Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8E3RM307T66JZY9JM0KHC

Run Details

Duration:
1m 24s
Cost:
$0.000360
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon of The Raven’s Nest bled onto the wet pavement outside, casting a sickly glow on the late-night drizzle. Rory wiped condensation from the countertop with a practiced swipe, the damp cloth leaving streaks on the polished wood. Tuesday nights were slow, mostly regulars nursing pints and avoiding eye contact. Silas was behind the bar, polishing glasses with a precision that bordered on obsessive. His silver signet ring caught the light with each turn of the cloth. The bell above the door chimed, a discordant sound in the quiet bar. A man stood framed in the doorway, shaking raindrops from a dark coat. Rory’s hand paused mid-wipe. It took a moment for her brain to reconcile the silhouette with the ghost of a memory. “Evan?” The name felt foreign on her tongue, a relic she hadn’t dusted off in years. He looked…different. The boy she remembered – lean, cocky, with a wildness in his eyes – had been replaced by a man sculpted with hard angles. He’d gained weight, yes, but it wasn’t the soft fullness of contentment. It was a bulkiness, a guardedness. His jaw was perpetually clenched, and his eyes, once bright with mischief, were now shadowed and wary. He hadn't met her gaze. “Rory,” he said, his voice lower than she remembered, roughened around the edges. He didn’t smile. He didn’t offer any greeting beyond her name. Silas, ever observant, simply raised an eyebrow from behind the bar but continued his task, a silent acknowledgment of the charged air that had suddenly filled the space. “What are you doing here?” Rory asked, keeping her tone neutral, assessing. She knew she looked composed, but her pulse had quickened. Old habits died hard. He shrugged, pushing past the initial shock of the encounter. “Just passing through. Thought I’d…see what a Soho pub was like. Heard this place had character.” “It does.” Rory gestured around the dimly lit bar, the walls adorned with faded maps and black-and-white photographs. It felt less like an invitation and more like a statement of fact. “Silas runs a tight ship.” He finally met her eyes, the gaze lingering a beat too long. She saw a flicker of something there, something she couldn’t decipher. Regret? Shame? It was gone before she could be sure. “Silas,” he nodded towards the bar owner, a curt acknowledgment. “He always did have a knack for finding the best spots.” “Can I get you something?” Rory asked, turning back to her work, needing the task to anchor her. “Whiskey. Neat.” Silas slid the glass across the polished wood with a quiet grace, his hazel eyes flicking between Rory and Evan, assessing. He didn’t say a word, but the subtle tension radiating from him was palpable. Rory knew Silas understood. He always did. Evan took a long swallow, the whiskey burning a path down his throat. He didn’t flinch. “It’s been a while,” he said, finally breaking the silence. “Seven years,” Rory supplied, the number feeling heavier than it should. Seven years since she’d left Cardiff, seven years since she’d effectively disappeared from his life. Seven years spent building a new one, piece by painful piece. “Right.” He stared into his glass, swirling the amber liquid. “Heard you were in London.” “Living above the bar, actually.” A ghost of a smile touched his lips. “Of course you are. Always did have a penchant for the dramatic.” Rory bristled. “It’s a convenient arrangement. And it pays the bills.” She omitted the part-time job at the Golden Empress, the late-night deliveries on a battered bicycle. Keeping secrets was becoming second nature. “Still quick with a retort, I see.” “Some things never change.” She leaned against the counter, crossing her arms. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a souvenir from a childhood tree-climbing expedition, ached faintly. She instinctively covered it with her hand. He noticed, of course. He’d always noticed everything. “Still got the mark?” Rory’s hand remained protectively over her wrist. “It’s a scar. Everyone has them.” “Yours had a story,” he said, his voice soft, almost wistful. “You wouldn’t tell me what happened.” The memory surfaced, unbidden. The scraped knee, the panicked tears, the stubborn refusal to explain. He’d always been infuriatingly persistent, demanding to know everything. “It doesn’t matter anymore.” “It did to you then.” “We were kids,” she said sharply, regretting the edge in her voice. “We did stupid things.” He laughed, a harsh, hollow sound. “Stupid things? Is that what you call it?” He finally looked at her, and the pain in his eyes was unmistakable. “Rory, I…I messed up. Badly.” “You think?” She couldn’t keep the bitterness from creeping into her voice. The carefully constructed walls she’d built around her emotions threatened to crumble. “I know. You left, and…I deserved it. But I wanted to find you. I tried.” “Oh, you tried,” she scoffed. “Through mutual friends? Asking about me at university? Sounds like a real dedicated search.” He flinched. "My father…he wasn't happy about us. He intervened. Told me it was for the best. Said you were…a distraction.” He paused, swallowing hard. "I was young. I let him influence me." Rory stared at him, a cold knot forming in her stomach. “So your father got rid of me? Is that what you’re saying?” “It wasn’t like that.” But his voice lacked conviction. She’d known his father. A powerful, controlling man. A barrister, like Rory's own. She should have seen this coming. “Then what was it like? Did he just wave a magic wand and make you forget I existed?” He downed the rest of his whiskey in one gulp, slamming the glass down on the counter. “I made choices, Rory. I made bad choices. And you were right to leave.” “Leaving wasn’t the hard part, Evan. Building something new was.” She glanced at Silas, who was watching the exchange with quiet intensity. "Starting over. Knowing I wasn't worth fighting for." He reached across the bar, his hand hovering over hers. She instinctively pulled back. “Don’t.” He dropped his hand, his expression unreadable. "I see how well you’re doing,” he said, his voice flat. “You’ve changed.” “So have you.” “Not for the better.” She didn’t respond. It was the truth, laid bare between them. He’d once been full of life, of potential. Now, he looked…broken. The weight of regret was a tangible thing around him. “I’m married,” he said, the words falling flatly. "Have a son." The information hit Rory like a physical blow. She hadn't expected to feel anything, but a sharp ache bloomed in her chest. "Congratulations," she managed, her voice barely a whisper. “It’s not…happy. Suffice to say, I’ve made a lot of mistakes.” He looked around the bar, avoiding her gaze. “I should go.” He didn't offer a goodbye. He didn't ask about her life, beyond the superficial. He just turned and walked back out into the rain, disappearing into the Soho night. Rory watched him go, her heart a heavy weight in her chest. She picked up the damp cloth and resumed wiping the counter, the rhythmic motion a small attempt to regain control. Silas cleared his throat. “Troubled waters, that one.” Rory managed a weak smile. “Always were.” Silas poured her a small glass of amber liquid. "Something stronger than usual, perhaps?" She nodded, accepting the drink gratefully. It burned going down, a welcome distraction. She looked out the window, the green neon sign reflecting in the rain-slicked street. Some things, she realized, were better left buried. And some ghosts were best left undisturbed. But the ache in her chest remained, a haunting reminder of a past she could never fully escape.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Rory gestured around [around]"
1"she said sharply [sharply]"
2"He looked around [around]"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.407
leniency0.815
rawRatio0.136
effectiveRatio0.111
88.28% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1280
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"sharply"
2"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
17.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1280
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"weight"
count3
1
word"eyebrow"
count1
2
word"charged"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"quickened"
count1
5
word"encounter"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"palpable"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"constructed"
count1
11
word"stomach"
count1
12
word"intensity"
count1
13
word"unreadable"
count1
14
word"potential"
count1
15
word"tangible"
count1
16
word"whisper"
count1
17
word"rhythmic"
count1
18
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"eyebrow"
2"charged"
3"pulse"
4"quickened"
5"encounter"
6"flicker"
7"tension"
8"palpable"
9"silence"
10"constructed"
11"stomach"
12"intensity"
13"unreadable"
14"potential"
15"tangible"
16"whisper"
17"rhythmic"
18"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences102
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences133
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1273
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount952
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.58
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory15
Silas7
Evan2
Seven2
Cardiff1
Golden1
Empress1
Keeping1
Soho1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Golden"
2"Soho"
globalScore0.712
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1273
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences133
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean24.02
std16.02
cv0.667
sampleLengths
079
147
216
366
424
528
626
726
836
954
1018
112
1242
1316
1410
1537
1615
175
1820
1933
207
2135
2212
2313
2417
2528
265
2716
2832
2924
3015
3119
3233
3323
3428
3518
3631
3730
3814
391
4020
413
424
4332
4411
4530
4622
4729
4832
498
98.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences102
matches
0"been replaced"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs177
matches
0"was watching"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences133
ratio0.008
matches
0"The boy she remembered – lean, cocky, with a wildness in his eyes – had been replaced by a man sculpted with hard angles."
96.92% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount959
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.04171011470281543
lyAdverbCount21
lyAdverbRatio0.021897810218978103
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences133
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences133
mean9.57
std5.81
cv0.607
sampleLengths
021
119
212
314
413
513
613
74
817
916
102
1124
1212
136
1417
155
1613
173
188
1928
2012
2110
224
2310
2416
2518
2613
275
2812
2911
301
311
328
3310
3411
3518
362
3721
3814
394
403
4113
423
4310
4411
4515
4611
4710
485
495
50.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3533834586466165
totalSentences133
uniqueOpeners47
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount55
totalSentences96
matches
0"His silver signet ring caught"
1"It took a moment for"
2"He’d gained weight, yes, but"
3"It was a bulkiness, a"
4"His jaw was perpetually clenched,"
5"He hadn't met her gaze."
6"he said, his voice lower"
7"He didn’t smile."
8"He didn’t offer any greeting"
9"She knew she looked composed,"
10"He shrugged, pushing past the"
11"It felt less like an"
12"He finally met her eyes,"
13"She saw a flicker of"
14"It was gone before she"
15"he nodded towards the bar"
16"He didn’t say a word,"
17"He always did."
18"He didn’t flinch."
19"he said, finally breaking the"
ratio0.573
1.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences96
matches
0"The green neon of The"
1"Rory wiped condensation from the"
2"Tuesday nights were slow, mostly"
3"Silas was behind the bar,"
4"His silver signet ring caught"
5"The bell above the door"
6"A man stood framed in"
7"Rory’s hand paused mid-wipe."
8"It took a moment for"
9"The name felt foreign on"
10"The boy she remembered –"
11"He’d gained weight, yes, but"
12"It was a bulkiness, a"
13"His jaw was perpetually clenched,"
14"He hadn't met her gaze."
15"he said, his voice lower"
16"He didn’t smile."
17"He didn’t offer any greeting"
18"Silas, ever observant, simply raised"
19"Rory asked, keeping her tone"
ratio0.917
52.08% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"Now, he looked…broken."
ratio0.01
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Silas was behind the bar, polishing glasses with a precision that bordered on obsessive."
1"Silas, ever observant, simply raised an eyebrow from behind the bar but continued his task, a silent acknowledgment of the charged air that had suddenly filled …"
11.36% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Rory supplied, the number feeling heavier than it should"
1"he said, his voice soft, almost wistful"
2"he said, his voice flat"
3"he said, the words falling flatly"
4"she managed, her voice barely a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.148
leniency0.296
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.0950%