"Her left wrist itched, and she rubbed the crescent scar there—old, from falling out of her dad’s oak tree in Cardiff when she was seven, the day he’d missed her school play to prep a barrister’s brief."
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"The itch wasn’t from the cold; it was the pendant."
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"The thumbnail-sized gem pulsed faintly, warmth seeping through her fingertips—stronger than it had been all week, when it had only stirred during late-night deliveries to empty London terraces."
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"She hopped on her bike, the frost on the pavement crunching under her tires, and rode to the Richmond Park tube stop, her mind wandering to Eva—her childhood friend who’d begged her to flee Evan, the abusive ex she’d left in Cardiff six months prior."
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"Eva was out of town for work, or Rory would have called her; but the pendant’s pulse was a steady drum now, and she couldn’t wait."
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"But when she rounded a bend and spotted the oak standing stones—their bark gnarled, their branches clawing at the moon—her breath caught."
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"No frost, no wilt—just perfect, unseasonable life."
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"The standing stones’ bark wasn’t just gnarled—it was etched with tiny, twisted carvings she’d missed in the dark: shapes that looked like wings, but broken; eyes that seemed to follow her when she glanced away."
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"A bee buzzed past her ear—another wrongness, because bees didn’t fly in January—and she swatted at it, her boot crushing a clover patch."
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"She frowned, rubbing her left wrist scar harder—this was the same tight, anxious tingle she’d felt when Evan had hidden her phone so she couldn’t call her mom."
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"Time moves differently, a voice whispered in her head—though she couldn’t tell if it was her own logic or something the grove was planting there."
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"She stood, scanning the clearing, and realized her bike keys were gone—she’d had them in her pocket when she entered, but now they were missing."
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"A child’s laugh cut through the stillness—high, tinkling, but with no source."
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"When she blinked, it was gone—only the poppies, their petals now turned toward her, as if they’d been watching the shadow too."
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"The hum grew louder, vibrating in her teeth, and she could feel something watching her now—something that wasn’t a fox, wasn’t a child, wasn’t anything from Earth."
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"A faint crimson glow flickered there—fainter than the pendant, but unmistakably there."
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"She knelt to look at it, and she could hear a faint gurgling sound coming from it—like water, but thicker, darker."
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"The shadow emerged from the center of the grove—taller than she’d thought, its form shifting, no face, no limbs, just a mass of darkness that seemed to absorb the light around it."
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"Another shadow flickered at the edge of her vision—smaller, quicker, and she turned, her pendant’s glow sweeping over it."
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"The smaller shadow vanished, and she realized the standing stones had shifted again—there was a crack between two of them, a path she hadn’t seen before, leading back to the cold, bare woods of Richmond Park."
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"She pulled out her phone—its screen flickered to life, showing 3:00 AM."
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"It was pulsing faintly again, the warmth gone, but the glow still there—faint, but steady."
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"The ride was quiet, but she couldn’t shake the feeling that the grove hadn’t let her go—not really."
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"The unknown benefactor had given her the pendant for a reason, and she knew she’d have to go back—if not for herself, then for the child’s laugh she’d heard, the one that had sounded so much like her own seven-year-old self, crying after falling from her dad’s oak tree."
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"Rory’s cool-headedness kicked in, but she couldn’t ignore the way the pendant’s glow had deepened that evening, as if it was pulling her toward something she co…"
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"She hopped on her bike, the frost on the pavement crunching under her tires, and rode to the Richmond Park tube stop, her mind wandering to Eva—her childhood fr…"
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"But when she rounded a bend and spotted the oak standing stones—their bark gnarled, their branches clawing at the moon—her breath caught."
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"She patted her pockets, panicking a little, and took a step back, tripping over a standing stone’s root."
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"The warmth flared, and she looked up to see bluebells winding through the poppies, their scent mixing with the jasmine until it was sickening."
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"The hum grew louder, vibrating in her teeth, and she could feel something watching her now—something that wasn’t a fox, wasn’t a child, wasn’t anything from Ear…"
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"She walked toward the center of the grove, the wildflowers seeming to part for her until she stopped, and then close back in behind her, their petals brushing h…"
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"The pendant’s pulse spiked, and she pulled her hand back, as if she’d been burned."
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"A shadow stretched across the crack, and she looked up to see the tall shadow again, this time closer, its form shifting into something that looked like a hand …"
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"The words made her chest tight, and she looked out her window at the moon, which was half-full."