Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXQKGT3HZ411WPPDPJ5S0P1

Run Details

Duration:
24.1s
Cost:
$0.002216
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest hummed with the low murmur of conversation, the clink of glasses, and the occasional burst of laughter that rose like smoke from the tables. The green neon sign outside cast a sickly glow through the rain-streaked windows, painting the room in shifting shades of jade. Rory leaned against the bar, her fingers tracing the rim of a half-empty gin and tonic, the ice long melted. She had come straight from a double shift at the Golden Empress, her black hair still damp from the London drizzle, her delivery bag slumped at her feet like a discarded shadow. The door swung open, letting in a gust of cold air and the distant wail of a siren. Rory didn’t look up—until she heard the voice. “Well. If it isn’t Malphora herself.” The nickname hit her like a slap. She turned slowly, her bright blue eyes narrowing as she took in the man standing in the doorway. He was taller than she remembered, or maybe it was the way he carried himself now—shoulders squared, chin lifted, as if he’d spent the last few years learning how to take up space. His auburn hair was streaked with silver, his beard neatly trimmed, and there was a new weight to his gaze, something sharp and assessing beneath the easy smile. Evan. Her stomach twisted. She hadn’t seen him in five years. Not since the night she’d packed a single suitcase and fled Cardiff in the back of Eva’s beat-up Fiat, her wrist still throbbing from where he’d gripped it too tight. “Evan,” she said, and her voice was steadier than she felt. “I go by Rory now.” He stepped closer, his boots scuffing against the worn floorboards. “Rory,” he repeated, as if testing the sound of it. “Right. Of course.” His eyes flicked over her—her scuffed trainers, her faded jeans, the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist that she’d never bothered to hide. “You look… different.” She arched a brow. “So do you.” He laughed, but it was a hollow sound. “Yeah, well. Life’s a bitch, isn’t it?” Rory didn’t answer. She turned back to her drink, swirling the watered-down gin. The silence between them stretched, thick with everything they weren’t saying. Evan slid onto the stool beside her. “What are you doing in London?” “Living,” she said simply. “Right. Of course.” He flagged down the bartender—a wiry man with a scar through his eyebrow—and ordered a whiskey, neat. “Still working at that Chinese place?” “Golden Empress. And no, I deliver for them now.” He made a noise in the back of his throat, something between a scoff and a sigh. “You always did have a knack for making things harder than they needed to be.” Rory’s fingers tightened around her glass. “And you always had a knack for pretending you knew what was best for me.” Evan’s jaw clenched. The bartender set his whiskey in front of him, and he took a long sip, his hazel eyes never leaving hers. “I was an idiot back then,” he said finally. “I know that.” She wanted to laugh. Wanted to tell him it wasn’t that simple, that some things couldn’t be undone with an apology. But the words stuck in her throat. “Why are you here, Evan?” He exhaled through his nose, his fingers tapping against the bar. “Passing through. Got a job in Manchester. Security work.” A beat. “You ever think about coming back to Cardiff?” “No.” “Right.” He rubbed the back of his neck, his signet ring glinting in the dim light. “I heard about your dad. I’m sorry.” Rory’s chest tightened. Brendan Carter had died two years ago, a heart attack in the middle of a case. She’d gone home for the funeral, stood stiffly beside her mother in the church, and left the next morning before the wake was over. “Thanks,” she said, because what else was there to say? Evan studied her for a long moment. “You ever wonder what would’ve happened if you’d stayed?” “No,” she lied. He smiled, but it didn’t reach his eyes. “Liar.” Rory drained the last of her drink and set the glass down with a sharp *clink*. “I should go.” “Already?” Evan’s voice was light, but there was an edge to it. “We’ve barely caught up.” “Some things don’t need catching up on.” He reached out, his fingers brushing the back of her hand. She flinched, and he pulled away like he’d been burned. “Rory—” “Don’t.” She stood, slinging her bag over her shoulder. “It was good seeing you, Evan. Take care of yourself.” She walked away before he could respond, her pulse hammering in her ears. The door to the Raven’s Nest swung shut behind her, and she stepped out into the damp London night, the cold air biting at her skin. She didn’t look back. Inside the bar, Silas Blackwood watched from the shadows of the back room, his hazel eyes sharp behind the smoke of his cigar. He’d seen the whole thing—the way Rory’s shoulders had gone rigid, the way Evan’s smile had faltered. He exhaled slowly, tapping ash into a crystal tray. Some ghosts, he knew, never really left you. He reached for the phone on his desk and dialed a number from memory. “It’s me,” he said when the line picked up. “We’ve got a problem.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said simply [simply]"
1"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.306
leniency0.611
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.111
83.33% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount900
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount900
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
6
word"jaw clenched"
count1
7
word"glinting"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"crystal"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"weight"
2"stomach"
3"flicked"
4"silence"
5"eyebrow"
6"jaw clenched"
7"glinting"
8"pulse"
9"crystal"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences81
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords889
ratio0.001
matches
0"clink"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount720
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.97
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Golden1
Empress1
London2
Cardiff1
Eva1
Fiat1
Rory7
Carter1
Evan6
Silas1
Blackwood1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
4"Carter"
5"Evan"
6"Silas"
7"Blackwood"
places
0"Golden"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
41.30% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if testing the sound of it"
1"something between a scoff and a sigh"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount889
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean24.03
std21.56
cv0.897
sampleLengths
0100
126
26
386
41
540
616
749
87
915
1024
1113
124
1326
149
1532
1621
1736
1828
195
2030
211
2223
2353
2416
253
269
2719
2816
297
3022
3119
3239
334
3449
358
3627
93.16% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences58
matches
0"was streaked"
1"been burned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs119
matches
0"weren’t saying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences81
ratio0.062
matches
0"Rory didn’t look up—until she heard the voice."
1"He was taller than she remembered, or maybe it was the way he carried himself now—shoulders squared, chin lifted, as if he’d spent the last few years learning how to take up space."
2"“Right. Of course.” His eyes flicked over her—her scuffed trainers, her faded jeans, the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist that she’d never bothered to hide."
3"“Right. Of course.” He flagged down the bartender—a wiry man with a scar through his eyebrow—and ordered a whiskey, neat."
4"He’d seen the whole thing—the way Rory’s shoulders had gone rigid, the way Evan’s smile had faltered."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount731
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.02188782489740082
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.01094391244870041
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences81
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences81
mean10.98
std7.8
cv0.711
sampleLengths
027
121
220
332
418
58
66
77
818
933
1028
111
123
137
1430
1511
165
1710
1810
1926
203
214
223
238
247
253
2610
2711
287
296
304
3120
326
339
3417
3515
366
3715
383
3921
409
413
424
4317
447
455
4611
4711
488
491
64.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4074074074074074
totalSentences81
uniqueOpeners33
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences55
matches
0"She had come straight from"
1"She turned slowly, her bright"
2"He was taller than she"
3"His auburn hair was streaked"
4"Her stomach twisted."
5"She hadn’t seen him in"
6"she said, and her voice"
7"He stepped closer, his boots"
8"he repeated, as if testing"
9"His eyes flicked over her—her"
10"She arched a brow."
11"He laughed, but it was"
12"She turned back to her"
13"she said simply"
14"He flagged down the bartender—a"
15"He made a noise in"
16"he said finally"
17"She wanted to laugh."
18"He exhaled through his nose,"
19"He rubbed the back of"
ratio0.582
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences55
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest hummed with"
1"The green neon sign outside"
2"Rory leaned against the bar,"
3"She had come straight from"
4"The door swung open, letting"
5"Rory didn’t look up—until she"
6"The nickname hit her like"
7"She turned slowly, her bright"
8"He was taller than she"
9"His auburn hair was streaked"
10"Her stomach twisted."
11"She hadn’t seen him in"
12"she said, and her voice"
13"He stepped closer, his boots"
14"he repeated, as if testing"
15"His eyes flicked over her—her"
16"She arched a brow."
17"He laughed, but it was"
18"Rory didn’t answer."
19"She turned back to her"
ratio0.927
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she said, and her voice was steadier than she felt"
1"he repeated, as if testing the sound of it"
2"He flagged down, neat"
3"He rubbed, his signet ring glinting in the dim light"
66.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he repeated (repeat)"
1"He flagged down (flag dow)"
2"she lied (lie)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.167
72.7333%