Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8D8THYCBNPE7804FS6G9H

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

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The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest bled a sickly light onto the rain-slicked pavement of Soho. Rory pulled her collar higher, the damp chill seeping through her thin jacket. Another delivery for the Golden Empress, another hurried drop-off, another few pounds closer to rent. She hated these late shifts. The city felt different at night, sharper, more predatory. She pushed open the heavy oak door, the familiar scent of stale beer, polished wood, and something indefinably older washing over her. Silas would be at the bar, no doubt, nursing a whiskey and watching the world through eyes that had seen far too much. She nodded to the bartender, a young man with a shaved head and multiple piercings, and headed towards the familiar counter. Then she saw her. Across the room, bathed in the amber glow of a table lamp, sat a woman she hadn’t seen in fifteen years. Elara. Rory stopped dead, the delivery bag bumping against her leg. Fifteen years. It felt like a lifetime. Elara had been the sun in their small, Cardiff world. Bright, laughing, effortlessly cool. Rory, the quiet observer, content to orbit around her. They’d sworn they’d conquer London together, become artists, writers, something dazzling. Life, as it often did, had other plans. Elara hadn’t aged badly. Not at all. She was…transformed. The girl with the wild, auburn curls and paint-stained fingers was gone. In her place sat a woman sculpted from ice and diamonds. Her hair was a sleek, dark bob, pulled back from a face that was all sharp angles and expensive bone structure. She wore a tailored black suit, the kind that cost more than Rory’s entire wardrobe. A single, flawless emerald ring glittered on her left hand. She was talking to a man in a suit even more expensive than hers, his face obscured by shadow. Rory felt a sudden, inexplicable pang of…loss. Not just for the girl she’d known, but for the girl she’d imagined they’d both become. Silas, ever observant, caught her eye from behind the bar. He raised an eyebrow, a silent question. Rory nodded almost imperceptibly, then forced herself to move forward. “Elara?” she said, her voice sounding thin and reedy even to her own ears. The woman turned, her eyes – the same vibrant green Rory remembered – narrowed slightly. Recognition flickered across her face, quickly replaced by a carefully constructed mask of polite indifference. “Rory? Rory Carter? My goodness. I hardly recognized you.” The accent was different, too. Sharper, more precise, with a hint of something foreign. “It’s been a while,” Rory managed, feeling awkward and out of place in her worn jeans and delivery jacket. “Indeed,” Elara said, her gaze sweeping over Rory’s clothes with a subtle, almost imperceptible disdain. “What brings you to The Raven’s Nest?” “Delivery,” Rory said, gesturing to the bag. “Golden Empress. You?” Elara’s lips curved into a brittle smile. “Business. Always business.” She gestured to the man beside her. “This is Mr. Volkov. He’s a…client.” Mr. Volkov offered a curt nod, his expression unreadable. Rory didn’t linger on him. She focused on Elara, searching for a flicker of the girl she remembered. “You look…well,” Rory stammered, hating how clumsy she sounded. “Different.” Elara laughed, a short, humorless sound. “Different is an understatement, I think. Life has a way of changing things, doesn’t it?” “It does,” Rory agreed, remembering Evan, the abusive ex she’d escaped, the years spent drifting, the quiet desperation of scraping by. “So, what have you been up to?” Elara asked, her voice carefully neutral. Rory hesitated. “Not much. Delivery work. Living above Silas’ bar.” She gestured vaguely. “You know.” Elara’s eyes flickered to Silas, then back to Rory. “Above Silas’ bar. How…quaint.” The word dripped with a condescension that stung. Rory felt a familiar defensiveness rising within her. “It’s a roof over my head,” she said, her voice sharper than she intended. Elara raised an eyebrow. “Of course. Well, I’m involved in…international finance now. Acquisitions, mergers, that sort of thing.” “Sounds…complicated,” Rory said, picturing spreadsheets and boardrooms and a world she could never understand. “It is,” Elara agreed. “But rewarding. Very rewarding.” She glanced at her watch, a thick gold band encrusted with diamonds. “I’m afraid I have a meeting. It was…pleasant seeing you, Rory.” “You too, Elara,” Rory said, the words tasting like ash in her mouth. As Elara rose to leave, Mr. Volkov placed a hand on her arm, his grip surprisingly firm. They disappeared into the London night, swallowed by the rain and the shadows. Rory turned back to the bar, feeling a strange hollowness in her chest. Silas was watching her, his hazel eyes filled with a quiet understanding. “Well?” he asked, polishing a glass with a practiced hand. “She’s…changed,” Rory said, stating the obvious. “People do,” Silas said, his voice low. “Especially when they chase different stars.” “Did she ever…did she ever do any of the things we talked about?” Rory asked, the question hanging in the air. The art, the writing, the dazzling life they’d dreamed of. Silas paused, his gaze fixed on a point beyond Rory’s shoulder. “She had a talent, yes. But talent alone isn’t enough. It needs…direction. And sometimes, the direction people choose isn’t the one you expect.” Rory nodded, the unspoken regret settling heavily on her. She’d chosen a different path, a quieter one. A path that had kept her safe, but also…small. “She seemed…distant,” Rory said, more to herself than to Silas. “She’s built walls, Rory,” Silas said, his voice soft. “High walls. It’s a good way to protect yourself. A lonely way, but effective.” He slid a glass of whiskey across the bar. “On the house.” Rory took a sip, the burn a welcome distraction. She looked around the bar, at the old maps and black-and-white photographs, at the familiar faces of the regulars. This was her world. A world of quiet routines and small comforts. A world far removed from the glittering life Elara now inhabited. “Do you ever…regret anything, Silas?” Rory asked, surprising herself with the question. Silas’s face darkened slightly, a flicker of pain crossing his features. He looked down at the silver signet ring on his right hand, a silent testament to a past he rarely spoke of. “Regret is a luxury I can’t afford, Rory,” he said, his voice tight. “But I’ve learned that sometimes, the choices you don’t make are just as important as the ones you do.” He paused, then looked at her, his eyes filled with a weary wisdom. “Don’t waste your time wondering what might have been, Rory. Focus on what is.” Rory finished her whiskey, the taste bitter on her tongue. She looked back towards the door, half expecting to see Elara reappear, to offer some explanation, some apology. But the rain continued to fall, washing away the last traces of her presence. She picked up the delivery bag, the weight of it familiar and comforting. Another delivery. Another few pounds closer to rent. Another night in her quiet, ordinary world. A world that, despite its limitations, was undeniably hers. And maybe, just maybe, that was enough.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.605
leniency1
rawRatio0.043
effectiveRatio0.043
74.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1189
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count2
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"quickly"
2"carefully"
3"very"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Elara"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
11.69% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1189
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count5
2
word"structure"
count1
3
word"flawless"
count1
4
word"pang"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count2
6
word"flickered"
count2
7
word"constructed"
count1
8
word"unreadable"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count2
10
word"unspoken"
count1
11
word"testament"
count1
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"comforting"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"familiar"
2"structure"
3"flawless"
4"pang"
5"eyebrow"
6"flickered"
7"constructed"
8"unreadable"
9"flicker"
10"unspoken"
11"testament"
12"weight"
13"comforting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences98
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences112
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1186
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions62
wordCount954
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity2.83
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Golden1
Empress1
Cardiff1
London2
Rory27
Sharper1
Elara14
Mr2
Evan1
Silas9
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Elara"
4"Mr"
5"Evan"
6"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore0.085
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.843
wordCount1186
matches
0"Not just for the girl she’d known, but for the girl she’d imagined they’d both become"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean26.95
std17.71
cv0.657
sampleLengths
060
166
24
322
459
597
623
727
814
930
1023
1119
1222
1310
1423
1527
1610
1721
1821
1913
2015
2113
2230
2318
2414
2531
2613
2730
2825
2910
306
3113
3231
3334
3426
3510
3635
3751
3812
3933
4032
4127
4242
4344
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs160
matches
0"was talking"
1"was watching"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences112
ratio0.009
matches
0"The woman turned, her eyes – the same vibrant green Rory remembered – narrowed slightly."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount957
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"same vibrant green Rory"
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.03970741901776385
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.01567398119122257
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences112
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences112
mean10.59
std5.58
cv0.527
sampleLengths
018
113
215
35
49
522
623
721
84
921
101
1110
122
135
1410
154
169
1711
188
194
203
212
2212
2311
2421
2515
2610
2719
287
2916
3010
317
3210
3314
3415
3515
3614
379
3819
3915
407
417
423
437
4410
456
461
478
485
4913
66.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.41964285714285715
totalSentences112
uniqueOpeners47
36.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"Then she saw her."
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences91
matches
0"She hated these late shifts."
1"She pushed open the heavy"
2"She nodded to the bartender,"
3"It felt like a lifetime."
4"They’d sworn they’d conquer London"
5"Her hair was a sleek,"
6"She wore a tailored black"
7"She was talking to a"
8"He raised an eyebrow, a"
9"she said, her voice sounding"
10"She gestured to the man"
11"She focused on Elara, searching"
12"She gestured vaguely"
13"she said, her voice sharper"
14"She glanced at her watch,"
15"They disappeared into the London"
16"he asked, polishing a glass"
17"She’d chosen a different path,"
18"He slid a glass of"
19"She looked around the bar,"
ratio0.275
14.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences91
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Rory pulled her collar higher,"
2"Another delivery for the Golden"
3"She hated these late shifts."
4"The city felt different at"
5"She pushed open the heavy"
6"Silas would be at the"
7"She nodded to the bartender,"
8"Rory stopped dead, the delivery"
9"It felt like a lifetime."
10"Elara had been the sun"
11"Rory, the quiet observer, content"
12"They’d sworn they’d conquer London"
13"Life, as it often did,"
14"Elara hadn’t aged badly."
15"The girl with the wild,"
16"Her hair was a sleek,"
17"She wore a tailored black"
18"A single, flawless emerald ring"
19"She was talking to a"
ratio0.89
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Her hair was a sleek, dark bob, pulled back from a face that was all sharp angles and expensive bone structure."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Elara asked, her voice carefully neutral"
1"she said, her voice sharper than she intended"
2"Silas said, his voice low"
3"Rory asked, the question hanging in the air"
4"Rory said, more to herself than to Silas"
5"Silas said, his voice soft"
6"he said, his voice tight"
71.05% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Rory stammered (stammer)"
1"Rory agreed (agree)"
2"Elara agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.474
leniency0.947
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.158
78.3152%