| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 54 | | tagDensity | 0.296 | | leniency | 0.593 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 77.99% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1136 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 47.18% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1136 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "stomach" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "flicked" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "traced" | | 7 | "carried the weight" | | 8 | "unreadable" | | 9 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 123 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 8 | | markdownWords | 16 | | totalWords | 1125 | | ratio | 0.014 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven’s Nest" | | 1 | "his" | | 2 | "left" | | 3 | "face" | | 4 | "I remember you better than you think." | | 5 | "knew" | | 6 | "forever." | | 7 | "him." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 806 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.99 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Rory | 8 | | Carter | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | London | 1 | | Blackwood | 1 | | Silas | 8 | | Old | 1 | | Eva | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Carter" | | 3 | "Blackwood" | | 4 | "Silas" | | 5 | "Eva" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1125 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 52 | | mean | 21.63 | | std | 18.33 | | cv | 0.847 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 98 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 68 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 80 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 39 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 46 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 40 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 37 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 26 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 33 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 37 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 144 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 123 | | ratio | 0.065 | | matches | | 0 | "The neon green sign of *The Raven’s Nest* flickered like a dying firefly as Rory Carter pushed through the heavy door, the scent of aged whiskey and something faintly metallic—polished brass, maybe—hitting her like a memory." | | 1 | "Not just any laugh—*his* laugh." | | 2 | "Not when the weight of what she’d done—what she’d *left*—pressed down on her like the London sky after rain." | | 3 | "Older, of course—lines bracketing his hazel eyes, silver threading through his auburn hair, a faint limp in his left leg that hadn’t been there the last time she’d seen him." | | 4 | "The way he looked at her—like he could see right through her—made her skin prickle." | | 5 | "The back room was just as she remembered—dark, the walls lined with maps and yellowed photographs, the air thick with the scent of old paper and something faintly metallic, like the bar out front." | | 6 | "“Don’t I?” His eyes searched hers, and for a moment, she saw the boy she’d known—the one who’d been her best friend, her confidant, her anchor." | | 7 | "She looked at him—really looked at him—for the first time in years." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 817 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.033047735618115054 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011015911872705019 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 123 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 123 | | mean | 9.15 | | std | 7.46 | | cv | 0.816 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 36 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 51.76% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.34959349593495936 | | totalSentences | 123 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 86.58% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, a hand settled on" | | 1 | "Then, slowly, she nodded." |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 48.57% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "She was halfway to the" | | 2 | "She didn’t turn." | | 3 | "She exhaled, slow and controlled," | | 4 | "she said, her voice steady," | | 5 | "He gestured to the bar," | | 6 | "She knew what that meant." | | 7 | "His eyes flicked to her" | | 8 | "She forced a smile, but" | | 9 | "She should’ve known he wouldn’t" | | 10 | "His voice was quiet, but" | | 11 | "She changed the subject." | | 12 | "His lips quirked, but there" | | 13 | "He didn’t move, just watched" | | 14 | "She took it, the amber" | | 15 | "He studied her over the" | | 16 | "His voice was low, but" | | 17 | "She set the glass down" | | 18 | "She laughed, sharp and humorless." | | 19 | "His gaze darkened" |
| | ratio | 0.429 | |
| 50.91% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "The neon green sign of" | | 1 | "The place hadn’t changed." | | 2 | "Neither had the hum of" | | 3 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 4 | "She was halfway to the" | | 5 | "A laugh, rich and warm," | | 6 | "The kind that used to" | | 7 | "Rory froze, her pulse thudding" | | 8 | "She didn’t turn." | | 9 | "Silas Blackwood said, his voice" | | 10 | "She exhaled, slow and controlled," | | 11 | "The same sharp jaw, the" | | 12 | "she said, her voice steady," | | 13 | "He gestured to the bar," | | 14 | "A place to disappear." | | 15 | "The words settled between them" | | 16 | "She knew what that meant." | | 17 | "Rory slid onto a stool," | | 18 | "His eyes flicked to her" | | 19 | "She forced a smile, but" |
| | ratio | 0.818 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 24 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Older, of course—lines bracketing his hazel eyes, silver threading through his auburn hair, a faint limp in his left leg that hadn’t been there the last time sh…" |
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| 62.50% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Silas Blackwood said, his voice rough with amusement" | | 1 | "He reached, his fingers brushing hers" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 54 | | tagDensity | 0.037 | | leniency | 0.074 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |