| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She glanced around [around]" | | 1 | "she said coolly [coolly]" | | 2 | "Rory said quietly [quietly]" | | 3 | "He paused then [then]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |
| 76.76% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1291 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "carefully" | | 3 | "truly" | | 4 | "coolly" |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 22.54% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1291 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "scanned" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "traced" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "echoed" | | 6 | "lilt" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "eyebrow" | | 10 | "churning" | | 11 | "constructed" | | 12 | "profound" | | 13 | "sense of" | | 14 | "complex" | | 15 | "unwavering" | | 16 | "tangible" | | 17 | "reminder" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "stomach dropped" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 108 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1277 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 15.98% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 69 | | wordCount | 970 | | uniqueNames | 20 | | maxNameDensity | 2.68 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Soho | 2 | | Carter | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | London | 1 | | Elara | 19 | | Davies | 2 | | Cardiff | 2 | | University | 1 | | Doc | 1 | | Martens | 1 | | Rory | 26 | | Silas | 4 | | Evan | 1 | | Chinese | 1 | | Davies-Sterling | 1 | | International | 1 | | Arbitration | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Carter" | | 3 | "Elara" | | 4 | "Davies" | | 5 | "Rory" | | 6 | "Silas" | | 7 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Soho" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.16 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 50.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like she was looking at a meticulo" | | 1 | "quite suppress" | | 2 | "felt like a parting gift, a tangible re" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.783 | | wordCount | 1277 | | matches | | 0 | "not just for the friendship they’d lost, but for the idealistic young women they’d both once been" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 27.76 | | std | 17.23 | | cv | 0.621 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 43 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 39 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 74 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 66 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 26 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 46 | | 29 | 37 | | 30 | 28 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 30 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 41 | | 35 | 38 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 41 | | 38 | 31 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 28 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 25 | | 44 | 47 | | 45 | 64 |
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| 97.38% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "were traded" | | 1 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 169 | | matches | | |
| 10.58% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 108 | | ratio | 0.046 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter, damp from the drizzle and smelling faintly of sesame oil—a residue from her Golden Empress delivery—pushed open the door, the bell above jingling a tired welcome." | | 1 | "He’d always been good at that – reading people." | | 2 | "They had even picked out matching amethyst pendants – a symbol of their unshakeable bond." | | 3 | "A flicker of something—recognition?" | | 4 | "Pity?—crossed her face before she masked it with a carefully neutral expression." |
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| 86.93% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 679 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.05154639175257732 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.023564064801178203 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 108 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 108 | | mean | 11.82 | | std | 6.39 | | cv | 0.54 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 64.51% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.42592592592592593 | | totalSentences | 108 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 77.52% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, a voice cut through" | | 1 | "Even her glasses, once a" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "She scanned the room." | | 1 | "She found a stool at" | | 2 | "He didn’t look up from" | | 3 | "He finally glanced up, hazel" | | 4 | "He’d always been good at" | | 5 | "He didn’t smile." | | 6 | "She turned, slow and deliberate," | | 7 | "She’d been impossibly bright, a" | | 8 | "They'd envisioned conquering the world," | | 9 | "They had even picked out" | | 10 | "He'd likely witnessed such reunions" | | 11 | "He’d seen the world change" | | 12 | "She glanced around the bar" | | 13 | "Her gaze drifted to the" | | 14 | "She’d known Elara, truly known" | | 15 | "she said coolly" | | 16 | "She paused, her gaze hardening" | | 17 | "It involved laughter, late-night talks" | | 18 | "She reached into her purse" | | 19 | "It felt like a parting" |
| | ratio | 0.279 | |
| 53.02% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 70 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "The green neon of The" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter, damp from the" | | 2 | "The usual haze of old" | | 3 | "Silas would have the fire" | | 4 | "She scanned the room." | | 5 | "She found a stool at" | | 6 | "He didn’t look up from" | | 7 | "Rory said, leaning against the" | | 8 | "He finally glanced up, hazel" | | 9 | "He’d always been good at" | | 10 | "He didn’t smile." | | 11 | "Rory traced the crescent-shaped scar" | | 12 | "A moment of silence stretched," | | 13 | "The voice held a cadence" | | 14 | "She turned, slow and deliberate," | | 15 | "She’d been impossibly bright, a" | | 16 | "Rory, content to be a" | | 17 | "They'd envisioned conquering the world," | | 18 | "They had even picked out" | | 19 | "Rory still had hers, tucked" |
| | ratio | 0.814 | |
| 58.14% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, she felt like she" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory echoed, the name feeling foreign on her tongue" | | 1 | "Rory said, the understatement hanging heavy in the air" | | 2 | "Elara said, the words lacking any warmth" | | 3 | "She paused, her gaze hardening" | | 4 | "Rory said, knowing that it hadn't been" |
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| 75.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Elara corrected (correct)" | | 1 | "Elara conceded (concede)" | | 2 | "he murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.275 | | leniency | 0.55 | | rawRatio | 0.273 | | effectiveRatio | 0.15 | |