"Her boots squelch against the worn wooden floor—she’d cycled through a sudden downpour on her last run to a Camden flat, the dumpling container slipping in her bag twice before she’d fished it out, soy sauce oozing through the paper."
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"She rubs the crescent scar on her left wrist, a habit she’s never shaken—a souvenir from the childhood accident where she’d fallen off her dad’s Irish cottage fence."
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"The silver signet ring on his right hand catches the light when he wipes a smudge from the bar top—she’s never asked what’s engraved on it, though she suspects it ties to his MI6 days, a symbol of the network he still runs out of the bar’s secret back room (accessible through a bookshelf of leather-bound spy novels)."
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"Silas snorts, reaching under the bar for a bottle of ginger beer—her usual, no questions asked, even on the nights she stumbles in at two a.m."
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"Rain drips from her robe’s hem onto the floor, and she scans the bar, her eyes locking on Rory’s straight black shoulder-length hair—she’d know that hair anywhere, the way it falls just past her shoulders, the faint split end at the left temple from the time they’d cut each other’s hair with kitchen scissors during a pre-law study bender."
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"Rory’s bright blue eyes widen—she’d know that jawline anywhere, the faint scar above Clara Hale’s left eyebrow from the time they’d stumbled off a Cardiff pub’s fire escape while chasing a stray cat that had stolen their contract law notes."
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"Rory takes a sip, the fizz burning her throat, and glances at the bookshelf of spy novels in the corner—she knows the secret room is behind it, that Silas keeps a first-aid kit and a phone with untraceable lines back there, in case Evan ever finds her."
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"She can’t tell her—the nights Evan had grabbed her wrist so hard the scar had split open again, the way she’d hidden in her mom’s Welsh teacher’s closet for hours, the frantic call from Eva that had gotten her on a train to London with nothing but a backpack and her dad’s old law notebook."
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"She’d cut all ties, changed her number, left no note for anyone in Cardiff—including Clara."
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"“I dropped out,” Rory says, her voice flat, her eyes darting to the Prague map on the wall—Silas’s old injury a reminder that sometimes you have to run from things, even if it means leaving everything behind."
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"She thinks of the night she’d packed her bag, leaving her pre-law textbooks on her bed, and wonders what would have happened if Evan hadn’t been there—if she’d finished her degree, if she’d joined her dad’s chambers, if she’d be sitting across from Clara in a barrister’s robe instead of a delivery uniform."
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"Clara looks at Silas, then back at Rory, and realization dawns—she’d missed something."
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"She takes another sip of ginger beer, her eyes darting to the bookshelf of spy novels—she can see the faint crack between the books, the hint of the hidden room behind it, the faint glow of a lamp from inside."
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"The late train to Cardiff leaves in twenty minutes, and she can’t miss it—her client is counting on her."
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"She’d never thought of telling her dad—she’d thought he’d be angry, that he’d think she was weak for leaving."
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"She picks up the copy of her dad’s article, opens it, and sees his handwriting in the margins—notes about domestic violence cases, about the need to protect victims."
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"Rory’s bright blue eyes widen—she’d know that jawline anywhere, the faint scar above Clara Hale’s left eyebrow from the time they’d stumbled off a Cardiff pub’s…"
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"Clara hesitates, then walks over, her heels clicking against the worn wooden floor loud enough to cut through the faint jazz playing on the bar’s old record pla…"
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"Rory’s hand flies to her wrist scar, the garlic scent in her bag suddenly cloying, the dampness of her boots seeping through her socks."
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"Clara blinks, her polished facade cracking for a second, her bun slipping a little as she reaches up to adjust it."
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"She can’t tell her—the nights Evan had grabbed her wrist so hard the scar had split open again, the way she’d hidden in her mom’s Welsh teacher’s closet for hou…"
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"She thinks of the night she’d packed her bag, leaving her pre-law textbooks on her bed, and wonders what would have happened if Evan hadn’t been there—if she’d …"
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"She turns and walks out, her heels clicking against the floor, the door creaking shut behind her."