Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8MF1QRQM35NMRG1N68534

Run Details

Model:
Grok 4
Duration:
1m 34s
Cost:
$0.041000
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rory pushed open the door to The Raven's Nest, the green neon sign flickering like a hesitant heartbeat above her. Rain slicked the streets of Soho, and she shook droplets from her black hair, shoulder-length strands clinging to her damp jacket. The bar smelled of aged whiskey and polished wood, a familiar anchor in the chaos of London nights. She hadn't been back in years—not since that frantic escape from Cardiff, not since she'd sworn off the ghosts that chased her. But Eva's wedding invite had dragged her here, a reluctant pilgrim to old haunts. The place hadn't changed much. Dim lights cast long shadows over walls papered with yellowed maps and black-and-white photos—grainy shots of forgotten spies, perhaps, or just Silas's idea of decor. A few patrons hunched at the bar, murmuring over pints, while jazz hummed low from hidden speakers. Rory scanned the room, her bright blue eyes narrowing. She needed a drink, something to steady the tremble in her hands, the echo of Evan's voice still lurking in her dreams. And there he was. Silas Blackwood, behind the counter, polishing a glass with a cloth that looked as worn as his grey-streaked auburn beard. He moved with that slight limp, favoring his left leg, the old knee injury a shadow he carried like a badge. His hazel eyes lifted, met hers, and for a split second, the quiet authority in his posture faltered. The glass slipped from his fingers, shattering against the floor in a spray of shards. "Rory?" His voice, gravelly from years of secrets and smokes, cut through the murmur. He straightened, the silver signet ring on his right hand glinting as he gripped the bar's edge. "Aurora Carter. Christ, is that really you?" She froze, the scar on her left wrist itching under her sleeve—a crescent reminder of childhood falls and simpler pains. "Silas." The word came out softer than she'd intended, laced with the weight of five years gone. She'd known him back then, in the blurry edges of her university days, when he'd been a shadowy figure in her father's circle. Brendan Carter, the barrister, had called Silas an "old contact," but Rory had pieced together the rest: the MI6 whispers, the botched op in Prague that left him limping into retirement. He'd offered her a flat above the bar when she'd fled Evan, a safe harbor in the storm. But she'd bolted after a few months, chasing anonymity in Edinburgh, leaving without a proper goodbye. He rounded the bar, ignoring the broken glass, and pulled her into a hug that smelled of soap and faint tobacco. His frame, still tall at 6'1", enveloped her 5'6" one, but there was a frailty now, a tremor in his grip she didn't remember. "You look... good," he said, pulling back to study her. "Grown. Hell, you were just a kid last time." "Twenty now wasn't exactly ancient," she replied, forcing a smile. Her cool-headedness, that quick out-of-the-box thinking her friends admired, felt rusty tonight. "And you... the beard suits you. Grey suits you." He chuckled, but it didn't reach his eyes. "Time's a bastard, Rory. Sit. What'll it be? On the house." She slid onto a stool, the leather creaking under her. "Whiskey, neat. The peaty stuff you used to hide for special occasions." Silas nodded, pouring with steady hands that belied the limp. He slid the glass over, then poured one for himself, leaning against the bar. The hidden back room lurked behind a bookshelf to his left, a portal to his old life of clandestine meetings, but tonight it felt like just another shadow. "So, what brings you back? Last I heard, you were up north, vanishing like one of my old assets." Rory sipped, the burn grounding her. "Eva's getting married. Couldn't skip that. And... I don't know. London calls sometimes." Unspoken: the pull of unfinished business, the regret of running. She'd left him a note, terse and grateful, but it hadn't captured the mess of her fear. Evan had found her once, his fists leaving bruises that faded slower than the memories. Silas had offered more than shelter—he'd taught her a few tricks, surveillance basics whispered over late-night drinks. But she'd fled anyway, afraid of dragging him into her chaos. He watched her, those hazel eyes sharp as ever. "You changed your number. Dropped off the map. I get it—running from that prick ex of yours. But you could've trusted me more." The tension coiled in her chest, the gap between who she'd been—that wide-eyed pre-law student, reeling from betrayal—and who she was now: a delivery girl for a Chinese restaurant, piecing together a life from scraps. "I did trust you. That's why I left. Didn't want to paint a target on your back." She traced the rim of her glass, avoiding his gaze. "Heard you sold the place once, then bought it back? What happened?" Silas rubbed his beard, the grey streaks more prominent under the low lights. He'd changed too, significantly so. The quiet authority remained, but there was a hollowness now, etched lines around his eyes from years she'd missed. Retirement hadn't suited him; the bar was a front, sure, but the limp seemed deeper, his movements slower. "Tried to get out for real. Sold to some yuppie chain, thought I'd travel, see the world without a scope. Lasted six months. Bought it back before they turned it into a cocktail lounge with fairy lights." He smirked, but it faded quick. "Truth is, I missed the game. The contacts. Hell, I missed people like you—sharp ones who don't take bullshit." Rory laughed, a genuine bubble escaping despite the undercurrent of regret. "Flattery from the Spymaster himself. You know, Dad still talks about you. Says you were the best agent he ever bailed out of a jam." "Brendan always had a way with words." Silas sipped his whiskey, wincing slightly as he shifted weight off his bad leg. "How is he? And your mum—Jennifer, right? The teacher with the Welsh fire." "Good. Dad's still practicing, Mum's retired to gardening and bossing him around." She paused, the words sticking. Time had carved canyons between them all. She'd barely spoken to her parents since leaving, the shame of her failed relationship a wall she couldn't scale. "They worry about me. Think I threw away a law career for... what? Delivering takeout?" Silas set his glass down, the clink echoing. "You didn't throw it away. You survived. That's more than most." His voice softened, carrying the weight of his own regrets—the botched op, the knee that ended his field days. "I should've pushed harder to help you with Evan. Tracked him down, made sure he stayed gone." She shook her head, blue eyes flashing. "No. That was my fight. You gave me the tools—remember those nights you showed me how to spot a tail? Or pick a lock with a bobby pin?" A fond smile tugged at her lips, but it soured with the unspoken: she'd used those skills to disappear from him too. He leaned closer, the bar's dim light catching the silver ring. "And now? You back for good, or just passing through?" The question hung, heavy with the years' silence. Rory felt the pull of the flat upstairs, the one she'd abandoned, its empty rooms a metaphor for the voids they'd both accrued. "I don't know. London's changed. I've changed." She glanced at his limp as he moved to grab a broom for the shattered glass. "You have too. You seem... tired, Si. Not the unbreakable operative I remember." He swept the shards with deliberate strokes, his beard hiding a grimace. "Age catches up. That Prague mess? It wasn't just the knee. Lost a partner there—good man, family back home. I replay it every night. Could've been different if I'd been sharper." Regret laced his words, the first crack in his composed facade. "You leaving... that hit hard too. Felt like failing another one." Rory's throat tightened. The tension between them thickened, a bridge of what-ifs spanning the bar. Who they'd been: her, the fleeing girl with bright ideas and bruises; him, the mentor with secrets and scars. Who they'd become: her, resilient but rootless; him, anchored to this dim haven but eroded by time. "I regret it, you know. Bolting like that. You were the closest thing to family here." Silas paused, leaning the broom against the wall. He reached across, his hand covering hers briefly, warm against the cool scar on her wrist. "Regrets are like bad knees—they ache, but you learn to walk with them." He pulled back, pouring them both another round. "Stay awhile. The flat's still there, gathering dust. Could use a tenant with your spark." She nodded, the whiskey warming the edges of old wounds. They talked then, easing into the rhythm of lost time—stories of her delivery runs for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress, dodging London traffic on her bike; his tales of bar patrons with shady deals, the hidden room still hosting whispers. Laughter punctuated the regrets, but the undercurrent remained: the unspoken apologies, the paths not taken. As the night deepened, the bar emptying around them, Rory felt the weight lift, if only a fraction. Silas Blackwood, the Spymaster reduced to a bartender with a limp, and Aurora Carter, the runaway turned survivor—they were different now, shaped by years apart. But in the dim glow of The Raven's Nest, with its maps charting forgotten routes, they found a tentative map back to each other. The rain outside had stopped, leaving puddles that reflected the green neon like fragmented stars. For the first time in years, Rory didn't feel like running.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He pulled back [back]"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.441
leniency0.882
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.059
93.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1634
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1634
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"echo"
count1
3
word"glinting"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"weight"
count4
6
word"clandestine"
count1
7
word"unspoken"
count3
8
word"tension"
count2
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"etched"
count1
11
word"echoing"
count1
12
word"silence"
count1
13
word"shattered"
count1
14
word"facade"
count1
15
word"fragmented"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"scanned"
2"echo"
3"glinting"
4"reminder"
5"weight"
6"clandestine"
7"unspoken"
8"tension"
9"traced"
10"etched"
11"echoing"
12"silence"
13"shattered"
14"facade"
15"fragmented"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences77
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1610
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1160
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Soho1
London2
Cardiff1
Eva1
Silas10
Evan3
Blackwood2
Carter2
Rory9
Prague1
Edinburgh1
Chinese1
Time1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden1
Empress1
Spymaster1
Aurora1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Eva"
2"Silas"
3"Evan"
4"Blackwood"
5"Carter"
6"Rory"
7"Time"
8"Yu-Fei"
9"Cheung"
10"Empress"
11"Spymaster"
12"Aurora"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"Prague"
4"Edinburgh"
globalScore1
windowScore1
79.58% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like just another shadow"
1"seemed deeper his movements slower"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1610
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
84.14% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean61.92
std27.52
cv0.444
sampleLengths
095
178
278
338
4125
564
631
719
822
971
1089
1132
1274
13117
1436
1534
1658
1755
1857
1921
2067
2165
2267
2360
2464
2593
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs191
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences95
ratio0.116
matches
0"She hadn't been back in years—not since that frantic escape from Cardiff, not since she'd sworn off the ghosts that chased her."
1"Dim lights cast long shadows over walls papered with yellowed maps and black-and-white photos—grainy shots of forgotten spies, perhaps, or just Silas's idea of decor."
2"She froze, the scar on her left wrist itching under her sleeve—a crescent reminder of childhood falls and simpler pains."
3"Silas had offered more than shelter—he'd taught her a few tricks, surveillance basics whispered over late-night drinks."
4"The tension coiled in her chest, the gap between who she'd been—that wide-eyed pre-law student, reeling from betrayal—and who she was now: a delivery girl for a Chinese restaurant, piecing together a life from scraps."
5"Retirement hadn't suited him; the bar was a front, sure, but the limp seemed deeper, his movements slower."
6"\"You didn't throw it away. You survived. That's more than most.\" His voice softened, carrying the weight of his own regrets—the botched op, the knee that ended his field days."
7"Who they'd been: her, the fleeing girl with bright ideas and bruises; him, the mentor with secrets and scars."
8"Who they'd become: her, resilient but rootless; him, anchored to this dim haven but eroded by time."
9"They talked then, easing into the rhythm of lost time—stories of her delivery runs for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress, dodging London traffic on her bike; his tales of bar patrons with shady deals, the hidden room still hosting whispers."
10"Silas Blackwood, the Spymaster reduced to a bartender with a limp, and Aurora Carter, the runaway turned survivor—they were different now, shaped by years apart."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount966
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.035196687370600416
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.006211180124223602
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean16.95
std8.48
cv0.5
sampleLengths
020
121
218
322
414
55
625
717
89
922
104
1120
1221
1318
1415
1514
1617
177
1820
1917
2023
2131
2218
2316
2421
2524
2610
279
2810
2912
309
318
3211
3310
3412
3510
3614
3728
3819
396
4023
4117
4215
4317
4411
459
4623
4735
4827
4912
67.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.4105263157894737
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
48.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences77
matches
0"She hadn't been back in"
1"She needed a drink, something"
2"He moved with that slight"
3"His hazel eyes lifted, met"
4"His voice, gravelly from years"
5"He straightened, the silver signet"
6"She froze, the scar on"
7"She'd known him back then,"
8"He'd offered her a flat"
9"He rounded the bar, ignoring"
10"His frame, still tall at"
11"he said, pulling back to"
12"she replied, forcing a smile"
13"Her cool-headedness, that quick out-of-the-box"
14"He chuckled, but it didn't"
15"She slid onto a stool,"
16"He slid the glass over,"
17"She'd left him a note,"
18"He watched her, those hazel"
19"She traced the rim of"
ratio0.429
37.92% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences77
matches
0"Rory pushed open the door"
1"Rain slicked the streets of"
2"The bar smelled of aged"
3"She hadn't been back in"
4"The place hadn't changed much."
5"Rory scanned the room, her"
6"She needed a drink, something"
7"Silas Blackwood, behind the counter,"
8"He moved with that slight"
9"His hazel eyes lifted, met"
10"The glass slipped from his"
11"His voice, gravelly from years"
12"He straightened, the silver signet"
13"She froze, the scar on"
14"The word came out softer"
15"She'd known him back then,"
16"Brendan Carter, the barrister, had"
17"He'd offered her a flat"
18"He rounded the bar, ignoring"
19"His frame, still tall at"
ratio0.844
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Silas Blackwood, behind the counter, polishing a glass with a cloth that looked as worn as his grey-streaked auburn beard."
1"The rain outside had stopped, leaving puddles that reflected the green neon like fragmented stars."
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She paused, the words sticking"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.059
leniency0.118
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.1936%