Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXQ78QWJZWCTJGG8JW7KVGW

Run Details

Duration:
1m 4s
Cost:
$0.000971
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The night was unnaturally still as Aurora Carter stepped through the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of the Fae Grove. The air was thick with the scent of wildflowers, their petals glowing faintly in the moonlight, a sight that should have been beautiful, but instead sent a shiver down her spine. She clutched the Heartstone Pendant tightly in her hand, its faint warmth a small comfort in the eerie silence. She had come here for a reason, or so she told herself. Eva, her childhood friend, had spoken of strange occurrences in Richmond Park, whispers of a hidden clearing that existed in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm. Eva had begged her to investigate, to use her quick thinking and cool head to uncover the truth. But now, standing in the heart of the grove, Aurora couldn't shake the feeling that she had made a mistake. The grove was beautiful, in a way that was almost too perfect. The trees stood tall and proud, their leaves rustling softly in a breeze that Aurora couldn't feel. The wildflowers bloomed in vibrant colors, their petals glowing faintly in the moonlight. But there was something wrong with the scene, something that set her teeth on edge. The colors were too bright, the silence too heavy. It was as if the grove was holding its breath, waiting for something. Aurora took a deep breath, trying to steady her nerves. She was here for a reason, and she wasn't about to let her imagination get the better of her. She pulled out her phone, the screen casting a harsh glow in the dim light of the grove. She had promised Eva she would keep in touch, and she intended to keep that promise. She tapped out a quick message, her fingers flying over the screen. "I'm here. The grove is... interesting. I'll keep you updated." She hit send, the message disappearing into the ether. She pocketed her phone, her eyes scanning the grove once more. That was when she heard it. A soft rustling, like leaves being disturbed by an unseen hand. She turned sharply, her heart pounding in her chest. The sound had come from the edge of the grove, where the trees stood tall and silent. She strained her eyes, trying to pierce the darkness, but she could see nothing. She took a step forward, her boots crunching on the fallen leaves. The sound had come from somewhere over there, she was sure of it. She took another step, her heart pounding in her ears. The rustling came again, louder this time, and she could swear she saw a shadow move at the edge of her vision. She froze, her breath catching in her throat. She wasn't alone. She could feel it, a presence lurking just out of sight. She took a deep breath, trying to calm her racing heart. She was here for a reason, and she wasn't about to let her fear get the better of her. She took a step forward, her eyes scanning the darkness. The rustling came again, and this time she saw it. A figure, tall and gaunt, standing at the edge of the grove. It was too tall to be human, its limbs too long and spindly. Its skin was pale, almost translucent, and its eyes were black voids that seemed to suck in the light. Aurora's breath caught in her throat as she stared at the figure. It was like nothing she had ever seen before, a creature straight out of a nightmare. It stood perfectly still, its eyes locked onto her. She could feel its gaze like a physical weight, pressing down on her, pinning her in place. She took a step back, her heart pounding in her chest. She needed to get out of here, needed to run. But she couldn't move, couldn't tear her eyes away from the figure. It took a step forward, its movements jerky and unnatural. It was coming closer, and she was powerless to stop it. She tried to scream, but no sound came out. Her throat was tight, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The figure took another step, its eyes never leaving hers. She could see it more clearly now, could see the way its limbs twisted and contorted, the way its skin seemed to ripple and shift. She tried to move, to run, but her body refused to obey. She was frozen in place, her eyes locked onto the figure. It took another step, and then another, until it was standing just a few feet away. She could see it clearly now, could see the way its mouth stretched into a grin, its teeth sharp and pointed. She tried to scream again, but still no sound came out. The figure reached out a hand, its fingers long and spindly. It touched her arm, and she could feel its touch like a burn, searing through her flesh. She tried to pull away, but she was still frozen in place, her body refusing to obey. The figure leaned in close, its breath hot on her neck. She could feel its presence like a weight, pressing down on her, crushing her. She tried to scream, tried to fight, but it was no use. She was powerless, trapped in the grip of the figure. And then, as suddenly as it had appeared, the figure was gone. It vanished into the darkness, leaving Aurora standing alone in the grove. She gasped, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. She looked around, her eyes scanning the darkness, but there was no sign of the figure. It was as if it had never been there at all. She took a deep breath, trying to steady her racing heart. She needed to get out of here, needed to leave this place. She turned to go, her feet crunching on the fallen leaves. But as she turned, she saw something that made her blood run cold. The standing stones that marked the boundary of the grove were gone. In their place stood a wall of thorns, tall and impenetrable. She reached out a hand, her fingers brushing against the thorns. They were sharp, their points digging into her flesh. She pulled her hand back, her fingers bleeding. She looked around, her eyes scanning the grove. The trees were taller now, their branches twisting and contorting. The wildflowers were wilted, their petals falling to the ground. The grove was changing, shifting around her. She was trapped. She took a deep breath, trying to calm her racing heart. She needed to think, needed to find a way out of here. She looked around, her eyes scanning the grove. And then she saw it. A small, narrow path, winding its way through the trees. It was barely visible, but it was there. A way out. She took a deep breath and started down the path, her feet crunching on the fallen leaves. The path was narrow, the trees pressing in on either side. She could feel their presence like a weight, pressing down on her, crushing her. She tried to ignore it, tried to focus on the path ahead. The path twisted and turned, winding its way through the grove. She could feel the presence of the figure, could feel its eyes on her. She could hear its breath, hot and heavy, just behind her. She tried to ignore it, tried to focus on the path ahead. And then, as suddenly as it had appeared, the path ended. She stood at the edge of a clearing, the trees pressing in on either side. In the center of the clearing stood a small, narrow door. It was made of wood, its surface carved with strange, intricate patterns. She reached out a hand, her fingers brushing against the wood. It was warm, its surface smooth and polished. She took a deep breath and pushed the door open. It creaked softly, the sound echoing through the clearing. She stepped through the door, her feet crunching on the fallen leaves. She found herself in a small, narrow room. The walls were made of stone, their surfaces carved with strange, intricate patterns. In the center of the room stood a small, narrow table. On the table lay a single, small object. A key. She reached out a hand, her fingers brushing against the key. It was cold, its surface smooth and polished. She picked it up, her fingers closing around it. She could feel its power, could feel its energy pulsing through her. She knew, without knowing how she knew, that this was the key to her escape. She turned to go, her feet crunching on the fallen leaves. She stepped through the door, her eyes scanning the clearing. The door vanished, leaving her standing alone in the grove. She took a deep breath, trying to steady her racing heart. She needed to find the thorn wall, needed to find a way out of here. She started down the path, her feet crunching on the fallen leaves. The path twisted and turned, winding its way through the grove. She could feel the presence of the figure, could feel its eyes on her. She could hear its breath, hot and heavy, just behind her. She tried to ignore it, tried to focus on the path ahead. And then, as suddenly as it had appeared, the path ended. She stood at the edge of the thorn wall, its tall, impenetrable branches pressing in on either side. She reached out a hand, her fingers brushing against the thorns. They were sharp, their points digging into her flesh. She pulled her hand back, her fingers bleeding. She took a deep breath, trying to steady her racing heart. She needed to find a way through the thorns, needed to find a way out of here. She looked around, her eyes scanning the wall. And then she saw it. A small, narrow gap, just wide enough for her to squeeze through. She took a deep breath and stepped through the gap, her feet crunching on the fallen leaves. She found herself standing in the heart of the grove, the standing stones looming tall and silent before her. She took a deep breath, her heart pounding in her chest. She had made it. She had escaped. She turned to go, her feet crunching on the fallen leaves. She stepped through the standing stones, her eyes scanning the park. The night was still and quiet, the moon casting a soft glow on the grass. She took a deep breath, her heart pounding in her chest. She was free. She pulled out her phone, her fingers flying over the screen. "I'm out. I'm safe. I'll explain everything later." She hit send, the message disappearing into the ether. She pocketed her phone, her eyes scanning the park. She needed to get out of here, needed to put as much distance between herself and the grove as possible. She started down the path, her feet crunching on the fallen leaves. The park was still and quiet, the moon casting a soft glow on the grass. She could feel the presence of the grove, could feel its eyes on her. She tried to ignore it, tried to focus on the path ahead. And then, as suddenly as it had appeared, the park ended. She stood at the edge of the road, the streetlights casting a harsh glow on the pavement. She took a deep breath, her heart pounding in her chest. She was safe. She started down the road, her feet crunching on the pavement. The night was still and quiet, the stars casting a soft glow on the sky. She could feel the presence of the grove, could feel its eyes on her. She tried to ignore it, tried to focus on the road ahead. And then, as suddenly as it had appeared, the road ended. She stood at the edge of the flat, the door looming tall and silent before her. She took a deep breath, her heart pounding in her chest. She was home. She stepped through the door, her feet crunching on the wooden floor. The flat was still and quiet, the moonlight casting a soft glow on the walls. She took a deep breath, her heart pounding in her chest. She was safe. She stepped into the bathroom, her fingers brushing against the light switch. The light flickered on, casting a harsh glow on the mirror. She looked at her reflection, her eyes scanning her face. She was pale, her skin almost translucent. Her eyes were wide and wild, her pupils dilated. She looked like a ghost. She turned away from the mirror, her eyes scanning the bathroom. She needed to wash the grove off of her, needed to scrub its presence from her skin. She turned on the shower, the water cascading down the tiles. She stepped under the spray, the water washing over her. She scrubbed her skin, her fingers digging into her flesh. She could feel the presence of the grove, could feel its eyes on her. She tried to ignore it, tried to focus on the water. And then, as suddenly as it had appeared, the water turned cold. She gasped, her breath catching in her throat. She turned off the shower, her fingers trembling. She stepped out of the tub, her feet crunching on the tiles. She wrapped a towel around herself, her fingers brushing against the soft fabric. She took a deep breath, her heart pounding in her chest. She was clean. She stepped into the bedroom, her eyes scanning the room. The bed was made, the pillows fluffed. She took a deep breath, her heart pounding in her chest. She was safe. She climbed into bed, her fingers brushing against the soft sheets. She closed her eyes, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. She tried to sleep, tried to forget the grove. But she couldn't. She could feel its presence, could feel its eyes on her. She tried to ignore it, tried to focus on her breath. And then, as suddenly as it had appeared, the presence was gone. She opened her eyes, her heart pounding in her chest. She was alone. She was safe. She closed her eyes, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. She tried to sleep, tried to forget the grove. And this time, she succeeded.
created_at"2026-02-20T14:28:21.895Z" 2/20/2026, 2:28:21 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.05% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2405
totalAiIsmAdverbs12
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count2
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
3
adverb"perfectly"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count7
highlights
0"tightly"
1"softly"
2"sharply"
3"perfectly"
4"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2405
totalAiIsms63
found
0
word"down her spine"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count12
5
word"pounding"
count11
6
word"could feel"
count19
7
word"racing"
count5
8
word"weight"
count3
9
word"searing"
count1
10
word"intricate"
count2
11
word"echoing"
count1
12
word"looming"
count2
13
word"flickered"
count1
14
word"cascading"
count1
highlights
0"down her spine"
1"warmth"
2"silence"
3"perfect"
4"scanning"
5"pounding"
6"could feel"
7"racing"
8"weight"
9"searing"
10"intricate"
11"echoing"
12"looming"
13"flickered"
14"cascading"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
1"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences208
matches(empty)
26.10% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount17
narrationSentences208
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
1"seemed to"
2"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences208
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2405
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount2387
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.25
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora6
Carter1
Fae2
Grove1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Richmond1
Park1
Earth1
Eva3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Eva"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences189
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"It was as if the grove was holding its breath, waiting for something"
1"voids that seemed to suck in the light"
2"It was as if it had never been there at all"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2405
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences208
matches
0"keep that promise"
1"knew, that this"
23.80% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean54.66
std12.75
cv0.233
sampleLengths
073
178
279
363
442
557
657
752
864
954
1054
1155
1260
1356
1447
1560
1647
1751
1838
1957
2054
2148
2268
2373
2455
2557
2660
2757
2870
2937
3051
3157
3253
3342
3452
3541
3641
3754
3884
3967
4031
4156
4228
4325
90.08% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount9
totalSentences208
matches
0"being disturbed"
1"was frozen"
2"was gone"
3"were gone"
4"were wilted"
5"was made"
6"were made"
7"was made"
8"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs465
matches
0"was holding"
1"was coming"
2"was standing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences208
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2387
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount68
adverbRatio0.028487641390867197
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.008378718056137411
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences208
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
92.15% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences208
mean11.56
std4.4
cv0.38
sampleLengths
023
131
219
312
428
518
620
712
817
913
1015
119
1213
1310
1419
1518
1616
1712
1819
1911
206
2111
229
2317
2414
2512
2613
2710
2822
298
303
3111
3211
3319
3410
3510
3612
3713
3819
3912
4016
419
4217
4311
4410
4512
4610
4711
489
4911
25.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats91
diversityRatio0.07211538461538461
totalSentences208
uniqueOpeners15
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences207
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount150
totalSentences207
matches
0"She clutched the Heartstone Pendant"
1"She had come here for"
2"It was as if the"
3"She was here for a"
4"She pulled out her phone,"
5"She had promised Eva she"
6"She tapped out a quick"
7"She hit send, the message"
8"She pocketed her phone, her"
9"She turned sharply, her heart"
10"She strained her eyes, trying"
11"She took a step forward,"
12"She took another step, her"
13"She froze, her breath catching"
14"She wasn't alone."
15"She could feel it, a"
16"She took a deep breath,"
17"She was here for a"
18"She took a step forward,"
19"It was too tall to"
ratio0.725
5.89% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount188
totalSentences207
matches
0"The night was unnaturally still"
1"The air was thick with"
2"She clutched the Heartstone Pendant"
3"She had come here for"
4"Eva, her childhood friend, had"
5"Eva had begged her to"
6"The grove was beautiful, in"
7"The trees stood tall and"
8"The wildflowers bloomed in vibrant"
9"The colors were too bright,"
10"It was as if the"
11"Aurora took a deep breath,"
12"She was here for a"
13"She pulled out her phone,"
14"She had promised Eva she"
15"She tapped out a quick"
16"She hit send, the message"
17"She pocketed her phone, her"
18"That was when she heard"
19"A soft rustling, like leaves"
ratio0.908
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences207
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences157
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The night was unnaturally still as Aurora Carter stepped through the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of the Fae Grove."
1"The air was thick with the scent of wildflowers, their petals glowing faintly in the moonlight, a sight that should have been beautiful, but instead sent a shiv…"
2"It was as if the grove was holding its breath, waiting for something."
3"Its skin was pale, almost translucent, and its eyes were black voids that seemed to suck in the light."
4"But as she turned, she saw something that made her blood run cold."
5"The trees were taller now, their branches twisting and contorting."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She hit, the message disappearing into the ether"
1"She hit, the message disappearing into the ether"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
70.1581%