Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY86QAZZA9TW55TGPRBGWMA

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Duration:
2m 19s
Cost:
$0.012162
Provider:
Seed

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon of The Raven’s Nest bleeds into the Soho rain, painting the wet pavement a sickly jade as Rory pushes through the door, her delivery bag slung over one shoulder and a crumpled chow mein container clutched in the other. It’s 11 p.m., her last drop of the night for Golden Empress—Yu-Fei had slipped her an extra portion, muttering about her looking too thin lately—and she’s here to grab a glass of water before trundling up the creaky staircase to her flat above the bar. The air hits her first: a mix of aged whiskey, polished oak, and the faint, lingering smoke of a patron’s cigar. Old maps line the walls, their edges frayed where Silas has run his fingers over mission coordinates a hundred times, and black-and-white photographs of shadowed figures (she’s never asked who they are) stare down from the mantel. Silas is behind the bar, his grey-streaked auburn beard glinting in the amber underlight as he wipes a rocks glass with a starched white cloth. His slight left limp is more pronounced tonight—he’d mentioned earlier that the rain worsened his knee, the one shattered in Prague 18 years ago—and he shifts his weight to his right leg every few seconds, his silver signet ring catching the light when he sets the glass down. He nods at her, his hazel eyes softening when he sees the chow mein. “Corner booth’s free,” he says, his voice low, the quiet authority of his MI6 days still threading through the words. “I’ll leave a bottle of water there.” Rory murmurs a thanks, slipping into the booth and peeling back the chow mein lid. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist catches on the plastic lid as she reaches for a pair of chopsticks—she’d gotten it at 10, falling off her father’s bike in Cardiff, Brendan yelling at her for being careless while Jennifer knelt to clean it—and she tugs her sleeve down self-consciously. She’s barely taken a bite when the door swings open again, and a man steps in, his raincoat dripping onto the doormat. He’s in his late 50s, too, with a sharp jaw and a scar slicing through his right eyebrow, and his eyes lock onto Silas immediately. Silas freezes. The cloth slips from his hand, landing with a soft thud on the bar. The man’s boots click across the floor, and he stops at the edge of the bar, his voice rough with disuse. “Silas Blackwood.” Silas clears his throat, picking up the cloth and resuming his wiping, though his hands are steadier than Rory expects. “Marcus Hale.” Rory pauses, her chopsticks hovering over the chow mein. She’d heard Silas mention Marcus once, in a slurred moment after a few too many whiskeys—his partner on the Prague op, the one who’d been shot in the shoulder while Silas dragged him to safety, the one who’d never spoken to him again after the mission was deemed a failure. She’d never thought she’d see him. Marcus leans against the bar, his gaze flicking to the maps on the wall. “I saw the green neon sign from the bus. Couldn’t resist. You always said you’d open a bar if you got out—something with a stupid name and a hidden nook for secrets.” “Changed my mind a few times,” Silas says, pouring a glass of whiskey and sliding it across the bar—neat, Rory notices, the way Silas drinks when he’s nervous. “But here we are. The Raven’s Nest. The nook’s still there, if you’re curious.” Marcus’s gaze snaps to the bookshelf by the mantel, the one Rory knows slides open to reveal the secret room. “That’s the same design we used in Berlin, 20 years ago. Hidden safe house behind a bookshelf, disguised by Le Carré novels.” Silas’s limp carries him to the bookshelf, his fingers brushing the spine of a tattered copy of *Tinker Tailor Soldier Spy*. “Old trick. Useful for storing… things.” He doesn’t say what—contact lists, encrypted phones, the gun he keeps locked in a safe back there—and Rory knows better than to ask. Rory’s chopsticks clatter against the container. She’d forgotten how loud regret could be, how it could fill a room faster than smoke. She thinks of Evan, of the way she’d stayed with him for two years, ignoring Eva’s calls to leave, until he’d grabbed her wrist (the one with the scar) and squeezed so hard she’d thought it would break. She’d fled that night, her Pre-Law textbooks still on her Cardiff flat desk, her father’s voice ringing in her ears—you’re throwing your life away, he’d yelled when she’d told him she was dropping out. She hasn’t spoken to him in a year. Marcus takes a sip of whiskey, his scarred eyebrow furrowing. “I stayed. Got stuck behind a desk, typing up reports about ops I can’t run anymore. My shoulder’s still useless—can’t even lift a suitcase without wincing. MI6 blamed you for Prague, but I know you pushed me out of the way of that bullet. I just… I was angry. Angry that you left without a word, angry that I was stuck picking up the pieces.” Silas’s signet ring glints when he runs his hand through his hair. “I fought enough. I lost my leg, my career, my friend. I didn’t want to lose more. The op was compromised—we had a double agent in our ranks, and I couldn’t track him down without getting more people killed. I retired. Opened the bar. Tried to forget.” Marcus stares at him, his eyes glistening. “I couldn’t forget. I spent 18 years digging into the double agent’s trail, only to find out MI6 covered it up. They didn’t want anyone to know they’d let a traitor slip through their fingers.” He nods at Rory, who’s been watching too closely. “Who’s she?” “Tenant,” Silas says, his voice tightening. “Lives above the bar. Delivers for the Golden Empress down the street. Fled Cardiff last year, from an abusive ex. I gave her a place to stay when no one else would.” Rory tugs her sleeve down again, hiding the scar. She knows Silas hasn’t told Marcus the rest—about the way he’d taught her to pick a lock last month when she’d lost her flat key, about the Welsh cakes Eva had sent her (still unopened on her desk), about the way he’d listened to her cry for an hour after she’d run into Evan at a grocery store last week. Marcus takes another sip of whiskey, his gaze drifting to the black-and-white photographs. “You still have the photos. The one of us outside the Brandenburg Gate, you with your signet ring glinting in the sun.” Silas nods, his hazel eyes softening. “I keep it by the cash register. The one with the gate. Sentimental. Old habits die hard.” They fall silent, the only sounds the rain tapping against the window and the faint hum of the neon sign. Rory finishes her chow mein, wiping her hands on a napkin, and stands up. She pauses by the bar, looking at Silas. “You okay?” she asks, her voice quiet. Silas nods, his hazel eyes sad. “Go on up. I’ll lock the door behind you. And Rory?” He gestures to her wrist. “You don’t have to hide it. The scar’s not a weakness.” Rory’s throat tightens. She’d never said anything about the scar, never explained how Evan had grabbed it, but Silas had noticed. She tugs her sleeve up a fraction, letting the crescent shape glow in the amber light, and murmurs a thanks before climbing the staircase. Her hand brushes the banister (Silas had sanded it for her last week, after she’d tripped on a splinter) and she pauses on the landing, listening to the conversation below. “I missed you,” Marcus says, his voice soft. Silas doesn’t answer right away. Rory hears the clink of a glass, then the sound of Silas shifting his weight to his right leg. “I missed you too. But time’s a tricky thing. It doesn’t erase the past. It just gives you a place to set it down.” Marcus stares at him, his scarred face softening. “I should go. My wife’s waiting for me at home. She doesn’t know I came here.” “Tell her hello for me,” Silas says, his limp carrying him to the door. “And Marcus? Don’t let the regret eat you alive. I did that for 10 years. It’s not worth it.” Rory climbs the rest of the staircase, closing her flat door quietly behind her. She sets the chow mein container on her desk, next to the unopened package of Welsh cakes and a photo of Eva (she hasn’t seen her in a year, either) and looks out the window. The green neon sign glows below, painting the rain jade. She thinks of the hidden back room, of the maps, of the secrets Silas keeps. She thinks of her own secrets, of the Pre-Law textbooks she’d left behind, of Evan’s voice in her head. She runs her finger over her scar again, and for the first time, she doesn’t hide it. She lets it glow in the neon light, a reminder of the past, of the people she’s lost, of the time she’s wasted. And somewhere below, Silas is wiping down the bar, his signet ring catching the light, his regret heavy in his chest but a little lighter than it was an hour ago. He slides the bookshelf open, revealing the secret room, and pulls out a faded photograph of him and Marcus in Prague, their arms slung over each other’s shoulders, smiling like they had the whole world figured out. He sets it on the bar, next to the rocks glass, and stares at it until the rain stops.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.32
leniency0.64
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1643
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
69.57% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1643
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"glinting"
count2
1
word"shattered"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"eyebrow"
count2
4
word"furrowing"
count1
5
word"glistening"
count1
6
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"glinting"
1"shattered"
2"weight"
3"eyebrow"
4"furrowing"
5"glistening"
6"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences79
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen66
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords4
totalWords1621
ratio0.002
matches
0"Tinker Tailor Soldier Spy"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions74
wordCount1215
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity1.89
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Rory14
Golden1
Empress1
Yu1
Fei1
Silas23
Prague3
Cardiff2
Brendan1
Jennifer1
Marcus10
Tailor1
Soldier1
Evan4
Eva3
Pre-Law2
Welsh2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Fei"
4"Silas"
5"Brendan"
6"Jennifer"
7"Marcus"
8"Evan"
9"Eva"
places
0"Soho"
1"Prague"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.553
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1621
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"fled that night"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean57.89
std35.13
cv0.607
sampleLengths
0145
1114
2112
316
423
522
665
746
842
942
1050
11102
1275
1359
1453
1538
1669
1735
1823
1949
2033
2175
228
2348
2424
2533
2693
27127
99.69% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"been shot"
1"was deemed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs192
matches
0"was dropping"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences79
ratio0.101
matches
0"It’s 11 p.m., her last drop of the night for Golden Empress—Yu-Fei had slipped her an extra portion, muttering about her looking too thin lately—and she’s here to grab a glass of water before trundling up the creaky staircase to her flat above the bar."
1"His slight left limp is more pronounced tonight—he’d mentioned earlier that the rain worsened his knee, the one shattered in Prague 18 years ago—and he shifts his weight to his right leg every few seconds, his silver signet ring catching the light when he sets the glass down."
2"The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist catches on the plastic lid as she reaches for a pair of chopsticks—she’d gotten it at 10, falling off her father’s bike in Cardiff, Brendan yelling at her for being careless while Jennifer knelt to clean it—and she tugs her sleeve down self-consciously."
3"She’d heard Silas mention Marcus once, in a slurred moment after a few too many whiskeys—his partner on the Prague op, the one who’d been shot in the shoulder while Silas dragged him to safety, the one who’d never spoken to him again after the mission was deemed a failure."
4"“Changed my mind a few times,” Silas says, pouring a glass of whiskey and sliding it across the bar—neat, Rory notices, the way Silas drinks when he’s nervous."
5"“Old trick. Useful for storing… things.” He doesn’t say what—contact lists, encrypted phones, the gun he keeps locked in a safe back there—and Rory knows better than to ask."
6"She’d fled that night, her Pre-Law textbooks still on her Cardiff flat desk, her father’s voice ringing in her ears—you’re throwing your life away, he’d yelled when she’d told him she was dropping out."
7"She knows Silas hasn’t told Marcus the rest—about the way he’d taught her to pick a lock last month when she’d lost her flat key, about the Welsh cakes Eva had sent her (still unopened on her desk), about the way he’d listened to her cry for an hour after she’d run into Evan at a grocery store last week."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1237
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.02263540824575586
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.0064672594987873885
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences79
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences79
mean20.52
std14.04
cv0.684
sampleLengths
042
145
221
337
425
548
614
720
87
915
1050
1122
1225
132
1414
1521
162
1720
182
199
2050
216
2214
2332
2428
2514
2620
2722
2821
2929
306
3116
3238
3334
348
3510
3665
3712
3847
397
4044
412
426
4332
449
4560
4613
4722
486
4917
36.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.2911392405063291
totalSentences79
uniqueOpeners23
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
32.90% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences62
matches
0"It’s 11 p.m., her last"
1"His slight left limp is"
2"He nods at her, his"
3"he says, his voice low,"
4"She’s barely taken a bite"
5"He’s in his late 50s,"
6"She’d heard Silas mention Marcus"
7"She’d never thought she’d see"
8"He doesn’t say what—contact lists,"
9"She’d forgotten how loud regret"
10"She thinks of Evan, of"
11"She’d fled that night, her"
12"She hasn’t spoken to him"
13"He nods at Rory, who’s"
14"She knows Silas hasn’t told"
15"They fall silent, the only"
16"She pauses by the bar,"
17"she asks, her voice quiet"
18"He gestures to her wrist"
19"She’d never said anything about"
ratio0.468
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences62
matches
0"The green neon of The"
1"It’s 11 p.m., her last"
2"The air hits her first:"
3"Silas is behind the bar,"
4"His slight left limp is"
5"He nods at her, his"
6"he says, his voice low,"
7"Rory murmurs a thanks, slipping"
8"The crescent-shaped scar on her"
9"She’s barely taken a bite"
10"He’s in his late 50s,"
11"The cloth slips from his"
12"The man’s boots click across"
13"Silas clears his throat, picking"
14"Rory pauses, her chopsticks hovering"
15"She’d heard Silas mention Marcus"
16"She’d never thought she’d see"
17"Marcus leans against the bar,"
18"Silas says, pouring a glass"
19"Marcus’s gaze snaps to the"
ratio0.968
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She’d fled that night, her Pre-Law textbooks still on her Cardiff flat desk, her father’s voice ringing in her ears—you’re throwing your life away, he’d yelled …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Silas says, his voice tightening"
1"she asks, her voice quiet"
2"Marcus says, his voice soft"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He doesn’t (do)"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.28
leniency0.56
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.08
75.0525%