Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7MW85GBG5Z0G71TZDM13J

Run Details

Duration:
43.7s
Cost:
$0.000234
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The ancient oaks loomed, their branches skeletal against the fading twilight. Rory pulled her jacket tighter, the chill deeper than the October air should account for. Richmond Park at night wasn't particularly unsettling—just the usual rustle of leaves, the distant hum of the city, the occasional startled deer. This wasn’t Richmond Park, though. Not entirely. She’d followed the instructions precisely. Three paces west of the Isabella Plantation entrance, then due north until she felt the shift. The shift was subtle, a pressure behind her eyes, a prickling on her skin. Then, the scent—wildflowers, yes, but layered with something else. Something almost cloying, like overripe fruit and damp earth. The Fae Grove. The stones were there, just as the old maps had described. Six standing stones, each a gnarled oak, older than London itself. They formed a crude circle, and within it, the clearing pulsed with an unnatural bloom. Wildflowers in impossible colors—violet so deep it bordered on black, orange that shimmered like trapped fire—carpeted the ground. The air vibrated with a silent hum. Rory checked her wrist, the crescent-shaped scar a pale line against her dark skin. Time. It felt…normal. An hour, maybe. Enough time to find what she was looking for, to be in and out before anyone noticed. She clutched the Heartstone Pendant beneath her jacket. The silver chain was cold against her skin, but the stone itself pulsed with a faint, insistent warmth. It always did in places like this, places near the Veil. She'd received it anonymously, slipped into her bag during a delivery run to a peculiar antique shop in Shoreditch. No note, no explanation. Just the pendant, heavy and strangely compelling. It had pointed her here, drawn her into this twilight space. The silence was the first thing that felt wrong. Not a lack of sound, exactly, but a stillness that swallowed everything. No rustling leaves. No chirping insects. Not even the distant city hum. It was as if the world held its breath. She took a tentative step into the clearing. The wildflowers felt strangely soft beneath her boots, almost…yielding. A flash of movement at the edge of her vision. Squirrel? A deer? She turned, but there was nothing there. Just the oppressive stillness and the watchful gaze of the ancient oaks. “Hello?” she called out, her voice sounding too loud, too brittle in the unnatural quiet. The word seemed to hang in the air, then dissipate without an echo. She told herself it was nerves. She was used to unusual requests, unusual deliveries. A late-night order of Peking duck to a man with a taxidermy collection? That was weirder than this, probably. But this…this felt different. This felt like something more than just strange. The Heartstone pulsed faster, the warmth radiating through her jacket. She focused on it, using it as an anchor. The instructions she’d found—obscure references in a forgotten grimoire, translated from a dead language—mentioned a convergence point, a nexus of energy near the central stone. That’s where she needed to be. Moving deeper into the clearing, she noticed the details she hadn't seen before. The wildflowers were arranged in patterns. Not random splashes of color, but deliberate configurations. Spirals. Triangles. Symbols she didn't recognize, but that felt…intentional. A twig snapped. Rory froze. Her breath caught in her throat. It hadn't been her. She was sure of it. The sound was too sharp, too deliberate. She scanned the perimeter of the clearing, her eyes straining against the dim light. Nothing. Just shadows lengthening from the ancient oaks. She told herself it was an animal. A fox, maybe. They were in Richmond Park, after all. But foxes didn’t snap twigs with such precision. Another twig snapped, closer this time. Behind her. She didn’t turn. She wouldn’t. Whatever was out there, she didn't want to see it. She focused on the central stone, the largest of the six, its bark twisted into grotesque faces. The vibration in the air intensified, coalescing into a low thrum that resonated in her bones. The Heartstone practically burned against her skin. A scent, stronger now. The overripe fruit, the damp earth…and something else. Something metallic, like old blood. She could feel it now, a presence. Not something she could see, but a weight in the air, a pressure on her mind. It was watching her. Studying her. Waiting. A sound. Faint, almost imperceptible. Like a child’s humming. It wasn’t a pleasant melody. It was discordant, off-key, and laced with an undertone of…grief. A profound, aching sorrow that seeped into her mind and chilled her to the core. She forced herself to move, to walk towards the central stone. Each step felt heavier than the last. The humming grew louder, closer. She could almost feel the breath on her neck. Something shifted in the shadows. A flicker of movement, too fast to register. A glimpse of…something. Tall. Slender. Humanoid, but wrong. The proportions were off. The limbs too long, the movements too fluid. She squeezed her eyes shut for a moment, willing it away. It was a trick of the light. A shadow playing games. She opened her eyes, and it was still there. Or rather, it was *everywhere*. Not a distinct form, but a distortion in the air, a ripple in the fabric of reality. The Heartstone pulsed violently, the warmth radiating outwards in waves. Rory gasped, clutching it tighter. The humming stopped. A new sound replaced it. A scraping. Like nails dragging across stone. It was coming from the central stone. She looked up, her eyes drawn to the grotesque faces carved into the bark. They seemed to shift, to contort, to become…more alive. A single, crimson eye opened in the center of one of the faces. It stared directly at her. The scraping sound intensified, climbing in pitch until it grated on her teeth. A fissure appeared in the bark of the central stone, widening slowly. From the fissure, something began to emerge. Not a creature. Not a monster. But something…less. A void. A blackness that seemed to absorb all light and sound. It spread outwards, engulfing the base of the stone, then creeping up the trunk like a stain. Rory stumbled backward, her heart hammering against her ribs. She had to get out. Now. But she was frozen. Paralyzed by a fear so profound it stole her breath. The void widened, revealing a glimpse of…something else. A landscape of twisted trees and broken towers. A sky filled with swirling, violet clouds. A place that felt ancient and utterly alien. The Heartstone pulsed one last time, a searing wave of heat that knocked her off her feet. As she fell, the void reached out, tendrils of darkness snaking across the clearing. The last thing she saw was the single, crimson eye in the stone, watching her fall. And then, nothing. Just the suffocating weight of the darkness, and the faint, lingering scent of overripe fruit and damp earth.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1163
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"slowly"
2"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1163
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count5
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"vibrated"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count3
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"oppressive"
count1
8
word"echo"
count1
9
word"scanned"
count1
10
word"resonated"
count1
11
word"could feel"
count1
12
word"weight"
count2
13
word"profound"
count2
14
word"chilled"
count1
15
word"to the core"
count1
16
word"flicker"
count1
17
word"searing"
count1
18
word"the last thing"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"chill"
2"pulsed"
3"shimmered"
4"vibrated"
5"warmth"
6"silence"
7"oppressive"
8"echo"
9"scanned"
10"resonated"
11"could feel"
12"weight"
13"profound"
14"chilled"
15"to the core"
16"flicker"
17"searing"
18"the last thing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences146
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences146
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences146
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1154
ratio0.001
matches
0"everywhere"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount1153
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.43
worstName"Heartstone"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Park"
discoveredNames
October1
Park3
Richmond3
Isabella1
Plantation1
Fae1
Grove1
London1
Heartstone5
Pendant1
Veil1
Shoreditch1
Peking1
Rory5
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Rory"
places
0"Park"
1"Richmond"
2"Isabella"
3"Plantation"
4"Fae"
5"Grove"
6"London"
7"Veil"
8"Shoreditch"
9"Peking"
globalScore1
windowScore1
66.67% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences90
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"It was as if the world held its breath"
1"felt like something more than just stra"
2"blackness that seemed to absorb all light and sound"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords3.466
wordCount1154
matches
0"Not a lack of sound, exactly, but a stillness"
1"Not random splashes of color, but deliberate configurations"
2"Not something she could see, but a weight in the air, a pressure on her mind"
3"Not a distinct form, but a distortion in the air, a ripple in the fabric of reality"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences146
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean34.97
std17.49
cv0.5
sampleLengths
055
153
23
362
437
578
642
749
828
945
1050
1136
123
1346
1425
158
1655
1717
1830
199
2030
2132
2233
2353
2430
257
2641
2732
2837
2915
3045
3131
3237
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences146
matches
0"was used"
1"were arranged"
87.64% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs178
matches
0"was looking"
1"was watching"
2"was coming"
64.58% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences146
ratio0.027
matches
0"Richmond Park at night wasn't particularly unsettling—just the usual rustle of leaves, the distant hum of the city, the occasional startled deer."
1"Then, the scent—wildflowers, yes, but layered with something else."
2"Wildflowers in impossible colors—violet so deep it bordered on black, orange that shimmered like trapped fire—carpeted the ground."
3"The instructions she’d found—obscure references in a forgotten grimoire, translated from a dead language—mentioned a convergence point, a nexus of energy near the central stone."
96.60% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1162
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount51
adverbRatio0.04388984509466437
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.011187607573149742
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences146
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences146
mean7.9
std5.04
cv0.637
sampleLengths
011
115
222
35
42
55
616
714
89
99
103
1111
1211
1315
1418
157
1614
171
182
193
2017
218
2218
2311
2419
254
267
2711
289
2912
303
313
326
339
348
359
3610
371
382
397
4012
4115
4213
436
448
4513
466
474
488
4910
43.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3150684931506849
totalSentences146
uniqueOpeners46
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences126
matches
0"Then, the scent—wildflowers, yes, but"
1"Just the pendant, heavy and"
2"Just the oppressive stillness and"
3"Just shadows lengthening from the"
4"Just the suffocating weight of"
ratio0.04
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences126
matches
0"She’d followed the instructions precisely."
1"They formed a crude circle,"
2"She clutched the Heartstone Pendant"
3"It always did in places"
4"She'd received it anonymously, slipped"
5"It had pointed her here,"
6"It was as if the"
7"She took a tentative step"
8"She turned, but there was"
9"she called out, her voice"
10"She told herself it was"
11"She was used to unusual"
12"She focused on it, using"
13"Her breath caught in her"
14"It hadn't been her."
15"She was sure of it."
16"She scanned the perimeter of"
17"She told herself it was"
18"They were in Richmond Park,"
19"She didn’t turn."
ratio0.286
79.05% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount96
totalSentences126
matches
0"The ancient oaks loomed, their"
1"Rory pulled her jacket tighter,"
2"Richmond Park at night wasn't"
3"This wasn’t Richmond Park, though."
4"She’d followed the instructions precisely."
5"The shift was subtle, a"
6"Something almost cloying, like overripe"
7"The Fae Grove."
8"The stones were there, just"
9"They formed a crude circle,"
10"Wildflowers in impossible colors—violet so"
11"The air vibrated with a"
12"Rory checked her wrist, the"
13"An hour, maybe."
14"She clutched the Heartstone Pendant"
15"The silver chain was cold"
16"It always did in places"
17"She'd received it anonymously, slipped"
18"It had pointed her here,"
19"The silence was the first"
ratio0.762
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences126
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The vibration in the air intensified, coalescing into a low thrum that resonated in her bones."
1"The Heartstone pulsed one last time, a searing wave of heat that knocked her off her feet."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she called out (call out)"
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
80.8413%