Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY82T0YV6V16E40FT6X6409

Run Details

Duration:
54.6s
Cost:
$0.000286
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest bled a sickly light across the rain-slicked pavement of Soho. Aurora Carter pulled her collar higher, the damp chill clinging to her like a second skin. Delivering a late-night order of Yu-Fei Cheung’s General Tso’s chicken wasn’t exactly glamorous, but it paid the rent on the flat above Silas's bar. She fumbled with the insulated bag, its contents sloshing with each step, and pushed open the heavy oak door. The bar was predictably dim, smelling of stale beer, aged wood, and something vaguely floral—Silas's attempts at sophisticated air freshener, she suspected. The familiar murmur of conversation, the clinking of glasses, the low thrum of jazz music, created a comforting blanket of sound. She scanned the room, searching for Silas, and almost stopped dead. Sitting at the far end of the bar, nursing a whiskey, was Elara Davies. Aurora hadn’t seen Elara in nearly a decade. Not since university, not since they'd drifted apart, their lives diverging like tributaries of a single river. Elara had been all vibrant energy, a whirlwind of art and ambition, draped in flowing scarves and oversized glasses, a sketchbook perpetually glued to her hand. This woman… this was not Elara. The woman before her wore a tailored suit, the charcoal gray sharp and severe against her pale skin. Her fiery red hair, once a chaotic mane, was now sleekly pulled back into a tight bun. The oversized glasses were gone, replaced by discreet, frameless lenses that magnified her eyes—eyes that held a depth of weariness Aurora hadn't remembered. The vibrant artist had been replaced by something polished, something… contained. Aurora hesitated, the General Tso’s chicken suddenly feeling incredibly awkward in her hand. Silas hadn't mentioned anything about Elara. She hadn't known Elara even lived in London anymore. Elara looked up, her gaze sweeping across the room until it landed on Aurora. A flicker of recognition crossed her face, a brief flash of the girl Aurora remembered, quickly masked by an expression that could have been polite indifference. “Aurora?” Elara’s voice was lower than Aurora recalled, huskier, almost brittle. “Elara,” Aurora managed, stepping closer. “Wow. I… I didn’t know you were here.” “It’s been a long time,” Elara said, her gaze fixed on the amber liquid swirling in her glass. Aurora set the delivery bag on a nearby table. “It has. What are you—?” She trailed off, unsure how to phrase the question that hung in the air. What was she doing here, looking like this, so different from the Elara she’d known? “Working,” Elara said, her voice flat. “I’m in London on business.” “Business? You? I thought you were… in Florence, painting frescoes.” Aurora’s memory, vivid as it was, felt like a faded photograph. She remembered late nights in the art studio, fueled by cheap coffee and boundless dreams. Elara gave a short, humorless laugh. “That was a lifetime ago. I’m in finance now. Acquisitions, mergers, that sort of thing.” The words hung in the air, heavy with unspoken implications. Acquisitions and mergers. Far removed from watercolors and canvases. “Finance,” Aurora repeated, trying to reconcile the image of the bohemian artist with the icy efficiency of a corporate raider. “That’s… quite a change.” “People change, Aurora.” Elara’s gaze finally met hers, and for a fleeting moment, Aurora saw a shadow pass across her eyes—a flicker of regret, perhaps, or something darker. “Perhaps you’ve noticed.” Aurora felt a pang of something she couldn't quite name—a mixture of sadness and a strange sense of loss. "I have. You look… good. Very polished.” It sounded inadequate, even to her own ears. “Thank you,” Elara said, her tone carefully neutral. “And you? Still delivering Chinese food?” The casual dismissal stung more than Aurora expected. "Part-time," she corrected, acutely aware of the delivery bag at her side. “It’s… flexible.” And it kept a roof over her head, a roof that was above Silas's bar, putting her in proximity to a world she hadn't actively sought but somehow found herself drawn into. Silas appeared at their side, his grey-streaked auburn hair neatly combed. He moved with a slight limp, favoring his left leg, a permanent souvenir from a past Aurora barely understood. “Elara! My dear girl. It’s been far too long.” He offered a warm smile, his hazel eyes crinkling at the corners. He seemed genuinely pleased to see her, oblivious to the subtle tension between the two women. "Silas," Elara acknowledged with a curt nod. "It's good to see you too." "I'll get you something, Elara," Silas said, already heading toward the bar. "What will you have?" "Just the whiskey," she replied, her voice still low. "Aurora," Silas said, turning back to Aurora. “Everything alright with the delivery?” “Yes, fine," Aurora said, shrugging. “Just… a surprise reunion.” Silas glanced from Aurora to Elara, a knowing look flickering in his eyes. He seemed to sense the distance between them, the unspoken history that lay beneath the surface of their polite conversation. He wisely retreated, leaving them to their awkward reunion. The silence stretched, thick and uncomfortable. Aurora took a deep breath. “So, acquisitions and mergers… that must be… intense.” “It is,” Elara agreed. “Demanding. All-consuming, really.” “Does it… make you happy?” The question slipped out before Aurora could stop it. Elara hesitated, her gaze dropping to her glass again. “Happiness is a luxury I can’t afford,” she said quietly. “Not anymore.” Aurora felt a wave of empathy wash over her. She remembered Elara's passion, her joy in creating, the way her face would light up when she talked about art. Where had that gone? What had happened to the girl who used to paint sunflowers on her bedroom wall? “I’m sorry,” Aurora said, the words inadequate but sincere. “Don’t be,” Elara said, her voice regaining some of its former strength. “This is who I am now. This is what I do.” She paused, then added, almost as an afterthought, "It pays very well." Aurora thought of Evan, of the bruises he’d left on her skin, of the fear that had coiled around her heart. She thought of Silas, of the quiet strength he offered, of the strange and dangerous world he’d begun to expose her to. She thought of her own life, of the choices she’d made to survive, to rebuild. “We all make choices,” Aurora said softly. “Some of them are… harder than others.” Elara finally met her gaze, and for the first time, Aurora saw a glimmer of vulnerability in her eyes. “Do you ever think about it?” she asked, her voice barely a whisper. “About what could have been?” Aurora looked around the dimly lit bar, at the old maps and black-and-white photographs that lined the walls. She thought of Cardiff, of university, of the shared dreams they’d once held. She thought of the paths they’d taken, the lives they’d built. “Sometimes,” Aurora admitted. “But I try not to dwell on it.” She paused, then added, “Some things are better left in the past.” Elara nodded slowly, her expression unreadable. She took a long sip of her whiskey. The silence returned, but it felt different now—less tense, more contemplative. “I should go,” Elara said finally, placing her glass on the bar. “I have an early meeting.” “Right,” Aurora said, feeling a strange sense of closure. Elara stood up, smoothing down the skirt of her suit. She extended her hand, and Aurora shook it—a brief, formal gesture that felt like a farewell. “It was… good to see you, Aurora,” Elara said, her voice devoid of emotion. “You too, Elara,” Aurora replied, holding her gaze for a moment longer. Elara turned and walked away, disappearing into the Soho night. Aurora watched her go, a sense of melancholy settling over her. The vibrant artist was gone, replaced by a woman who seemed to have traded her soul for success. And Aurora wondered, with a pang of regret, if that was a price worth paying. She picked up the delivery bag, the aroma of General Tso's chicken now strangely poignant. Silas was watching her, his face unreadable. "She seemed... different," he observed quietly, as Aurora approached the bar. “She was,” Aurora replied, carefully avoiding his gaze. "Time changes people, doesn’t it?”
created_at"2026-02-20T19:23:01.547Z" 2/20/2026, 7:23:01 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
18.18% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags33
adverbTagCount6
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
1"She paused then [then]"
2"Aurora said softly [softly]"
3"She paused then [then]"
4"Elara said finally [finally]"
5"he observed quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.647
leniency1
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.182
67.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1379
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count2
3
adverb"carefully"
count2
4
adverb"really"
count1
5
adverb"softly"
count1
6
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"quickly"
2"very"
3"carefully"
4"really"
5"softly"
6"slowly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Elara"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.86% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1379
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"comforting"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"chaotic"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count2
6
word"unspoken"
count2
7
word"fleeting"
count1
8
word"pang"
count2
9
word"sense of"
count3
10
word"tension"
count1
11
word"silence"
count2
12
word"whisper"
count1
13
word"unreadable"
count2
highlights
0"chill"
1"familiar"
2"comforting"
3"scanned"
4"chaotic"
5"flicker"
6"unspoken"
7"fleeting"
8"pang"
9"sense of"
10"tension"
11"silence"
12"whisper"
13"unreadable"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count2
1
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
1"A flicker of recognition"
99.23% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences97
matches
0"a flicker of regret"
1"a wave of empathy"
2"a pang of regret"
98.67% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences97
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"happened to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences114
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1366
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions88
wordCount1132
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity3
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Elara"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho2
Carter1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
General3
Tso3
Silas11
Elara26
Davies1
Aurora34
London1
Evan1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Cheung"
5"Tso"
6"Silas"
7"Elara"
8"Davies"
9"Aurora"
10"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0
windowScore0.167
29.52% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"felt like a faded photograph"
1"quite name—a mixture of sadness and a strange sense of loss"
2"seemed genuinely pleased to see her, oblivious to the subtle tension between the two women"
3"felt like a farewell"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1366
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean27.88
std19.26
cv0.691
sampleLengths
077
154
214
351
46
569
628
740
811
913
1018
1143
1211
1336
1421
1519
1624
1731
1834
1914
2054
2167
2213
2316
249
2512
269
2742
2819
297
3014
3121
3248
339
3435
3558
3614
3737
3842
3923
4025
4117
429
4326
4414
4512
4676
4711
4813
90.79% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences97
matches
0"were gone"
1"been replaced"
2"was, felt"
3"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs200
matches
0"was watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences114
ratio0.053
matches
0"The bar was predictably dim, smelling of stale beer, aged wood, and something vaguely floral—Silas's attempts at sophisticated air freshener, she suspected."
1"The oversized glasses were gone, replaced by discreet, frameless lenses that magnified her eyes—eyes that held a depth of weariness Aurora hadn't remembered."
2"“People change, Aurora.” Elara’s gaze finally met hers, and for a fleeting moment, Aurora saw a shadow pass across her eyes—a flicker of regret, perhaps, or something darker."
3"Aurora felt a pang of something she couldn't quite name—a mixture of sadness and a strange sense of loss."
4"The silence returned, but it felt different now—less tense, more contemplative."
5"She extended her hand, and Aurora shook it—a brief, formal gesture that felt like a farewell."
87.65% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1143
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount56
adverbRatio0.048993875765529306
lyAdverbCount29
lyAdverbRatio0.02537182852143482
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences114
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences114
mean11.98
std6.59
cv0.55
sampleLengths
018
116
224
319
422
521
611
714
88
917
1026
112
124
1318
1417
1523
1610
171
1813
196
209
2114
2226
2311
245
258
2618
279
2819
2915
306
315
3221
3315
346
3515
3610
373
386
3920
404
4128
423
4319
4415
458
466
478
4812
4934
60.23% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.40350877192982454
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences93
matches
0"She fumbled with the insulated"
1"She scanned the room, searching"
2"Her fiery red hair, once"
3"She hadn't known Elara even"
4"She trailed off, unsure how"
5"She remembered late nights in"
6"It sounded inadequate, even to"
7"she corrected, acutely aware of"
8"He moved with a slight"
9"He offered a warm smile,"
10"He seemed genuinely pleased to"
11"she replied, her voice still"
12"He seemed to sense the"
13"He wisely retreated, leaving them"
14"she said quietly"
15"She remembered Elara's passion, her"
16"She paused, then added, almost"
17"She thought of Silas, of"
18"She thought of her own"
19"she asked, her voice barely"
ratio0.29
8.39% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences93
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Aurora Carter pulled her collar"
2"She fumbled with the insulated"
3"The bar was predictably dim,"
4"The familiar murmur of conversation,"
5"She scanned the room, searching"
6"Aurora hadn’t seen Elara in"
7"Elara had been all vibrant"
8"this was not Elara."
9"The woman before her wore"
10"Her fiery red hair, once"
11"The oversized glasses were gone,"
12"The vibrant artist had been"
13"Aurora hesitated, the General Tso’s"
14"Silas hadn't mentioned anything about"
15"She hadn't known Elara even"
16"Elara looked up, her gaze"
17"A flicker of recognition crossed"
18"Elara’s voice was lower than"
19"Aurora managed, stepping closer"
ratio0.903
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
76.41% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The oversized glasses were gone, replaced by discreet, frameless lenses that magnified her eyes—eyes that held a depth of weariness Aurora hadn't remembered."
1"A flicker of recognition crossed her face, a brief flash of the girl Aurora remembered, quickly masked by an expression that could have been polite indifference…"
2"Aurora thought of Evan, of the bruises he’d left on her skin, of the fear that had coiled around her heart."
3"Aurora looked around the dimly lit bar, at the old maps and black-and-white photographs that lined the walls."
18.94% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags33
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Elara said, her voice flat"
1"Elara said, her tone carefully neutral"
2"He offered, his hazel eyes crinkling at the corners"
3"she replied, her voice still low"
4"Elara said, her voice regaining some of its former strength"
5"she asked, her voice barely a whisper"
6"Elara said, her voice devoid of emotion"
32.35% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags23
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Aurora repeated (repeat)"
1"she corrected (correct)"
2"Elara acknowledged (acknowledge)"
3"Elara agreed (agree)"
4"Aurora admitted (admit)"
5"he observed quietly (observe)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.451
leniency0.902
rawRatio0.261
effectiveRatio0.235
64.1644%