Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8EKKA78DAZ8C5CBBG1TT1

Run Details

Duration:
17.5s
Cost:
$0.000162
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain in Soho was a persistent, greasy smear against the windows of The Raven’s Nest. It wasn’t a dramatic downpour, more a damp insistence, clinging to the cobblestones and reflecting the sickly green glow of the neon sign. Rory shifted on the worn velvet stool, the wood cool against her jeans, and watched the trickle of condensation run down the glass beside her. She’d ordered a gin and tonic, neat, and hadn’t touched it. The place smelled of stale beer, damp wool, and something vaguely floral – a desperate attempt, she suspected, to mask the deeper, darker scents of countless whispered conversations and dealt secrets. Then he walked in. It wasn't a dramatic entrance. No fanfare, no apologies, just Silas Blackwood, cutting a figure that seemed both familiar and utterly alien. He moved with a slight, deliberate limp, a subtle reminder of the Prague incident, and his grey-streaked auburn hair was shorter, neater, framed a face that had weathered more than a few storms. The silver signet ring on his right hand gleamed faintly in the dim light. It was a faint echo of the man she remembered, the one who’d pulled her out of a particularly messy breakup ten years ago, the one who’d offered a temporary haven above his bar. “Rory,” he said, his voice a low rumble, and the name felt distant, coated in a layer of something she couldn’t quite name. He didn’t smile. She pushed her drink aside. “Silas. Didn’t expect to see you here.” “Didn’t expect to see *you* here either,” he replied, sliding onto the stool beside her. The movement was slow, controlled. He didn’t look at her, instead studying the collection of faded maps plastered on the walls. “It’s been a while.” “Twelve years, give or take,” she said, the understatement a practiced shield. Twelve years of deliberate avoidance, of constructing a life carefully buffered from the wreckage of their past. “You own a bar.” It was a factual observation, a neutral statement, designed to avoid the avalanche of unspoken questions. “I do,” he confirmed, his gaze finally meeting hers. His eyes, hazel and marked with the subtle lines of a life lived on the edges, held a disconcerting intensity. “The Raven’s Nest. Small operation. Mostly ghosts.” He gestured vaguely around the room. “It looks…comfortable,” she said, the word feeling suitably bland. Comfortable. That was the key word, wasn't it? Her life was comfortable. Predictable. Safe. A far cry from the chaotic, reckless energy she’d once shared with Silas. “It’s a front,” he said, his voice dropping. “Always has been.” The rain intensified, drumming a steady rhythm against the windows. “You still doing…that?” she asked, the question hanging heavy in the air. He didn't flinch, didn’t offer a denial. “Let’s just say my skillset hasn’t entirely evaporated.” He took a slow sip of a dark amber liquid from a tumbler. “Information is a valuable currency, Rory. More valuable than most people realize.” She pushed a strand of black hair behind her ear, the movement habitual. “I deliver food,” she corrected, the small, mundane task a deliberate attempt to establish a boundary. “Yu-Fei’s place. It's honest work.” “Honest, perhaps,” he conceded. “But not exactly…fulfilling, is it?” There was a sharpness to his voice that she hadn't heard before, a glint of something resembling judgment. She avoided his eyes, focusing on the rain-streaked glass. “It pays the rent.” “Rent doesn’t buy happiness, Rory,” he said, his gaze unwavering. “Or peace.” A silence descended, thick with the weight of years and unacknowledged regrets. She could almost taste the bitterness of the unspoken – the shared grief over a friendship fractured by circumstance, the lingering shadow of Evan, the abusive ex she’d fled to Silas’s protection from. He hadn't fully understood then, she realized, hadn’t grasped the insidious nature of his control, the slow erosion of her self-worth. “You look well,” she said finally, a clumsy attempt at small talk that felt utterly inadequate. “I’m…functional,” he corrected. “Never been much of a man for aesthetics.” He paused, a ghost of a smile momentarily flickering across his lips. “Remember that ridiculous phase you went through? The black lipstick and the ripped fishnets? You looked like you’d just wrestled a badger.” She managed a small, involuntary laugh. The memory was a sharp, unwelcome jolt. “That was a long time ago.” “Time has a way of smoothing the rough edges, doesn't it?” he said, his voice laced with a quiet sadness. "But it doesn't erase the scars.” He lifted his hand, briefly showing the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist. "I remember you showing me that. Crazy kid, running with scissors.” The scar throbbed with a sudden, unfamiliar ache. She hadn’t thought about it in years. "You remember everything." “I remember enough,” he said. “Enough to understand why you’ve built this fortress around yourself." He leaned closer, his voice dropping to a near whisper. “You left London for a reason, Rory. A valid one. But running doesn't solve anything. It just…redirects the damage." She wanted to tell him about Eva, about the frantic phone call, the desperate plea for sanctuary. She wanted to tell him about Evan’s obsession, the chilling realization that her escape was only a temporary reprieve. But the words caught in her throat, choked by the years of carefully constructed silence. “I’m fine,” she said, the rote response sounding hollow even to her own ears. “Really, I am.” “You’re not,” he stated, his eyes boring into hers. “You’re carrying a weight. A weight you refuse to acknowledge. You're building walls when you should be dismantling them.” He reached into his pocket and placed a small, silver signet ring on the counter between them. It wasn't his. It was identical, a perfect replica. “This,” he said, his voice low, “is a reminder. A reminder that you’re not alone. That some things, some people, don’t just disappear.” He picked up the ring and tucked it back into his pocket. “Don’t mistake solitude for peace, Rory. It’s just a longer path to regret.” The rain continued to fall, washing over the windows of The Raven’s Nest, blurring the edges of the room, the faces of the patrons, the shadows clinging to the corners. Rory stared at the ring, at the lingering scent of Silas’s presence, and felt a strange, unsettling shift within her. A tiny crack in the wall she’d so carefully built. A fleeting glimpse of the woman she used to be, the woman she’d buried beneath layers of practicality and self-preservation. She looked up at Silas, at the quiet authority in his eyes, and realized he wasn't offering her salvation. He was simply offering her the uncomfortable truth she’d been diligently avoiding for twelve long years. And for the first time in a very long time, she wasn't sure she was ready to meet it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.59
leniency1
rawRatio0.087
effectiveRatio0.087
69.33% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1141
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count2
1
adverb"carefully"
count3
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"carefully"
2"really"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1141
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"velvet"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"reminder"
count3
3
word"echo"
count1
4
word"unspoken"
count2
5
word"intensity"
count1
6
word"comfortable"
count3
7
word"predictable"
count1
8
word"chaotic"
count1
9
word"glint"
count1
10
word"unwavering"
count1
11
word"silence"
count2
12
word"weight"
count3
13
word"fractured"
count1
14
word"throbbed"
count1
15
word"whisper"
count1
16
word"sanctuary"
count1
17
word"chilling"
count1
18
word"constructed"
count1
19
word"perfect"
count1
20
word"fleeting"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"familiar"
2"reminder"
3"echo"
4"unspoken"
5"intensity"
6"comfortable"
7"predictable"
8"chaotic"
9"glint"
10"unwavering"
11"silence"
12"weight"
13"fractured"
14"throbbed"
15"whisper"
16"sanctuary"
17"chilling"
18"constructed"
19"perfect"
20"fleeting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences87
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1138
ratio0.001
matches
0"you"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount884
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.57
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven2
Nest2
Silas5
Blackwood1
Prague1
Twelve1
Comfortable1
Evan2
Eva1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Blackwood"
4"Evan"
5"Eva"
places
0"Soho"
1"Prague"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite name"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1138
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean39.24
std29.89
cv0.762
sampleLengths
0106
14
2103
326
412
540
649
742
836
911
1022
1140
1234
139
1431
1512
1666
1716
1845
1919
2049
2118
2244
2351
2417
2528
2626
2748
28134
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs136
matches
0"wasn't offering"
77.18% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences87
ratio0.023
matches
0"The place smelled of stale beer, damp wool, and something vaguely floral – a desperate attempt, she suspected, to mask the deeper, darker scents of countless whispered conversations and dealt secrets."
1"She could almost taste the bitterness of the unspoken – the shared grief over a friendship fractured by circumstance, the lingering shadow of Evan, the abusive ex she’d fled to Silas’s protection from."
98.82% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount887
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.033821871476888386
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.02142051860202931
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean13.08
std8.31
cv0.635
sampleLengths
016
123
225
311
431
54
65
717
833
914
1034
1123
123
135
147
1515
165
1716
184
1912
2017
2120
229
2320
2413
259
261
277
284
291
301
3113
328
333
3410
3512
367
3721
3812
3913
4016
415
424
435
4418
459
464
4710
482
4912
63.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.41379310344827586
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners36
51.28% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences65
matches
0"Then he walked in."
ratio0.015
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences65
matches
0"It wasn’t a dramatic downpour,"
1"She’d ordered a gin and"
2"It wasn't a dramatic entrance."
3"He moved with a slight,"
4"It was a faint echo"
5"he said, his voice a"
6"He didn’t smile."
7"She pushed her drink aside."
8"he replied, sliding onto the"
9"He didn’t look at her,"
10"she said, the understatement a"
11"It was a factual observation,"
12"he confirmed, his gaze finally"
13"His eyes, hazel and marked"
14"He gestured vaguely around the"
15"she said, the word feeling"
16"Her life was comfortable."
17"he said, his voice dropping"
18"she asked, the question hanging"
19"He didn't flinch, didn’t offer"
ratio0.677
6.15% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences65
matches
0"The rain in Soho was"
1"It wasn’t a dramatic downpour,"
2"Rory shifted on the worn"
3"She’d ordered a gin and"
4"The place smelled of stale"
5"It wasn't a dramatic entrance."
6"He moved with a slight,"
7"The silver signet ring on"
8"It was a faint echo"
9"he said, his voice a"
10"He didn’t smile."
11"She pushed her drink aside."
12"he replied, sliding onto the"
13"The movement was slow, controlled."
14"He didn’t look at her,"
15"she said, the understatement a"
16"It was a factual observation,"
17"he confirmed, his gaze finally"
18"His eyes, hazel and marked"
19"He gestured vaguely around the"
ratio0.908
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
73.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"No fanfare, no apologies, just Silas Blackwood, cutting a figure that seemed both familiar and utterly alien."
1"He moved with a slight, deliberate limp, a subtle reminder of the Prague incident, and his grey-streaked auburn hair was shorter, neater, framed a face that had…"
2"The rain continued to fall, washing over the windows of The Raven’s Nest, blurring the edges of the room, the faces of the patrons, the shadows clinging to the …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"he confirmed, his gaze finally meeting hers"
1"she said, the word feeling suitably bland"
2"he said, his voice dropping"
3"she asked, the question hanging heavy in the air"
4"he said, his gaze unwavering"
5"He paused, a ghost of a smile momentarily flickering across his lips"
6"He leaned, his voice dropping to a near whisper"
7"she said, the rote response sounding hollow even to her own ears"
8"he stated, his eyes boring into hers"
9"he said, his voice low,"
21.79% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"he confirmed (confirm)"
1"she corrected (correct)"
2"he conceded (concede)"
3"he corrected (correct)"
4"he stated (state)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.436
leniency0.872
rawRatio0.294
effectiveRatio0.256
75.3833%