Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY87483EB1D9QW88FYGQT3G

Run Details

Duration:
7.7s
Cost:
$0.000350
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of *The Raven’s Nest* flickered weakly against the London drizzle, its glow bleeding into the cobblestones like a bruise. Inside, the air smelled of aged whiskey and the faint, acrid tang of cigarette smoke—though no one had lit a cigarette in years. Aurora Carter, or Rory, as she still thought of herself when she was alone, leaned against the bar, nursing a glass of something amber and bitter. She hadn’t meant to come here. The address had slipped out of her mouth before she could stop it, a reflex from a time when she’d still believed in second chances. She wasn’t supposed to recognize him. But there he was, hunched over a stool three down, his back to her, the faintest limp in his left leg betraying the old injury she’d heard whispers about. Silas Blackwood. *The Spymaster.* The man who’d once been her father’s best friend, the one who’d pulled strings to get her into Oxford on a scholarship, who’d taught her how to pick a lock and lie without flinching. She’d been twelve. She should’ve known better than to think he’d still be here. Rory’s fingers tightened around her glass. The condensation had long since evaporated, leaving her palm damp. She could turn around. Walk away. But the way he moved—slow, deliberate, like he was carrying something heavier than just his own weight—made her stomach twist. She’d seen that gait before. In mirrors. In the way men walked after they’d done things they couldn’t undo. “You’re still here,” she said, her voice quieter than she intended. Silas didn’t turn. “Took you long enough.” The barkeep, a broad-shouldered man with a face like a bulldog, slid a fresh drink toward her without looking up. “You’re late,” he muttered. “He’s been waiting.” Rory exhaled through her nose. “I know.” She finally turned, and when she did, the world seemed to tilt. Silas was older, of course—his auburn hair now streaked with silver, his beard neatly trimmed, his hazel eyes sharper than she remembered. But it wasn’t just the years. It was the way he held himself. Like he was waiting for something to break. “Rory,” he said, his voice rough. He didn’t reach for her, didn’t offer the kind of hug she’d once expected from him. Instead, he gestured to the stool beside him. “Sit.” She hesitated. Then she did. The leather was worn, the wood of the bar scarred from decades of elbows and glasses. She could still smell the old maps and photographs—London, Prague, places she’d never been. Silas’s signet ring glinted on his right hand, the silver cold against his skin. “You look like hell,” he said. She laughed, sharp and brittle. “So do you.” A beat of silence. The hum of the bar filled the gap. “You’re still working for them, aren’t you?” she asked. His jaw tightened. “I retired.” “Bullshit.” He didn’t deny it. Just took a slow sip of his drink, his gaze flicking to the back corner of the room—the hidden bookshelf that led to the secret room, the one she’d never been allowed to see. The one that probably held secrets she didn’t want to know. “What are you doing here, Rory?” he asked. She should’ve lied. Should’ve said she was passing through, that she’d heard the food was good. But the truth had a way of slipping out when you least expected it. “I needed to see you.” His eyebrows lifted. “Why?” Because I thought you’d know what to do with me. Because I thought you’d still care. Because I was stupid enough to think some things didn’t change. She didn’t say any of that. Instead, she said, “Evan.” The name hung between them like a curse. Silas’s fingers tightened around his glass. “I heard.” “He’s dead.” Silas didn’t react. Just stared at his drink. “You didn’t come for that,” he said finally. She knew he was right. She’d come because she’d seen the way he looked at her—like she was a problem he’d never been able to solve. Like she was the one thing he’d failed at. “What happened to you?” she asked. His laugh was dry. “Me? I got old. Got a bar. Got tired of people dying.” “Bullshit.” He studied her, really studied her, the way he used to when she was a kid and she’d done something reckless. The way he could see right through her. “You’re not the same person,” he said. She bristled. “Neither are you.” “No,” he agreed. “But I still know how to play the game.” She wanted to argue. Wanted to tell him she didn’t play games anymore. That she’d burned too many bridges, that she was just trying to survive. But the truth was, she still did. She still played. She just didn’t know how to win. Silas set his glass down. “You’re working for Yu-Fei now.” She blinked. “How do you—?” “London’s small. People talk.” “You talk to people.” He smirked. “Guilty.” She should’ve been offended. But she wasn’t. Because she knew the truth. He wasn’t just talking to people. He was listening. And if he was listening, that meant someone was talking. “What do you want, Rory?” he asked. She should’ve lied. Should’ve said she was just passing through, that she’d heard the food was good. But the truth had a way of slipping out when you least expected it. “I don’t know,” she admitted. Silas studied her for a long moment. Then, slowly, he reached into his jacket and pulled out a folded piece of paper. He slid it across the bar toward her. “Take it,” he said. She didn’t touch it. “What is it?” “A name. An address. A problem.” She looked at it. At the neat, precise handwriting. At the way the ink had bled slightly at the edges, like it had been written in haste. “Why me?” “Because you’re good at this,” he said. “Because you always were.” She wanted to argue. Wanted to tell him she wasn’t good at anything. That she was just a girl who’d run away and never looked back. But the truth was, she was. She was good at this. She just didn’t know if she was good enough. She took the paper. Silas’s gaze was steady. “You’ll find out.” She folded it carefully, tucking it into her pocket. “What happens if I say no?” He didn’t flinch. “Then you walk away. Like you always do.” She should’ve been relieved. Should’ve taken the offer and run. But she didn’t. Because for the first time in years, she felt like she might actually want to stay.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.357
leniency0.714
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.048
81.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1107
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slowly"
2"slightly"
3"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
81.93% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1107
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"weight"
2"stomach"
3"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences114
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences114
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences141
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords5
totalWords1099
ratio0.005
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"The Spymaster."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount945
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.95
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
London2
Carter1
Rory3
Blackwood1
Oxford1
Silas9
Prague1
Should3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
3"Blackwood"
4"Silas"
5"Should"
places
0"London"
1"Oxford"
2"Prague"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like she might actually want to st"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1099
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences141
matches
0"seen that gait"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs70
mean15.7
std18.1
cv1.153
sampleLengths
0103
16
270
311
461
511
67
727
87
955
1031
115
1244
136
148
1512
169
175
181
1949
208
2130
225
234
2427
256
264
2716
282
298
308
3135
326
3316
341
3529
367
375
3812
3926
407
413
427
4310
445
454
464
473
4831
497
89.87% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences114
matches
0"was, hunched"
1"been allowed"
2"been offended"
3"been written"
4"been relieved"
7.69% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs208
matches
0"was carrying"
1"was waiting"
2"was passing"
3"was listening"
4"was listening, was talking"
21.28% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences141
ratio0.043
matches
0"Inside, the air smelled of aged whiskey and the faint, acrid tang of cigarette smoke—though no one had lit a cigarette in years."
1"But the way he moved—slow, deliberate, like he was carrying something heavier than just his own weight—made her stomach twist."
2"Silas was older, of course—his auburn hair now streaked with silver, his beard neatly trimmed, his hazel eyes sharper than she remembered."
3"She could still smell the old maps and photographs—London, Prague, places she’d never been."
4"Just took a slow sip of his drink, his gaze flicking to the back corner of the room—the hidden bookshelf that led to the secret room, the one she’d never been allowed to see."
5"She’d come because she’d seen the way he looked at her—like she was a problem he’d never been able to solve."
94.56% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount952
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.046218487394957986
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.01050420168067227
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences141
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences141
mean7.79
std6.6
cv0.846
sampleLengths
023
123
226
36
425
56
629
72
836
93
1011
116
1210
134
142
1520
165
172
1812
1911
203
214
2220
234
243
255
262
2712
2822
296
307
318
326
3316
348
351
362
373
3816
3914
4014
416
425
433
444
458
469
473
482
491
42.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.2695035460992908
totalSentences141
uniqueOpeners38
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences96
matches
0"Instead, he gestured to the"
1"Then she did."
2"Just took a slow sip"
3"Instead, she said,"
4"Just stared at his drink."
5"Then, slowly, he reached into"
ratio0.063
53.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences96
matches
0"She hadn’t meant to come"
1"She wasn’t supposed to recognize"
2"She’d been twelve."
3"She should’ve known better than"
4"She could turn around."
5"She’d seen that gait before."
6"she said, her voice quieter"
7"She finally turned, and when"
8"It was the way he"
9"he said, his voice rough"
10"He didn’t reach for her,"
11"She could still smell the"
12"She laughed, sharp and brittle."
13"His jaw tightened."
14"He didn’t deny it."
15"She should’ve lied."
16"His eyebrows lifted."
17"She didn’t say any of"
18"he said finally"
19"She knew he was right."
ratio0.417
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences96
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Aurora Carter, or Rory, as"
2"She hadn’t meant to come"
3"The address had slipped out"
4"She wasn’t supposed to recognize"
5"*The Spymaster.* The man who’d"
6"She’d been twelve."
7"She should’ve known better than"
8"Rory’s fingers tightened around her"
9"The condensation had long since"
10"She could turn around."
11"She’d seen that gait before."
12"she said, her voice quieter"
13"Silas didn’t turn."
14"The barkeep, a broad-shouldered man"
15"Rory exhaled through her nose."
16"She finally turned, and when"
17"Silas was older, of course—his"
18"It was the way he"
19"he said, his voice rough"
ratio0.667
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount5
totalSentences96
matches
0"Because I thought you’d know"
1"Because I thought you’d still"
2"Because I was stupid enough"
3"Because she knew the truth."
4"Because for the first time"
ratio0.052
99.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"*The Spymaster.* The man who’d once been her father’s best friend, the one who’d pulled strings to get her into Oxford on a scholarship, who’d taught her how to…"
1"Just took a slow sip of his drink, his gaze flicking to the back corner of the room—the hidden bookshelf that led to the secret room, the one she’d never been a…"
58.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, her voice quieter than she intended"
1"he said, his voice rough"
78.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he muttered (mutter)"
1"he agreed (agree)"
2"she admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.357
leniency0.714
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.143
86.9757%