"She shouldn't be out here—not after a twelve-hour shift dodging traffic and cranky customers for Yu-Fei at the Golden Empress—but the pendant had demanded it."
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"But the pendant—given to her by that shadowy figure in the alley behind Silas' bar months ago, no name, no explanation—had a way of upending her certainties."
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"She locked the car, the beep echoing too loudly, and slung her backpack over one shoulder—torch, water bottle, a pocket knife from her delivery runs."
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"The air grew thicker the deeper she went, laced with an unfamiliar sweetness—like wildflowers in bloom, which was impossible this time of year."
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"No, not oaks—standing stones, she realized, their bark etched with runes that gleamed faintly under the moon."
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"The distant hum of London traffic, the rustle of leaves—gone."
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"The anonymous note had hinted at answers—about the pendant's origin, Dymas, whatever that meant—but now, alone in this pocket of unreality, doubt crept in."
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"Evan had friends in low places; maybe this was his idea of revenge, luring her out to—"
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"It came again, from the oaks—soft, sibilant, like voices murmuring in a language half-remembered from her mother's lullabies."
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"She touched the gem; it burned her fingertips, not painfully, but insistently, like a warning."
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"The pendant had brought her here for a reason—perhaps to find a Hel portal, whatever that was."
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"She edged toward the altar, gravel—no, it was grass now, soft as carpet—cushioning her steps."
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"Laila—no, that was an alias she'd used once, fleeing Evan."
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"Time—her watch read 12:49."
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"Not whispers now, but rustles—dry, like paper scraping stone."
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"But the rustles multiplied, circling her, from behind, to the left, right—always just beyond sight."
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"A shape—humanoid, perhaps—flitted at the beam's edge, gone when she focused."
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"Gravel—no, the ground was stone now, unyielding—crunched softly to her left."
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"She ran then—not blindly, but toward the boundary, logic screaming escape."
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"The pendant swung wildly, its glow illuminating faces in the mist—pale, eyeless, mouthing her aliases: Laila, Malphora."
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"The whispers drowned her thoughts, the shadows closing in—no longer at the edges, but encircling, forms solidifying into silhouettes that mirrored her stance, her scar, her fear."
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"They were here, born of the grove's fold between worlds, hungry for the warmth she carried—the pendant's fire, her fleeting mortality."
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"Rory clutched the gem, its heat her anchor, and whispered back, voice steady despite the terror: \"Show yourselves.\" The mist surged, and the faces turned fully toward her, eyes blooming like the impossible flowers—watching, waiting, eternal."
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"Born and raised in the orderly chaos of Cardiff, with a barrister father who dissected fairy tales like legal precedents and a mother who recited Welsh poetry o…"
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"Rory slipped the pendant's silver chain over her head, letting it dangle openly now, its thumbnail-sized gem catching the moonlight in a way that made her squin…"
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"The path into the park was a gravel vein snaking between skeletal oaks, their branches clawing at the starless sky."
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"Rory's trainers crunched softly, but the sound seemed muffled, as if the ground swallowed it whole."
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"The air grew thicker the deeper she went, laced with an unfamiliar sweetness—like wildflowers in bloom, which was impossible this time of year."
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"Wildflowers carpeted the ground, petals unfurling in shades of violet and crimson, nodding as if in a breeze she couldn't feel."
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"The flowers brushed her jeans, their petals cool and silken, releasing a pollen that dusted her hands like fine ash."
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"Deeper into the grove she went, the standing stones looming taller, their branches interlacing overhead to form a canopy that blotted the moon."
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"She whirled, torch illuminating only empty space, but the mist swirled in her wake, as if displaced by a body."
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"The rustles flanked her, shadows multiplying, brushing her arms with feather-light touches that raised gooseflesh."
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"The whispers drowned her thoughts, the shadows closing in—no longer at the edges, but encircling, forms solidifying into silhouettes that mirrored her stance, h…"