| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.86% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 700 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 700 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "echo" | | 5 | "the last thing" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "flicker" | | 8 | "throb" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "churned" | | 11 | "footsteps" | | 12 | "pulsed" | | 13 | "clenching" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 78.89% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 8 | | totalWords | 692 | | ratio | 0.012 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory." | | 1 | "\"You shouldn’t have come back, little thief.\"" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.73% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 14 | | wordCount | 679 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.33 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | Rory | 9 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.837 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 692 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 21.63 | | std | 20.78 | | cv | 0.961 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 79 | | 1 | 55 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 52 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 67 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 42 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 46 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 47 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 33 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 10 |
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| 73.84% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "been carried" | | 1 | "were gone" | | 2 | "was swallowed" | | 3 | "been rained" | | 4 | "was gone" | | 5 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 119 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 71 | | ratio | 0.113 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come to the Fae Grove for answers—not that she expected them to be kind." | | 1 | "Now, the silence was absolute, broken only by the distant hoot of an owl—too distant, as if the sound had been carried from another world." | | 2 | "The last thing she needed was to draw attention to it—not here, not when the rules were already bending." | | 3 | "But then it came again—her name, stretched thin, like a voice speaking through water." | | 4 | "Then, from the corner of her eye—a flicker of movement." | | 5 | "A sound again—this time, unmistakably footsteps." | | 6 | "In the center stood a figure—tall, cloaked, its face hidden in shadow." | | 7 | "The shadows beneath its hood shifted, and for a heartbeat, she thought she saw eyes—too many eyes, blinking in the dark." |
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| 99.34% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 687 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.040756914119359534 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010189228529839884 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 71 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 71 | | mean | 9.75 | | std | 6.89 | | cv | 0.707 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 24 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 46.48% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.3380281690140845 | | totalSentences | 71 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the trees, their bark" | | 1 | "Then, from the corner of" | | 2 | "Light, quick, circling her." | | 3 | "Then it spoke, and its" |
| | ratio | 0.065 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come to the" | | 1 | "She hesitated at the boundary," | | 2 | "Her breath came faster, fogging" | | 3 | "She swallowed hard." | | 4 | "Her voice didn’t echo." | | 5 | "It was swallowed whole, as" | | 6 | "She took another step forward," | | 7 | "She spun, her heart hammering." | | 8 | "Her voice was steadier than" | | 9 | "She took a step toward" | | 10 | "She yanked it free, the" | | 11 | "Her stomach churned." | | 12 | "She turned, but the path" | | 13 | "She pressed the pendant to" | | 14 | "It raised a hand, beckoning." | | 15 | "She knew that gesture." | | 16 | "She didn’t move." | | 17 | "She had never stolen anything" |
| | ratio | 0.29 | |
| 64.84% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "The night air was thick" | | 1 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "She had come to the" | | 3 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 4 | "She hesitated at the boundary," | | 5 | "The last time she’d been" | | 6 | "Rory stepped between the stones." | | 7 | "The moment she crossed the" | | 8 | "Her breath came faster, fogging" | | 9 | "The trees seemed to lean" | | 10 | "She swallowed hard." | | 11 | "Her voice didn’t echo." | | 12 | "It was swallowed whole, as" | | 13 | "Rory’s fingers twitched toward the" | | 14 | "The last thing she needed" | | 15 | "She took another step forward," | | 16 | "The ground was too soft," | | 17 | "A whisper, so faint it" | | 18 | "She spun, her heart hammering." | | 19 | "Her voice was steadier than" |
| | ratio | 0.79 | |
| 80.65% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, the silence was absolute," |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 95.24% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath came faster, fogging in front of her, and the wildflowers that usually carpeted the grove were gone, replaced by brittle, colorless stalks that crunc…" | | 1 | "The trees groaned, their branches creaking as they bent away from her, revealing a clearing ahead." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.167 | | leniency | 0.333 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |