Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXQBSEG7MNE01YT8J5ZFBVP

Run Details

Duration:
36.6s
Cost:
$0.003134
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest smelled of aged whiskey and polished wood, the kind of scent that clung to the walls like a second skin. Rory had been coming here for months, ever since she’d fled Cardiff, but tonight the bar felt different—smaller, somehow, as if the years had pressed in around her. She sat at her usual corner table, nursing a gin and tonic, the ice long melted into something watery and weak. The green neon sign outside cast a sickly glow through the rain-streaked windows, painting the room in shifting shades of emerald. She hadn’t expected to see him. The door swung open, and the bell above it chimed, a sound so familiar it barely registered. But then the air shifted, thickened, and Rory looked up from her drink just as Silas Blackwood stepped inside. He moved with the same deliberate grace she remembered, though his limp was more pronounced now, his auburn hair streaked with silver where it had once been rich and dark. He paused just inside the threshold, shaking the rain from his coat, and for a heartbeat, neither of them spoke. Then his hazel eyes found hers. Rory’s fingers tightened around her glass. She hadn’t seen him in—what? Five years? Six? The last time had been at her father’s funeral, when Silas had shown up unannounced, his presence a quiet weight in the back of the church. He’d left before the wake, slipping out like a shadow, and she’d told herself it was for the best. Some doors were better left closed. But now he was here. Silas crossed the room in slow, measured steps, his signet ring glinting under the dim light. He stopped at her table, his expression unreadable. “Rory,” he said, and the sound of her name in his voice sent a jolt through her, sharp and unexpected. “Silas.” She managed a smile, though it felt brittle. “I didn’t know you still came here.” “I own the place.” His mouth quirked, just slightly. “Or did you forget?” She had, actually. Or maybe she’d just chosen to. The Raven’s Nest had always been *his*—a place of secrets and half-truths, where men in tailored suits drank whiskey like it was water and women with sharp eyes traded information like currency. She’d spent her teenage years sneaking in here, back when Silas was still active, back when she’d thought the world was something she could outsmart. “Right,” she said. “I forgot.” Silas pulled out the chair across from her and sat, his movements careful, as if he were afraid the wood might splinter under him. “You look well,” he said. Rory laughed, a short, humorless sound. “Do I?” He studied her, his gaze lingering on the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, the one she’d gotten falling out of a tree when she was twelve. She resisted the urge to cover it with her other hand. “Better than the last time I saw you,” he said quietly. The funeral. Of course. She swallowed. “I was a mess then.” “You were grieving.” “And now?” Silas leaned back in his chair, his fingers tapping once against the tabletop. “Now you’re something else.” She wanted to ask what, exactly, but the words stuck in her throat. The silence between them stretched, thick with everything they weren’t saying. The last time they’d spoken properly, she’d been eighteen, fresh out of school, full of plans that didn’t include law or Cardiff or the life her parents had mapped out for her. She’d wanted to travel, to see the world, to do something that mattered. Silas had been the one to tell her that the world wasn’t kind to people who chased meaning. “It’ll eat you alive,” he’d said. “Better to pick a path and walk it steady.” She’d ignored him, of course. And look where that had gotten her. “You’re still delivering for Yu-Fei?” Silas asked, breaking the silence. Rory nodded. “Part-time. Pays the bills.” “And the rest of the time?” She hesitated. “I’m working on something.” “Something legal?” She almost laughed. “Mostly.” Silas exhaled through his nose, a sound that might have been amusement or frustration—she couldn’t tell. “You always did have a talent for finding trouble.” “And you always had a talent for pretending you didn’t care.” His expression darkened, just for a second. “I cared.” The words hung between them, heavy with implication. Rory looked down at her drink, swirling the watered-down gin in slow circles. “I know.” Silas was quiet for a long moment. Then, softly: “I heard about Evan.” Rory’s fingers stilled. The glass was cold against her skin, almost painfully so. “Did you?” “Word gets around.” “Of course it does.” She set the glass down, too hard. The ice clinked against the sides. “What did you hear?” “That he put you in the hospital.” She flinched. It had only been two nights, really—two nights of blurred lights and antiseptic smells, of her mother crying in the hallway and her father pretending not to. But it had been enough. Enough to make her realize that Cardiff wasn’t safe, that Evan wasn’t safe, that the life she’d been trying to build there was a house of cards waiting to collapse. “It wasn’t that bad,” she said. Silas’s jaw tightened. “Rory.” “What do you want me to say, Silas? That I was stupid? That I should’ve seen it coming? I *know* that.” Her voice cracked, just a little. She hated it. Hated that after all this time, after all the distance she’d put between herself and that version of her life, it still had the power to unravel her. Silas reached across the table, his fingers brushing against hers—just for a second, just enough to make her breath catch. “I should’ve been there,” he said. Rory pulled her hand back. “You weren’t my keeper.” “No,” he agreed. “But I was your friend.” The past tense of it stung. She looked away, her gaze landing on the old photographs lining the walls—the black-and-white images of men in trench coats, of women with cigarettes dangling from their fingers, of a London that no longer existed. “Are we still?” Silas didn’t answer right away. When she finally looked back at him, his expression was unreadable. “I don’t know,” he said at last. “Are we?” The question settled over her like a weight. Rory thought of all the times she’d walked past this bar, all the times she’d considered coming inside, all the times she’d told herself it was better this way—cleaner, safer. But the truth was, she’d missed him. Missed the way he saw through her bullshit, missed the way he never treated her like she was fragile, even when she was. “I don’t know either,” she admitted. Silas nodded, as if he’d expected that answer. He pushed his chair back, the legs scraping against the floor. “I should get back to work.” Rory watched him stand, his movements slower than they used to be, his body carrying the weight of years she hadn’t been there to see. “Silas,” she said, before she could stop herself. He turned. “Do you ever think about leaving?” she asked. “Just… packing up and going somewhere else?” Something flickered in his eyes—something sad, something resigned. “Every damn day,” he said. Then he smiled, just a little. “But some of us aren’t as good at running as you are.” Rory opened her mouth to argue, but the words died on her lips. Because he was right. She *had* run. From Cardiff, from Evan, from the life she’d thought she wanted. And now here she was, in a bar she’d once loved, sitting across from a man she’d once trusted, and she didn’t know how to stop. Silas limped toward the back of the room, disappearing behind the bar. Rory stayed where she was, her fingers tracing the rim of her glass. Outside, the rain had picked up, drumming against the windows like a warning. She should go. She should finish her drink, settle her tab, and walk out into the night. But for the first time in a long time, she didn’t want to run. Not yet.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
77.55% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"His mouth quirked just [just]"
1"he said quietly [quietly]"
2"Her voice cracked just [just]"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.367
leniency0.735
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.122
89.01% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1365
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.72% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1365
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"glinting"
count1
4
word"unreadable"
count2
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"implication"
count1
7
word"unravel"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"weight"
2"measured"
3"glinting"
4"unreadable"
5"silence"
6"implication"
7"unravel"
8"flickered"
9"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences104
filterMatches
0"realize"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences134
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords1350
ratio0.002
matches
0"his"
1"know"
2"had"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1133
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.32
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Cardiff4
Rory12
Silas15
Blackwood1
Evan2
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Blackwood"
5"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
globalScore0.838
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1350
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences134
matches
0"realize that Cardiff"
1"expected that answer"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean24.55
std25.13
cv1.024
sampleLengths
093
16
286
36
465
55
644
716
813
966
105
1129
128
1348
1411
153
162
1717
18102
1912
2010
216
226
236
242
254
2625
2711
289
2923
3013
3115
323
3321
347
3564
366
374
3858
3926
409
418
4244
4325
4468
456
4625
4733
482
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences104
matches
0"been eighteen"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs216
matches
0"weren’t saying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences134
ratio0.067
matches
0"Rory had been coming here for months, ever since she’d fled Cardiff, but tonight the bar felt different—smaller, somehow, as if the years had pressed in around her."
1"She hadn’t seen him in—what?"
2"The Raven’s Nest had always been *his*—a place of secrets and half-truths, where men in tailored suits drank whiskey like it was water and women with sharp eyes traded information like currency."
3"Silas exhaled through his nose, a sound that might have been amusement or frustration—she couldn’t tell."
4"It had only been two nights, really—two nights of blurred lights and antiseptic smells, of her mother crying in the hallway and her father pretending not to."
5"Silas reached across the table, his fingers brushing against hers—just for a second, just enough to make her breath catch."
6"She looked away, her gaze landing on the old photographs lining the walls—the black-and-white images of men in trench coats, of women with cigarettes dangling from their fingers, of a London that no longer existed."
7"Rory thought of all the times she’d walked past this bar, all the times she’d considered coming inside, all the times she’d told herself it was better this way—cleaner, safer."
8"Something flickered in his eyes—something sad, something resigned."
97.62% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1147
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.042720139494333044
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.010462074978204011
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences134
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences134
mean10.07
std8.44
cv0.838
sampleLengths
023
128
221
321
46
517
619
730
820
96
106
115
122
131
1426
1519
166
175
1816
198
2020
219
227
239
244
253
266
2732
2825
293
302
3124
325
336
342
3526
3611
3711
382
392
402
415
423
432
4413
454
4613
4711
4832
4913
47.01% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.29850746268656714
totalSentences134
uniqueOpeners40
79.37% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences84
matches
0"Then his hazel eyes found"
1"Then he smiled, just a"
ratio0.024
72.38% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences84
matches
0"She sat at her usual"
1"She hadn’t expected to see"
2"He moved with the same"
3"He paused just inside the"
4"She hadn’t seen him in—what?"
5"He’d left before the wake,"
6"He stopped at her table,"
7"he said, and the sound"
8"She managed a smile, though"
9"His mouth quirked, just slightly"
10"She had, actually."
11"She’d spent her teenage years"
12"He studied her, his gaze"
13"She resisted the urge to"
14"he said quietly"
15"She wanted to ask what,"
16"She’d wanted to travel, to"
17"She’d ignored him, of course."
18"She almost laughed."
19"His expression darkened, just for"
ratio0.369
61.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences84
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest smelled of"
1"Rory had been coming here"
2"She sat at her usual"
3"The green neon sign outside"
4"She hadn’t expected to see"
5"The door swung open, and"
6"He moved with the same"
7"He paused just inside the"
8"Rory’s fingers tightened around her"
9"She hadn’t seen him in—what?"
10"The last time had been"
11"He’d left before the wake,"
12"Some doors were better left"
13"Silas crossed the room in"
14"He stopped at her table,"
15"he said, and the sound"
16"She managed a smile, though"
17"His mouth quirked, just slightly"
18"She had, actually."
19"The Raven’s Nest had always"
ratio0.798
59.52% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"Because he was right."
ratio0.012
76.41% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Rory had been coming here for months, ever since she’d fled Cardiff, but tonight the bar felt different—smaller, somehow, as if the years had pressed in around …"
1"Silas pulled out the chair across from her and sat, his movements careful, as if he were afraid the wood might splinter under him."
2"He studied her, his gaze lingering on the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, the one she’d gotten falling out of a tree when she was twelve."
3"She looked away, her gaze landing on the old photographs lining the walls—the black-and-white images of men in trench coats, of women with cigarettes dangling f…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he agreed (agree)"
1"she admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.265
leniency0.531
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.082
86.4040%