"She'd come here on a hunch—Eva's cryptic text about \"weird lights in the grove\" two nights ago, combined with the pendant's insistent throb pointing her straight to this forgotten corner of the deer park."
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"But she was no stranger to late-night chases; delivering for Yu-Fei's kept her out till dawn half the week anyway."
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"The standing stones loomed ahead, ancient oaks twisted into rough-hewn pillars that marked the boundary of the Fae Grove—or so the half-remembered folklore from her Cardiff Uni days whispered."
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"She pocketed it, fingers brushing the small crescent scar on her left wrist—a childhood reminder of clumsier days—and pressed on."
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"Near a Hel portal, it was supposed to pulse—or so the note from her unknown benefactor had claimed, slipped under her flat door above Silas' bar three weeks back."
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"Something flickered there—a leaf?"
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"The oaks stood sentinel, bark etched with patterns that hadn't been there moments ago—swirling glyphs that seemed to shift when she blinked."
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"Its crimson core pulsed brighter, syncing with her breath—inhale glow, exhale dim."
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"The moon slipped behind a cloud—or had it?"
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"Time felt slippery here; her phone read 12:19 now, but the night seemed deeper, stars wheeling slower overhead."
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"The grove's boundary blurred; the thicket she'd pushed through looked denser, thorns elongated into barbs."
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"The whispers multiplied—sibilant murmurs overlapping, not words but suggestions of them, brushing her mind like cobwebs."
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"The air thickened, pressing on her lungs, carrying a scent of crushed petals and something older—wet earth and decay masked by honey."
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"Another movement—peripheral again, a pale hand withdrawing behind an oak, fingers unnaturally jointed."
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"Impossible—she'd been circling for minutes, felt like hours."
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"Shapes multiplied at vision's edge—hunched forms slinking between stones, eyes glinting briefly like dew on thorns before vanishing."
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"Time dilates—an hour here, days out there."
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"The pendant—anchor or lure?"
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"The exit warped—thicket thickening into a wall of thorns, barbs snagging her jacket."
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"She veered left, torch catching a glimpse—skin like birch bark, eyes hollow voids."
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"Her lungs burned; time fractured—phone blinked 12:30, then 11:55."
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"She stumbled into Richmond Park proper, collapsing against a normal oak—rough bark, no glyphs."
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"Behind her, the grove exhaled—a collective sigh slithering through the boundary."
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"Rory Carter pushed through the thicket at the edge of Richmond Park, her boots sinking into the dew-slick grass that shouldn't have been so lush at midnight."
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"The standing stones loomed ahead, ancient oaks twisted into rough-hewn pillars that marked the boundary of the Fae Grove—or so the half-remembered folklore from…"
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"The air thickened, pressing on her lungs, carrying a scent of crushed petals and something older—wet earth and decay masked by honey."
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"But the flowers parted before her, petals peeling back like lips revealing teeth."
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"The grove breathed with her, flowers expanding on inhale, contracting on exhale."