Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXQERPXSCZX0B3HFDFWXQET

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Duration:
37.9s
Cost:
$0.004146
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon raven flickered like a dying thought as Rory pushed through the door of the Nest, the familiar scent of aged whiskey and polished wood wrapping around her. The bar was quiet tonight—just a handful of regulars hunched over their drinks, the low hum of conversation barely rising above the crackle of the vinyl spinning on the old turntable. She exhaled, the tension in her shoulders easing just a fraction. This was the one place in London that still felt like hers. Silas looked up from behind the bar, his hazel eyes sharp even in the dim light. He didn’t smile, but then, he never did. A nod was enough. “Late shift?” Rory slid onto a stool, her black hair catching the amber glow of the pendant lights. “Yu-Fei’s nephew decided to test how many dumplings one human can eat in an hour. I lost the bet.” Silas grunted, already reaching for the bottle of Japanese whisky she favored. The ice clinked as he dropped two cubes into her glass. “You let him win.” “Maybe.” She took the glass, the weight of it familiar in her palm. The first sip burned smooth down her throat, and for a moment, she let herself pretend the last five years hadn’t happened. Then the door opened again. A gust of cold October air rushed in, carrying with it the scent of rain and something else—something expensive, like sandalwood and bergamot. Rory didn’t turn. She didn’t need to. She knew that cologne. Knew the way the air shifted when *he* walked into a room. Silas stiffened beside her, his fingers pausing mid-wipe on a glass. “Well,” he murmured, low enough for only her to hear, “this is a surprise.” Rory swirled her whisky, watching the amber liquid cling to the sides. She could feel Evan’s presence behind her like a physical weight, the way gravity pulls at old wounds. Three years. Three years since she’d last seen him, and here he was, stepping into *her* bar like he owned the place. “Rory.” His voice was the same—deep, measured, the kind of voice that had once made her stomach flip. She took another sip before turning, giving herself that extra second to school her face into something neutral. “Evan. What a coincidence.” He wasn’t supposed to look like this. In her memory, he was forever frozen at twenty-two, all sharp angles and arrogance, the kind of handsome that made girls forget their own names. But the man standing in the doorway was softer around the edges, his dark hair threaded with silver at the temples, his jawline less severe. He wore a tailored overcoat, the kind that cost more than her monthly rent, and his hands—those hands she’d once known so well—were tucked into his pockets like he wasn’t sure what to do with them. “I didn’t know you came here,” he said. Rory arched a brow. “Funny. I didn’t know you *could* come here.” A flicker of something crossed his face—guilt, maybe, or just the ghost of an old argument. He stepped forward, hesitating like he was waiting for permission. Silas’s gaze darted between them, his expression unreadable, but Rory caught the way his fingers twitched toward the baseball bat beneath the counter. She gave a tiny shake of her head. *Not yet.* Evan slid onto the stool beside her, leaving a careful inch of space between them. “I’m in town for a conference. Thought I’d see if this place was still standing.” “It is.” Rory took another sip. “Some things don’t change.” Silas set a tumbler in front of Evan without a word, pouring two fingers of the same whisky Rory was drinking. Evan thanked him, but his eyes never left Rory. She could feel the weight of his gaze, the way it traced the line of her jaw, the scar on her wrist where his father’s dog had bitten her when they were kids. “You look good,” he said finally. She laughed, a short, sharp sound. “Liar.” He flinched. Just a little. But she saw it. Rory turned to face him fully, letting him see the dark circles under her eyes, the way her collarbones pressed too close to the skin. “I look like someone who works double shifts and hasn’t slept through the night in years. But thanks for the thought.” Evan’s fingers tightened around his glass. “I deserved that.” “Yeah,” she said softly. “You did.” Silence stretched between them, thick and suffocating. The kind of silence that only exists between people who used to know each other’s secrets. Rory could hear the tick of the old clock above the bar, the muffled laughter of the regulars in the corner, the way Evan’s breath hitched just slightly when he finally spoke again. “How’s your dad?” The question was so mundane it threw her. She blinked. “Still a barrister. Still thinks I wasted my potential.” “And your mum?” “Retired. Moved to Tenby. Sends me knitted scarves I never wear.” Evan almost smiled. Almost. “Sounds like Jennifer.” Rory studied him, the way his fingers tapped restlessly against the glass. He’d always done that when he was nervous. “What about you? Still saving the world, one corporate merger at a time?” His jaw tightened. “Something like that.” She wanted to ask if he was happy. If the life he’d chosen—the one he’d *picked over her*—was everything he’d dreamed. But the words stuck in her throat, bitter as unripe fruit. Silas cleared his throat, breaking the tension. “You two catch up. I’ve got inventory.” Rory watched him limp toward the back room, his presence leaving a void. Silas had a sixth sense for when to disappear. She envied him for it. Evan swirled his whisky, the ice clinking like a metronome counting down. “I heard about your flat. The one above the bookshop.” Rory’s fingers went cold. “From who?” “Mutual friends.” “Eva wouldn’t tell you shit.” “No,” he admitted. “It was… someone else.” She didn’t ask who. Didn’t want to know. The flat above the bookshop was where they’d lived together, back when she still believed in happy endings. Back before his hands became weapons and his words became blades. “It’s gone,” she said flatly. “Burned down last winter. Electrical fire.” Evan’s breath hitched. “Christ, Rory. Were you—?” “I wasn’t there.” She cut him off before he could finish. “I was already gone by then.” Gone. Like she should’ve been years earlier. He rubbed a hand over his face, suddenly looking every one of his thirty years. “I’m glad.” She wanted to scream. Wanted to throw her glass at the wall and watch it shatter, just to see if he’d flinch. But she didn’t. Because Rory Carter didn’t scream anymore. She just… endured. “Why are you here, Evan?” He met her gaze, and for the first time, she saw the cracks in his armor. The way his eyes flickered with something raw. “I needed to see you.” “Bullshit.” The word was out before she could stop it. “You could’ve seen me anytime in the last three years. You knew where I worked. Knew where I lived.” “I wasn’t sure you’d want that.” “You weren’t *wrong*,” she snapped. Evan leaned in, his voice dropping. “I’m sorry.” The words hung between them, heavy and inadequate. Rory stared at him, at the man who’d once been her everything, who’d then become her nightmare, and now sat in front of her like a stranger wearing a familiar face. “Are you?” she whispered. He didn’t answer. Maybe he couldn’t. Rory drained her glass and stood, the stool scraping against the wooden floor. “It was good seeing you, Evan.” He reached for her wrist—*her wrist*, the one with the scar—and she jerked back like he’d burned her. His hand froze in the air between them, trembling just slightly. “I miss you,” he said, so quietly she almost didn’t hear him. She wanted to laugh. Wanted to cry. Wanted to slap the self-pity out of his voice. But all she did was shake her head and step back. “No,” she said. “You miss the idea of me. The girl who used to look at you like you hung the moon. But she’s gone. And you killed her.” Then she turned and walked out, the green neon raven blinking overhead like a warning. The cold air hit her lungs, sharp and clean, and she sucked it in like a lifeline. Behind her, the door to the Nest swung shut with a quiet, final click.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
80.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
1"she said softly [softly]"
2"she said flatly [flatly]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.28
leniency0.56
rawRatio0.214
effectiveRatio0.12
85.96% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1424
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.78% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1424
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"familiar"
count3
2
word"tension"
count2
3
word"weight"
count3
4
word"could feel"
count2
5
word"measured"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"unreadable"
count1
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"silence"
count2
11
word"potential"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"familiar"
2"tension"
3"weight"
4"could feel"
5"measured"
6"stomach"
7"flicker"
8"unreadable"
9"traced"
10"silence"
11"potential"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences108
matches
0"was nervous"
1"was happy"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences108
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences144
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans7
markdownWords11
totalWords1413
ratio0.008
matches
0"he"
1"her"
2"could"
3"Not yet."
4"picked over her"
5"wrong"
6"her wrist"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1133
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.5
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory17
Nest2
London1
Japanese1
October1
Evan10
Silas7
Silence1
Gone1
Carter1
Wanted3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Evan"
2"Silas"
3"Silence"
4"Carter"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.75
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like hers"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1413
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences144
matches
0"knew that cologne"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean22.43
std19.66
cv0.877
sampleLengths
084
130
235
327
435
55
646
725
852
91
1039
1193
128
1312
1459
1530
1610
1763
186
197
209
2146
229
236
2456
253
2619
273
2811
297
3033
316
3232
3314
3427
3522
366
372
385
397
4037
4111
427
4317
447
4517
4634
475
4829
4929
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences108
matches
0"were tucked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs216
matches
0"was, stepping"
1"was waiting"
2"was drinking"
3.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences144
ratio0.049
matches
0"The bar was quiet tonight—just a handful of regulars hunched over their drinks, the low hum of conversation barely rising above the crackle of the vinyl spinning on the old turntable."
1"A gust of cold October air rushed in, carrying with it the scent of rain and something else—something expensive, like sandalwood and bergamot."
2"His voice was the same—deep, measured, the kind of voice that had once made her stomach flip."
3"He wore a tailored overcoat, the kind that cost more than her monthly rent, and his hands—those hands she’d once known so well—were tucked into his pockets like he wasn’t sure what to do with them."
4"A flicker of something crossed his face—guilt, maybe, or just the ghost of an old argument."
5"If the life he’d chosen—the one he’d *picked over her*—was everything he’d dreamed."
6"He reached for her wrist—*her wrist*, the one with the scar—and she jerked back like he’d burned her."
92.17% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1144
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount56
adverbRatio0.04895104895104895
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.012237762237762238
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences144
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences144
mean9.81
std7.76
cv0.791
sampleLengths
030
131
211
312
416
58
64
72
816
919
1012
1111
124
1313
1422
155
1623
173
184
194
2012
2111
2214
2312
2418
252
2620
271
2817
2918
304
317
3225
3325
3436
358
364
378
3816
3910
4023
418
422
4315
4415
456
464
4721
489
4933
59.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.375
totalSentences144
uniqueOpeners54
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences95
matches
0"Then the door opened again."
1"Just a little."
2"Maybe he couldn’t."
3"Then she turned and walked"
ratio0.042
85.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences95
matches
0"She exhaled, the tension in"
1"He didn’t smile, but then,"
2"She took the glass, the"
3"She didn’t need to."
4"She knew that cologne."
5"he murmured, low enough for"
6"She could feel Evan’s presence"
7"His voice was the same—deep,"
8"She took another sip before"
9"He wasn’t supposed to look"
10"He wore a tailored overcoat,"
11"He stepped forward, hesitating like"
12"She gave a tiny shake"
13"She could feel the weight"
14"he said finally"
15"She laughed, a short, sharp"
16"she said softly"
17"He’d always done that when"
18"His jaw tightened."
19"She wanted to ask if"
ratio0.337
65.26% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences95
matches
0"The green neon raven flickered"
1"The bar was quiet tonight—just"
2"She exhaled, the tension in"
3"This was the one place"
4"Silas looked up from behind"
5"He didn’t smile, but then,"
6"A nod was enough."
7"Rory slid onto a stool,"
8"Silas grunted, already reaching for"
9"The ice clinked as he"
10"She took the glass, the"
11"The first sip burned smooth"
12"A gust of cold October"
13"Rory didn’t turn."
14"She didn’t need to."
15"She knew that cologne."
16"Silas stiffened beside her, his"
17"he murmured, low enough for"
18"Rory swirled her whisky, watching"
19"She could feel Evan’s presence"
ratio0.789
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences95
matches
0"If the life he’d chosen—the"
1"Because Rory Carter didn’t scream"
ratio0.021
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Rory stared at him, at the man who’d once been her everything, who’d then become her nightmare, and now sat in front of her like a stranger wearing a familiar f…"
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She took, the weight of it familiar in her palm"
70.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"he admitted (admit)"
2"she snapped (snap)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.16
87.5791%