Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY85Q5NDC7TADTX41JTSZEQ

Run Details

Duration:
55.5s
Cost:
$0.000272
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon of The Raven's Nest bled across the rain-slicked pavement of Soho. Aurora Carter, damp from the drizzle and smelling faintly of sesame oil—a residue from her Golden Empress delivery—pushed open the door, the bell above jingling a tired welcome. The usual haze of old wood, cheap whisky, and something indefinably sharper, like old paper and secrets, hung in the air. Silas would have the fire stoked just so, two logs crackling reliably in the grate. She scanned the room. Familiar black-and-white photographs of war correspondents and faded maps of forgotten territories decorated the walls. Not a bad place to wait out a London downpour. She found a stool at the bar, the worn leather cool beneath her thighs. “Rough night?” Silas’ voice, a low rumble, came from behind the polished mahogany. He didn’t look up from wiping down the bar with a practiced hand. “You know it,” Rory said, leaning against the counter. "Yu-Fei's been swamped. Kung Pao chicken demand spikes with the rain, apparently." He finally glanced up, hazel eyes assessing her. He’d always been good at that – reading people. He didn’t smile. “Still delivering?” “Paying the rent. It’s honest work.” Rory traced the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit. A moment of silence stretched, punctuated by the hiss of the fire and the drumming of rain against the windowpanes. Then, a voice cut through the quiet. “Rory? Is that really you?” Rory froze. The voice held a cadence she hadn't heard in close to a decade. She turned, slow and deliberate, and her stomach dropped. Standing near the back, partially obscured by a cluster of potted ferns, was Elara Davies. Elara. She’d been impossibly bright, a supernova of intellectual energy eclipsing everyone around her at Cardiff University. Rory, content to be a quiet satellite, had orbited her orbit, absorbing her wit and enthusiasm like starlight. They'd envisioned conquering the world, side-by-side, armed with law degrees and righteous indignation. They had even picked out matching amethyst pendants – a symbol of their unshakeable bond. Rory still had hers, tucked away in a box of forgotten trinkets. But ElaraElara was almost unrecognizable. Gone were the unruly curls the color of autumn leaves, replaced by a sleek, obsidian bob that framed a face sharpened by an almost unnerving stillness. The vintage dresses and Doc Martens that had been her uniform were traded for a perfectly tailored grey pantsuit. There wasn’t a single crease out of place. Even her glasses, once a quirky, horn-rimmed style, were now minimalist, silver-rimmed rectangles. “Elara,” Rory echoed, the name feeling foreign on her tongue. “It’s… Ms. Davies now,” Elara corrected, her voice clipped and precise, lacking any of the playful lilt Rory remembered. “Davies-Sterling, actually. But Elara will do, I suppose.” Silas watched them with knowing eyes, his movements slowing as he polished a glass with unnecessary care. He'd likely witnessed such reunions before. He’d seen the world change many times over. “You look… different,” Rory said, the understatement hanging heavy in the air. Elara offered a thin smile that didn’t reach her eyes. “Time does that. As does a successful career in international arbitration.” Rory nodded, grasping for a point of connection. “Arbitration? I thought you were going into human rights law.” “Plans change,” Elara said, the words lacking any warmth. “Human rights are rather… messy. Arbitration is clean, precise. Black and white, Rory. Much more my speed now." “So, London?” “A strategic necessity. My firm has offices here. I’m here for a conference.” She glanced around the bar with a look of faint distaste. “Rather… quaint.” Rory bristled, a flicker of the old defensiveness rising within her. “It’s Silas' bar. It's been here for decades.” “Indeed,” Elara conceded, turning back to Rory. "It's lovely to see you Rory. Has it been... five years? Six?" Rory thought about Evan. About leaving Cardiff. About the sudden, overwhelming need to disappear. The lie came easily. “Something like that. I've been… busy.” Elara raised a perfectly sculpted eyebrow. "Doing what, exactly?" There was an almost surgical precision to her tone, dissecting Rory’s vague statement. Rory hesitated. Admitting she delivered Chinese food didn't exactly align with Elara’s current image. "Various things. Freelance work. Just… keeping busy.” Silas slid a glass of amber liquid towards Elara. "Scotch. I think you'll find it helps with the strategic necessities." Elara accepted it with a curt nod, taking a careful sip. "Thank you, Silas. You haven't changed a bit.” Her gaze drifted to the slight limp in his left leg. A flicker of something—recognition? Pity?—crossed her face before she masked it with a carefully neutral expression. Rory watched her, a strange mix of sorrow and resentment churning within her. She’d known Elara, truly known her, once. Now, she felt like she was looking at a meticulously constructed portrait of someone she vaguely remembered. "Remember that time we tried to organize a protest against the university's investment in arms manufacturers?" Rory asked, grasping for a shared memory, a lifeline to their past. Elara’s expression remained unchanged. “A youthful indiscretion,” she said coolly. “I’ve long since realized that systemic change is rarely achieved through shouting in the streets.” The silence returned, thick and suffocating. Rory felt a profound sense of loss, not just for the friendship they’d lost, but for the idealistic young women they’d both once been. “You seem… successful,” Rory said, the words laced with a bitterness she couldn't quite suppress. Elara inclined her head. “I am. I represent major corporations in complex international disputes. I make a considerable amount of money. And I have a lovely apartment overlooking Hyde Park.” She paused, her gaze hardening. “I have everything I ever wanted.” Rory looked down at her hands, calloused from gripping delivery bags. Everything she'd ever wanted hadn't involved corporate mergers and expansive views. It involved laughter, late-night talks fueled by cheap wine, the unwavering certainty of a shared purpose. “I’m glad for you,” Rory managed, the words tasting like ash. Elara took another sip of her scotch, her eyes fixed on some distant point beyond Rory. “You should be.” She reached into her purse and withdrew a small, rectangular card. “Here’s my contact information. In case you ever need… arbitration services.” Rory stared at the card, embossed with the elegant logo of Davies-Sterling International Arbitration. It felt like a parting gift, a tangible representation of the chasm that had grown between them. “Thank you," Rory said quietly, tucking the card into her pocket. Elara finished her drink, placed the glass on the bar with a delicate clink, and rose to her feet. "I must be going. My schedule is rather demanding." “It was… good to see you, Elara,” Rory said, knowing that it hadn't been. Elara offered one last, brittle smile. "You too, Rory.” And then, she was gone, swallowed by the rain-slicked streets of Soho. Rory watched her disappear, the click of her heels fading into the urban hum. Silas placed a hand on her shoulder, his touch surprisingly gentle. “Some people change,” he murmured, his gaze fixed on the doorway where Elara had vanished. “Not always for the better.” He paused, then added, his voice low, “Don't let it make you question your own path, Rory. You've always had a better compass than she ever did.” Rory looked at him, a faint smile touching her lips. Yu-Fei would be calling soon, another order to deliver. It wasn’t a grand life, but it was hers. And at least she didn’t have to pretend she was something she wasn’t. She still had her amethyst pendant, tucked safely away, a silent reminder of a friendship lost and a life she hadn't traded away.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"She glanced around [around]"
1"she said coolly [coolly]"
2"Rory said quietly [quietly]"
3"He paused then [then]"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.2
76.76% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1291
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count2
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count1
4
adverb"coolly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"perfectly"
2"carefully"
3"truly"
4"coolly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Elara"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
22.54% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1291
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"lilt"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count2
9
word"eyebrow"
count1
10
word"churning"
count1
11
word"constructed"
count1
12
word"profound"
count1
13
word"sense of"
count1
14
word"complex"
count1
15
word"unwavering"
count1
16
word"tangible"
count1
17
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"familiar"
2"traced"
3"silence"
4"stomach"
5"echoed"
6"lilt"
7"warmth"
8"flicker"
9"eyebrow"
10"churning"
11"constructed"
12"profound"
13"sense of"
14"complex"
15"unwavering"
16"tangible"
17"reminder"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences89
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1277
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
15.98% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions69
wordCount970
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity2.68
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho2
Carter1
Golden1
Empress1
London1
Elara19
Davies2
Cardiff2
University1
Doc1
Martens1
Rory26
Silas4
Evan1
Chinese1
Davies-Sterling1
International1
Arbitration1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Elara"
4"Davies"
5"Rory"
6"Silas"
7"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.16
windowScore0.167
50.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like she was looking at a meticulo"
1"quite suppress"
2"felt like a parting gift, a tangible re"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.783
wordCount1277
matches
0"not just for the friendship they’d lost, but for the idealistic young women they’d both once been"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean27.76
std17.23
cv0.621
sampleLengths
078
143
226
321
422
518
627
75
839
91
1074
115
1266
1310
1427
1531
1612
1721
1818
1927
202
2126
2219
2319
2424
2522
2621
2720
2846
2937
3028
3125
3230
3315
3441
3538
3611
3741
3831
3911
4028
4114
4221
4325
4447
4564
97.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences89
matches
0"were traded"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs169
matches
0"was looking"
10.58% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences108
ratio0.046
matches
0"Aurora Carter, damp from the drizzle and smelling faintly of sesame oil—a residue from her Golden Empress delivery—pushed open the door, the bell above jingling a tired welcome."
1"He’d always been good at that – reading people."
2"They had even picked out matching amethyst pendants – a symbol of their unshakeable bond."
3"A flicker of something—recognition?"
4"Pity?—crossed her face before she masked it with a carefully neutral expression."
86.93% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount679
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.05154639175257732
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.023564064801178203
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean11.82
std6.39
cv0.54
sampleLengths
014
128
221
315
44
515
610
714
813
913
109
1112
128
139
143
152
1618
1720
187
195
202
2113
229
2315
241
2516
2618
2713
2815
2912
305
3126
3219
338
3413
3510
3619
378
3817
396
408
4112
4210
4311
448
4510
469
4718
482
4924
64.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.42592592592592593
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners46
77.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences86
matches
0"Then, a voice cut through"
1"Even her glasses, once a"
ratio0.023
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences86
matches
0"She scanned the room."
1"She found a stool at"
2"He didn’t look up from"
3"He finally glanced up, hazel"
4"He’d always been good at"
5"He didn’t smile."
6"She turned, slow and deliberate,"
7"She’d been impossibly bright, a"
8"They'd envisioned conquering the world,"
9"They had even picked out"
10"He'd likely witnessed such reunions"
11"He’d seen the world change"
12"She glanced around the bar"
13"Her gaze drifted to the"
14"She’d known Elara, truly known"
15"she said coolly"
16"She paused, her gaze hardening"
17"It involved laughter, late-night talks"
18"She reached into her purse"
19"It felt like a parting"
ratio0.279
53.02% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences86
matches
0"The green neon of The"
1"Aurora Carter, damp from the"
2"The usual haze of old"
3"Silas would have the fire"
4"She scanned the room."
5"She found a stool at"
6"He didn’t look up from"
7"Rory said, leaning against the"
8"He finally glanced up, hazel"
9"He’d always been good at"
10"He didn’t smile."
11"Rory traced the crescent-shaped scar"
12"A moment of silence stretched,"
13"The voice held a cadence"
14"She turned, slow and deliberate,"
15"She’d been impossibly bright, a"
16"Rory, content to be a"
17"They'd envisioned conquering the world,"
18"They had even picked out"
19"Rory still had hers, tucked"
ratio0.814
58.14% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"Now, she felt like she"
ratio0.012
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Rory echoed, the name feeling foreign on her tongue"
1"Rory said, the understatement hanging heavy in the air"
2"Elara said, the words lacking any warmth"
3"She paused, her gaze hardening"
4"Rory said, knowing that it hadn't been"
75.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Elara corrected (correct)"
1"Elara conceded (concede)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.275
leniency0.55
rawRatio0.273
effectiveRatio0.15
74.5008%