Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7RQVG2NQ4MCYQZECJ9KXM

Run Details

Duration:
1m 5s
Cost:
$0.000475
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain hammered against the green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest, smearing the light into blurry streaks on the slick Soho pavement. Rory wiped condensation from the glass, watching the city bleed past. A slow Tuesday. Yu-Fei had given her the night off, a small mercy given the weather. She’d come up for a quiet pint, maybe lose herself in the chipped Formica of the bar. The bell above the door chimed, a discordant jingle slicing through the low murmur of conversation and the jazz spilling from the speakers. She barely glanced up, automatically reaching for a coaster. “Rory?” The voice was hesitant, edged with something brittle. She turned, slowly, and her hand froze mid-air. He was…different. Daniel. It had to be. The bone structure was the same – the high cheekbones, the strong jaw – but the boy she remembered, all easy smiles and reckless energy, had been sanded down, replaced by something sharper, something guarded. His hair, once a tousled mess of brown, was cropped short, streaked with silver at the temples. He wore a dark suit that looked expensive, the kind that spoke of boardrooms and power. The easy confidence she remembered had been replaced with a careful assessment, his eyes, the same warm brown she recalled, scanning her with a practiced precision that made her skin prickle. “Dan?” she breathed, the name feeling foreign on her tongue. It had been…eight years? At least. Since the disastrous art school leaving party, since the words she hadn’t been able to say had lodged themselves in her throat like splinters. He managed a wry smile, a ghost of the one that used to crinkle the corners of his eyes. “Guilty as charged. Didn't think I'd find you…here.” He gestured around the dimly lit bar, taking in the worn maps and faded photographs that lined the walls. “It’s a good place to disappear,” she said, the words sounding more pointed than she intended. She deliberately didn’t offer a hug. Not yet. “What brings *you* to Soho?” He shrugged, pulling a stool up to the bar a couple of seats down. Silas, polishing glasses behind the counter, gave them a knowing glance but remained silent. He was always good at reading a room. “Business. A conference at a hotel nearby. Thought I’d…see what was still around.” His gaze flickered over her, taking in her worn jeans, her black t-shirt, the faint crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist she always tried to hide. He didn't comment on it, but she knew he’d seen. “Not much,” Rory said, offering a tight smile. “Unless you’re looking for overpriced cocktails and regret.” He chuckled, a short, humorless sound. “Sounds about right. You haven’t changed much.” She snorted, a genuine, unfiltered reaction. “Oh, really? Last I checked, I wasn't running some multinational corporation.” “I’m a consultant,” he corrected, his jaw tightening, “Not a CEO. And it’s not multinational. Yet.” “Right. Consultant.” She waved for Silas, ordering a Guinness. “Doing what, exactly? Polishing the image of oil companies?” A flicker of something like pain crossed his face, quickly masked. “Data analytics. Security. It’s…complicated.” “Complicated usually means ethically dubious.” “That’s a cynical view, Rory.” “Realistic.” She took a sip of her Guinness when Silas set it down, savoring the rich, dark taste. It didn't quite settle the knot in her stomach. “So, data analytics. Fancy. I’m a delivery driver.” “For Yu-Fei?” he asked, a hint of surprise in his voice. “I remember you loved her food.” “Still do. Pays the bills.” She deliberately kept her tone light, avoiding eye contact. It was easier to navigate this conversation from behind a shield of practicality. “And the flat above Silas’ bar? Still?” “Still.” A silence descended, thick and uncomfortable. The jazz seemed to amplify, each saxophone note a painful reminder of a shared past. Rory traced the damp rim of her glass, the cool condensation a welcome distraction. “I always wondered…” Daniel began, then stopped, running a hand through his already neatly-groomed hair. “What?” she prompted, her voice barely a whisper. “What happened after… everything. After art school.” He spoke carefully, as if afraid of disturbing something fragile. Rory’s grip tightened on her glass. “Life happened. I moved. Found a job. You know.” “No. I don’t know. I tried to find you. A few times.” “You could have.” The accusation slipped out before she could stop it. He flinched, his gaze dropping to his hands, which were clasped tightly in front of him. “I did. But then… things got complicated. My father… he got sick. And then after that…” He trailed off. “After that you decided to become a high-powered consultant and forget about all your starving artist friends?” she finished, the bitterness stinging. His head snapped up, his eyes flashing. “That’s not fair. You think I wanted this?” “Then what did you want, Dan? Because the Dan I knew wouldn’t have ended up… this." “I wanted to provide. I wanted stability. I wanted to take care of my mother.” He said it with a quiet desperation that chipped away at her anger. “You were always so quick to dismiss my family. Say we were…traditional, stifling.” “Because you were! You were suffocating under their expectations.” She remembered the late-night conversations, fueled by cheap wine and shared dreams of escaping their predetermined paths. “You wanted to paint, Dan. You were brilliant. And then you just…gave up.” He stared at her for a long moment, his expression unreadable. “And you? You ran. You always ran. From everything.” The words hit her like a physical blow. She forced herself to meet his gaze, refusing to look away. “I ran from an abusive relationship. I ran from a life that was falling apart. I ran for my own goddamn survival.” “Evan… I heard about that.” His voice was low, laced with regret. “I should have been there.” “You were busy building your empire.” Silas cleared his throat, a subtle attempt to diffuse the tension. He placed a small plate of peanuts between them. “Enjoy yourselves, you two. It's been a long time.” They ignored him. “I’m sorry,” Daniel said, his voice barely audible. “For everything. For not being there. For…not reaching out. For becoming someone you wouldn't recognize.” Rory looked at him, really looked at him, and saw the exhaustion in the lines around his eyes, the weight of responsibility etched on his face. She saw the ghost of the boy she once knew, buried beneath layers of ambition and regret. “We all change, Dan,” she said softly, the anger slowly draining away, replaced by a hollow ache. “Sometimes not for the better.” He nodded slowly, his gaze fixed on the swirling foam of her Guinness. “I thought…maybe we could grab coffee tomorrow? Talk properly?” Rory hesitated. The prospect of delving into the wreckage of their past was terrifying. But something in his eyes – a plea for understanding, a flicker of the old connection – made her consider it. “I work tomorrow,” she said, her voice noncommittal. “Right. Of course.” Another silence descended, less fraught this time, but no less painful. The rain continued to fall, washing away the light, mirroring the slow erosion of their shared history. Rory finished her Guinness, the taste now bitter on her tongue. Daniel reached into his pocket and pulled out a card. He slid it across the bar towards her. “My number. If you change your mind.” She didn't pick it up. She didn’t need it. She knew, with a chilling certainty, that some bridges were better left burned. She looked at him one last time, a silent goodbye passing between them. He stood, adjusted his suit jacket, and turned to leave. As he reached the door, he paused, glancing back at her with an expression she couldn't decipher. Then he was gone, swallowed by the rain and the London night. Rory finally reached for the card, her fingers brushing against the cool, smooth surface. She didn’t need to read it to know what it said. She already knew everything.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
43.14% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"He gestured around [around]"
1"Daniel began then [then]"
2"He spoke carefully [carefully]"
3"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.412
leniency0.824
rawRatio0.19
effectiveRatio0.157
58.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1338
totalAiIsmAdverbs11
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count3
1
adverb"deliberately"
count2
2
adverb"really"
count2
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
4
adverb"carefully"
count1
5
adverb"tightly"
count1
6
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"deliberately"
2"really"
3"quickly"
4"carefully"
5"tightly"
6"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1338
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"structure"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"charged"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count2
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"navigate"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"reminder"
count1
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"unreadable"
count1
12
word"tension"
count1
13
word"weight"
count1
14
word"etched"
count1
15
word"delving"
count1
16
word"chilling"
count1
highlights
0"structure"
1"scanning"
2"charged"
3"flickered"
4"flicker"
5"stomach"
6"navigate"
7"silence"
8"reminder"
9"traced"
10"whisper"
11"unreadable"
12"tension"
13"weight"
14"etched"
15"delving"
16"chilling"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences86
matches
0"d with regret"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences86
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1335
ratio0.001
matches
0"you"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount961
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.83
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Tuesday1
Formica1
Silas4
Guinness4
Rory8
London1
Daniel4
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Daniel"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
78.57% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"something like pain crossed his face, quickl"
1"quite settle the knot in her stomach"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1335
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean25.19
std19.21
cv0.763
sampleLengths
067
132
21
316
4106
540
646
729
836
949
1016
1113
1217
1316
1418
1515
165
175
1835
1917
2027
217
221
2335
2415
258
2617
2715
2812
2912
3035
3122
3215
3316
3441
3539
3620
3741
3817
396
4029
413
4223
4343
4422
4522
4635
478
483
4939
84.86% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences86
matches
0"been sanded"
1"was cropped"
2"been replaced"
3"were clasped"
4"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs177
matches(empty)
93.17% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences115
ratio0.017
matches
0"The bone structure was the same – the high cheekbones, the strong jaw – but the boy she remembered, all easy smiles and reckless energy, had been sanded down, replaced by something sharper, something guarded."
1"But something in his eyes – a plea for understanding, a flicker of the old connection – made her consider it."
92.62% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount962
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"faint crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.04158004158004158
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.017671517671517672
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean11.61
std7.14
cv0.615
sampleLengths
023
111
23
313
417
523
69
71
88
98
102
111
124
1335
1417
1516
1631
1710
184
192
2024
2119
2227
2316
246
252
265
2714
2814
298
3039
3110
328
338
346
357
366
3711
3816
399
409
4111
424
435
445
4518
469
478
4811
496
62.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners46
41.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"Then he was gone, swallowed"
ratio0.012
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences81
matches
0"She’d come up for a"
1"She barely glanced up, automatically"
2"She turned, slowly, and her"
3"It had to be."
4"His hair, once a tousled"
5"He wore a dark suit"
6"she breathed, the name feeling"
7"It had been…eight years?"
8"He managed a wry smile,"
9"He gestured around the dimly"
10"she said, the words sounding"
11"She deliberately didn’t offer a"
12"He shrugged, pulling a stool"
13"He was always good at"
14"His gaze flickered over her,"
15"He didn't comment on it,"
16"He chuckled, a short, humorless"
17"She snorted, a genuine, unfiltered"
18"he corrected, his jaw tightening"
19"She waved for Silas, ordering"
ratio0.617
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences81
matches
0"The rain hammered against the"
1"Rory wiped condensation from the"
2"A slow Tuesday."
3"Yu-Fei had given her the"
4"She’d come up for a"
5"The bell above the door"
6"She barely glanced up, automatically"
7"The voice was hesitant, edged"
8"She turned, slowly, and her"
9"It had to be."
10"The bone structure was the"
11"His hair, once a tousled"
12"He wore a dark suit"
13"The easy confidence she remembered"
14"she breathed, the name feeling"
15"It had been…eight years?"
16"He managed a wry smile,"
17"He gestured around the dimly"
18"she said, the words sounding"
19"She deliberately didn’t offer a"
ratio0.951
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He wore a dark suit that looked expensive, the kind that spoke of boardrooms and power."
1"The easy confidence she remembered had been replaced with a careful assessment, his eyes, the same warm brown she recalled, scanning her with a practiced precis…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"she breathed, the name feeling foreign on her tongue"
1"she said, the words sounding more pointed than she intended"
2"he corrected, his jaw tightening,"
3"he asked, a hint of surprise in his voice"
4"she prompted, her voice barely a whisper"
5"He spoke carefully, as if afraid of disturbing something fragile"
6"she finished, the bitterness stinging"
7"Daniel said, his voice barely audible"
8"she said softly, the anger slowly draining away, replaced by a hollow ache"
9"she said, her voice noncommittal"
91.18% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
1"he corrected (correct)"
2"He spoke carefully (speak)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.196
leniency0.392
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.118
75.8299%