Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8CQW2VVKPG51DA9E6JF0Q

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Duration:
30.7s
Cost:
$0.001334
Provider:
Seed

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The bell above the door of The Raven's Nest jingles, sharp and tinny in the dim hush of closing time. Rory Carter pauses, her rag hovering over the oak bar, and squints. It’s not the wind—this part of Soho is too tight, too cluttered with brick and neon to let much through. She dabs at a ring of condensation left by a half-finished pint, the wood grain drinking in the water like a parched mouth. The clock on the wall behind the bar ticks. Ten minutes past midnight. Silas will be in the back, checking the safe, his left leg creaking as he shifts. She’d asked him once if he was breaking it on purpose. He’d laughed, a low, rumbling sound, and said, *Knees have memories*. “Rory.” The voice is smaller than she remembers, rougher at the edges. She looks up. Eva. Rory’s hand tightens around the rag. Not Eva. *Not her*. Not after five years. Not since the day she left Cardiff, email in hand: *Come to London. Please. Trust me*. Then silence. Radio silence. A mutual friend, Lila, had mentioned seeing her in Dublin last summer, sleek and silver-haired, laughing with a man in a tailored suit. *Eva’s going into law*, Lila had said. *She’s killing it, apparently*. Killing it. As if Rory hadn’t spent the last two years delivering takeout curry to dreadlocked students and harried bankers, her hands chapped from carrying boxes, her phone screen cracked from a fall down a dimly lit stairwell (Alvaro, the pizza guy, had helped her up, but she’d kissed him quick, desperate, and he’d left without a word). Eva stands in the doorway, half-in shadow. The neon sign flickers, casting green strips across her face. Her hair is dark, but lighter at the roots, like she’s been dyeing it new colors every season. She’s wearing a coat Rory doesn’t recognize—black, expensive, the kind that brushes the backs of her knees. Her nails are painted red, chipped at the tips. Her eyes, once so warm, are wide, guarded. She’s 25, same as Rory, but you’d never know it. Her shoulders are straight, her posture perfect, like she’s still sitting through lectures in Oxford’s stone halls. “Hey,” Eva says again. “You… you don’t remember me, do you?” Rory’s throat feels like it’s filled with sand. *Eva*. The girl who’d climbed trees with her in Roath Park, who’d stolen redcurrants from Mrs. Hughes’ garden and gotten them both chased by a cocker spaniel. The girl who’d held her while Evan’s voice rose, who’d handed her a bus ticket and said, *I’ll handle it*. *I’ll handle it*. As if handling it didn’t mean leaving Rory behind, in a city that had started to rot. “Evan’s dead,” Rory says. It comes out as a growl. She wipes the bar so hard the rag frays. “You knew that, right? He died last year. Liver failure. Did you go to the funeral?” Eva flinches. The coat slips off one shoulder, revealing a necklace—small, silver, a raven. Rory’s chest tightens. *Silas’ raven*. She’s seen it in the back room, framed in a black frame. “I… I heard. Lila told me. I’m sorry. I should’ve… I didn’t know how to…” “How to what?” Rory slams the rag down. It hits the bar with a *thud*. “How to call? How to say *I’m sorry I left you*? How to say *I watched him hit me and I hated myself for not stopping you*?” Eva’s eyes fill. “I was scared,” she whispers. “Christ, Rory, I was terrified. He found out I’d told you about the lease, about the way he was siphoning money from his parents’ account. He said if I ever talked to you again, he’d ruin me. I had a scholarship, Rory. A full ride. If he ruined me, I’d never be anything. And you—you were just… you were so *angry*. You said he was the only one who’d ever liked you, that you’d never survive without him. I couldn’t…” “I didn’t mean it,” Rory says, softer now. The anger drains out of her, leaving a hollow ache. She sinks onto a stool, her legs protesting. The floorboards creak under her weight. “I was so *sick* of him. But you—you should’ve fought. You should’ve *believed* I was worth saving.” Eva crosses the room, slow, like she’s afraid Rory will flinch. She sits on the stool next to her, keeping a careful distance. “I fought,” she says. “God, I fought. I went to the police. To social services. They said there was no proof. Evan has a way of making people think he’s just a *charming* man. A *good* man. And you… you’d come around. You’d text me, *He didn’t mean it, he loves me* and I’d delete the messages because if I kept them, I’d have to face the truth: that I’d abandoned you. That I’d let him win.” Rory looks at her. At the bracelet on her wrist—thick, silver, a dragon. Evan’s grandmother had given them both bracelets when they were teenagers, said they’d protect them. Rory’s is thin, coiled around her left wrist, the metal worn smooth except for a small crescent-shaped scar. The accident. A kitchen knife. Evan had laughed when she’d cried, said, *You’re so dramatic, Rory*. She’d grabbed a knife to defend herself, missed, nicked her wrist. The paramedic had said it was a clean cut, that she was lucky. *You’re so lucky*, Evan had cooed, pressing a cold cloth to the wound. *Let me take care of you*. “You never called,” she says. Eva shakes her head. “I couldn’t. I’d see your name on my phone and I’d… I’d panic. I thought if I ignored you, it would be easier. That I could forget the way you looked when I left Cardiff, the way you looked like I’d stolen the last piece of her. But I can’t forget it. I never have.” Rory turns her wrist, the scar catching the light. “I changed,” she says. “A lot. You… you changed too. But not the way I thought. I thought you’d be someone I could lean on. Someone who remembers what it’s like to be *small*.” Eva reaches out, pauses, then covers Rory’s hand with hers. It’s warm, calloused. “I remember,” she says. “I remember you crying over that stupid teddy bear you had, the one with one ear. I remember you fighting off that boy from school who called you a ‘welsh weed’. I remember when your dad left, and you said you’d never love anyone again, and I promised I’d never let anything happen to you. I broke that promise. I’m so sorry.” The bar is quiet. Silas’ low voice drifts through the door to the back room. “Rory, you got a minute? Found—” He stops when he sees them. “Oh. My. Christ.” Rory pulls her hand away, wiping it on her apron. Silas props himself in the doorway, his auburn beard flecked with grey, his hazel eyes sharp. He’s wearing his usual black shirt, sleeves rolled up to his elbows, his signet ring glinting on his right hand. His left leg is turned outward, the limp evident even in the dim light. “Si,” Rory says, jaw tight. “You’re supposed to be checking the safe.” “I was until I heard yelling,” he says, ambulating over to the bar. He nods at Eva. “Hello, Miss…?” “Eva Carter,” she says, standing. “From Cardiff. You remember me? Rory talked about you all the time.” Silas studies her, his gaze sharp as a blade. “Rory did,” he says. “Said you were the only one who could keep her out of trouble. Which, I gather, isn’t true anymore.” Eva laughs, a small, bitter sound. “I’m the one who got her into trouble, actually. If it weren’t for me, she’d still be in Cardiff, waiting for Evan to call. Waiting for him to *love* her.” Silas sits on the stool across from them, his knee creaking. “Evan was a cancer,” he says. “You didn’t just get him into trouble, Eva. You *saved* her from him. That’s what this place is for, you know. Saving people. From themselves. From other people. From the kinds of men who think they own a woman’s wrist, or her heart, or her *mind*.” He nods at Rory’s scar. “I saw it when she first started working here. 21, scared shitless, but still trying to smile. Said it was from a kitchen knife. I didn’t press. Some secrets are better kept.” Rory flinches. “You knew,” she says. Silas shrugs. “I’ve seen worse. You think I came to London for a *bar*? I came for the stories. For the ones that aren’t told. For the ones that *need* to be heard. And your story… it’s one of survival. That’s a good thing, Rory. Don’t let anyone tell you it’s not.” Eva reaches into her bag, pulls out a photo. It’s faded, taken in Roath Park, summer of 2015. Rory is 19, grinning, a redcurrant stuck to her cheek. Eva is 19, too, posing like a model, one arm slung around Rory’s shoulders. They’re both wearing the dragon bracelets. “I found this in my apartment in Dublin,” she says. “I keep it in my wallet. I look at it when I’m scared. When I’m… when I need to remember why I do what I do.” She pauses. “I’m taking a job at a law firm in London. Starting next month. I know it’s not much, but… I want to help people. The way you helped Rory. The way I should’ve helped her, back then.” Rory takes the photo. Her fingers brush Eva’s. “You still owe me a beer,” she says. “And a story. About Oxford. About the dog you said bit you. About *everything*.” Eva smiles. “A million stories. But first—” She pauses, glancing at the clock. “I should go. The last tube leaves in 20 minutes. But I’ll call you. Tomorrow. Maybe. If you want.” Rory nods. “I want. But if you don’t… I’ll track you down. I know where you live. In London, at least.” Eva stands, slinging her coat back on. “Deal.” She pauses at the door, looking back. “Thank you, Rory. For… for not hating me.” Rory looks at the photo, then up. “Hate takes too much energy. I’m saving mine for the next time Evan’s *dead*.” Eva laughs, and the bell jingles again. She’s gone. Silas sighs, shifting on his stool. “So. Family, huh?” Rory leans forward, setting the photo down. “Yeah. Family. Even if she’s an idiot.” Silas smiles. “You’re an idiot too. But that’s why I like you.” He nods at the photo. “Keep it. The past is messy, but it’s ours. All of ours.” Rory picks up the rag, starting to wipe the bar again. The clock ticks. Somewhere, a car backfires. The green neon sign flickers. She thinks about Evan, about the way his voice used to sound, low and honeyed. She thinks about Eva, about the redcurrants and the dragon bracelet and the way she said *I’m sorry*. She thinks about Silas, about the way he’d never asked questions, but had always known. Time has weight. It’s a thing you carry, like a backpack full of stones. But sometimes, you meet someone—an old friend, a mentor, a stranger—and they help you put some of them down. The bell jingles again. Rory looks up. It’s a delivery—the Golden Empress’ late shift. She stands, grabbing her jacket. “Si?” she says, over her shoulder. “Yeah?” “Next time you want to check the safe, lock the door. Old habits.” He laughs. “You think I’ve forgotten how to lock a door?” “With *regret*, Si. With *regret*.” She walks out into the night, the scar on her wrist warm against her skin. The streetlamps glow, casting long shadows. Somewhere, a dog barks. She smiles. Maybe, she thinks, time can be unwritten. Maybe, it’s never too late to start over. The green neon sign flickers. And for a moment, it feels like home.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva says again [again]"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.411
leniency0.821
rawRatio0.043
effectiveRatio0.036
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2003
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
85.02% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2003
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"perfect"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"glinting"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"perfect"
2"weight"
3"glinting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences142
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences142
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences178
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen82
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans32
markdownWords84
totalWords1990
ratio0.042
matches
0"Knees have memories"
1"Not her"
2"Come to London. Please. Trust me"
3"Eva’s going into law"
4"She’s killing it, apparently"
5"Eva"
6"I’ll handle it"
7"I’ll handle it"
8"Silas’ raven"
9"thud"
10"I’m sorry I left you"
11"I watched him hit me and I hated myself for not stopping you"
12"angry"
13"sick"
14"believed"
15"charming"
16"good"
17"He didn’t mean it, he loves me"
18"You’re so dramatic, Rory"
19"You’re so lucky"
20"Let me take care of you"
21"small"
22"love"
23"saved"
24"mind"
25"bar"
26"need"
27"everything"
28"dead"
29"I’m sorry"
30"regret"
31"regret"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions37
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions79
wordCount1116
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity2.6
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Soho1
Eva20
Cardiff1
London1
Lila2
Dublin1
Rory29
Alvaro1
Oxford1
Roath2
Park2
Mrs1
Evan5
Silas8
Golden1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Eva"
3"Lila"
4"Rory"
5"Alvaro"
6"Mrs"
7"Evan"
8"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
3"Dublin"
4"Oxford"
5"Roath"
6"Park"
globalScore0.201
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"As if handling it didn’t mean leaving Rory behind, in a city that had started to rot"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.503
wordCount1990
matches
0"not much, but… I want to help people"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences178
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean34.91
std33.31
cv0.954
sampleLengths
0126
11
214
31
4126
596
611
775
835
946
1042
1188
1249
13100
14105
155
1659
1743
1879
1930
2060
2112
2219
2317
2432
2536
26100
276
2852
2948
3075
3130
3232
3321
348
3515
3621
379
389
3914
4029
4123
4248
4333
444
4515
466
471
4813
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences142
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs229
matches
0"was breaking"
46.55% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences178
ratio0.034
matches
0"It’s not the wind—this part of Soho is too tight, too cluttered with brick and neon to let much through."
1"She’s wearing a coat Rory doesn’t recognize—black, expensive, the kind that brushes the backs of her knees."
2"The coat slips off one shoulder, revealing a necklace—small, silver, a raven."
3"At the bracelet on her wrist—thick, silver, a dragon."
4"But sometimes, you meet someone—an old friend, a mentor, a stranger—and they help you put some of them down."
5"It’s a delivery—the Golden Empress’ late shift."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1041
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar."
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.023054755043227664
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005763688760806916
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences178
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences178
mean11.18
std12.23
cv1.094
sampleLengths
020
112
220
323
49
54
616
711
811
91
1011
113
121
136
142
152
164
1713
181
192
202
212
2223
237
244
252
2656
277
2810
2918
3017
319
328
3310
3417
354
367
378
381
3915
4011
4120
423
4317
444
456
469
4716
482
4912
44.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.2640449438202247
totalSentences178
uniqueOpeners47
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences111
matches
0"Somewhere, a car backfires."
1"Somewhere, a dog barks."
2"Maybe, she thinks, time can"
3"Maybe, it’s never too late"
ratio0.036
65.05% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences111
matches
0"It’s not the wind—this part"
1"She dabs at a ring"
2"She’d asked him once if"
3"He’d laughed, a low, rumbling"
4"She looks up."
5"*She’s killing it, apparently*."
6"Her hair is dark, but"
7"She’s wearing a coat Rory"
8"Her nails are painted red,"
9"Her eyes, once so warm,"
10"She’s 25, same as Rory,"
11"Her shoulders are straight, her"
12"*I’ll handle it*."
13"It comes out as a"
14"She wipes the bar so"
15"She’s seen it in the"
16"It hits the bar with"
17"She sinks onto a stool,"
18"She sits on the stool"
19"She’d grabbed a knife to"
ratio0.387
18.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences111
matches
0"The bell above the door"
1"Rory Carter pauses, her rag"
2"It’s not the wind—this part"
3"She dabs at a ring"
4"The clock on the wall"
5"Silas will be in the"
6"She’d asked him once if"
7"He’d laughed, a low, rumbling"
8"The voice is smaller than"
9"She looks up."
10"Rory’s hand tightens around the"
11"A mutual friend, Lila, had"
12"*Eva’s going into law*, Lila"
13"*She’s killing it, apparently*."
14"Eva stands in the doorway,"
15"The neon sign flickers, casting"
16"Her hair is dark, but"
17"She’s wearing a coat Rory"
18"Her nails are painted red,"
19"Her eyes, once so warm,"
ratio0.883
90.09% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences111
matches
0"As if Rory hadn’t spent"
1"As if handling it didn’t"
ratio0.018
96.27% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"As if Rory hadn’t spent the last two years delivering takeout curry to dreadlocked students and harried bankers, her hands chapped from carrying boxes, her phon…"
1"She’s wearing a coat Rory doesn’t recognize—black, expensive, the kind that brushes the backs of her knees."
2"The girl who’d held her while Evan’s voice rose, who’d handed her a bus ticket and said, *I’ll handle it*."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory says, jaw tight"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispers (whisper)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.304
leniency0.607
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.036
87.9973%