Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7GX9AAGNY5FX8132A4C09

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Duration:
14.1s
Cost:
$0.000507
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The neon green sign of *The Raven’s Nest* flickered like a dying ember as Rory Carter pushed through the heavy door, the scent of aged whiskey and something faintly metallic—polished brass, perhaps—hitting her like a memory. The bar was half-full, the hum of conversation low and deliberate, the kind of place where people came to talk but not to be overheard. She slid onto a stool near the back, her fingers brushing the sticky rim of the countertop, and ordered a gin and tonic without looking at the bartender. The ice clinked against the glass as he set it down, and she took a slow sip, the burn of juniper settling in her throat. She wasn’t supposed to be here tonight. Not after the shift at the Golden Empress, not after the way the rain had turned the streets into a slick, treacherous thing. But the flat above Silas’ bar had felt too small, too quiet, and the Nest had always been a place where the walls had ears but the silence was hers to command. She traced the rim of her glass with her thumb, the crescent scar on her wrist catching the dim light just enough to make it glow like a half-moon. Then she saw him. Silas Blackwood stood near the back, his broad shoulders hunched slightly as he leaned against the wall, one hand resting on the counter, the other tapping absently against his thigh. His auburn hair was streaked with silver now, thicker at the temples, and his beard—neatly trimmed, as always—had more grey than she remembered. But it was the limp that did it. A slight drag in his left leg, barely noticeable unless you were looking for it, the way she was. The way she always had been. She hadn’t seen him in years. Not since Prague. The thought hit her like a punch to the gut. She set her glass down a little harder than she meant to, the ice rattling. Silas turned, his hazel eyes sharp in the low light, and for a second, there was nothing but recognition. Then his face split into that same easy grin, the one that had always made her feel like she could trust him, even when she shouldn’t have. “Well,” he said, pushing off the wall and making his way toward her. “If it isn’t Rory Carter.” Her name on his lips was like a spark. She swallowed. “Silas.” He slid onto the stool beside her, close enough that she could smell the leather of his jacket, the faint scent of pipe tobacco clinging to his clothes. “You look like hell,” he said, and she laughed—sharp, surprised. “And you look like you’ve been running a bar for the last decade,” she shot back. He chuckled, rubbing his thumb over the silver signet ring on his right hand. “Ten years, actually. Gave up the spy game for the less glamorous life of a publican.” “Retired, huh?” She turned her glass in slow circles, the condensation beading on the outside. “Something like that.” His voice was lighter, but there was an edge to it, something unspoken. She knew that tone. It was the one he used when he didn’t want to talk about it. She did too. The silence between them wasn’t uncomfortable, exactly. It was heavier, like the air before a storm. She remembered the last time they’d been in a room together, the way the mission in Prague had gone sideways, the way she’d left without saying goodbye. The way he’d let her. “You never came back,” he said finally. She exhaled through her nose, a humorless laugh. “No.” “Thought you might.” “Did you?” She met his gaze, and for a second, she saw the ghost of the man he’d been—the one who’d recruited her, who’d trained her, who’d trusted her with secrets. The one who’d failed her. “Maybe,” he admitted. “For a while.” She looked away, her fingers tightening around her glass. “I had my reasons.” “So did I.” The words hung between them, fragile as glass. She wanted to ask. Wanted to know what had happened after she left, what had become of him. But the question died in her throat. Some things were better left unsaid. Silas took a slow sip of his drink—a whiskey, neat—and let the silence stretch. “You’re working at the Golden Empress now, isn’t that right?” She blinked. “How do you know that?” “London’s a small city when you know where to look.” He smirked, but there was no humor in it. “You always were terrible at keeping secrets.” She bristled. “I’m not a kid anymore, Silas.” “No,” he said softly. “You’re not.” The bartender appeared beside them, wiping down the counter with a rag. Silas ordered another whiskey. Rory nursed her gin, the ice long since melted. Outside, the rain had stopped, but the streets still glistened under the flickering streetlights. “You ever think about it?” she asked suddenly. “What happened?” His fingers stilled around his glass. “Every damn day.” She wanted to reach out, to touch his arm, to pull him back from whatever memory had just dragged him under. But she didn’t. Some wounds weren’t meant to be bandaged. “Evan’s dead,” she said quietly. Silas’ head snapped toward her. “What?” “Three years ago. Car accident. Or so they said.” She flexed her wrist, the scar catching the light again. “I should’ve gone back. Should’ve seen it through.” Silas studied her, his expression unreadable. “You don’t owe me an explanation.” “I know.” She took a long drink, the gin burning her throat. “But I owe *myself* one.” He was quiet for a long moment. Then, slowly, he said, “You always were the one who carried the weight.” She almost laughed. “And you were the one who taught me how.” His mouth quirked. “Guess we both learned our lessons.” The bartender brought Silas’ whiskey, and he took it without a word. Rory watched him, the way his fingers curled around the glass, the way his thumb traced the rim. She remembered the way he’d held a gun, the way he’d taught her to shoot. The way he’d looked at her like she was something precious, something breakable. “You ever think about her?” Silas asked suddenly. Rory’s breath caught. “Eva?” “No.” His voice was rough. “The girl you used to be.” She looked away, her gaze landing on the old maps pinned to the wall behind the bar. Prague. London. Places she’d been, places she’d left behind. “I don’t know if she’s still in there.” Silas was quiet for a long time. Then, softly, he said, “We all change, Rory. Doesn’t mean the old parts stop hurting.” She swallowed. “What about you? What became of *you*?” He turned to her, his hazel eyes dark in the dim light. “I became the man who runs a bar in Soho and wonders if he’ll ever see you again.” Her chest ached. “Silas—” “No.” He held up a hand. “Don’t. Not tonight.” She nodded, her throat tight. Outside, the city hummed, alive and indifferent. Inside, the weight of years pressed down on them, the unspoken words between them heavier than any secret. Silas finished his whiskey in one long swallow. “I should let you get back to your life.” She almost told him to stay. Almost reached for him. But the words died on her lips. Instead, she said, “Goodbye, Silas.” He didn’t look back as he walked away. The door swung shut behind him, and for a long moment, she just sat there, her fingers still curled around the empty glass. Then she stood, her legs unsteady, and walked out into the night.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
36.73% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
1"he said softly [softly]"
2"she asked suddenly [suddenly]"
3"Silas asked suddenly [suddenly]"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.367
leniency0.735
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.163
76.64% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1284
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count2
2
adverb"suddenly"
count2
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"suddenly"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.27% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1284
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"treacherous"
count1
2
word"silence"
count3
3
word"traced"
count2
4
word"unspoken"
count2
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"carried the weight"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"treacherous"
2"silence"
3"traced"
4"unspoken"
5"unreadable"
6"carried the weight"
7"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences97
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences127
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords5
totalWords1274
ratio0.004
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"myself"
2"you"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount985
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.81
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Rory4
Carter1
Golden1
Empress1
Blackwood1
Prague3
Silas8
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"Carter"
3"Blackwood"
4"Silas"
places
0"Golden"
1"Prague"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"appeared beside them, wiping down the counter with a rag"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1274
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences127
matches
0"knew that tone"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean22.35
std22.95
cv1.027
sampleLengths
0114
191
24
386
46
53
671
718
812
938
1016
1130
1215
1334
143
1548
167
179
183
1936
206
2113
223
2339
2424
257
2626
278
286
2939
3010
319
3231
335
346
3527
3612
3717
3820
3912
409
4158
428
434
4411
4534
4622
479
4830
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences97
matches
0"was streaked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs182
matches
0"were looking"
30.37% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences127
ratio0.039
matches
0"The neon green sign of *The Raven’s Nest* flickered like a dying ember as Rory Carter pushed through the heavy door, the scent of aged whiskey and something faintly metallic—polished brass, perhaps—hitting her like a memory."
1"His auburn hair was streaked with silver now, thicker at the temples, and his beard—neatly trimmed, as always—had more grey than she remembered."
2"“You look like hell,” he said, and she laughed—sharp, surprised."
3"“Did you?” She met his gaze, and for a second, she saw the ghost of the man he’d been—the one who’d recruited her, who’d trained her, who’d trusted her with secrets."
4"Silas took a slow sip of his drink—a whiskey, neat—and let the silence stretch."
95.48% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount310
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.04516129032258064
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0064516129032258064
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences127
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences127
mean10.03
std7.93
cv0.79
sampleLengths
036
125
228
325
47
523
632
729
84
930
1023
118
1219
136
146
153
1610
1715
1819
1927
2013
215
229
232
241
2528
2610
2716
2814
2916
3015
3116
324
3314
343
357
369
3727
385
397
408
411
423
4331
445
453
463
479
484
493
55.64% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.33858267716535434
totalSentences127
uniqueOpeners43
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount7
totalSentences90
matches
0"Then she saw him."
1"Then his face split into"
2"Then, slowly, he said,"
3"Then, softly, he said,"
4"Almost reached for him."
5"Instead, she said,"
6"Then she stood, her legs"
ratio0.078
24.44% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences90
matches
0"She slid onto a stool"
1"She wasn’t supposed to be"
2"She traced the rim of"
3"His auburn hair was streaked"
4"She hadn’t seen him in"
5"She set her glass down"
6"he said, pushing off the"
7"Her name on his lips"
8"He slid onto the stool"
9"he said, and she laughed—sharp,"
10"she shot back"
11"He chuckled, rubbing his thumb"
12"She turned her glass in"
13"His voice was lighter, but"
14"She knew that tone."
15"It was the one he"
16"She did too."
17"It was heavier, like the"
18"She remembered the last time"
19"he said finally"
ratio0.489
60.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences90
matches
0"The neon green sign of"
1"The bar was half-full, the"
2"She slid onto a stool"
3"The ice clinked against the"
4"She wasn’t supposed to be"
5"She traced the rim of"
6"Silas Blackwood stood near the"
7"His auburn hair was streaked"
8"A slight drag in his"
9"The way she always had"
10"She hadn’t seen him in"
11"The thought hit her like"
12"She set her glass down"
13"Silas turned, his hazel eyes"
14"he said, pushing off the"
15"Her name on his lips"
16"He slid onto the stool"
17"he said, and she laughed—sharp,"
18"she shot back"
19"He chuckled, rubbing his thumb"
ratio0.8
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She slid onto a stool near the back, her fingers brushing the sticky rim of the countertop, and ordered a gin and tonic without looking at the bartender."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"She turned, the condensation beading on the outside"
1"She flexed, the scar catching the light again"
2"She took, the gin burning her throat"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.204
leniency0.408
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.041
82.4750%