"It had started as a curiosity—a gift from some anonymous sender slipped under the door of her flat above Silas's bar—but now it felt like a summons."
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"Quick thinking had gotten her this far; now it dragged her into the dark."
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"They weren't stone at all, she realized as her light played over them—bark-fused monoliths, roots coiling upward in defiance of gravity."
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"Wildflowers carpeted the clearing, petals unfurling in defiant color against the night—crimson poppies nodding like blood drops, luminous blues that glowed faintly under moonlight."
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"It was November, for God's sake; nothing should bloom here."
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"And the note—delivered with the pendant—had mentioned Hel, not the goddess but the rifts, places where the Fae-touched bled into the mortal coil."
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"Rory wasn't one for fairy tales; her life had been barrister fathers and pre-law lectures, not enchanted woods."
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"At its center stood a low slab of weathered granite, etched with runes that her light couldn't quite decipher—swirls that might have been thorns or veins."
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"A sound broke the hush—a soft snap, like a twig underfoot, but from the treeline behind her."
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"But her thoughts snagged on the unnatural bloom, the way time seemed to stretch—the glance at her watch showed only minutes passed since entry, yet her legs ached as if she'd hiked for hours."
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"The pendant pulsed hotter, a warning or a lure; she couldn't tell."
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"Faint at first, like wind through dry grass, but words slithered into them—fragments, not English."
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"At the edge of vision, movement flickered—a shadow darting between trunks, too tall for an animal, too fluid."
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"The note had said the pendant would guide her; perhaps this slab was it."
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"The whispers sharpened—Malphora, a voice hissed, close enough to brush her ear."
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"Time warped further; her watch hands spun lazily, minutes bleeding into nothing."
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"At the corner of her eye, shapes stirred—elongated forms slinking along the treeline, not quite humanoid, limbs too many, too sinuous."
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"The sounds pursued—snaps multiplying into a rustle, like a dozen footfalls shadowing her own."
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"A branch whipped her cheek, unbidden by wind; she tasted blood, metallic and sharp."
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"Beyond them, the park should reappear—the familiar paths, the sodium glow of lamps."
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"She ran, torch beam flailing, illuminating glimpses— a hand?"
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"The grove expanded, or perhaps she shrank; distance stretched, her breaths coming in ragged bursts that echoed too loudly, as if amplified by unseen walls."
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"The pendant— it had brought her here."
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"Not aggressive, not yet—just there, a presence multiplying, breathing the same tainted air."
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"Her father's name, her mother's maiden—tied to this?"
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"Finally, a gap in the oaks— the park's edge, real this time, traffic murmuring faintly."
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"But she felt it—the pull, the eyes watching from within."
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"Wildflowers carpeted the clearing, petals unfurling in defiant color against the night—crimson poppies nodding like blood drops, luminous blues that glowed fain…"
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"Rory's breath fogged the air, but the cold felt distant, muffled, as if she'd crossed into a greenhouse sealed against winter."
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"She swept the torch around the perimeter, the light bouncing off dew-slick petals that shimmered unnaturally, like eyes reflecting from afar."
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"But the scar on her left wrist itched tonight, the crescent from that childhood fall suddenly alive with phantom pricks, as if the old wound remembered somethin…"
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"The flowers nearest the sound swayed, petals curling inward as if shrinking from an unseen touch."
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"The flowers trembled en masse, petals unfurling to release a pollen that hung in the air, sparkling faintly."
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"Her full name, spoken with a lilt that echoed her mother's Welsh cadence, but twisted, hungry."
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"Petals crushed beneath her, releasing that pollen in puffs that stung her eyes."
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"The oaks seemed to bend, bark splitting to reveal hollows that exhaled cold breath, fogging her vision."
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"The grove expanded, or perhaps she shrank; distance stretched, her breaths coming in ragged bursts that echoed too loudly, as if amplified by unseen walls."
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"But it burned brighter, the glow illuminating her scar, which wept a thin line of something darker than blood."
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"The movements closed in, peripheral now constant: silhouettes pacing her, matching her stride, their forms flickering like faulty projections."
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"The flowers parted reluctantly, stems whipping at her ankles, slowing her."
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"Sounds layered into a symphony of wrongness: laughter like breaking glass, sighs that mimicked her own exhales."