Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7TV6F6PDX2PDC5HENE302

Run Details

Duration:
1m 44s
Cost:
$0.008438
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign bleeds into the Soho rain, blurring the letters into a slurred Raven’s Nest that makes Rory’s throat tight. She’s been avoiding this block for three years—avoided the creak of the flat’s fire escape, the smell of Silas’ burnt coffee drifting through her former window, the way his slight left limp would tap against the floorboards when he checked on her after Evan’s first threatening letter. Today, though, the Golden Empress’ delivery app glitched, sending her to a non-existent address two doors down, and the rain has soaked through her delivery bag’s lining, turning the kung pao chicken containers into sodden lumps. She yanks the bar’s door open, the brass handle sticking under her wet fingers, and steps into the dimness where old maps cling to the walls like faded secrets. The air reeks of bourbon and burnt cedar, and a black-and-white photo of a Prague street corner hangs above the whiskey bottles—its cobblestones cracked, a shadowed figure darting into an alley. Rory’s straight shoulder-length black hair drips onto her delivery uniform’s collar, and she rubs her left wrist without thinking, the crescent scar from her childhood bike crash throbbing like a memory. She’s halfway to the door again when a voice stops her. “Rory.” His voice is deeper than she remembers, roughened by three more years of cigarette smoke and silence. Silas is leaning against the bar’s oak counter, his grey-streaked auburn beard neatly trimmed, hazel eyes fixed on her. His right hand rests on the counter, the silver signet ring catching the flicker of a tiki torch in the corner, and when he shifts his weight, his left leg gives a barely perceptible hitch—his Prague limp, the one he never talked about but Rory researched after he’d passed out on the bar one night, muttering about a botched extraction. She freezes, bright blue eyes darting to the bookshelf in the back—the one that swings open to the secret room Silas showed her once, when she’d caught him hiding a coded letter in a copy of Ulysses. “I’m just looking for directions,” she says, her cool-headed tone thinner than she intends. “Wrong delivery address.” Silas turns then, his hazel eyes scanning her—her sodden uniform, the delivery bag slung over her shoulder, the way she’s shifted her weight to keep the door within reach. “You left without a note,” he says, and there’s no anger in it, just a quiet weight that makes Rory’s chest ache. He leans on the bar to hide his limp, his signet ring glinting as he wipes a water ring from a tumbler. Rory’s throat tightens. She’d planned to leave a note—scrawled one on a napkin, telling him she was moving to a friend’s flat in Hackney, that she couldn’t risk staying after Evan’s text about finding her in London—but she’d heard a car door slam outside her window and fled before she could tape it to his bar’s door. “I didn’t have time,” she says, lying through her teeth. Silas nods, but his fingers curl around the signet ring—a tell she’d learned when he was lying or nervous. “I found his car parked outside the flat three days before you left,” he says, his voice dropping. “Told the boys to slash his tires, but he had a backup. I tried to leave a note under your door—explained I didn’t give him anything, that I’d tracked his phone to a motel in Bethnal Green—but you were gone by dawn. Your coffee mug was still on the windowsill, half-full. Burnt, just how you liked it.” Rory’s breath catches. She’d seen the note, crumpled under her door, but she’d been so scared that Evan had found her that she’d grabbed her bag and run, not stopping to read it. She’d thought Silas had betrayed her—his spy connections making him careless, his quiet authority a mask for indifference. She’d hated him for three years, hated the way his name would make her rub her left wrist, hated that she’d lost the only person who’d ever stood up for her after her parents disowned her for leaving pre-law. “I didn’t read the note,” she admits, rubbing her wrist harder. “I thought… I thought you’d traded my location for a contact. That your network was more important than me.” Silas’ jaw tightens. He gestures to the Prague map on the wall, the one with a smudge on the Vltava River. “That’s where I messed up,” he says, pointing to the smudge. “Left a contact behind. Couldn’t run fast enough because of this leg.” He taps his left knee, his limp more obvious now that he’s not leaning on the bar. “My network’s for keeping people safe, Rory. You were the only one who ever called me Si. The only one who didn’t see the Spymaster, just the old man who burned his toast every morning.” Rory stares at the map, suddenly aware of the black-and-white photos framed above the whiskey bottles—photos of men and women in trench coats, of a woman with a scar across her cheek who Silas had once called his partner in Prague. She’d thought they were just old friends, but now she sees the code names scrawled on the back of one photo, visible through the glass. “I didn’t know,” she says, her voice softening. Silas follows her gaze. “I never told you,” he says. “Didn’t want you tangled up in my mess. You were a pre-law student running from an ex, not a spy’s protégé.” He pauses, then adds, “I taught you how to pick a lock once, remember? You’d locked yourself out of the flat, and I showed you how to use a bobby pin. You picked it in two minutes—said it was just like drafting a legal argument, finding the right loophole.” Rory smiles, a faint, tight thing. She’d used that skill last month, when she’d locked herself out of her Hackney flat. “I still have that bobby pin,” she says. “Taped to my mirror.” Silas’ lips twitch into a smile, the first she’s seen in three years. He limps to the back of the bar, pulls a napkin from a dispenser, and writes a phone number on it. “That’s my contact in the Met,” he says, sliding it across the bar. “He’s been tracking Evan’s movements. He’s in a halfway house in Kent now, but he’s still sending threats.” Rory stares at the napkin. She’d spent three years avoiding conflict, taking delivery shifts in quiet neighborhoods, but Silas’ quiet authority makes her want to fight back—makes her remember the cool-headed, quick-thinking girl she was before Evan broke her down. “Why are you helping me?” she asks. Silas leans against the bar again, his signet ring glinting. “You were the only friend I had,” he says. “I regret not being clearer. Regret not telling you about Evan sooner. Regret letting you leave without knowing I was on your side.” Rory’s eyes fill with tears, but she blinks them back—cool-headed, always cool-headed. She picks up the napkin, tucks it into her delivery bag’s dry pocket, and glances at the bookshelf in the back. “Is the secret room still there?” she asks. Silas nods. “Still have the Ulysses with the coded letter slot,” he says. “I’ve been keeping your old coffee mug there. Burnt stains and all.” The rain taps against the window, matching the rhythm of Silas’ limp as he shifts his weight. Rory looks at him—grey-streaked auburn hair and beard, hazel eyes tired but kind, signet ring catching the light—and realizes he’s older, lonelier, his network shrinking as his contacts retire or die. She’s older too—no longer a pre-law student running from her past, but a delivery person who’s learned to survive, who still carries the crescent scar on her left wrist like a reminder of all she’s lost. “I should go,” she says, grabbing her delivery bag. “The kung pao chicken’s probably cold.” Silas nods, but he says, “The flat’s still yours. If you ever need a place to stay. No questions asked.” Rory pauses at the door, the green neon sign bleeding into the rain behind her. She doesn’t answer, but she doesn’t close the door all the way—leaving a crack, a hint of hope that maybe, after three years of silence and regret, they can find their way back to the friend they once were. She rubs her left wrist, the crescent scar throbbing like a promise, and steps into the rain, the napkin with Silas’ contact number burning a hole in her pocket.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He pauses then [then]"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.786
leniency1
rawRatio0.045
effectiveRatio0.045
96.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1450
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.17% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1450
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"flicker"
count1
2
word"weight"
count4
3
word"coded"
count2
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"glinting"
count2
6
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"flicker"
2"weight"
3"coded"
4"scanning"
5"glinting"
6"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences57
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences57
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences69
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen71
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1417
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
86.51% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount945
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.27
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Rory12
Today1
Golden1
Prague4
Silas10
Ulysses1
Hackney2
Evan2
London1
Vltava1
River1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"Silas"
3"Ulysses"
4"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"Prague"
2"Hackney"
3"London"
4"Vltava"
5"River"
globalScore0.865
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1417
matches(empty)
70.05% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences69
matches
0"hated that she’d"
1"used that skill"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean61.61
std31.64
cv0.514
sampleLengths
0134
173
21
396
454
573
667
794
890
930
1096
1174
1280
1333
1465
1547
1642
1741
1825
1984
2015
2120
2283
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs182
matches
0"was moving"
1"was lying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount17
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences69
ratio0.188
matches
0"She’s been avoiding this block for three years—avoided the creak of the flat’s fire escape, the smell of Silas’ burnt coffee drifting through her former window, the way his slight left limp would tap against the floorboards when he checked on her after Evan’s first threatening letter."
1"The air reeks of bourbon and burnt cedar, and a black-and-white photo of a Prague street corner hangs above the whiskey bottles—its cobblestones cracked, a shadowed figure darting into an alley."
2"His right hand rests on the counter, the silver signet ring catching the flicker of a tiki torch in the corner, and when he shifts his weight, his left leg gives a barely perceptible hitch—his Prague limp, the one he never talked about but Rory researched after he’d passed out on the bar one night, muttering about a botched extraction."
3"She freezes, bright blue eyes darting to the bookshelf in the back—the one that swings open to the secret room Silas showed her once, when she’d caught him hiding a coded letter in a copy of Ulysses."
4"Silas turns then, his hazel eyes scanning her—her sodden uniform, the delivery bag slung over her shoulder, the way she’s shifted her weight to keep the door within reach."
5"She’d planned to leave a note—scrawled one on a napkin, telling him she was moving to a friend’s flat in Hackney, that she couldn’t risk staying after Evan’s text about finding her in London—but she’d heard a car door slam outside her window and fled before she could tape it to his bar’s door."
6"Silas nods, but his fingers curl around the signet ring—a tell she’d learned when he was lying or nervous."
7"She’d thought Silas had betrayed her—his spy connections making him careless, his quiet authority a mask for indifference."
8"Rory stares at the map, suddenly aware of the black-and-white photos framed above the whiskey bottles—photos of men and women in trench coats, of a woman with a scar across her cheek who Silas had once called his partner in Prague."
9"Rory’s eyes fill with tears, but she blinks them back—cool-headed, always cool-headed."
10"Rory looks at him—grey-streaked auburn hair and beard, hazel eyes tired but kind, signet ring catching the light—and realizes he’s older, lonelier, his network shrinking as his contacts retire or die."
11"She’s older too—no longer a pre-law student running from her past, but a delivery person who’s learned to survive, who still carries the crescent scar on her left wrist like a reminder of all she’s lost."
12"She doesn’t answer, but she doesn’t close the door all the way—leaving a crack, a hint of hope that maybe, after three years of silence and regret, they can find their way back to the friend they once were."
89.35% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount345
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.05217391304347826
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.011594202898550725
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences69
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences69
mean20.54
std14.97
cv0.729
sampleLengths
022
147
236
329
431
531
611
71
817
919
1060
1137
1214
133
1429
1522
1622
173
1854
1910
2019
2118
2257
233
2430
2518
2639
2711
2819
293
3018
3111
3229
3335
3441
3525
368
374
386
3970
406
4115
428
434
4413
4521
4613
4718
485
4935
44.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.2753623188405797
totalSentences69
uniqueOpeners19
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences50
matches
0"She’s been avoiding this block"
1"She yanks the bar’s door"
2"She’s halfway to the door"
3"His voice is deeper than"
4"His right hand rests on"
5"She freezes, bright blue eyes"
6"she says, her cool-headed tone"
7"he says, and there’s no"
8"He leans on the bar"
9"She’d planned to leave a"
10"she says, lying through her"
11"he says, his voice dropping"
12"She’d seen the note, crumpled"
13"She’d thought Silas had betrayed"
14"She’d hated him for three"
15"she admits, rubbing her wrist"
16"He gestures to the Prague"
17"he says, pointing to the"
18"He taps his left knee,"
19"She’d thought they were just"
ratio0.62
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences50
matches
0"The green neon sign bleeds"
1"She’s been avoiding this block"
2"She yanks the bar’s door"
3"The air reeks of bourbon"
4"Rory’s straight shoulder-length black hair"
5"She’s halfway to the door"
6"His voice is deeper than"
7"Silas is leaning against the"
8"His right hand rests on"
9"She freezes, bright blue eyes"
10"she says, her cool-headed tone"
11"Silas turns then, his hazel"
12"he says, and there’s no"
13"He leans on the bar"
14"Rory’s throat tightens."
15"She’d planned to leave a"
16"she says, lying through her"
17"Silas nods, but his fingers"
18"he says, his voice dropping"
19"Rory’s breath catches."
ratio0.98
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Rory looks at him—grey-streaked auburn hair and beard, hazel eyes tired but kind, signet ring catching the light—and realizes he’s older, lonelier, his network …"
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he says, his voice dropping"
1"she says, her voice softening"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she admits (admit)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.536
leniency1
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.067
77.3792%