Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY83384TNFM179M7C815EAE

Run Details

Duration:
12.3s
Cost:
$0.000478
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The neon green sign of *The Raven’s Nest* flickered like a dying firefly as Rory Carter pushed through the heavy door, the scent of aged whiskey and something faintly metallic—polished brass, maybe—hitting her like a memory. The place hadn’t changed. Neither had the hum of low conversation, the clink of glasses, the way the dim lighting made everything feel like a half-remembered dream. She adjusted the strap of her messenger bag, her fingers brushing the scar on her wrist, a crescent moon of pale skin that never failed to remind her of the night she’d left Cardiff behind. She was halfway to the bar when the air shifted. A laugh, rich and warm, cut through the murmur of the crowd. Not just any laugh—*his* laugh. The kind that used to make her stomach flip, back when she still believed in second chances. Rory froze, her pulse thudding in her throat. She didn’t turn. She couldn’t. Not yet. Not when the weight of what she’d done—what she’d *left*—pressed down on her like the London sky after rain. Then, a hand settled on her shoulder. “Well, well,” Silas Blackwood said, his voice rough with amusement. “If it isn’t Rory Carter, back from the dead.” She exhaled, slow and controlled, before turning. And there he was. Older, of course—lines bracketing his hazel eyes, silver threading through his auburn hair, a faint limp in his left leg that hadn’t been there the last time she’d seen him. But it was his *face* that did her in. The same sharp jaw, the same stubborn set of his mouth, only now there was something harder in his gaze. Like he’d spent the last decade looking over his shoulder. “Silas,” she said, her voice steady, but her fingers tightened around the strap of her bag. “I didn’t know you still ran this place.” “Neither did I, at first.” He gestured to the bar, where a half-empty glass of whiskey waited. “But some of us need a front. Some of us need a place to disappear.” A front. A place to disappear. The words settled between them like dust. She knew what that meant. Knew the kind of work he’d done, the kind of work that left scars deeper than the one on her wrist. Rory slid onto a stool, the leather worn smooth under her palms. “You look well.” “And you look like you’ve been running.” His eyes flicked to her bag, then back to her face. “Still delivering for the Empress?” “When I’m not hiding from my past.” She forced a smile, but it felt brittle. “How’ve you been?” Silas leaned on the bar, his signet ring catching the light. “Alive. Mostly.” He paused. “You?” She should’ve known he wouldn’t let it go that easily. “Same.” A beat of silence. Then, “You’re lying.” Rory traced the rim of her glass with her thumb. “Maybe. But it’s not your business.” “Wasn’t always.” His voice was quiet, but it carried the weight of something unsaid. The way he looked at her—like he could see right through her—made her skin prickle. She changed the subject. “You still got that back room?” “You still know how to find it.” His lips quirked, but there was no humor in it. Just acknowledgment. The kind that said *I remember you better than you think.* Rory slid off the stool. “I should go.” “Or you could stay.” He didn’t move, just watched her, his hazel eyes unreadable. “Talk. Like old times.” Old times. When she’d been younger, when she’d still believed in redemption. When she’d thought she could outrun her mistakes. She hesitated. Then, slowly, she nodded. The back room was just as she remembered—dark, the walls lined with maps and yellowed photographs, the air thick with the scent of old paper and something faintly metallic, like the bar out front. A single lamp cast long shadows across the table where they sat. Silas poured two fingers of whiskey into a glass and slid it toward her. “Drink.” She took it, the amber liquid burning her throat. “You always did know how to make an entrance.” “And you always did know how to avoid one.” He studied her over the rim of his own glass. “You left Cardiff. No note. No goodbye. Just… gone.” Rory’s fingers tightened around the glass. “I had my reasons.” “Reasons don’t change the fact that you vanished.” His voice was low, but there was an edge to it. “Eva was worried sick. Your mother—” “Don’t.” She set the glass down harder than she meant to. “You don’t get to play the concerned friend now.” Silas didn’t flinch. “I’m not playing anything. I just miss you, Rory. That’s all.” She laughed, sharp and humorless. “You don’t miss anyone. Not really.” “That’s not true.” His gaze darkened. “I miss the girl who used to climb onto my roof at three in the morning, who thought the world was hers for the taking. I miss the girl who believed in second chances.” The words hit her like a physical blow. She stood abruptly, the stool scraping against the floor. “I’m not that girl anymore.” “No.” Silas didn’t move. “You’re not.” Rory turned toward the door, her hand already on the latch. “I should go.” “Before or after you tell me what really happened?” She froze. “What do you mean?” “Evan.” His voice was quiet, but it carried the weight of something she’d spent years burying. “The bruises on your arm. The way you flinched when someone raised their voice. I saw it, Rory. I *knew* it.” Her breath caught. She hadn’t told anyone. Not even Eva. Not really. Silas leaned forward, his voice dropping to a whisper. “You ran because you were scared. And I get that. But you didn’t have to run *forever.*” She swallowed hard. “It’s not that simple.” “Isn’t it?” He reached across the table, his fingers brushing hers. “You could’ve come back. You could’ve talked to someone. You could’ve—” “Stop.” Her voice was raw. “You don’t know what you’re talking about.” “Don’t I?” His eyes searched hers, and for a moment, she saw the boy she’d known—the one who’d been her best friend, her confidant, her anchor. “I know you better than you think.” She pulled her hand away. “You don’t know anything.” Silas stood, his chair scraping against the floor. “Then tell me.” She looked at him—really looked at him—for the first time in years. The lines on his face, the limp, the way his signet ring glinted in the lamplight. He was older. Harder. But he was still *him.* And she was still running. Rory turned toward the door, her fingers trembling. “I can’t.” Silas didn’t follow. He just stood there, watching her, his expression unreadable. She didn’t look back.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:23:10.993Z" 2/20/2026, 7:23:10 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.296
leniency0.593
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.99% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1136
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count4
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.18% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1136
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"carried the weight"
count2
8
word"unreadable"
count2
9
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"stomach"
2"pulse"
3"weight"
4"flicked"
5"silence"
6"traced"
7"carried the weight"
8"unreadable"
9"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences88
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences123
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans8
markdownWords16
totalWords1125
ratio0.014
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"his"
2"left"
3"face"
4"I remember you better than you think."
5"knew"
6"forever."
7"him."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount806
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.99
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Rory8
Carter1
Cardiff1
London1
Blackwood1
Silas8
Old1
Eva1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"Carter"
3"Blackwood"
4"Silas"
5"Eva"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1125
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean21.63
std18.33
cv0.847
sampleLengths
098
110
268
37
419
580
624
732
839
915
1023
1118
1216
1311
147
1516
1629
1710
1830
198
2018
2120
226
2346
2415
2518
2628
2710
2825
2920
3014
3111
3240
3322
346
3514
369
376
3837
3912
4026
417
4222
4312
4433
459
4611
4737
485
4910
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs144
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences123
ratio0.065
matches
0"The neon green sign of *The Raven’s Nest* flickered like a dying firefly as Rory Carter pushed through the heavy door, the scent of aged whiskey and something faintly metallic—polished brass, maybe—hitting her like a memory."
1"Not just any laugh—*his* laugh."
2"Not when the weight of what she’d done—what she’d *left*—pressed down on her like the London sky after rain."
3"Older, of course—lines bracketing his hazel eyes, silver threading through his auburn hair, a faint limp in his left leg that hadn’t been there the last time she’d seen him."
4"The way he looked at her—like he could see right through her—made her skin prickle."
5"The back room was just as she remembered—dark, the walls lined with maps and yellowed photographs, the air thick with the scent of old paper and something faintly metallic, like the bar out front."
6"“Don’t I?” His eyes searched hers, and for a moment, she saw the boy she’d known—the one who’d been her best friend, her confidant, her anchor."
7"She looked at him—really looked at him—for the first time in years."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount817
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.033047735618115054
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.011015911872705019
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences123
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences123
mean9.15
std7.46
cv0.816
sampleLengths
036
14
223
335
410
512
65
717
88
93
102
112
1219
137
1410
159
167
174
1830
199
2020
2110
2216
238
2417
2515
262
274
287
295
3021
3112
323
3318
345
3515
363
3711
384
391
4010
411
424
433
4410
456
4614
4715
484
496
51.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.34959349593495936
totalSentences123
uniqueOpeners43
86.58% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences77
matches
0"Then, a hand settled on"
1"Then, slowly, she nodded."
ratio0.026
48.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences77
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"She was halfway to the"
2"She didn’t turn."
3"She exhaled, slow and controlled,"
4"she said, her voice steady,"
5"He gestured to the bar,"
6"She knew what that meant."
7"His eyes flicked to her"
8"She forced a smile, but"
9"She should’ve known he wouldn’t"
10"His voice was quiet, but"
11"She changed the subject."
12"His lips quirked, but there"
13"He didn’t move, just watched"
14"She took it, the amber"
15"He studied her over the"
16"His voice was low, but"
17"She set the glass down"
18"She laughed, sharp and humorless."
19"His gaze darkened"
ratio0.429
50.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences77
matches
0"The neon green sign of"
1"The place hadn’t changed."
2"Neither had the hum of"
3"She adjusted the strap of"
4"She was halfway to the"
5"A laugh, rich and warm,"
6"The kind that used to"
7"Rory froze, her pulse thudding"
8"She didn’t turn."
9"Silas Blackwood said, his voice"
10"She exhaled, slow and controlled,"
11"The same sharp jaw, the"
12"she said, her voice steady,"
13"He gestured to the bar,"
14"A place to disappear."
15"The words settled between them"
16"She knew what that meant."
17"Rory slid onto a stool,"
18"His eyes flicked to her"
19"She forced a smile, but"
ratio0.818
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Older, of course—lines bracketing his hazel eyes, silver threading through his auburn hair, a faint limp in his left leg that hadn’t been there the last time sh…"
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Silas Blackwood said, his voice rough with amusement"
1"He reached, his fingers brushing hers"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.037
leniency0.074
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.6277%