Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY87MJBECD37J5HD5Z5Z82M

Run Details

Duration:
58.1s
Cost:
$0.000275
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest bled a sickly light onto the rain-slicked pavement of Greek Street. Aurora Carter hunched deeper into her worn parka, wishing she’d opted for the umbrella. Delivering General Tso’s chicken at this hour was rarely glamorous, and tonight felt particularly bleak. She pushed open the door, a small bell tinkling overhead, and the familiar scent of stale beer, polished wood, and something faintly metallic – Silas’ peculiar blend of cleaning solutions – washed over her. The bar was its usual dim self. Maps of forgotten empires and black-and-white photographs of austere men lined the walls, a silent gallery observing the ebb and flow of the few patrons scattered at the tables. Silas, behind the bar, looked up from polishing a glass. His grey-streaked auburn hair was impeccably neat, his beard trimmed with the precise dedication of a man who has nothing left to lose. He noticed her immediately. “Rory,” he said, his voice a low rumble that hadn’t changed a bit. "Delivery tonight?" Aurora offered a tired smile. “Yu-Fei’s keeps me busy. Enough to pay the rent above, at least.” She shrugged out of her parka, revealing a faded band t-shirt beneath. "Quiet night?" "Quiet enough," Silas said, setting the glass down. He gestured to a stool at the bar. "Have a seat. Let me get you something. Coffee? Something stronger?" She settled onto the stool, the leather giving slightly under her weight. “Coffee would be good, thanks.” A figure stood near the back, hunched over a glass of amber liquid. Something about her posture, the way she held herself, stopped Aurora in her tracks. She didn’t immediately recognize her. Too polished, too…contained. But as the woman turned, a hesitant sip of her drink, Aurora’s breath hitched. It was Elara. Elara Thorne. Her Elara, from their university days. The girl who’d practically vibrated with chaotic energy, who’d dyed her hair every shade of the rainbow, who’d argued passionately about poetry and politics until the early hours. This woman, however, was a study in muted elegance. Her hair was a sleek, dark bob, framing a face made sharp and severe by expensive makeup. She wore a tailored charcoal grey suit that probably cost more than Aurora’s entire wardrobe. Elara didn’t seem to notice her yet, her gaze fixed on something beyond the confines of the bar. Aurora felt a strange paralysis, a sudden inability to breathe. Fifteen years. Fifteen years since they’d last spoken, since they’d shared a bottle of cheap wine and whispered dreams of conquering the world. Silas, ever observant, followed her gaze. He placed a mug of steaming coffee in front of her. "You know Elara Thorne?" he asked quietly, his voice low enough not to carry across the room. Aurora nodded, barely able to find her voice. “We went to university together.” Silas raised an eyebrow, a flicker of something unreadable in his hazel eyes. "A long time ago." “A very long time,” she agreed, her gaze still fixed on Elara. Elara finally looked up, her eyes sweeping over the room. They landed on Aurora. For a moment, her expression was blank, a professional’s mask. Then, a flicker of recognition, a brief flash of the girl Aurora remembered. Her lips curved into a tight, controlled smile. “Rory? Is that really you?” The sound of her voice, a bit deeper, a bit smoother than Aurora remembered, sent a jolt through her. Aurora managed a shaky smile in return. “Elara. Wow. You…you look…” She trailed off, searching for the right word. “Different?” Elara supplied, her smile widening just a fraction. She walked toward the bar, her heels clicking on the wooden floor. Every movement was precise, deliberate. “Time does that to you, doesn't it?” “It does,” Aurora said, feeling increasingly awkward. Elara signaled to Silas, who immediately appeared at her side. “Whiskey, neat,” she instructed, her voice cool and assured. “So,” Elara said, turning back to Aurora. “What have you been up to? Last I heard, you were… pursuing law?” Aurora grimaced. “That didn’t last. Ended up delivering Chinese food.” She immediately regretted the self-deprecation, but the words were out. Elara’s expression didn’t shift. “Interesting.” She paused, taking a slow sip of her whiskey. "I’m with Sterling & Croft now. Corporate law." Sterling & Croft. One of the most prestigious law firms in London. Aurora could practically feel the weight of the difference between their lives pressing down on her. “That’s… impressive,” she managed. “It pays the bills,” Elara said, her tone almost dismissive. “And it’s… stable.” There was a sharp edge to her voice, a hint of something beneath the polished surface. Aurora wondered what had driven Elara to trade poetry and passionate debate for corporate stability. "You seem to have done alright for yourself," Aurora said, attempting a light tone, but feeling the words come out strained. Elara tilted her head, studying her. The brief flash of recognition was gone, replaced by a careful neutrality. “One does what one must.” She took another sip of whiskey. “And you? Still living above Silas’ bar?” The question, subtly barbed, stung more than Aurora would have liked. She felt her cheeks flush. “It's convenient. And cheap.” She added, a little too defensively. "Convenient," Elara echoed, the word hanging in the air between them. A long silence stretched, punctuated by the clinking of ice and the murmur of voices from other tables. "Remember that trip we took to Brighton?" Aurora asked, desperate to break the tension. "The one where we got caught in that torrential rain and had to share a tiny, overpriced hotel room?" A ghost of a smile touched Elara's lips. “How could I forget? You were convinced the seagulls were plotting against us.” Aurora laughed, a genuine, warm sound that felt alien in the charged atmosphere. “They were probably right.” The moment of shared memory, brief as it was, seemed to soften Elara's features. But it was quickly replaced by a shadow of something deeper, something melancholic. “Things change, Rory,” Elara said quietly, her gaze dropping to her glass. “People change. Sometimes, for the better. Sometimes…” She didn’t finish the sentence. She didn’t need to. Aurora understood. There was a regret buried beneath the designer suit and the carefully constructed facade. A regret for the girl who had once been, for the dreams that had been abandoned, for the choices that had led her down this path. Aurora felt a pang of something she couldn’t quite name. Pity? Envy? Perhaps a little bit of both. She thought of Evan, her abusive ex, and the desperate flight to London. She thought of the safety she'd carved out for herself, the quiet anonymity of delivering food. Was it a life of fulfillment? No. But it was hers. She had built it, brick by painstaking brick, free from the wreckage of the past. “I’m glad you’re doing well, Elara,” Aurora said, her voice sincere. Elara lifted her head, her expression unreadable. “And I you, Rory. Though I suspect your definition of ‘well’ and mine might be considerably different.” She finished her whiskey in one smooth swallow. “I should be going. A meeting across town.” She glanced at Silas. “Keep the change.” She turned and walked back towards the door, her heels clicking a sharp rhythm against the floorboards. As she reached the doorway, she paused, looking back at Aurora one last time. The fleeting smile was gone, replaced by a cool, professional mask. “Take care, Rory,” she said, her voice devoid of warmth. Then, she was gone. The bell above the door tinkled softly, a fragile sound swallowed by the London rain. Aurora stared at the empty doorway, her coffee growing cold in her hand. Silas watched her, his hazel eyes filled with a quiet understanding. “She seemed…a bit sad,” he observed quietly. Aurora shrugged, attempting to dismiss the unsettling encounter. “We all have our regrets, Silas.” She looked around the dimly-lit bar, the maps and photographs seeming to press in on her. “Some just cost more than others.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
46.15% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"he asked quietly [quietly]"
1"Elara said quietly [quietly]"
2"he observed quietly [quietly]"
3"She looked around [around]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.591
leniency1
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.154
73.86% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1339
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"passionately"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"quickly"
count1
5
adverb"carefully"
count1
6
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"passionately"
2"very"
3"really"
4"quickly"
5"carefully"
6"softly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Elara"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.32% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1339
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"vibrated"
count1
3
word"chaotic"
count1
4
word"eyebrow"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count2
6
word"unreadable"
count2
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"charged"
count1
11
word"constructed"
count1
12
word"facade"
count1
13
word"pang"
count1
14
word"fleeting"
count1
15
word"warmth"
count1
16
word"encounter"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"weight"
2"vibrated"
3"chaotic"
4"eyebrow"
5"flicker"
6"unreadable"
7"echoed"
8"silence"
9"tension"
10"charged"
11"constructed"
12"facade"
13"pang"
14"fleeting"
15"warmth"
16"encounter"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
1
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"sent a jolt through"
1"a flicker of recognition"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences108
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences126
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1335
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions65
wordCount1081
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity2.41
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Greek1
Street1
Carter1
General1
Tso1
Aurora26
Silas7
Elara18
Thorne1
Sterling1
Croft1
London3
Evan1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Tso"
4"Aurora"
5"Silas"
6"Elara"
7"Evan"
places
0"Greek"
1"Street"
2"London"
globalScore0.297
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite name"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1335
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean29.02
std19.22
cv0.662
sampleLengths
082
173
215
331
427
517
649
73
877
951
1034
1113
1217
1312
1445
155
1638
1733
187
1919
2020
2120
2222
2328
244
2513
2631
2721
2836
2926
3029
3133
3221
3317
3427
3519
3651
3773
3811
3947
4042
4110
4219
4324
447
4536
89.02% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences108
matches
0"was gone"
1"was, seemed"
2"been abandoned"
3"was gone"
4"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs183
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences126
ratio0.008
matches
0"She pushed open the door, a small bell tinkling overhead, and the familiar scent of stale beer, polished wood, and something faintly metallic – Silas’ peculiar blend of cleaning solutions – washed over her."
90.53% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount535
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.04672897196261682
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.024299065420560748
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences126
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences126
mean10.6
std6.37
cv0.601
sampleLengths
019
114
215
334
47
529
610
723
84
913
102
115
1224
132
148
158
1611
1712
185
1913
2014
215
223
2314
243
252
266
2728
289
2917
3015
3118
3210
332
3421
356
3611
3717
388
395
4013
414
4212
4310
444
4510
4613
478
485
4919
68.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4365079365079365
totalSentences126
uniqueOpeners55
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences100
matches
0"Too polished, too…contained."
1"Then, a flicker of recognition,"
2"Perhaps a little bit of"
3"Then, she was gone."
ratio0.04
76.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences100
matches
0"She pushed open the door,"
1"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
2"He noticed her immediately."
3"he said, his voice a"
4"She shrugged out of her"
5"He gestured to a stool"
6"She settled onto the stool,"
7"She didn’t immediately recognize her."
8"It was Elara."
9"Her Elara, from their university"
10"Her hair was a sleek,"
11"She wore a tailored charcoal"
12"He placed a mug of"
13"he asked quietly, his voice"
14"she agreed, her gaze still"
15"They landed on Aurora."
16"Her lips curved into a"
17"She trailed off, searching for"
18"She walked toward the bar,"
19"she instructed, her voice cool"
ratio0.36
35.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences100
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Aurora Carter hunched deeper into"
2"She pushed open the door,"
3"The bar was its usual"
4"Maps of forgotten empires and"
5"Silas, behind the bar, looked"
6"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
7"He noticed her immediately."
8"he said, his voice a"
9"Aurora offered a tired smile."
10"She shrugged out of her"
11"Silas said, setting the glass"
12"He gestured to a stool"
13"She settled onto the stool,"
14"A figure stood near the"
15"Something about her posture, the"
16"She didn’t immediately recognize her."
17"It was Elara."
18"Her Elara, from their university"
19"The girl who’d practically vibrated"
ratio0.85
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"His grey-streaked auburn hair was impeccably neat, his beard trimmed with the precise dedication of a man who has nothing left to lose."
1"The girl who’d practically vibrated with chaotic energy, who’d dyed her hair every shade of the rainbow, who’d argued passionately about poetry and politics unt…"
2"Aurora laughed, a genuine, warm sound that felt alien in the charged atmosphere."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"he asked quietly, his voice low enough not to carry across the room"
1"she agreed, her gaze still fixed on Elara"
2"Elara supplied, her smile widening just a fraction"
3"she instructed, her voice cool and assured"
4"Elara said, her tone almost dismissive"
5"Elara echoed, the word hanging in the air between them"
6"Aurora asked, desperate to break the tension"
7"Elara said quietly, her gaze dropping to her glass"
8"Aurora said, her voice sincere"
9"she said, her voice devoid of warmth"
81.82% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she agreed (agree)"
1"She added (add)"
2"he observed quietly (observe)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.318
leniency0.636
rawRatio0.214
effectiveRatio0.136
78.1684%