"The air hung thick and heavy, laced with the scent of damp earth and something sweeter—honeysuckle, maybe, though it was far too late in the year for that."
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"Eva had mentioned the grove once, in a hushed phone call two nights ago—something about old stories from her Welsh gran, a place where the world thinned and secrets bled through."
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"The standing stones—more like massive roots sculpted by time or something older—jutted from the soil in a rough circle, their bark etched with patterns that caught the torchlight and seemed to shift when she blinked."
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"Hel portals, Dymas had implied in that cryptic note left with the pendant months ago, but this felt different—wilder, less infernal."
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"Quick thinking had gotten her this far; she'd scout, note what she could, and leave before dawn."
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"The first hint of wrongness came as a whisper on the wind—or what passed for wind in this pocket of stillness."
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"No obvious runes, no hidden latch—just earth rich with roots that curled like veins."
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"She glanced up at the moon; it hung lower now, or was that her eyes playing tricks?"
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"To the left, beyond the oaks—a shadow darted, quick as a fox but too upright, too humanoid."
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"The park was full of deer, rabbits—night creatures."
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"The boundary had shifted; the oaks pressed closer, their branches interlacing overhead like a cage."
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"The path—if it could be called that—narrowed, time bending further."
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"Not her name, but fragments—Laila, a alias she'd buried with her old life in Cardiff."
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"She shone the torch ahead; the beam fractured on dew-kissed petals, but in the periphery, movement again."
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"A shape, tall and slender, resolved for a split second—pale limbs twisting amid the flowers—before vanishing."
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"No signal on her phone, of course—this place was a dead zone, a pocket between worlds."
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"Rory's cool-headedness frayed at the edges; she followed, compelled by the artifact's pull, telling herself it was evidence, a clue to whatever benefactor had gifted it."
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"She heard it then—a soft footfall, mirroring her own, just out of sync."
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"The moon overhead was wrong—full and bloated, though she'd entered under a crescent."
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"At the corner of her eye, figures flitted—ethereal, cloaked in petal and shadow, gone when she turned."
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"The boundary stones—disrupt them?"
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"The shapes multiplied at the edges: tall forms with elongated limbs, faces obscured by flowering crowns, their eyes— if eyes they had—gleaming with starlight malice."
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"The standing stones—more like massive roots sculpted by time or something older—jutted from the soil in a rough circle, their bark etched with patterns that cau…"
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"Wildflowers dotted the clearing in defiance of November's chill, their petals unfurling in shades of violet and gold, glowing faintly under the sliver of moon o…"
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"It was beautiful, in a way that made her skin prickle."
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"The pendant warmed further, a deep crimson glow seeping through her shirt, casting ruddy shadows on the grass."
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"The sound was too deliberate, like fingers trailing over silk, starting low and building to a sigh that mimicked her name."
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"The flowers brushed her ankles, their petals cool and damp, releasing a fragrance that cloyed in her throat."
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"She pressed on, drawn by the pendant's heat, which bordered on uncomfortable now, a coal against her skin."
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"Delicate, elongated, pressed into the moss as if made by bare feet that lingered too long."
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"Wildflowers climbed the trunks, their blooms pulsing in rhythm with the pendant, casting erratic light that danced like fireflies."
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"The air hummed with it, a low vibration that set her teeth on edge."
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"Its crimson core throbbed, illuminating carvings on the central stone: spirals that moved when she stared, coiling inward like a trap."
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"She approached the nearest, torch revealing bark that split like skin, oozing sap that smelled of honey and decay."