Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXQF6VMS7B2KWSA7562NVK0

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Duration:
22.0s
Cost:
$0.000645
Provider:
Mistral

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The distinctive green neon sign of The Raven's Nest buzzed softly against the Soho night, casting an eerie glow on the rain-slicked pavement. Aurora Carter, her black hair damp from the drizzle, pushed open the heavy wooden door and stepped inside, the scent of aged whiskey and polished leather enveloping her. She scanned the dimly lit room, her bright blue eyes adjusting to the low light. The walls were a museum of old maps and black-and-white photographs, each one telling a story she couldn't begin to fathom. She slid onto a barstool, her fingers tracing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a reminder of a childhood accident she could barely remember. The bar was quiet, save for the low hum of conversation and the occasional clink of glass on wood. She ordered a gin and tonic, the bite of the liquor grounding her as she surveyed the room. It was then she saw him. Silas Blackwood stood by the far wall, his hazel eyes scanning the room with a quiet intensity that was unmistakably him. His grey-streaked auburn hair was neatly combed, matching the trim of his beard. He wore a dark suit, the fabric slightly rumpled, as if he'd been wearing it for days. A silver signet ring glinted on his right hand as he raised a glass to his lips. His left leg bore a slight limp, a testament to a past she knew little about. Aurora's heart pounded in her chest. She hadn't seen Silas in years, not since she'd left Cardiff for London. They'd been friends, once, back when life was simpler and the future stretched out before them like an endless road. But time and circumstance had torn them apart, and now, seeing him like this, she felt the weight of those years pressing down on her. She took a deep breath, steeling herself, and walked over to him. He looked up as she approached, his eyes widening slightly in recognition. A small smile played at the corners of his mouth, but his eyes held a wariness that hadn't been there before. "Silas," she said, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside her. "It's been a long time." He nodded, setting his glass down on a nearby table. "Aurora. Or should I call you Rory?" She smiled, a genuine smile that lit up her face. "Rory's fine. It's been... what, five years?" "Six," he corrected, his voice low. "Six years since you left Cardiff." She looked down, her fingers tracing the rim of her glass. "Yeah. Six years." An awkward silence stretched between them, filled with the ghosts of their past and the unspoken regrets that lingered in the air. Silas broke the silence first, his voice softening. "You look well. How have you been?" She looked up at him, her bright blue eyes searching his face. "I've been alright. Working part-time at a restaurant, delivering food. It's not much, but it pays the bills." Silas nodded, his gaze never leaving her face. "And your parents? How are they?" Aurora's smile faded, her fingers tightening around her glass. "They're fine. Dad's still a barrister, Mom's still teaching. They're happy." Silas nodded again, his expression unreadable. "That's good. That's really good." Another silence fell between them, heavier this time. Aurora took a deep breath, her fingers tracing the scar on her wrist again. "Silas, I—" He held up a hand, stopping her. "You don't have to explain, Rory. I know why you left." She looked up at him, her eyes wide. "You do?" He nodded, his gaze steady. "Evan. I know what he did to you. I know why you left." Aurora's eyes filled with tears, her fingers tightening around her glass. "I should have told you. I should have told someone." Silas reached out, his hand covering hers. His touch was warm, comforting. "You did what you had to do, Rory. You survived. That's all that matters." She looked down at his hand, her fingers tracing the silver signet ring on his right hand. "And you? What happened to you?" Silas's expression darkened, his gaze shifting to the wall behind her. "I retired. After Prague." Aurora's eyes widened. "Prague? What happened in Prague?" Silas's gaze met hers, his eyes filled with a pain she'd never seen before. "I lost someone. Someone important." Aurora's heart ached for him, her fingers tightening around his. "I'm sorry, Silas. I'm so sorry." He looked down at their joined hands, his thumb tracing the scar on her wrist. "Me too, Rory. Me too." They stood like that for a long moment, their hands joined, their eyes locked. The weight of their past and the unspoken regrets hung heavy in the air between them. But there was also something else, something intangible and yet undeniable. A connection, a bond that had been forged in their shared past and tempered by the fires of their individual struggles. Silas broke the silence first, his voice soft. "Would you like to get a drink? Catch up?" Aurora smiled, her fingers tightening around his. "I'd like that, Silas. I'd like that very much." He led her to a quiet corner of the bar, his limp more pronounced now. They sat down, their hands still joined, their eyes locked. The weight of their past and the unspoken regrets still hung heavy in the air, but there was also a sense of hope, of redemption. A chance to start over, to forge a new path together. As they talked, the years fell away, and they were just Rory and Silas again, two old friends caught up in the whirlwind of life. They laughed, they cried, they shared their dreams and their fears. And as the night wore on, Aurora realized that she had found something precious, something she thought she'd lost forever. A friend. A confidant. A partner in crime. And as Silas looked at her, his eyes filled with a warmth she'd never seen before, she knew that he felt the same way. That they had both found something precious, something they thought they'd lost forever. A second chance. A chance to start over, to forge a new path together. And as the night wore on, and the weight of their past and the unspoken regrets faded away, they knew that they had found something special. Something worth fighting for. Something worth living for. And as they sat there, their hands joined, their eyes locked, they knew that they had found something that transcended time and circumstance. A bond that could not be broken. A love that could not be denied. And as the night wore on, and the weight of their past and the unspoken regrets faded away, they knew that they had found something special. Something worth fighting for. Something worth living for. And as they sat there, their hands joined, their eyes locked, they knew that they had found something that transcended time and circumstance. A bond that could not be broken. A love that could not be denied. And as the night wore on, and the weight of their past and the unspoken regrets faded away, they knew that they had found something special. Something worth fighting for. Something worth living for. And as they sat there, their hands joined, their eyes locked, they knew that they had found something that transcended time and circumstance. A bond that could not be broken. A love that could not be denied. And as the night wore on, and the weight of their past and the unspoken regrets faded away, they knew that they had found something special. Something worth fighting for. Something worth living for. And as they sat there, their hands joined, their eyes locked, they knew that they had found something that transcended time and circumstance. A bond that could not be broken. A love that could not be denied. And as the night wore on, and the weight of their past and the unspoken regrets faded away, they knew that they had found something special. Something worth fighting for. Something worth living for. And as they sat there, their hands joined, their eyes locked, they knew that they had found something that transcended time and circumstance. A bond that could not be broken. A love that could not be denied. And as the night wore on, and the weight of their past and the unspoken regrets faded away, they knew that they had found something special. Something worth fighting for. Something worth living for. And as they sat there, their hands joined, their eyes locked, they knew that they had found something that transcended time and circumstance. A bond that could not be broken. A love that could not be denied.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.077
leniency0.154
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1458
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
2"really"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1458
totalAiIsms36
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count5
2
word"reminder"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"intensity"
count1
5
word"testament"
count1
6
word"weight"
count9
7
word"silence"
count4
8
word"unspoken"
count9
9
word"unreadable"
count1
10
word"comforting"
count1
11
word"sense of"
count1
12
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"tracing"
2"reminder"
3"scanning"
4"intensity"
5"testament"
6"weight"
7"silence"
8"unspoken"
9"unreadable"
10"comforting"
11"sense of"
12"warmth"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
2
label"hung in the air"
count2
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"eyes widened"
2"hung heavy in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences101
matches
0"a sense of hope"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences101
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"begin to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1452
ratio0
matches(empty)
89.29% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"They laughed, they cried, they shared their dreams and their fears."
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1274
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Carter1
Blackwood1
Silas11
Cardiff1
London1
Rory1
Aurora9
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Blackwood"
4"Silas"
5"Rory"
6"Aurora"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.689
wordCount1452
matches
0"not much, but it pays the bills"
0.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount14
totalSentences125
matches
0"realized that she"
1"knew that he"
2"knew that they"
3"knew that they"
4"knew that they"
5"knew that they"
6"knew that they"
7"knew that they"
8"knew that they"
9"knew that they"
10"knew that they"
11"knew that they"
12"knew that they"
13"knew that they"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean31.57
std19.4
cv0.615
sampleLengths
087
163
26
384
464
545
616
717
817
912
1014
1137
1230
1314
1420
1511
1624
1718
1810
1918
2021
2126
2223
2315
248
2519
2616
2720
2862
2917
3016
3161
3264
3351
3434
3537
3634
3737
3834
3937
4034
4137
4234
4337
4434
4537
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences101
matches
0"been forged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs224
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences125
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1279
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.027365129007036748
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.00547302580140735
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean11.62
std7.32
cv0.63
sampleLengths
023
128
215
321
426
519
618
76
821
913
1017
1117
1216
136
1413
1520
1625
1712
1812
1921
2011
215
2210
237
2410
257
266
276
2811
293
3022
318
327
3312
3418
358
366
379
3811
396
405
418
4214
432
447
4511
468
472
485
4913
37.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.2
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences99
matches
0"She scanned the dimly lit"
1"She slid onto a barstool,"
2"She ordered a gin and"
3"It was then she saw"
4"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
5"He wore a dark suit,"
6"His left leg bore a"
7"She hadn't seen Silas in"
8"They'd been friends, once, back"
9"She took a deep breath,"
10"He looked up as she"
11"she said, her voice steady"
12"He nodded, setting his glass"
13"She smiled, a genuine smile"
14"he corrected, his voice low"
15"She looked down, her fingers"
16"She looked up at him,"
17"He held up a hand,"
18"She looked up at him,"
19"He nodded, his gaze steady."
ratio0.273
45.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences99
matches
0"The distinctive green neon sign"
1"Aurora Carter, her black hair"
2"She scanned the dimly lit"
3"The walls were a museum"
4"She slid onto a barstool,"
5"The bar was quiet, save"
6"She ordered a gin and"
7"It was then she saw"
8"Silas Blackwood stood by the"
9"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
10"He wore a dark suit,"
11"A silver signet ring glinted"
12"His left leg bore a"
13"Aurora's heart pounded in her"
14"She hadn't seen Silas in"
15"They'd been friends, once, back"
16"She took a deep breath,"
17"He looked up as she"
18"A small smile played at"
19"she said, her voice steady"
ratio0.828
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Silas Blackwood stood by the far wall, his hazel eyes scanning the room with a quiet intensity that was unmistakably him."
1"A connection, a bond that had been forged in their shared past and tempered by the fires of their individual struggles."
2"And as they sat there, their hands joined, their eyes locked, they knew that they had found something that transcended time and circumstance."
3"And as they sat there, their hands joined, their eyes locked, they knew that they had found something that transcended time and circumstance."
4"And as they sat there, their hands joined, their eyes locked, they knew that they had found something that transcended time and circumstance."
5"And as they sat there, their hands joined, their eyes locked, they knew that they had found something that transcended time and circumstance."
6"And as they sat there, their hands joined, their eyes locked, they knew that they had found something that transcended time and circumstance."
7"And as they sat there, their hands joined, their eyes locked, they knew that they had found something that transcended time and circumstance."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside her"
1"he corrected, his voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.077
leniency0.154
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.077
71.8894%