evan reached out, his fingers brushing her arm before she could pull away. The contact burned. “Rory, wait—” “Don’t.” She jerked free, her voice trembling despite her best efforts. “Don’t touch me. Don’t *follow* me. Just—” She swallowed hard, her throat tight. “Leave me alone, Evan.” For a second, she thought he might argue. Might grab her wrist, might say something—anything—that would make this harder than it already was. But he didn’t. He just stood there, his face a mask of something she couldn’t—wouldn’t—name, and let her walk away. The cold hit her like a slap as she pushed out into the night, the neon raven’s glow bleeding across the wet pavement. She didn’t look back. Didn’t let herself. But as she turned the corner, her breath coming too fast, her fingers numb around the strap of her bag, she heard the door open again. Heard footsteps—hesitant, then determined—following her into the dark. “Rory.” She stopped, her back to him. “What?” “I’m not the same person I was then.” She closed her eyes, the rain beginning to fall in earnest, mixing with the tears she refused to let spill. “Neither am I.” And that, more than anything, was the problem.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.175
leniency0.35
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1565
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
2"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1565
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"methodical"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count3
4
word"weight"
count3
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count2
8
word"etching"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count2
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"eyebrow"
count1
12
word"measured"
count1
13
word"unspoken"
count1
14
word"warmth"
count1
15
word"determined"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"chill"
2"methodical"
3"flicked"
4"weight"
5"silence"
6"unreadable"
7"footsteps"
8"etching"
9"could feel"
10"pulse"
11"eyebrow"
12"measured"
13"unspoken"
14"warmth"
15"determined"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
2
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
3
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"clenched into fists"
1"the air was thick with"
2"The weight of the silence"
3"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences111
matches(empty)
91.38% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences111
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences143
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans9
markdownWords54
totalWords1546
ratio0.035
matches
0"You look like hell"
1"You look like the kind of man who’s spent too many nights staring at the ceiling, wondering"
2"Why haven’t you answered his calls?"
3"Why did you leave without telling anyone?"
4"Why did you let me become the villain in a story you never bothered to correct?"
5"think"
6"does"
7"begged"
8"follow"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1274
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.02
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Rory13
Nest1
Irish1
Thursday1
Silas11
Eva1
Evan12
Prague1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Silas"
2"Eva"
3"Evan"
places
0"Prague"
globalScore0.99
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1546
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences143
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean27.12
std20.79
cv0.766
sampleLengths
082
143
260
350
467
57
69
737
815
92
1083
117
1217
1328
1413
1514
1647
1746
1821
1912
2037
212
2221
2311
2477
2513
2626
2714
2853
2911
3033
3114
3210
3323
3429
356
3643
3721
3813
3924
4045
4140
4243
4358
443
454
4612
4718
4828
4943
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences111
matches
0"were spent"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs224
matches
0"was polishing"
1"was standing"
2"was letting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences143
ratio0.07
matches
0"Inside, the air was thick with the scent of aged whiskey and the low hum of conversation—some hushed, some too loud, all of it blending into the kind of ambient noise that made a person feel both invisible and exposed."
1"Silas set down the glass and reached for a bottle of Irish whiskey—her father’s favorite, though she’d never told him that."
2"He looked older—of course he did."
3"Evan took a step forward, then another, until he was close enough that she could see the faint shadow of stubble along his jaw, the way his left hand—his dominant hand—twitched at his side before he forced it still."
4"Close enough that she could see the faint scar above his eyebrow—the one he’d gotten playing rugby in uni, the one she’d teased him about for years."
5"She looked away, her gaze landing on the wall behind the bar—a black-and-white photo of some long-forgotten street in Prague, the cobblestones slick with rain."
6"To tell him—"
7"Might grab her wrist, might say something—anything—that would make this harder than it already was."
8"He just stood there, his face a mask of something she couldn’t—wouldn’t—name, and let her walk away."
9"Heard footsteps—hesitant, then determined—following her into the dark."
99.76% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1291
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount52
adverbRatio0.040278853601859024
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005422153369481022
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences143
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences143
mean10.81
std9.45
cv0.874
sampleLengths
025
140
217
325
413
55
614
719
822
95
1021
1116
1213
1322
1415
1530
163
174
189
199
2017
2111
224
231
2410
252
2619
276
2827
2931
307
3116
321
3313
3414
351
368
375
3810
394
4010
4113
422
432
4420
4539
467
4715
486
493
47.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3076923076923077
totalSentences143
uniqueOpeners44
66.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences100
matches
0"Then, softer, as if the"
1"Then Evan exhaled, a sound"
ratio0.02
88.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences100
matches
0"She exhaled, watching her breath"
1"His hazel eyes flicked up"
2"She tugged off her gloves,"
3"She was about to ask"
4"She didn’t need to."
5"His gaze shifted past her,"
6"He looked older—of course he"
7"His jaw was sharper now,"
8"Her name on his lips"
9"She set the glass down"
10"She could feel Silas’s attention"
11"she said, her voice steady"
12"He didn’t flinch."
13"She had been here for"
14"He could have run into"
15"She could feel the weight"
16"He took the glass Silas"
17"She almost laughed."
18"*You look like hell*?"
19"*You look like the kind"
ratio0.33
85.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences100
matches
0"The green neon raven flickered"
1"She exhaled, watching her breath"
2"Silas was polishing a glass"
3"His hazel eyes flicked up"
4"Rory slid onto a stool,"
5"She tugged off her gloves,"
6"The crescent scar on her"
7"Silas set down the glass"
8"The amber liquid splashed into"
9"Rory wrapped her fingers around"
10"The bar was quiet for"
11"Rory took a slow sip,"
12"She was about to ask"
13"Rory didn’t turn."
14"She didn’t need to."
15"The weight of the silence"
16"Silas’s fingers stilled on the"
17"His gaze shifted past her,"
18"Rory took another sip, the"
19"Footsteps paused behind her."
ratio0.75
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences100
matches
0"To face him."
1"To tell him—"
ratio0.02
57.14% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The green neon raven flickered like a dying thought as Rory pushed through the door of the Nest, the evening’s chill clinging to her coat."
1"Inside, the air was thick with the scent of aged whiskey and the low hum of conversation—some hushed, some too loud, all of it blending into the kind of ambient…"
2"Silas was polishing a glass with the methodical precision of a man who had spent decades perfecting the art of looking busy while observing everything."
3"Rory took a slow sip, the whiskey burning a path down her throat, grounding her."
4"Five years had a way of etching lines into a person’s face, especially when those years were spent carrying the kind of weight that didn’t just disappear."
5"*You look like the kind of man who’s spent too many nights staring at the ceiling, wondering*?"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She jerked, her voice trembling despite her best efforts"
1"She swallowed, her throat tight"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.025
leniency0.05
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.2044%