Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8452F8W6V2NYXHVGGAT3M

Run Details

Duration:
1m 6s
Cost:
$0.000397
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The wrought iron gate groaned in protest as Aurora pushed it open, the sound swallowed quickly by the damp stillness of Richmond Park. It was well past midnight. The air hung thick and cold, tasting of wet earth and something else… something floral, unseasonably sweet. She hadn’t expected it to be this quiet. Even on weeknights the park usually held the distant thrum of traffic, the muffled shouts from late-night dog walkers. Tonight, nothing. Just the crunch of gravel under her boots. She’d come here looking for answers, or at least a direction. Old Man Hemlock, the antique dealer with eyes like polished stones, had been maddeningly cryptic. “The Grove holds what you seek, child. But be warned, it asks a price.” He’d pressed the Heartstone Pendant into her palm, the crimson gemstone warm against her skin. “It will guide you. But it won’t protect you.” The pendant pulsed faintly. She touched it, tracing the cool silver of the chain. It had been doing that more frequently lately, a subtle throb that vibrated against her sternum. Especially since… well, since she’d started seeing things. Glitches in her vision. Flickering shadows that weren’t cast by anything solid. The standing stones weren’t immediately visible. They were hidden amongst a copse of ancient oaks, their gnarled branches twisted like arthritic fingers. She found the entrance to the Grove by instinct, drawn by an unseen pull. The air grew colder, the floral scent overpowering. It was cloying, artificial, like someone had sprayed an entire room with cheap perfume. The clearing within was a riot of wildflowers, impossibly vibrant even in the dark. Usually, after a frost, the blooms would have withered. Here, they swayed gently in a non-existent breeze, their petals dusted with a luminescence that wasn't quite moonlight. It was beautiful. And wrong. Aurora ran a hand through her straight black hair, pushing it back from her face. She glanced at her watch. 12:17 AM. It felt like she’d been walking for an hour already. But the park gates were barely five minutes behind her. Time always felt… fluid here. She remembered Eva recounting stories of slipping into the Grove as a teenager, losing track of minutes that stretched into what felt like entire afternoons. She walked deeper into the clearing, the wildflowers brushing against her jeans. The Heartstone warmed against her chest, its faint glow intensifying. She’d been hoping for some grand revelation, a vision, a sign. Instead, a subtle feeling of unease began to creep up her spine. It started with a sound. A rustling in the undergrowth, too heavy for a rabbit. Too deliberate for the wind. She stopped, listening. Nothing. Just the insistent hum of insects and the thumping of her own pulse in her ears. She told herself it was her imagination, that she was letting Hemlock’s warnings get to her. The man was a charlatan, probably. A dealer in trinkets and tall tales. But the feeling persisted. She wasn’t alone. She walked further, examining the flowers. Anemones, snowdrops, violets, all blooming in careless profusion. She knelt, touching a velvety purple petal. It felt… strangely slick. Almost oily. A flicker of movement at the edge of her vision. Just beyond the ring of trees that bordered the clearing. She whipped her head around, but there was nothing there. Or at least, nothing she could definitively *see*. The pendant pulsed faster, almost painfully hot now. She clenched her fist around it, trying to quell the rising panic. "It will guide you," Hemlock had said. Not "it will terrify you." Another sound. This time, a faint whistling. A melody, almost. High-pitched and discordant, like a broken music box. It seemed to be coming from everywhere and nowhere at once. She scanned the trees again, her breath catching in her throat. There. A shadow, shifting between the oaks. Too tall, too slender to be human. It wasn't a solid shape, more like a distortion of the darkness, a ripple in the fabric of the night. She stared, willing it to solidify, to reveal itself. But it remained frustratingly indistinct. She stood up slowly, her legs suddenly heavy. She felt a prickling sensation on the back of her neck, the instinctive awareness of being watched. The whistling continued, gaining in intensity. It was a lullaby, but one laced with malice. She called out, her voice barely a whisper. "Hello?" No response. Only the whistling, and the rustling in the undergrowth, which had grown closer. She took a step back, then another. The pendant vibrated wildly, radiating heat. It felt like a warning. She should leave. Now. She turned to retrace her steps, but the path she’d taken seemed to have vanished. The wildflowers had grown taller, thicker, forming an impenetrable wall of color. She tried to push through them, but they resisted, their stems strangely resilient. It was as if they were deliberately obstructing her way. The shadow moved again, this time bolder. She could almost make out a form now – a slender figure, impossibly tall, with limbs that seemed to bend at unnatural angles. It wasn’t moving *towards* her exactly. It was… circling. Aurora’s heart hammered against her ribs. She fumbled in her pocket for her phone, but there was no signal. Of course not. This place existed outside the normal rules. The whistling stopped. The silence that followed was even more terrifying. Then, a voice. It wasn’t loud, but it carried on the still air, soft and sibilant. It wasn't directed *at* her exactly, was more a murmur woven into the fabric of the Grove itself. “Lost, little one?” She didn't dare turn around. She kept her eyes fixed on the wall of flowers, desperately searching for an escape. The pendant was burning against her skin now, almost unbearable. “We haven’t had a visitor in such a long time.” The voice again, closer this time. “So fragile. So…sweet.” She hugged herself, trying to contain the tremor that had taken hold of her body. She could smell it now. The floral scent wasn’t just sweet, it was sickly. Rotting. Like something beautiful had been left to decay. A single wildflower detached itself from the wall and floated towards her, suspended in the air. It wasn’t moving with the wind. It was simply drifting, drawn by an unseen force. As it drew closer, she saw that its petals weren't soft and velvety. They were coated in a glistening, black residue. The shadow was directly behind her now. She could feel its presence, cold and ancient. She closed her eyes, bracing herself for…what? She didn’t know. The Heartstone pulsed one last time, a blinding flash of crimson light. Then, everything went cold. And silent.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.56% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1114
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"gently"
2"slowly"
3"suddenly"
4"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1114
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"pulsed"
count3
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"throb"
count1
3
word"vibrated"
count2
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"scanned"
count1
7
word"intensity"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"glistening"
count1
11
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"tracing"
2"throb"
3"vibrated"
4"pulse"
5"flicker"
6"scanned"
7"intensity"
8"whisper"
9"silence"
10"glistening"
11"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fist"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences128
matches(empty)
75.89% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences128
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
2"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences132
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords1112
ratio0.003
matches
0"see"
1"towards"
2"at"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount1064
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.28
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Hemlock"
discoveredNames
Aurora3
Richmond1
Park1
Man1
Hemlock3
Heartstone3
Pendant1
Grove3
Eva1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Hemlock"
2"Heartstone"
3"Pendant"
4"Eva"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
2.94% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"quite moonlight"
1"felt like she’d been walking for an hou"
2"felt like entire afternoons"
3"It was as if they were deliberately obstructing her way"
4"limbs that seemed to bend at unnatural angles"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1112
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences132
matches
0"saw that its"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean37.07
std18.56
cv0.501
sampleLengths
082
164
250
358
446
572
645
740
836
927
1038
1132
1240
131
1447
1540
169
1715
1822
1950
2039
2129
2245
233
2430
2519
2638
2752
2825
2918
97.04% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences128
matches
0"were hidden"
1"been left"
2"were coated"
85.06% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs174
matches
0"was cloying"
1"was letting"
2"was burning"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences132
ratio0.008
matches
0"She could almost make out a form now – a slender figure, impossibly tall, with limbs that seemed to bend at unnatural angles."
65.13% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1066
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount74
adverbRatio0.06941838649155722
lyAdverbCount33
lyAdverbRatio0.03095684803001876
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences132
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences132
mean8.42
std5.5
cv0.653
sampleLengths
023
15
213
34
48
519
62
78
811
915
1029
119
124
1310
1416
152
166
174
188
196
2016
2114
228
2314
2414
259
2618
273
282
2915
305
312
3210
3310
343
352
3625
3712
3810
3911
4012
415
4210
435
443
451
4616
4716
486
497
51.01% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3560606060606061
totalSentences132
uniqueOpeners47
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount11
totalSentences110
matches
0"Just the crunch of gravel"
1"Usually, after a frost, the"
2"Instead, a subtle feeling of"
3"Too deliberate for the wind."
4"Just the insistent hum of"
5"Just beyond the ring of"
6"Too tall, too slender to"
7"Only the whistling, and the"
8"Of course not."
9"Then, a voice."
10"Then, everything went cold."
ratio0.1
30.91% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount52
totalSentences110
matches
0"It was well past midnight."
1"She hadn’t expected it to"
2"She’d come here looking for"
3"He’d pressed the Heartstone Pendant"
4"She touched it, tracing the"
5"It had been doing that"
6"They were hidden amongst a"
7"She found the entrance to"
8"It was cloying, artificial, like"
9"It was beautiful."
10"She glanced at her watch."
11"It felt like she’d been"
12"She remembered Eva recounting stories"
13"She walked deeper into the"
14"She’d been hoping for some"
15"It started with a sound."
16"She stopped, listening."
17"She told herself it was"
18"She wasn’t alone."
19"She walked further, examining the"
ratio0.473
73.64% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences110
matches
0"The wrought iron gate groaned"
1"It was well past midnight."
2"The air hung thick and"
3"something floral, unseasonably sweet."
4"She hadn’t expected it to"
5"She’d come here looking for"
6"He’d pressed the Heartstone Pendant"
7"The pendant pulsed faintly."
8"She touched it, tracing the"
9"It had been doing that"
10"The standing stones weren’t immediately"
11"They were hidden amongst a"
12"She found the entrance to"
13"The air grew colder, the"
14"It was cloying, artificial, like"
15"The clearing within was a"
16"Here, they swayed gently in"
17"It was beautiful."
18"Aurora ran a hand through"
19"She glanced at her watch."
ratio0.773
45.45% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences110
matches
0"Even on weeknights the park"
ratio0.009
65.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"It had been doing that more frequently lately, a subtle throb that vibrated against her sternum."
1"Here, they swayed gently in a non-existent breeze, their petals dusted with a luminescence that wasn't quite moonlight."
2"She remembered Eva recounting stories of slipping into the Grove as a teenager, losing track of minutes that stretched into what felt like entire afternoons."
3"Only the whistling, and the rustling in the undergrowth, which had grown closer."
4"She could almost make out a form now – a slender figure, impossibly tall, with limbs that seemed to bend at unnatural angles."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He’d, the crimson gemstone warm against her skin"
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He’d (would)"
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.25
77.5840%