Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXQAN7GV191M6JJTPBXNB6V

Run Details

Duration:
38.6s
Cost:
$0.003361
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest hummed with the low murmur of late-night patrons, the kind of place where the air smelled of aged whiskey and the faint metallic tang of old coins left too long in a pocket. The green neon sign outside cast a sickly glow through the rain-streaked windows, painting the bar in shifting shades of jade. Rory leaned against the polished mahogany, her fingers tracing the rim of a half-empty glass of gin. The ice had long since melted, diluting the sharpness of the juniper, but she didn’t mind. It was the kind of night where the weight of the past pressed down just enough to make the present feel like a borrowed coat—something she could shrug off if she wanted to. She hadn’t expected to see him. Evan slid onto the stool beside her with the quiet confidence of a man who had never once doubted his place in the world. His cologne—something expensive, sandalwood and bergamot—cut through the bar’s stale warmth, and for a second, Rory was seventeen again, standing in the school courtyard with her heart hammering against her ribs. He hadn’t changed, not really. The same sharp jawline, the same dark eyes that had once looked at her like she was the only thing worth seeing. But there was something different in the set of his shoulders, a hardness that hadn’t been there before. “Rory,” he said, and his voice was the same too—smooth, deliberate, the kind of voice that had once whispered promises into her hair. “I heard you were in London.” She didn’t look at him. “News travels.” A beat of silence. The bartender, a wiry man with a scar through his eyebrow, glanced their way before busying himself with a rag and a row of glasses. Evan ordered a whiskey, neat, and when it arrived, he swirled the amber liquid before taking a slow sip. “You look good,” he said at last. Rory finally turned her head. Her bright blue eyes were cool, assessing. “Do I?” Evan exhaled through his nose, a sound that might have been a laugh if it hadn’t been so hollow. “That’s not what I meant.” “No?” She picked up her glass, took a sip. The gin was watery now, but the bite of it still grounded her. “What did you mean, then?” He didn’t answer right away. Instead, he studied her—the way her black hair fell in a sleek curtain to her shoulders, the way her fingers, long and precise, tapped against the glass. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist caught the light as she moved, a pale sliver against her skin. He reached out, almost without thinking, and brushed his thumb over it. Rory flinched. Evan pulled his hand back like he’d been burned. “Sorry.” She set her glass down. “You always were.” The words hung between them, heavy with everything they weren’t saying. The bartender cleared his throat, but neither of them looked away. Evan’s jaw tightened. “I didn’t come here to fight.” “Then why did you come?” “Because I saw you.” He said it like it was obvious, like the answer should have been written in the way her pulse jumped at the base of her throat. “Because I’ve been looking for you for a long time.” Rory laughed, but there was no humor in it. “That’s rich. You had my number. My address. Hell, you knew where my parents lived. If you’d wanted to find me, you could have.” “I know.” His voice was low, rough. “I fucked up, Rory. I know that.” She wanted to tell him it wasn’t that simple. That some things couldn’t be undone with an apology, no matter how sincere. But the words stuck in her throat, tangled in the memory of his hands on her wrists, the way his voice had gone soft right before it turned cruel. She swallowed. “What do you want from me, Evan?” He opened his mouth, then closed it. The whiskey glass in his hand was nearly empty. “I don’t know,” he admitted. “I just… I missed you.” Rory looked away, her gaze landing on the far wall where a collection of old maps and black-and-white photographs were pinned haphazardly. One of them caught her eye—a grainy shot of a younger Silas, his auburn hair still free of grey, standing in front of a building she didn’t recognize. His arm was slung around the shoulders of another man, both of them grinning like they’d just gotten away with something. “You missed me,” she repeated, her voice flat. “Funny. I didn’t miss you at all.” Evan’s fingers tightened around his glass. “That’s not fair.” “No?” She turned back to him, her expression unreadable. “Tell me, Evan—when you were breaking my ribs, did you ever stop to think about whether it was fair?” The air between them turned brittle. Evan’s face paled, then flushed, a slow creep of red rising from his collar. “I was a kid,” he said, his voice barely above a whisper. “I didn’t know what I was doing.” “You were twenty-two.” Rory’s voice was steady, but her hands were shaking. She curled them into fists, pressing them into her thighs. “You knew exactly what you were doing.” Evan didn’t have an answer for that. He looked down at his glass, at the way his reflection wavered in the amber liquid. “I’m not that person anymore,” he said at last. “Aren’t you?” Rory tilted her head, studying him. “Because from where I’m sitting, you look exactly the same.” He flinched like she’d struck him. “That’s not true.” “No?” She leaned in, just a little, close enough that she could see the flecks of gold in his dark eyes, the way his pupils dilated at her proximity. “Then prove it.” Evan’s breath hitched. For a second, she thought he might reach for her again. But then the moment passed, and he sat back, his expression shuttering. “How?” Rory exhaled, some of the tension leaving her shoulders. She picked up her glass, drained the last of the gin. “Leave,” she said simply. “Walk out that door and don’t come back.” Evan stared at her. “You can’t be serious.” “I am.” She set the glass down with a sharp *clink*. “That’s how you prove it.” He opened his mouth, then closed it. The silence stretched between them, thick and suffocating. Finally, he stood, his stool scraping against the floor. “You’re really going to make me do this?” Rory didn’t answer. She just looked at him, her bright blue eyes unblinking. Evan’s hands curled into fists at his sides. For a second, she thought he might argue, might try to convince her that he’d changed, that he deserved another chance. But then he turned on his heel and walked away, his footsteps echoing against the hardwood floor. The door swung shut behind him with a quiet *click*. Rory didn’t watch him go. She sat there for a long moment, her heart pounding, her hands still trembling. Then she signaled the bartender for another drink. Silas found her like that twenty minutes later, nursing a fresh gin and tonic, her gaze fixed on the ice cubes as they slowly melted. He slid onto the stool Evan had vacated, his hazel eyes sharp as he took her in. “You alright?” Rory didn’t look up. “Peachy.” Silas grunted. He reached into his pocket, pulled out his silver signet ring, and turned it absently between his fingers. “Want to talk about it?” She finally met his gaze. “Not particularly.” He nodded, like he’d expected that answer. “Fair enough.” He gestured to the bartender for a whiskey, then turned back to her. “You know, I was married once.” Rory blinked. “What?” “Long time ago.” Silas took a sip of his drink, his expression distant. “She left me after Prague. Said she couldn’t handle the lies, the half-truths. Said I was more married to the job than I was to her.” He shrugged. “She wasn’t wrong.” Rory studied him—the lines around his eyes, the grey streaking his auburn beard, the way his left leg always carried just a hint of a limp. “Why are you telling me this?” “Because,” Silas said, “sometimes the past comes back when you least expect it. And sometimes, the only thing you can do is let it walk away.” Rory was quiet for a long moment. Then she picked up her glass and clinked it against his. “To the past,” she said. Silas smiled, just a little. “To the past.” They drank in silence, the weight of the night settling around them like a shroud. Outside, the rain continued to fall, blurring the neon glow of the Raven’s Nest into something soft, something almost beautiful. Rory exhaled, her breath steady for the first time in hours. She was okay. She would be.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She turned back [back]"
1"she said simply [simply]"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.321
leniency0.643
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.071
86.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1483
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
46.06% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1483
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"silence"
count3
4
word"eyebrow"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"wavered"
count1
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"footsteps"
count1
11
word"echoing"
count1
12
word"pounding"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"weight"
2"warmth"
3"silence"
4"eyebrow"
5"pulse"
6"unreadable"
7"whisper"
8"wavered"
9"tension"
10"footsteps"
11"echoing"
12"pounding"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences101
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences137
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1467
ratio0.001
matches
0"clink"
1"click"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
81.68% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1171
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.37
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Rory16
Silas6
Evan12
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
places(empty)
globalScore0.817
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1467
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences137
matches
0"changed, that he"
1"expected that answer"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean28.76
std23.76
cv0.826
sampleLengths
0123
16
2100
329
47
555
614
724
827
965
1010
118
1231
135
1440
1533
1614
1760
1826
1971
2015
219
2228
2339
2429
2532
2618
279
2832
2927
3032
318
3216
3332
3413
3556
3627
3744
385
3925
407
4128
423
4344
4432
4526
4623
478
4846
493
94.84% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences101
matches
0"been burned"
1"been written"
2"were pinned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs201
matches
0"weren’t saying"
1"were shaking"
17.73% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences137
ratio0.044
matches
0"It was the kind of night where the weight of the past pressed down just enough to make the present feel like a borrowed coat—something she could shrug off if she wanted to."
1"His cologne—something expensive, sandalwood and bergamot—cut through the bar’s stale warmth, and for a second, Rory was seventeen again, standing in the school courtyard with her heart hammering against her ribs."
2"“Rory,” he said, and his voice was the same too—smooth, deliberate, the kind of voice that had once whispered promises into her hair."
3"Instead, he studied her—the way her black hair fell in a sleek curtain to her shoulders, the way her fingers, long and precise, tapped against the glass."
4"One of them caught her eye—a grainy shot of a younger Silas, his auburn hair still free of grey, standing in front of a building she didn’t recognize."
5"Rory studied him—the lines around his eyes, the grey streaking his auburn beard, the way his left leg always carried just a hint of a limp."
91.40% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1184
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount59
adverbRatio0.04983108108108108
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.010135135135135136
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences137
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences137
mean10.71
std8.08
cv0.755
sampleLengths
036
121
217
316
433
56
624
731
85
922
1018
1123
126
135
142
154
1625
1719
187
195
207
212
2219
235
249
2513
265
275
2827
2919
3012
312
329
331
345
353
3611
3711
383
396
405
4130
4210
439
4424
457
467
479
4813
4929
44.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.291970802919708
totalSentences137
uniqueOpeners40
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences93
matches
0"Instead, he studied her—the way"
1"Finally, he stood, his stool"
2"Then she signaled the bartender"
3"Then she picked up her"
ratio0.043
52.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences93
matches
0"It was the kind of"
1"She hadn’t expected to see"
2"His cologne—something expensive, sandalwood and"
3"He hadn’t changed, not really."
4"he said, and his voice"
5"She didn’t look at him."
6"he said at last"
7"Her bright blue eyes were"
8"She picked up her glass,"
9"He didn’t answer right away."
10"He reached out, almost without"
11"She set her glass down."
12"He said it like it"
13"His voice was low, rough"
14"She wanted to tell him"
15"He opened his mouth, then"
16"His arm was slung around"
17"she repeated, her voice flat"
18"She turned back to him,"
19"he said, his voice barely"
ratio0.419
24.52% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences93
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest hummed with"
1"The green neon sign outside"
2"Rory leaned against the polished"
3"The ice had long since"
4"It was the kind of"
5"She hadn’t expected to see"
6"Evan slid onto the stool"
7"His cologne—something expensive, sandalwood and"
8"He hadn’t changed, not really."
9"The same sharp jawline, the"
10"he said, and his voice"
11"She didn’t look at him."
12"A beat of silence."
13"The bartender, a wiry man"
14"Evan ordered a whiskey, neat,"
15"he said at last"
16"Rory finally turned her head."
17"Her bright blue eyes were"
18"Evan exhaled through his nose,"
19"She picked up her glass,"
ratio0.871
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"His cologne—something expensive, sandalwood and bergamot—cut through the bar’s stale warmth, and for a second, Rory was seventeen again, standing in the school …"
1"But there was something different in the set of his shoulders, a hardness that hadn’t been there before."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"he said, and his voice was the same too—smooth, deliberate, the kind of voice that had once whispered promises into her hair"
1"she repeated, her voice flat"
2"She turned back, her expression unreadable"
3"he said, his voice barely above a whisper"
4"Silas took, his expression distant"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he admitted (admit)"
1"she repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.179
leniency0.357
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.071
81.3051%