| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice sounded too [too]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |
| 94.68% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 940 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 940 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "etched" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "trembled" | | 8 | "echoed" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "lurch" | | 11 | "searing" | | 12 | "unraveling" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 103 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 107 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 4 | | totalWords | 932 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "“You’re almost there.”" | | 1 | "skin" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 915 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.98 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 5 | | Eva | 2 | | Evan | 3 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 9 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "appeared ahead their gnarled forms a promise of safety" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 932 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 21.67 | | std | 20.45 | | cv | 0.944 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 67 | | 1 | 66 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 65 | | 6 | 50 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 50 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 36 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 51 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 37 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 63 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 26 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 49 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 41 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 6 |
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| 98.45% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "were tangled" | | 1 | "was gone" |
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| 86.36% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 176 | | matches | | 0 | "was suffocating" | | 1 | "was playing" | | 2 | "was bleeding" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 107 | | ratio | 0.084 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come to the Fae Grove for answers—not that she expected them to be kind." | | 1 | "The air pressed in, too warm, too close, and then—" | | 2 | "A whisper slithered through the branches—no, not a whisper." | | 3 | "Then, from the darkness beyond, a child’s laughter—high, clear, and wrong." | | 4 | "She whipped her head around, but there was nothing—just the shifting shadows, the endless dark." | | 5 | "It wore a coat—no, not a coat." | | 6 | "The face was a blur, shifting between features she almost recognized—Evan’s smirk, her father’s stern frown, her own wide eyes staring back at her." | | 7 | "Behind her, the thing shrieked—a sound like tearing fabric, like a voice unraveling." | | 8 | "The boundary hummed, the air thickening, and then—" |
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| 99.92% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 923 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.04008667388949079 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007583965330444204 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 107 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 107 | | mean | 8.71 | | std | 6.06 | | cv | 0.695 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 40.65% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.2616822429906542 | | totalSentences | 107 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Too slow, too deliberate." | | 1 | "Just the sway of branches," | | 2 | "Then, from the darkness beyond," | | 3 | "Only the fork remained, both" | | 4 | "Then, from directly ahead, a" | | 5 | "Too many layers, like two" | | 6 | "Then it lunged." |
| | ratio | 0.076 | |
| 72.17% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come to the" | | 1 | "She hesitated, fingers brushing the" | | 2 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 3 | "She was inside." | | 4 | "She wasn’t here to panic." | | 5 | "She was here because the" | | 6 | "She followed the path deeper" | | 7 | "She turned, scanning the shadows" | | 8 | "Her pulse hammered in her" | | 9 | "She kept walking." | | 10 | "She hadn’t found anything." | | 11 | "She took a step back," | | 12 | "Her voice sounded too loud," | | 13 | "It echoed, bouncing between the" | | 14 | "She knew that laugh." | | 15 | "She’d heard it in dreams," | | 16 | "Her stomach twisted." | | 17 | "She hadn’t told anyone about" | | 18 | "She should leave." | | 19 | "She chose the left." |
| | ratio | 0.37 | |
| 36.09% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 78 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "The night air was thick" | | 1 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "She had come to the" | | 3 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 4 | "The boundary hummed, a low" | | 5 | "She hesitated, fingers brushing the" | | 6 | "The last time she’d crossed" | | 7 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 8 | "The world tilted." | | 9 | "The air pressed in, too" | | 10 | "She was inside." | | 11 | "The Grove stretched before her," | | 12 | "The wildflowers glowed faintly, their" | | 13 | "Rory exhaled, forcing her shoulders" | | 14 | "She wasn’t here to panic." | | 15 | "She was here because the" | | 16 | "She followed the path deeper" | | 17 | "The trees here were older" | | 18 | "A whisper slithered through the" | | 19 | "The sound came again, closer" |
| | ratio | 0.848 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, the silence was suffocating." | | 1 | "Before whatever was playing with" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 51.28% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The night air was thick with the scent of damp earth and wildflowers, the kind that bloomed only in places where time bent like a bowstring." | | 1 | "The last time she’d crossed into the Grove, she’d been with Eva, laughing as they chased fireflies that weren’t fireflies at all." | | 2 | "She was here because the pendant had led her, its warmth flaring to life whenever she neared the Grove, as if it knew something she didn’t." | | 3 | "Its limbs were too long, its joints bending in ways that made her stomach lurch." | | 4 | "She scrambled to her feet, bolting down the path, branches whipping at her face." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "it sang (sing)" | | 1 | "it snarled (snarl)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.375 | | leniency | 0.75 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |