| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 77.42% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1107 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "really" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "deliberately" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1107 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "sense of" | | 3 | "navigated" | | 4 | "chaotic" | | 5 | "fractured" | | 6 | "loomed" | | 7 | "stark" | | 8 | "gloom" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "scanned" | | 12 | "amiss" | | 13 | "oppressive" | | 14 | "rhythmic" | | 15 | "pulse" | | 16 | "tracing" | | 17 | "whisper" | | 18 | "echoed" | | 19 | "intensity" | | 20 | "warmth" | | 21 | "could feel" | | 22 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 64.94% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "started to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 110 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 7 | | totalWords | 1105 | | ratio | 0.006 | | matches | | 0 | "something" | | 1 | "within" | | 2 | "was" | | 3 | "at" | | 4 | "through" | | 5 | "flowed" | | 6 | "collect" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 1086 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.92 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 10 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 1 | | Eva | 7 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | April | 1 | | Hel | 2 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "Fae" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "April" | | 4 | "Hel" | | 5 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 47.26% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "quite recall beyond the impression of intense, dark eyes and a voice like wind chimes" | | 1 | "whisper that seemed to resonate in her bones" | | 2 | "silhouette that seemed to ripple and warp the air around it" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 6 | | per1kWords | 5.43 | | wordCount | 1105 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the peaceful quiet of the park, but a suffocating absence of sound" | | 1 | "Not a large animal, but something quick, slender, disappearing behind the bushes bef" | | 2 | "Not a noticeable surge, but a subtle pulse of heat against her skin" | | 3 | "not in any language she recognized, but the intent was clear" | | 4 | "Not fully formed, but a distortion in the shadows, a shifting silhouette" | | 5 | "not as a physical being, but as a weight, a pressure, a growing certainty" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 34.53 | | std | 22.91 | | cv | 0.663 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 109 | | 1 | 88 | | 2 | 60 | | 3 | 42 | | 4 | 60 | | 5 | 41 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 48 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 53 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 47 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 45 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 58 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 31 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 35 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 34 |
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| 98.88% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "being hunted" | | 1 | "being pulled" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 171 | | matches | | 0 | "was opening" | | 1 | "was* happening" | | 2 | "weren’t looking" | | 3 | "were looking" | | 4 | "was solidifying" | | 5 | "wasn't trying" | | 6 | "was trying" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 110 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn’t the lack of service that bothered her; it was the speed with which it had vanished." |
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| 86.28% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1088 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, legal-sized notepad" | | 1 | "faint, sickly-sweet odor" |
| | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.03768382352941176 | | lyAdverbCount | 24 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.022058823529411766 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 110 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 110 | | mean | 10.05 | | std | 6.96 | | cv | 0.693 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 24 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 48.48% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.34545454545454546 | | totalSentences | 110 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Probably a deer." | | 1 | "Hardly a weapon, but better" | | 2 | "Only the persistent, unsettling dragging" | | 3 | "Then, a voice." |
| | ratio | 0.042 | |
| 85.26% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "She tugged the silver chain" | | 1 | "It hadn’t pulsed all day," | | 2 | "She’d navigated the park’s winding" | | 3 | "They weren’t marked on any" | | 4 | "She stepped between the largest" | | 5 | "She shoved it back in" | | 6 | "It wasn’t the lack of" | | 7 | "She’d had three bars just" | | 8 | "She took a tentative step" | | 9 | "She froze, heart hammering against" | | 10 | "It wasn’t nearby, but far" | | 11 | "She continued, forcing herself to" | | 12 | "she called out, her voice" | | 13 | "She started to circle the" | | 14 | "she muttered, trying to reassure" | | 15 | "It seemed to be coming" | | 16 | "She stopped, breathing shallowly." | | 17 | "It wasn’t a strong reaction" | | 18 | "It wasn’t a human voice." | | 19 | "It wasn't a voice at" |
| | ratio | 0.337 | |
| 65.26% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "The damp chill seeped through" | | 1 | "Richmond Park felt different at" | | 2 | "She tugged the silver chain" | | 3 | "It hadn’t pulsed all day," | | 4 | "She’d navigated the park’s winding" | | 5 | "Eva, with her chaotic energy" | | 6 | "Something about a growing disturbance," | | 7 | "Rory had dismissed it as" | | 8 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 9 | "They weren’t marked on any" | | 10 | "This had to be the" | | 11 | "The Fae Grove, Eva had" | | 12 | "She stepped between the largest" | | 13 | "Wildflowers shouldn’t be blooming in" | | 14 | "Every conceivable color spilled across" | | 15 | "Rory pulled out her phone," | | 16 | "She shoved it back in" | | 17 | "It wasn’t the lack of" | | 18 | "She’d had three bars just" | | 19 | "The silence was enormous." |
| | ratio | 0.789 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, they practically pulsed with" | | 1 | "If a portal was opening," |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 84.55% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "And a vague sense of obligation to the woman who had pressed it into her hand last month, a woman she couldn’t quite recall beyond the impression of intense, da…" | | 1 | "Every conceivable color spilled across the clearing, a riot of blossoms that seemed almost…too bright." | | 2 | "Still, she scanned the perimeter, her eyes straining to penetrate the shadows that clung to the edges of the clearing." | | 3 | "Didn’t dare acknowledge the cold dread that was solidifying in her chest." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she called out, her voice sounding unnaturally loud in the oppressive silence" | | 1 | "she muttered, trying to reassure herself" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she called out (call out)" | | 1 | "she muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |