Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8C8PSMDQ1BK8Z5F79WTJX

Run Details

Duration:
1m 7s
Cost:
$0.000349
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon of The Raven’s Nest bled onto the slick pavement outside. Rain hadn’t fallen for hours, but the air still smelled of wet stone and exhaust. Rory wiped condensation from the glass as she walked in, the scent of stale beer and something vaguely floral – Silas’s attempt at air freshener, she suspected – instantly familiar. Tuesdays were slow. She’d promised Silas an extra shift, covering for Ben who’d called in sick with a cough that sounded suspiciously like a hangover. The bar was mostly empty. A couple huddled in a booth near the back, murmuring into pint glasses, and Old Man Hemlock was nursing a whiskey at the far end of the bar, a permanent fixture. Silas was behind the counter, polishing glasses with a methodical, almost meditative, rhythm. His silver signet ring gleamed under the low lights. “Rory,” he said without looking up, a hint of a smile in his voice. “Right on time. Slow night. Good for you, bad for business.” “Just how you like it,” she replied, taking a seat on the stool she’d claimed as hers over the past few months. “Don’t flatter me. Just means I get to stare at the maps and remember better days.” He finally looked up, his hazel eyes assessing. “Anything interesting happen on your route today? Besides avoiding rogue pigeons?” “Just the usual chaos. Mrs. Gable nearly gave me a heart attack yelling about the sesame seeds on her General Tso’s chicken being ‘too enthusiastic’. Yu-Fei’s going to run her out of the restaurant eventually.” Silas chuckled, a low rumble in his chest. “Yu-Fei’s a force of nature. You’re lucky she doesn’t make you deliver with a side of dragon breath.” He slid a pint glass across the polished wood. “Guinness?” “You remembered.” “I remember things.” He paused, his gaze drifting to the door. “Although, sometimes, I wish I didn’t.” The bell above the door chimed. Rory glanced over her shoulder, and her breath hitched. It was him. Evan. He hadn’t changed in the way people usually did – a little softer around the edges, a few more lines around the eyes. He’d changed fundamentally. He was broader, thicker, with a shaved head and a network of jagged scars tracing his knuckles. His eyes, once a warm brown, were flat, almost grey. He wore a dark, expensive-looking suit, sharply tailored. He didn’t look like the Evan she remembered, the Evan she’d loved, the Evan she’d run from. He looked…dangerous. He scanned the room, his gaze lingering on Rory for a beat too long, before he moved towards the bar. Her hand tightened around the pint glass. She hadn’t seen him in five years. Five years of meticulously constructed distance. Five years of nightmares. Silas, seemingly oblivious to the storm brewing inside her, merely nodded at Evan as he approached. “Evening,” Evan said, his voice deeper, raspier than she remembered. “Silas. Still running this…establishment?” “Still running it,” Silas confirmed, pouring himself a small measure of scotch. He didn’t offer Evan a drink. “Haven’t seen you in these parts for a while, Mr. Hayes.” “Changed my name,” Evan corrected, the words clipped. “Call me Thorne. Business requires it.” “Business. Of course.” Silas’s tone was carefully neutral. Rory knew that tone. It was the tone he used when sizing people up, cataloging their weaknesses. “Rory,” Evan said, turning his grey eyes back to her. A flicker of something – recognition? amusement? – crossed his face. “Fancy seeing you here.” She forced a smile, her lips feeling stiff and unnatural. “Evan. Or…Thorne. Small world.” “Is it?” He leaned against the bar, close enough that she could smell his cologne – something sharp and metallic. "I heard you were delivering takeout. A long way from pre-law, isn’t it?” “People change,” she said, her voice tight. “Indeed.” He studied her for a moment, his gaze slowly taking in her black hair, the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist – a detail he’d always known, always remembered. “You haven’t changed much. Still…resilient.” Resilient? Was that a compliment? Or a calculated observation? “And you?” she asked, unable to stop herself. “You’ve…changed.” He chuckled, a harsh, brittle sound. “Let's just say I've adapted. This city…it has a way of remaking people.” He let his gaze linger on her scarred wrist again. “Some more than others.” Silas cleared his throat. “Thorne, if you’ll excuse us, Rory and I were just catching up.” “Of course,” Evan said, without taking his eyes off Rory. “Wouldn’t want to interrupt.” He turned back to Silas. “I’m looking for someone. A contact of yours, perhaps? Goes by the name of…Bellweather.” Silas’s hand stilled, his eyes narrowing. “I don’t know anyone by that name.” “Don’t lie to me, Silas.” Evan’s voice dropped, losing all pretense of politeness. “We both know you maintain a network. Bellweather used to be…associated with you. I need to find him.” “And why would I tell you that?” Silas’s voice was low and dangerous. “Because I have information. Information that might be of…mutual interest. Regarding a certain operation in Prague.” Silas’s face tightened, and Rory realized with a jolt that Evan – Thorne – wasn’t just a changed man, he was connected to Silas’s past. The past Silas rarely spoke of. The silence stretched, thick and heavy. Rory felt like she was trapped between them, a fragile thing caught in a power struggle. She wanted to disappear, to rewind time, to not have walked into The Raven’s Nest tonight. “I still don’t know anyone by that name,” Silas said finally, his voice carefully controlled. Evan pressed a card onto the bar. It was black, minimalist, with just a single embossed symbol – a coiled serpent. “You’ll find a number. Call me when you’re ready to talk.” He turned back to Rory, a cruel smile playing on his lips. “It was…nice to see you, Rory. Though I suspect our paths won’t cross again.” He turned and walked towards the door, his broad shoulders filling the space. The bell chimed again as he left, cutting through the silence. Rory stared at the black card, feeling sick. Silas snatched the card and crumpled it in his fist. The colour had drained from his face. “Where have you been, Rory? Why haven’t you told me about him?” “Told you what?” she asked, her voice barely a whisper. “He’s been looking for you. For both of us. I sensed it for months, a shadow at the edge of my network. I just didn't realize…it was him.” He looked at her, his eyes filled with a mixture of concern and something else – regret. "You were in danger.” “It was five years ago, Silas. I thought…I thought I’d put it all behind me.” “You don’t just ‘put behind you’ someone like that, Rory. Some scars run deeper than skin.” He reached across the bar and took her hand, his grip surprisingly gentle. “He came looking for Bellweather, but he was really looking for you. He always was.” Rory squeezed his hand, tears welling up in her bright blue eyes. The scent of stale beer and something floral suddenly felt suffocating. She hadn't escaped. She hadn't moved on. He’d found her, and with him, the ghosts of a past she'd desperately tried to bury had risen with him. And she knew, with a sickening certainty, that this was just the beginning.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
77.55% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"He turned back [back]"
1"Silas said finally [finally]"
2"He turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.469
leniency0.939
rawRatio0.13
effectiveRatio0.122
75.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1218
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count2
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"carefully"
2"slowly"
3"really"
4"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1218
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"methodical"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"constructed"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"calculated"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"methodical"
2"tracing"
3"scanned"
4"constructed"
5"flicker"
6"calculated"
7"silence"
8"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences82
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1226
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount823
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.94
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Silas16
Ben1
Old1
Man1
Hemlock1
Evan13
Rory10
Resilient1
Thorne1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Ben"
4"Evan"
5"Rory"
6"Thorne"
places(empty)
globalScore0.528
windowScore0.167
69.35% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"Silas, seemingly oblivious to the st"
1"felt like she was trapped between them"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1226
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences106
matches
0"knew that tone"
1"Was that a"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean27.24
std18.99
cv0.697
sampleLengths
083
158
225
322
435
535
636
72
817
915
103
111
1280
1320
1424
1516
1614
1729
1814
1925
2025
2114
2233
237
2436
259
269
2733
2816
2933
3013
3131
3213
3347
3438
3515
3658
3724
388
3929
4010
4149
4215
4344
4463
96.71% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences82
matches
0"was connected"
1"was trapped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs147
matches
0"was nursing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences106
ratio0.085
matches
0"Rory wiped condensation from the glass as she walked in, the scent of stale beer and something vaguely floral – Silas’s attempt at air freshener, she suspected – instantly familiar."
1"He hadn’t changed in the way people usually did – a little softer around the edges, a few more lines around the eyes."
2"A flicker of something – recognition?"
3"– crossed his face."
4"“Is it?” He leaned against the bar, close enough that she could smell his cologne – something sharp and metallic."
5"“Indeed.” He studied her for a moment, his gaze slowly taking in her black hair, the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist – a detail he’d always known, always remembered."
6"“Because I have information. Information that might be of…mutual interest. Regarding a certain operation in Prague.” Silas’s face tightened, and Rory realized with a jolt that Evan – Thorne – wasn’t just a changed man, he was connected to Silas’s past."
7"It was black, minimalist, with just a single embossed symbol – a coiled serpent."
8"“He’s been looking for you. For both of us. I sensed it for months, a shadow at the edge of my network. I just didn't realize…it was him.” He looked at her, his eyes filled with a mixture of concern and something else – regret."
81.12% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount814
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.05036855036855037
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.02457002457002457
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean11.57
std8.55
cv0.739
sampleLengths
013
115
230
33
422
55
631
713
89
914
1011
1122
1224
1311
1435
158
1627
171
182
1911
206
216
229
233
241
2523
263
2717
2810
298
3017
312
3220
337
347
356
364
3716
3810
394
4012
416
4211
438
446
458
464
4713
4810
496
66.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.44339622641509435
totalSentences106
uniqueOpeners47
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
30.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences78
matches
0"She’d promised Silas an extra"
1"His silver signet ring gleamed"
2"he said without looking up,"
3"she replied, taking a seat"
4"He finally looked up, his"
5"He slid a pint glass"
6"He paused, his gaze drifting"
7"It was him."
8"He hadn’t changed in the"
9"He’d changed fundamentally."
10"He was broader, thicker, with"
11"His eyes, once a warm"
12"He wore a dark, expensive-looking"
13"He didn’t look like the"
14"He scanned the room, his"
15"Her hand tightened around the"
16"She hadn’t seen him in"
17"He didn’t offer Evan a"
18"It was the tone he"
19"She forced a smile, her"
ratio0.474
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences78
matches
0"The green neon of The"
1"Rain hadn’t fallen for hours,"
2"Rory wiped condensation from the"
3"Tuesdays were slow."
4"She’d promised Silas an extra"
5"The bar was mostly empty."
6"A couple huddled in a"
7"Silas was behind the counter,"
8"His silver signet ring gleamed"
9"he said without looking up,"
10"she replied, taking a seat"
11"He finally looked up, his"
12"Silas chuckled, a low rumble"
13"He slid a pint glass"
14"He paused, his gaze drifting"
15"The bell above the door"
16"Rory glanced over her shoulder,"
17"It was him."
18"He hadn’t changed in the"
19"He’d changed fundamentally."
ratio0.923
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She’d promised Silas an extra shift, covering for Ben who’d called in sick with a cough that sounded suspiciously like a hangover."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount11
matches
0"he said, a hint of a smile in his voice"
1"He paused, his gaze drifting to the door"
2"Evan said, his voice deeper, raspier than she remembered"
3"Evan corrected, the words clipped"
4"she said, her voice tight"
5"she asked, unable to stop herself"
6"Evan said, without taking his eyes off Rory"
7"Silas said finally, his voice carefully controlled"
8"He turned back, a cruel smile playing on his lips"
9"she asked, her voice barely a whisper"
10"He reached, his grip surprisingly gentle"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Silas confirmed (confirm)"
1"Evan corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.224
leniency0.449
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.082
72.4108%