Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8JKSPTAZ69Q399GHBS0NN

Run Details

Duration:
44.9s
Cost:
$0.000254
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The neon green of The Raven’s Nest bled into the rain-slicked pavement outside, a sickly glow against the grey London evening. Rory shivered, pulling her worn delivery jacket tighter. Another Golden Empress order, another scramble through the city’s veins. She pushed open the heavy oak door, the familiar scent of stale beer, aged wood, and something faintly metallic, like old coins, washing over her. Silas was behind the bar, polishing a glass with a practiced circular motion. His auburn hair, threaded with silver, gleamed faintly under the low lighting, and she noticed the slight hitch in his step as he moved, the permanent reminder of that Prague operation she’d only ever heard whispers about. “Rory,” he said, his hazel eyes crinkling at the corners. “Late run?” “Yu-Fei’s dumplings are always worth the wait,” she replied, dropping her delivery bag onto a nearby stool. “Rough night out there. Feels like the whole city's weeping.” He chuckled, a dry, quiet sound. “London has a way of doing that. What can I get you?” “Just a pint of something dark.” She leaned against the bar, grateful for the relative warmth. The bar wasn’t busy; a couple of older men nursing whiskeys in a corner booth, a solitary figure hunched over a newspaper. The usual Thursday night crowd. She took a long swallow of the stout, the bitter taste settling comfortably at the back of her throat. Then she saw her. Across the room, near the fireplace, a woman was laughing. A low, throaty laugh that tugged at something deep within Rory’s memory. The woman turned, her face illuminated by the flickering light, and Rory felt the pint she’d just drunk abruptly harden in her stomach. It was Elara. Elara Davies. They hadn’t spoken in fifteen years. Fifteen years since that summer in Cardiff, since whispered secrets and shared dreams, since… everything. Rory hadn’t even known if she was still alive. Elara was… different. Gone was the messy, vibrant tangle of auburn curls, replaced with a sleek, sculpted bob the color of polished obsidian. Her clothes – a tailored pantsuit of deep indigo – were expensive, impeccable. No trace remained of the vintage dresses and Doc Martens that had defined her. The hesitant, almost apologetic posture she’d always carried was gone, replaced by a radiating confidence, a stillness that suggested money and power. She was talking animatedly to a man in a suit that probably cost more than Rory’s entire flat. He was handsome, in a severe, polished way – the kind of man who smiled with his teeth, not his eyes. Rory felt a strange, detached observation settle over her. It was like looking at a photograph of someone she used to know, a person from a past life. Silas noticed her staring. “Old acquaintance?” he asked, his voice low. Rory nodded, unable to speak. “She seems to have… flourished,” Silas observed, his gaze following Elara’s. Flourished. That was one way to put it. Transformed was probably closer to the truth. Elara caught Rory’s eye. For a moment, she simply looked, her expression unreadable. Then a slow, almost hesitant smile spread across her face. She excused herself from the man in the suit and began to walk toward them. Rory’s heart hammered against her ribs. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist throbbed, a familiar ache triggered by sudden anxiety. She gripped the pint glass tighter. “Rory?” Elara asked, her voice deeper, more resonant than Rory remembered. There was a slight accent, unfamiliar, layered. Not the Welsh lilt of their childhood. “Elara,” Rory managed to say, the word sounding foreign on her tongue. “It’s been… a long time,” Elara said, extending a hand. Her nails were perfectly manicured, a deep crimson. Rory shook it, the brief contact sending a jolt through her. “It has,” Rory agreed. “You… you look good.” A pathetic, inadequate compliment. Elara’s smile widened. “And you. Still delivering, I see.” There was a slight… amusement in her tone. Not unkind, but… distant. “Pays the bills,” Rory said, forcing a shrug. “What about you? What brings you to The Raven’s Nest?” “Business,” Elara said, vaguely. “I’m in London for a conference. A rather… lucrative conference.” She glanced at her companion, who seemed to be engaged in a rather intense conversation on his phone. “Lucrative how?” Rory pressed, the question escaping before she could filter it. She immediately regretted it. Too intrusive. Too… Rory. Elara’s eyes narrowed slightly. “That’s not really something I discuss with old acquaintances, Rory.” The air thickened. The easy familiarity of their youth, a phantom limb, vanished. Rory felt a pang of something sharp and bitter— regret, perhaps? “Right,” Rory mumbled, taking another gulp of her stout. “Sorry.” “It’s lovely to see you,” Elara said, her voice carefully neutral. “It really is. But I must be going. This conference…” “So, you’re… what do you do now?” Rory asked, clinging to the remnants of their past connection. Elara paused, considering. “I’m in asset management.” Asset management. Rory pictured spreadsheets, boardrooms, power lunches. A world away from the art history lectures and late-night talks about escaping Cardiff. “Right,” Rory said again, feeling utterly adrift. “That sounds… important.” “It is,” Elara said, her smile brittle. “Very important. It requires a certain… dedication.” There was a silent beat. Rory wondered if Elara, too, felt the weight of the years, the chasm that had opened up between them. “Do you… ever go back to Cardiff?” Rory asked, desperate to find some common ground. Elara’s expression clouded over briefly, a flicker of something unreadable in her eyes. “Not really. It’s… small. I’ve moved on.” The words hung in the air, cold and definitive. A stark declaration of their divergent paths. Rory felt a shiver crawl down her spine, unrelated to the London rain. “I see,” Rory said quietly. Elara glanced at her watch. “Well, I really must run. It was… nice seeing you.” “You too,” Rory said, the words lacking any genuine warmth. Elara offered a final, formal nod and turned to rejoin her companion. As she walked away, Rory noticed a flash of gold on her finger – a large, intricate ring. A ring that screamed wealth and status, a symbol of a life Rory couldn't even begin to imagine. Rory watched her go, a dull ache in her chest. She thought of their shared dreams, their whispered promises. Promises of changing the world, of escaping the mundane. Elara had escaped, alright. But had she changed the world, or simply traded one set of expectations for another? Silas cleared his throat. "She's a striking woman,” he said, carefully. Rory didn't respond. She stared into the dark depths of her stout, the bubbles rising like lost memories. The rain continued to beat against the windows, a relentless, melancholic rhythm. She thought of Evan, of why she’d left Cardiff in the first place. Of the quiet, simple life she’d built for herself in London. It wasn't glamorous. It wasn't lucrative. But it was hers. And suddenly, feeling the weight of fifteen years and the vast gulf between them, being Rory Carter, delivery person, felt a lot better than being Elara Davies, asset manager.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:31:39.461Z" 2/20/2026, 7:31:39 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Rory said again [again]"
1"Rory said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.611
leniency1
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.091
53.66% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1187
totalAiIsmAdverbs11
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count4
3
adverb"carefully"
count2
4
adverb"utterly"
count1
5
adverb"very"
count1
6
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"slightly"
2"really"
3"carefully"
4"utterly"
5"very"
6"suddenly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Elara"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
19.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1187
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"reminder"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"solitary"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count2
6
word"throbbed"
count1
7
word"lilt"
count1
8
word"pang"
count1
9
word"weight"
count2
10
word"flicker"
count1
11
word"stark"
count1
12
word"down her spine"
count1
13
word"intricate"
count1
14
word"depths"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"reminder"
2"warmth"
3"solitary"
4"stomach"
5"unreadable"
6"throbbed"
7"lilt"
8"pang"
9"weight"
10"flicker"
11"stark"
12"down her spine"
13"intricate"
14"depths"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences111
matches
0"felt a shiver"
78.51% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences111
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"managed to"
2"seemed to"
3"begin to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences123
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1188
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions74
wordCount1015
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity3.05
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity6
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
London3
Golden1
Empress1
Prague1
Thursday1
Rory31
Elara19
Davies2
Cardiff3
Doc1
Martens1
Flourished1
Welsh1
Evan1
Carter1
Silas4
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Elara"
4"Davies"
5"Evan"
6"Carter"
7"Silas"
places
0"London"
1"Prague"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.842
wordCount1188
matches
0"Not unkind, but…"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean24.75
std15.62
cv0.631
sampleLengths
064
150
212
327
418
543
623
745
85
930
1072
1139
1228
1311
145
1511
1615
1738
1827
1925
2012
2129
2212
2321
2418
2532
2620
2714
2824
2910
3021
3117
327
3322
3410
3514
3624
3715
3820
3929
405
4115
4210
4348
4447
4511
4654
4739
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences111
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs172
matches
0"was laughing"
1"was talking"
26.71% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences123
ratio0.041
matches
0"The bar wasn’t busy; a couple of older men nursing whiskeys in a corner booth, a solitary figure hunched over a newspaper."
1"Her clothes – a tailored pantsuit of deep indigo – were expensive, impeccable."
2"He was handsome, in a severe, polished way – the kind of man who smiled with his teeth, not his eyes."
3"Rory felt a pang of something sharp and bitter— regret, perhaps?"
4"As she walked away, Rory noticed a flash of gold on her finger – a large, intricate ring."
98.17% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1014
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.04142011834319527
lyAdverbCount21
lyAdverbRatio0.020710059171597635
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences123
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences123
mean9.66
std6.58
cv0.681
sampleLengths
021
18
210
325
413
537
610
72
817
910
106
1112
1216
1322
145
1519
164
1710
1812
1923
203
212
226
2314
241
259
262
271
2820
2913
3014
3122
3218
3321
349
3519
364
377
385
3911
401
417
427
434
449
4510
4615
476
4815
496
66.40% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.42276422764227645
totalSentences123
uniqueOpeners52
66.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences100
matches
0"Then she saw her."
1"Then a slow, almost hesitant"
ratio0.02
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences100
matches
0"She pushed open the heavy"
1"His auburn hair, threaded with"
2"he said, his hazel eyes"
3"she replied, dropping her delivery"
4"He chuckled, a dry, quiet"
5"She leaned against the bar,"
6"She took a long swallow"
7"It was Elara."
8"They hadn’t spoken in fifteen"
9"Her clothes – a tailored"
10"She was talking animatedly to"
11"He was handsome, in a"
12"It was like looking at"
13"he asked, his voice low"
14"She excused herself from the"
15"She gripped the pint glass"
16"Her nails were perfectly manicured,"
17"She glanced at her companion,"
18"She immediately regretted it."
19"She thought of their shared"
ratio0.25
50.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences100
matches
0"The neon green of The"
1"Rory shivered, pulling her worn"
2"Another Golden Empress order, another"
3"She pushed open the heavy"
4"Silas was behind the bar,"
5"His auburn hair, threaded with"
6"he said, his hazel eyes"
7"she replied, dropping her delivery"
8"He chuckled, a dry, quiet"
9"She leaned against the bar,"
10"The bar wasn’t busy; a"
11"The usual Thursday night crowd."
12"She took a long swallow"
13"A low, throaty laugh that"
14"The woman turned, her face"
15"It was Elara."
16"They hadn’t spoken in fifteen"
17"Rory hadn’t even known if"
18"Her clothes – a tailored"
19"The hesitant, almost apologetic posture"
ratio0.82
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"No trace remained of the vintage dresses and Doc Martens that had defined her."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount11
matches
0"he said, his hazel eyes crinkling at the corners"
1"he asked, his voice low"
2"Silas observed, his gaze following Elara’s"
3"Elara asked, her voice deeper, more resonant than Rory remembered"
4"Rory managed, the word sounding foreign on her tongue"
5"Elara said, vaguely"
6"Rory pressed, the question escaping before she could filter it"
7"Elara said, her voice carefully neutral"
8"Rory asked, desperate to find some common ground"
9"Rory said, the words lacking any genuine warmth"
10"he said, carefully"
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags20
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Silas observed (observe)"
1"Rory managed (manage)"
2"Rory agreed (agree)"
3"Rory pressed (press)"
4"Rory mumbled (mumble)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.556
leniency1
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.25
74.3915%