Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY883VWTWYA090Y6X80E4EG

Run Details

Duration:
16.6s
Cost:
$0.000593
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in Richmond Park was thick with the damp weight of an autumn that refused to let go. Rory Carter pulled her jacket tighter around herself, the collar turned up against the chill that seeped into her bones. She shouldn’t have come here tonight. Not alone. Not after what she’d seen in the bar earlier—Silas’ face pale as he’d slid the map across the counter, his fingers trembling just enough to make the parchment ripple. *"You’re sure you want to do this?"* he’d asked, voice low, like the words themselves might draw something unwanted. She’d nodded, of course. She always nodded when the alternative was sitting in her flat above the bar, staring at the Heartstone pendant tucked beneath her pillow, its faint glow pulsing like a second heartbeat. The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled oaks twisting upward like skeletal fingers against the bruised twilight sky. The Grove. Isolde’s Grove. Rory had read enough to know the legends—hidden doorways, time that bent like wet paper, the occasional fool who wandered in and never came out. But she wasn’t a fool. She was here for a reason. The pendant had been warm all day, its crimson core throbbing against her skin like a warning. Or a promise. She stepped between the stones. The world didn’t rip apart. There was no flash of light, no disorienting lurch—just a soft *shift*, like the air itself had exhaled. One moment she was in the park, the next she was standing in a clearing bathed in an eerie, golden light. Wildflowers bloomed in riotous colors, their petals too perfect, too *luminous*, as if backlit by something just beyond sight. The air smelled of honey and damp earth, thick with the scent of something sweet and rotting beneath it. Rory’s breath fogged in front of her, but the temperature hadn’t dropped. If anything, it was warmer here. Too warm. She turned slowly, her boots crunching on petals that shouldn’t have been so brittle underfoot. The Grove stretched wider than she’d expected—no path, no sign of the park’s usual trails. Just open space, swallowed by the encroaching dark of the trees. The sky above was the same bruised purple as outside, but the stars here were wrong. Too many. Too *close*. She could almost reach out and pluck them. A twig snapped. Rory froze. The sound hadn’t come from the trees. It had come from *behind* her. She turned, heart hammering, but there was nothing there. Just the flowers, the trees, the unnatural stillness. Her fingers twitched toward the pendant beneath her shirt, the one thing she hadn’t been able to leave behind. The warmth of it seeped through the fabric, steady and unnerving. A compass. A warning. She wasn’t sure which. Another sound. This time, it was a whisper—so faint she almost missed it. A voice, or the ghost of one, brushing against the edge of her hearing like a finger dragged across a windowpane. *"You’re not supposed to be here."* Rory’s breath hitched. The words weren’t in English. Or if they were, they’d been twisted into something else entirely, the syllables stretching and snapping like dry kindling. She spun, scanning the trees, but the Grove remained empty. Too empty. Then she saw it. A figure. Not a person. Not exactly. Tall, too tall, its limbs elongated like a marionette’s, its movements jerky and unnatural. It stood at the edge of the clearing, half-hidden by the trunk of an oak, its skin the color of bark, its eyes—if they were eyes—glowing faintly, like embers in a dying fire. It didn’t move toward her. It didn’t need to. The way it *looked* at her made her skin crawl, made the hairs on the back of her neck stand on end. Rory’s pulse roared in her ears. She should run. She should *run*. But her feet were rooted to the spot, her body locked in place by something older than fear. The thing tilted its head. A sound escaped it—something between a sigh and a laugh, wet and guttural. *"Lost, little thief."* Rory’s breath came in short, sharp gasps. *Thief?* She hadn’t stolen anything. Had she? Then she remembered the pendant. The way it had pulsed when she’d first touched it, the way it had *called* to her. The unknown benefactor who’d pressed it into her palm in the alley behind the bar, their gloved fingers cold, their voice a rasp. *"For when you’re ready."* She hadn’t been ready then. She wasn’t ready now. The figure took a step forward. The ground beneath Rory’s boots *shifted*, the petals beneath her feet wilting into dust as if something unseen was breathing on them. The air grew heavier, pressing down on her like a physical weight. *"You took what wasn’t yours,"* the thing said, its voice dripping with something like amusement. *"And now it wants you back."* Rory’s fingers closed around the pendant, yanking it free from her shirt. The moment it broke the fabric, the glow inside it flared, bright and sudden, casting jagged shadows across the Grove. The thing hissed, recoiling as if burned, its ember-eyes narrowing. *"No,"* Rory whispered. She didn’t know what she was doing. She didn’t know if she could fight whatever this was. But she knew one thing: she wasn’t leaving without answers. She turned and ran. The Grove twisted around her. Paths that hadn’t been there before snaked between the trees, the standing stones now distant and shifting, as if the land itself was laughing at her. The air hummed with a low, droning sound, like a swarm of insects trapped beneath glass. She didn’t dare look back. A branch lashed out, whipping past her cheek. She ducked, stumbling, and when she looked up, the trees had closed in. The clearing was gone. In its place was a narrow corridor of trunks, their bark blackened and peeling, their branches knotted like arthritic fingers. The pendant burned against her palm, its heat searing through her skin. *"You can’t hide,"* the voice slithered from the dark. *"The Grove always takes what it’s owed."* Rory’s breath came in ragged bursts. She could feel it now—the thing wasn’t just behind her. It was *everywhere*, pressing in from all sides, its presence a living weight. She skidded around a bend, her boot catching on something soft. She looked down. A hand. Pale. Too pale. The fingers were curled, the nails blackened, as if the skin had been left too long in the dark. Rory’s stomach lurched. She didn’t want to know whose hand it was. She didn’t want to know what had happened here. A sound ahead—a rustle, a shift in the undergrowth. Rory’s blood turned to ice. She backed up, her heel catching on something else. This time, she didn’t look down. She ran. The trees thinned. Ahead, she could see the standing stones again, their outlines sharp against the twilight. She was almost there. Almost out. Then the ground gave way. Rory screamed as her ankle twisted, her body pitching forward into the dark. She hit something soft—moss, maybe, or rotting leaves—and rolled, scrambling to her feet just as the thing lunged. It moved faster than she thought possible, its limbs a blur of motion. Rory barely had time to raise her arms before it crashed into her, sending her sprawling. The pendant flew from her grip, skittering across the damp earth. The thing loomed over her, its breath hot and foul, its voice a chorus of whispers. *"Give it back."* Rory’s fingers scrabbled in the dirt. The pendant was just out of reach, its glow flickering weakly. She couldn’t lose it. She *wouldn’t*. She rolled, twisting away from the thing’s grasp, and lunged for the pendant. Her fingers closed around it just as the Grove *shuddered*. A gust of wind howled through the trees, so strong it nearly knocked her off her feet. The standing stones groaned, their roots tearing free of the earth. The thing shrieked, its form unraveling like smoke in the wind. Rory didn’t wait to see more. She ran. The moment she stepped through the stones, the world snapped back into place. The park was quiet. Too quiet. The air was cold, the stars distant and indifferent. Rory collapsed to her knees, her hands trembling as she clutched the pendant to her chest. It was still warm, still pulsing, but the glow had dimmed to a faint, steady light. She didn’t know how long she stayed there, gasping like a landed fish, her body wracked with adrenaline. When she finally looked up, the park was empty. No figures lurking in the shadows. No whispers on the wind. Just her. And the knowledge that she would never forget the way the Grove had felt. The way it had *hungered*. Rory stood slowly, her legs unsteady. She needed to get back to the flat. She needed to tell Silas what had happened. She needed— A sound. Not from the trees this time. From *behind* her. Rory turned. A woman stood there. Tall, her dark hair streaked with silver, her eyes the same bright blue as Rory’s own. She wore a long coat that seemed to drink in the light, her gloved fingers resting on the hilt of a knife at her belt. *"You shouldn’t have come back,"* the woman said, her voice smooth, almost amused. *"But I suppose I should have known you’d be stubborn."* Rory’s breath caught. *"Who—?"* The woman smiled. *"Isolde. Though I doubt you’ll remember that name by morning."* Rory’s blood turned to ice. Because the woman was already moving, and the last thing Rory saw before the world went dark was the flash of the knife—and the way the Heartstone pendant went cold against her skin.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1634
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.86% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1634
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"weight"
count3
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"loomed"
count2
3
word"lurch"
count1
4
word"perfect"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count1
10
word"searing"
count1
11
word"could feel"
count1
12
word"stomach"
count1
13
word"lurched"
count1
14
word"unraveling"
count1
15
word"the last thing"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"chill"
2"loomed"
3"lurch"
4"perfect"
5"warmth"
6"whisper"
7"scanning"
8"pulse"
9"pulsed"
10"searing"
11"could feel"
12"stomach"
13"lurched"
14"unraveling"
15"the last thing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences164
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences164
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences172
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
95.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans28
markdownWords85
totalWords1619
ratio0.053
matches
0"\"You’re sure you want to do this?\""
1"shift"
2"luminous"
3"close"
4"behind"
5"\"You’re not supposed to be here.\""
6"looked"
7"run"
8"\"Lost, little thief.\""
9"Thief?"
10"called"
11"\"For when you’re ready.\""
12"shifted"
13"\"You took what wasn’t yours,\""
14"\"And now it wants you back.\""
15"\"No,\""
16"\"You can’t hide,\""
17"\"The Grove always takes what it’s owed.\""
18"everywhere"
19"\"Give it back.\""
20"wouldn’t"
21"shuddered"
22"hungered"
23"behind"
24"\"You shouldn’t have come back,\""
25"\"But I suppose I should have known you’d be stubborn.\""
26"\"Who—?\""
27"\"Isolde. Though I doubt you’ll remember that name by morning.\""
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1528
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.57
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Carter1
Heartstone2
Grove8
English1
Rory24
Silas1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Grove"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Heartstone"
3"English"
globalScore0.715
windowScore0.667
73.47% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences98
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"something between a sigh and a laugh, wet and g"
1"something like amusement"
2"coat that seemed to drink in the light, her gloved fingers resting on the hilt of a knife at her belt"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1619
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences172
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean29.44
std27.4
cv0.931
sampleLengths
0130
178
25
3102
469
53
615
755
834
96
1039
114
122
1383
1430
1521
1614
1758
1840
1921
2042
213
2227
234
2452
2557
2616
2743
282
2943
3029
312
3223
335
3431
3556
363
3723
3823
3945
402
4160
4238
432
4419
4524
462
479
482
4945
96.71% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences164
matches
0"been twisted"
1"were rooted"
2"was gone"
3"were curled"
55.07% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs276
matches
0"was sitting"
1"was standing"
2"was breathing"
3"was doing"
4"wasn’t leaving"
5"was laughing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences172
ratio0.07
matches
0"Not after what she’d seen in the bar earlier—Silas’ face pale as he’d slid the map across the counter, his fingers trembling just enough to make the parchment ripple."
1"Rory had read enough to know the legends—hidden doorways, time that bent like wet paper, the occasional fool who wandered in and never came out."
2"There was no flash of light, no disorienting lurch—just a soft *shift*, like the air itself had exhaled."
3"The Grove stretched wider than she’d expected—no path, no sign of the park’s usual trails."
4"This time, it was a whisper—so faint she almost missed it."
5"It stood at the edge of the clearing, half-hidden by the trunk of an oak, its skin the color of bark, its eyes—if they were eyes—glowing faintly, like embers in a dying fire."
6"A sound escaped it—something between a sigh and a laugh, wet and guttural."
7"She could feel it now—the thing wasn’t just behind her."
8"A sound ahead—a rustle, a shift in the undergrowth."
9"She hit something soft—moss, maybe, or rotting leaves—and rolled, scrambling to her feet just as the thing lunged."
10"She needed—"
11"Because the woman was already moving, and the last thing Rory saw before the world went dark was the flash of the knife—and the way the Heartstone pendant went cold against her skin."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount101
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount1
adverbRatio0.009900990099009901
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences172
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences172
mean9.41
std7.06
cv0.751
sampleLengths
019
120
26
32
429
519
64
731
818
92
102
1125
125
136
1417
153
165
175
1818
1921
2019
2119
2212
236
242
2515
2615
2711
2816
292
302
318
323
332
347
356
369
378
3819
3911
402
412
424
432
4411
4521
466
473
485
4919
36.05% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats24
diversityRatio0.21511627906976744
totalSentences172
uniqueOpeners37
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences137
matches
0"Just open space, swallowed by"
1"Just the flowers, the trees,"
2"Then she saw it."
3"Then she remembered the pendant."
4"Then the ground gave way."
ratio0.036
94.45% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences137
matches
0"She shouldn’t have come here"
1"he’d asked, voice low, like"
2"She’d nodded, of course."
3"She always nodded when the"
4"She was here for a"
5"She stepped between the stones."
6"She turned slowly, her boots"
7"She could almost reach out"
8"It had come from *behind*"
9"She turned, heart hammering, but"
10"Her fingers twitched toward the"
11"She wasn’t sure which."
12"She spun, scanning the trees,"
13"It stood at the edge"
14"It didn’t move toward her."
15"It didn’t need to."
16"She should run."
17"She should *run*."
18"She hadn’t been ready then"
19"She wasn’t ready now."
ratio0.314
54.89% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount111
totalSentences137
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park"
1"Rory Carter pulled her jacket"
2"She shouldn’t have come here"
3"he’d asked, voice low, like"
4"She’d nodded, of course."
5"She always nodded when the"
6"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
7"Rory had read enough to"
8"She was here for a"
9"The pendant had been warm"
10"She stepped between the stones."
11"The world didn’t rip apart."
12"Wildflowers bloomed in riotous colors,"
13"The air smelled of honey"
14"Rory’s breath fogged in front"
15"She turned slowly, her boots"
16"The Grove stretched wider than"
17"The sky above was the"
18"She could almost reach out"
19"A twig snapped."
ratio0.81
72.99% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences137
matches
0"If anything, it was warmer"
1"Because the woman was already"
ratio0.015
56.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences66
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Rory Carter pulled her jacket tighter around herself, the collar turned up against the chill that seeped into her bones."
1"Rory had read enough to know the legends—hidden doorways, time that bent like wet paper, the occasional fool who wandered in and never came out."
2"Wildflowers bloomed in riotous colors, their petals too perfect, too *luminous*, as if backlit by something just beyond sight."
3"She turned slowly, her boots crunching on petals that shouldn’t have been so brittle underfoot."
4"The unknown benefactor who’d pressed it into her palm in the alley behind the bar, their gloved fingers cold, their voice a rasp."
5"The ground beneath Rory’s boots *shifted*, the petals beneath her feet wilting into dust as if something unseen was breathing on them."
6"The thing hissed, recoiling as if burned, its ember-eyes narrowing."
7"Paths that hadn’t been there before snaked between the trees, the standing stones now distant and shifting, as if the land itself was laughing at her."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she’d, his fingers trembling just enough to make the parchment ripple"
1"he’d, voice low, like the words themselves might draw something unwanted"
2"the thing said, its voice dripping with something like amusement"
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he’d (would)"
1"Rory whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.286
78.1484%