Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY86CMX2CRDYJQSVP91M2N8

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Duration:
16.7s
Cost:
$0.000151
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain hadn’t stopped. It wasn’t a normal rain, not the sort that slicked pavements and smelled of ozone. This rain felt…thick, viscous, like liquid night. It clung to her skin, raising gooseflesh despite the layers of denim and a threadbare wool coat she’d grabbed from Silas’ bar. Aurora pulled the collar higher, the scent of stale beer and sawdust briefly a comforting anchor in the unsettling quiet. She’d been walking for what felt like hours, the Richmond Park swallowing itself around her in a deepening gloom. The ancient oak standing stones, usually stark against the bruised twilight, were blurred, indistinct, as if she were looking through frosted glass. They marked the edge of something, she knew, something not quite right. The Grove. The Heartstone Pendant, cool against her chest beneath the coat, pulsed with a faint, insistent warmth. It wasn’t a dramatic flare, just a subtle thrumming, a rhythmic beat against her ribs. It had been giving her a headache since she’d stepped through the last veil of mist, a dull, persistent ache behind her eyes. She kept it clutched tight, a tangible link to the feeling that she shouldn’t be here, that she’d stumbled into a place best left forgotten. She’d come seeking answers, a desperate, flickering hope clinging to the edges of her grief. Her ex, Evan, had left her with a darkness that seeped into everything, a poison she couldn’t quite wash away. The benefactor – a woman she’d met only in a dream, a whisper of amethyst and regret – had told her about the Grove, about a way to…to understand. To face the shadows he’d cast. The instructions were vague, unsettlingly so, involving a pendant and a place where time bled. Now, standing in this rain-soaked clearing, she understood the vagueness. It wasn’t a place of answers; it was a place of echoes. The air tasted of iron and something else, something floral and sickly sweet, like decaying roses. The wildflowers, normally a riot of color, were muted, drained of their vibrancy, clinging to the moss-covered stones like mournful ghosts. There was no bird song, no rustle of leaves – just the relentless drum of the rain and the insistent pulse of the Heartstone. She took a tentative step forward, the ground soft beneath her boots, strangely yielding. A flicker at the edge of her vision – a movement too quick to register, like a shadow detaching itself from a deeper darkness. She stopped, holding her breath, scanning the periphery of the light. Nothing. “Hello?” Her voice sounded thin and brittle, swallowed by the rain. The sound of her own voice felt alien, an intrusion. The pulsing of the pendant intensified, a sharper, more insistent rhythm. Then she heard it. A sound – a sigh, almost, carried on the rain. Not a human sigh. Deeper, older, laden with an unbearable sadness. She glanced around, rotating slowly, her hand instinctively tightening around the pendant. The standing stones seemed to lean inward, creating a claustrophobic circle. The trees, ancient and gnarled, twisted into grotesque shapes in the dim light, their branches like skeletal fingers reaching out. Another flicker. This time, she saw it – a brief distortion in the air, a shimmering heat haze above the moss. When she focused, it resolved into the vague impression of a figure, tall and indistinct, partially obscured by the rain and the shifting light. It wasn’t solid, not quite. More like a refraction of reality, a glimpse into a fractured reflection. She told herself it was exhaustion, the damp, the unsettling atmosphere. But the cold certainty that she was not alone settled in her stomach, heavy and unwelcome. Then the scent intensified, the decaying roses, now overlaid with a metallic tang, a coppery sweetness that made her stomach churn. The pulse of the Heartstone became a frantic throb, radiating warmth through her coat and into her chest. It felt less like a guide and more like an alarm. A twig snapped behind her. Not a natural snap, not the casual crack of a branch underfoot. This was deliberate, precise. She didn't turn. She couldn't. “You shouldn’t be here,” a voice whispered, so close it felt like a breath against her ear. It wasn't a voice spoken aloud. It seemed to vibrate within her skull, a cold, resonant tone that bypassed her ears entirely. Panic, sharp and cold, seized her. She finally turned, slowly, cautiously. The clearing remained unchanged, the rain still falling, the standing stones still leaning. But the air felt colder, heavier, pregnant with something unseen. The figure was closer now, still indistinct, but the impression of height was clearer. It wasn't human. The limbs were too long, the silhouette too angular. It seemed to shift and waver, as if struggling to maintain a form. She noticed something else. Tiny, iridescent scales shimmering in the rain, catching the faint, inner glow of the Heartstone. "Tell me your name," she managed, her voice a strained whisper. The response wasn't a word, but a feeling – a profound sorrow, a sense of infinite loneliness. “Names are… fleeting. Like memories.” She took a step backward, her hand instinctively reaching for the small, silver carving of a raven she kept hidden beneath her sleeve – a trinket from her grandmother. A futile gesture, she knew, but a necessary one. “Who are you?” The figure tilted its head, a slow, deliberate movement that seemed to defy the laws of physics. “I am the echo of what was lost. The keeper of forgotten things.” Another flicker, closer this time. She could almost feel a cold, damp touch on her hand. The Heartstone pulsed violently, nearly burning through her glove. She squeezed her eyes shut, trying to block out the sensation, trying to force her mind to remain grounded. “What do you want?” “Only to remember,” the voice whispered, a thread of ice in the rain. “To remember the cost.” Suddenly, she saw it. Reflected in the slick surface of a standing stone – not her own face, but a face that was undeniably hers, but twisted, corrupted. A younger version of herself, filled with a brittle, desperate joy, a joy that had been systematically crushed by Evan. She saw herself laughing, carefree, oblivious to the darkness that was gathering around her. Then, a hand reached out from the shadows, a slender, cold hand that brushed against her cheek. She screamed, a choked, primal sound lost in the rain. The Heartstone pulsed one last time, a blinding flash of crimson light, and then…nothing. Only the rain. And the standing stones. And the unsettling, pervasive feeling that she had stepped into a place where the past refused to stay buried.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.556
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1107
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"cautiously"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"cautiously"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1107
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"comforting"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count3
4
word"warmth"
count2
5
word"rhythmic"
count1
6
word"tangible"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count2
8
word"echoes"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count2
10
word"flicker"
count3
11
word"scanning"
count1
12
word"resolved"
count1
13
word"fractured"
count1
14
word"stomach"
count2
15
word"churn"
count1
16
word"throb"
count1
17
word"profound"
count1
18
word"sense of"
count1
19
word"fleeting"
count1
20
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"comforting"
1"gloom"
2"stark"
3"pulsed"
4"warmth"
5"rhythmic"
6"tangible"
7"whisper"
8"echoes"
9"pulse"
10"flicker"
11"scanning"
12"resolved"
13"fractured"
14"stomach"
15"churn"
16"throb"
17"profound"
18"sense of"
19"fleeting"
20"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences85
matches(empty)
75.63% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences85
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1114
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount1071
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.56
worstName"Heartstone"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Richmond1
Park1
Grove2
Heartstone6
Pendant1
Evan2
Suddenly1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Pendant"
2"Evan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"felt like hours, the Richmond Park swal"
1"not quite right"
2"quite wash away"
3"felt like a breath against her ear"
4"as if struggling to maintain a form"
5"movement that seemed to defy the laws of physics"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.898
wordCount1114
matches
0"not her own face, but a face"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences90
matches
0"feeling that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean37.13
std20.76
cv0.559
sampleLengths
068
155
279
385
422
561
650
721
836
943
1062
1127
1250
1326
1439
1534
1639
1719
1811
1922
2038
213
2230
2344
244
2517
2662
2717
2824
2926
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"were blurred"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs159
matches
0"were looking"
1"was gathering"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences90
ratio0.1
matches
0"The benefactor – a woman she’d met only in a dream, a whisper of amethyst and regret – had told her about the Grove, about a way to…to understand."
1"It wasn’t a place of answers; it was a place of echoes."
2"There was no bird song, no rustle of leaves – just the relentless drum of the rain and the insistent pulse of the Heartstone."
3"A flicker at the edge of her vision – a movement too quick to register, like a shadow detaching itself from a deeper darkness."
4"A sound – a sigh, almost, carried on the rain."
5"This time, she saw it – a brief distortion in the air, a shimmering heat haze above the moss."
6"The response wasn't a word, but a feeling – a profound sorrow, a sense of infinite loneliness."
7"She took a step backward, her hand instinctively reaching for the small, silver carving of a raven she kept hidden beneath her sleeve – a trinket from her grandmother."
8"Reflected in the slick surface of a standing stone – not her own face, but a face that was undeniably hers, but twisted, corrupted."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount70
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount0
adverbRatio0
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean12.38
std6.9
cv0.558
sampleLengths
04
115
27
322
420
519
622
712
82
916
1015
1123
1225
1315
1420
1529
166
1715
1810
1912
2016
2121
2224
2314
2424
2511
261
2711
2810
2911
304
3110
324
337
3412
3511
3620
372
3819
3924
405
4112
4211
4316
4421
4518
4611
475
4812
494
49.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.35555555555555557
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners32
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences81
matches
0"Then she heard it."
1"More like a refraction of"
2"Then the scent intensified, the"
3"Suddenly, she saw it."
4"Then, a hand reached out"
5"Only the rain."
ratio0.074
71.85% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences81
matches
0"It wasn’t a normal rain,"
1"It clung to her skin,"
2"She’d been walking for what"
3"They marked the edge of"
4"It wasn’t a dramatic flare,"
5"It had been giving her"
6"She kept it clutched tight,"
7"She’d come seeking answers, a"
8"Her ex, Evan, had left"
9"It wasn’t a place of"
10"She took a tentative step"
11"She stopped, holding her breath,"
12"Her voice sounded thin and"
13"She glanced around, rotating slowly,"
14"It wasn’t solid, not quite."
15"She told herself it was"
16"It felt less like a"
17"She didn't turn."
18"It wasn't a voice spoken"
19"It seemed to vibrate within"
ratio0.37
83.46% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences81
matches
0"The rain hadn’t stopped."
1"It wasn’t a normal rain,"
2"This rain felt…thick, viscous, like"
3"It clung to her skin,"
4"Aurora pulled the collar higher,"
5"She’d been walking for what"
6"The ancient oak standing stones,"
7"They marked the edge of"
8"The Heartstone Pendant, cool against"
9"It wasn’t a dramatic flare,"
10"It had been giving her"
11"She kept it clutched tight,"
12"She’d come seeking answers, a"
13"Her ex, Evan, had left"
14"The benefactor – a woman"
15"The instructions were vague, unsettlingly"
16"It wasn’t a place of"
17"The air tasted of iron"
18"The wildflowers, normally a riot"
19"She took a tentative step"
ratio0.753
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences81
matches
0"To face the shadows he’d"
1"Now, standing in this rain-soaked"
ratio0.025
61.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones, usually stark against the bruised twilight, were blurred, indistinct, as if she were looking through frosted glass."
1"She stopped, holding her breath, scanning the periphery of the light."
2"Then the scent intensified, the decaying roses, now overlaid with a metallic tang, a coppery sweetness that made her stomach churn."
3"Reflected in the slick surface of a standing stone – not her own face, but a face that was undeniably hers, but twisted, corrupted."
4"A younger version of herself, filled with a brittle, desperate joy, a joy that had been systematically crushed by Evan."
5"She saw herself laughing, carefree, oblivious to the darkness that was gathering around her."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she managed, her voice a strained whisper"
1"the voice whispered, a thread of ice in the rain"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"a voice whispered (whisper)"
1"the voice whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.444
77.4709%