| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice sounded too [too]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |
| 77.93% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1133 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "gently" | | 4 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 29.39% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1133 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "sentinels" | | 4 | "etched" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "quickened" | | 8 | "searing" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "wavering" | | 11 | "cacophony" | | 12 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | matches | | |
| 84.55% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 98 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 15 | | totalWords | 1124 | | ratio | 0.013 | | matches | | 0 | "Focus. You’re here for a reason." | | 1 | "Just an animal. Or the wind." | | 2 | "It’s warning me." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 12 | | wordCount | 1123 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.53 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 6 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 42.86% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "symbols that seemed to shift when she looked at them too long" | | 1 | "quite make out" | | 2 | "something like a snarl" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1124 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 32.11 | | std | 24.85 | | cv | 0.774 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 84 | | 1 | 86 | | 2 | 73 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 50 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 42 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 44 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 47 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 61 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 63 | | 18 | 41 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 35 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 59 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 43 | | 28 | 47 | | 29 | 47 | | 30 | 47 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 41 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 5 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | |
| 29.06% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 195 | | matches | | 0 | "were straining" | | 1 | "were warning" | | 2 | "wasn’t coming" | | 3 | "was reacting" | | 4 | "was burning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 98 | | ratio | 0.061 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come to the Fae Grove for answers—answers about the pendant, about the strange dreams that had plagued her since she’d first touched it, about the way the world seemed to tilt when she stepped through the standing stones." | | 1 | "The grove was silent again, save for the distant hoot of an owl—if it was an owl." | | 2 | "Then she heard it—a whisper." | | 3 | "The pendant was reacting to something—something in the grove with her." | | 4 | "Something else—something that didn’t belong in the shape of the world." | | 5 | "Its face—if it could be called a face—was smooth and featureless, save for a slit where a mouth should be." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1132 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.0353356890459364 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007067137809187279 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 98 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 98 | | mean | 11.47 | | std | 7.38 | | cv | 0.644 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 40 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 28 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 30.61% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 19 | | diversityRatio | 0.22448979591836735 | | totalSentences | 98 | | uniqueOpeners | 22 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "*Just an animal." | | 1 | "Then she heard it—a whisper." | | 2 | "Then she saw it." | | 3 | "Then, from the darkness beneath" |
| | ratio | 0.043 | |
| 65.16% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come to the" | | 1 | "She had been here before," | | 2 | "She stepped forward, her boots" | | 3 | "She swallowed hard, her fingers" | | 4 | "You’re here for a reason.*" | | 5 | "She had followed the pendant’s" | | 6 | "It had led her here," | | 7 | "She turned slowly, her breath" | | 8 | "She took another step forward," | | 9 | "Her pulse quickened, her fingers" | | 10 | "She turned in a slow" | | 11 | "Her voice sounded too loud" | | 12 | "It wasn’t coming from any" | | 13 | "It was everywhere, wrapping around" | | 14 | "She took a step back," | | 15 | "She stumbled, catching herself before" | | 16 | "*It’s warning me.*" | | 17 | "She didn’t know how she" | | 18 | "It darted between the trees," | | 19 | "She spun, trying to follow" |
| | ratio | 0.387 | |
| 46.02% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 77 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "The night air was thick" | | 1 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "She had come to the" | | 3 | "The grove was different at" | | 4 | "The ancient oaks loomed like" | | 5 | "The standing stones at the" | | 6 | "She had been here before," | | 7 | "She stepped forward, her boots" | | 8 | "The wildflowers here bloomed year-round," | | 9 | "The air hummed with a" | | 10 | "She swallowed hard, her fingers" | | 11 | "You’re here for a reason.*" | | 12 | "She had followed the pendant’s" | | 13 | "It had led her here," | | 14 | "A rustle in the undergrowth" | | 15 | "The sound was too deliberate" | | 16 | "She turned slowly, her breath" | | 17 | "The grove was silent again," | | 18 | "Rory exhaled, forcing herself to" | | 19 | "She took another step forward," |
| | ratio | 0.828 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 64.94% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The wildflowers here bloomed year-round, their petals glowing faintly in the dim light, but tonight they seemed too bright, too vivid, as if they were straining…" | | 1 | "But now that she was inside, the pendant’s heat was almost uncomfortable, as if it were warning her." | | 2 | "The air grew heavier, pressing down on her, and the wildflowers at her feet began to tremble, their petals quivering as if in a breeze she couldn’t feel." | | 3 | "The pendant was burning now, its heat searing through her shirt." | | 4 | "The figure lunged, its fingers brushing her sleeve, and she screamed, the sound tearing from her throat." | | 5 | "She collapsed onto the grass, her chest heaving, her fingers trembling around the pendant." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |