Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7GX9GCDSD902GVBGH3T4R

Run Details

Duration:
30.5s
Cost:
$0.000532
Provider:
Nebius

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The damp chill seeped through Rory’s jacket, despite the late hour of the spring evening. Richmond Park felt different at night. Not just quieter, though the usual dog walkers and families were long gone. It felt…watched. She tugged the silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant beneath her collar, the smooth, cool gemstone a small comfort against her skin. It hadn’t pulsed all day, not even faintly. Still, she wore it. Habit, mostly. And a vague sense of obligation to the woman who had pressed it into her hand last month, a woman she couldn’t quite recall beyond the impression of intense, dark eyes and a voice like wind chimes. She’d navigated the park’s winding paths for twenty minutes, following the increasingly vague directions Eva had given her. “Past the Isabella Plantation, towards the old oaks. You’ll know it when you feel it.” Helpful. Eva, with her chaotic energy and infuriatingly accurate intuitions, had insisted Rory come here. Something about a growing disturbance, a thinning of the veil. Rory had dismissed it as Eva being Eva, chasing shadows and whispers. Until the dreams started. Fractured images, cold stone, a suffocating darkness, and always, the feeling of being hunted. The standing stones loomed ahead, ancient oaks gnarled with age, their branches clawing at the inky sky. They weren’t marked on any map, and Rory had cycled past this part of the park dozens of times without noticing them. Now, they practically pulsed with an unseen energy. This had to be the place. The Fae Grove, Eva had called it. She stepped between the largest stones, the air immediately growing heavy, thick with the scent of wildflowers. Wildflowers shouldn’t be blooming in April, not like this. Every conceivable color spilled across the clearing, a riot of blossoms that seemed almost…too bright. Unnatural. Rory pulled out her phone, the screen a stark rectangle of light in the gloom. No signal. Of course. She shoved it back in her pocket, a knot forming in her stomach. It wasn’t the lack of service that bothered her; it was the speed with which it had vanished. She’d had three bars just moments before crossing the threshold. The silence was enormous. Not the peaceful quiet of the park, but a suffocating absence of sound. No birds, no rustling leaves, no distant traffic. Just…nothing. She took a tentative step forward, her boots sinking slightly into the soft, mossy ground. A twig snapped. She froze, heart hammering against her ribs. It wasn’t nearby, but far enough that she couldn’t pinpoint the direction. Probably a deer. Richmond Park was full of them. Still, she scanned the perimeter, her eyes straining to penetrate the shadows that clung to the edges of the clearing. Nothing. She continued, forcing herself to walk at a normal pace, trying to appear confident even though every instinct screamed at her to turn back. The Heartstone remained stubbornly cold, offering no indication of anything amiss. Eva had said the pendant reacted to Hel portals. If a portal was opening, Rory should feel *something*. Another sound. A soft, dragging noise, like something heavy being pulled across the ground. This one was closer, coming from beyond a thicket of hawthorn bushes. Rory stopped again, her hand instinctively reaching for the small, legal-sized notepad she carried for deliveries. Hardly a weapon, but better than nothing. “Hello?” she called out, her voice sounding unnaturally loud in the oppressive silence. No response. Only the persistent, unsettling dragging sound. She started to circle the thicket, keeping her back to the clearing, her eyes fixed on the dark tangle of branches and thorns. The air grew colder, raising goosebumps on her arms. A faint, sickly-sweet odor wafted on the breeze, like overripe fruit and something else…something metallic. A flash of movement. Not a large animal, but something quick, slender, disappearing behind the bushes before she could get a clear look. “Just a fox,” she muttered, trying to reassure herself. London foxes were practically the size of small dogs. But the dragging sound had stopped. And now, there was something else. A faint, rhythmic clicking, like fingernails tapping against stone. It seemed to be coming from *within* the hawthorn thicket. She stopped, breathing shallowly. This wasn’t right. This wasn’t a fox. This wasn’t any animal she’d ever heard. The Heartstone suddenly warmed. Not a noticeable surge, but a subtle pulse of heat against her skin. It wasn’t a strong reaction but it hadn’t reacted at all since she’d arrived. Rory’s gaze dropped to the pendant, tracing the crimson glow of the gemstone with her fingertip. A Hel portal. Eva had been right. Something *was* happening here. The clicking stopped. Then, a voice. It wasn’t a human voice. It wasn't a voice at all really, more like a scraping, a rasping whisper that seemed to resonate in her bones. It didn’t register as words, not in any language she recognized, but the intent was clear. It was…inviting. Luring. Rory took a step back, her heel crunching on a fallen branch. The sound echoed in the silence, and the whispering stopped. She risked another glance at the hawthorn thicket. This time, she saw it. A shape. Not fully formed, but a distortion in the shadows, a shifting silhouette that seemed to ripple and warp the air around it. It was tall, impossibly thin, and from its vaguely humanoid form, two points of light burned with a cold, blue intensity. Her breath hitched in her throat. Those eyes. They weren’t looking *at* her. They were looking *through* her. The Heartstone pulsed again, faster this time, its warmth spreading across her chest. She could feel a prickling sensation on the back of her neck, the feeling of being observed, scrutinized. A single wildflower, a vibrant crimson poppy, detached itself from its stem and drifted towards her, impossibly slow, suspended in the air like a morbid offering. The shape within the thicket began to move, slowly, deliberately. It didn't walk. It *flowed*. The branches of the hawthorn bushes seemed to bend inwards, as if to accommodate its passage, to welcome it. Rory didn’t think. She turned and ran, stumbling over uneven ground, forcing her legs to move faster, faster. She didn't dare look back. Didn’t dare acknowledge the cold dread that was solidifying in her chest. The scent of overripe fruit and metal grew stronger, filling her nostrils, suffocating her. The clicking started again, closer now, keeping pace with her frantic flight. She could feel its presence behind her, not as a physical being, but as a weight, a pressure, a growing certainty that it wasn't trying to catch her. It was trying to *collect* her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1107
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
2"really"
3"slowly"
4"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1107
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count3
2
word"sense of"
count1
3
word"navigated"
count1
4
word"chaotic"
count1
5
word"fractured"
count1
6
word"loomed"
count1
7
word"stark"
count1
8
word"gloom"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"silence"
count3
11
word"scanned"
count1
12
word"amiss"
count1
13
word"oppressive"
count1
14
word"rhythmic"
count1
15
word"pulse"
count1
16
word"tracing"
count1
17
word"whisper"
count1
18
word"echoed"
count1
19
word"intensity"
count1
20
word"warmth"
count1
21
word"could feel"
count2
22
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"pulsed"
2"sense of"
3"navigated"
4"chaotic"
5"fractured"
6"loomed"
7"stark"
8"gloom"
9"stomach"
10"silence"
11"scanned"
12"amiss"
13"oppressive"
14"rhythmic"
15"pulse"
16"tracing"
17"whisper"
18"echoed"
19"intensity"
20"warmth"
21"could feel"
22"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences110
matches(empty)
64.94% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences110
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
1"seemed to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans7
markdownWords7
totalWords1105
ratio0.006
matches
0"something"
1"within"
2"was"
3"at"
4"through"
5"flowed"
6"collect"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount1086
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.92
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Rory10
Park2
Heartstone4
Pendant1
Eva7
Fae1
Grove1
April1
Hel2
London1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
2"Pendant"
3"Eva"
places
0"Park"
1"Fae"
2"Grove"
3"April"
4"Hel"
5"London"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
47.26% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"quite recall beyond the impression of intense, dark eyes and a voice like wind chimes"
1"whisper that seemed to resonate in her bones"
2"silhouette that seemed to ripple and warp the air around it"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches6
per1kWords5.43
wordCount1105
matches
0"Not the peaceful quiet of the park, but a suffocating absence of sound"
1"Not a large animal, but something quick, slender, disappearing behind the bushes bef"
2"Not a noticeable surge, but a subtle pulse of heat against her skin"
3"not in any language she recognized, but the intent was clear"
4"Not fully formed, but a distortion in the shadows, a shifting silhouette"
5"not as a physical being, but as a weight, a pressure, a growing certainty"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean34.53
std22.91
cv0.663
sampleLengths
0109
188
260
342
460
541
63
748
81
953
1026
1123
1213
138
1447
1523
1618
1731
1818
1931
2027
216
2245
2322
2458
2518
2631
2726
2834
2935
3026
3134
98.88% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences110
matches
0"being hunted"
1"being pulled"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs171
matches
0"was opening"
1"was* happening"
2"weren’t looking"
3"were looking"
4"was solidifying"
5"wasn't trying"
6"was trying"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences110
ratio0.009
matches
0"It wasn’t the lack of service that bothered her; it was the speed with which it had vanished."
86.28% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1088
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small, legal-sized notepad"
1"faint, sickly-sweet odor"
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.03768382352941176
lyAdverbCount24
lyAdverbRatio0.022058823529411766
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean10.05
std6.96
cv0.693
sampleLengths
015
16
213
32
422
58
64
72
837
918
1016
1114
1210
1312
144
1514
1617
1722
188
196
207
2117
229
2315
241
2515
262
272
2813
2918
3010
314
3213
338
341
3515
363
377
3812
393
406
4120
421
4324
4411
459
469
472
4812
4912
48.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.34545454545454546
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners38
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences95
matches
0"Probably a deer."
1"Hardly a weapon, but better"
2"Only the persistent, unsettling dragging"
3"Then, a voice."
ratio0.042
85.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences95
matches
0"She tugged the silver chain"
1"It hadn’t pulsed all day,"
2"She’d navigated the park’s winding"
3"They weren’t marked on any"
4"She stepped between the largest"
5"She shoved it back in"
6"It wasn’t the lack of"
7"She’d had three bars just"
8"She took a tentative step"
9"She froze, heart hammering against"
10"It wasn’t nearby, but far"
11"She continued, forcing herself to"
12"she called out, her voice"
13"She started to circle the"
14"she muttered, trying to reassure"
15"It seemed to be coming"
16"She stopped, breathing shallowly."
17"It wasn’t a strong reaction"
18"It wasn’t a human voice."
19"It wasn't a voice at"
ratio0.337
65.26% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences95
matches
0"The damp chill seeped through"
1"Richmond Park felt different at"
2"She tugged the silver chain"
3"It hadn’t pulsed all day,"
4"She’d navigated the park’s winding"
5"Eva, with her chaotic energy"
6"Something about a growing disturbance,"
7"Rory had dismissed it as"
8"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
9"They weren’t marked on any"
10"This had to be the"
11"The Fae Grove, Eva had"
12"She stepped between the largest"
13"Wildflowers shouldn’t be blooming in"
14"Every conceivable color spilled across"
15"Rory pulled out her phone,"
16"She shoved it back in"
17"It wasn’t the lack of"
18"She’d had three bars just"
19"The silence was enormous."
ratio0.789
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences95
matches
0"Now, they practically pulsed with"
1"If a portal was opening,"
ratio0.021
84.55% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"And a vague sense of obligation to the woman who had pressed it into her hand last month, a woman she couldn’t quite recall beyond the impression of intense, da…"
1"Every conceivable color spilled across the clearing, a riot of blossoms that seemed almost…too bright."
2"Still, she scanned the perimeter, her eyes straining to penetrate the shadows that clung to the edges of the clearing."
3"Didn’t dare acknowledge the cold dread that was solidifying in her chest."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she called out, her voice sounding unnaturally loud in the oppressive silence"
1"she muttered, trying to reassure herself"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she called out (call out)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
74.7224%