"It’s her day off—a rare thing, with deliveries from Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress starting at dawn—but Silas had insisted she “loosen up” after a week of breaking into doors to deliver birthday cakes to warehouses in East London."
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"The light from the green neon sign—the *Nest* script bleeding green onto the brick wall—slants across the room, painting the old maps and black-and-white photos that line the walls in strange, shifting hues."
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"It’s too late for the dinner rush; the crowd is sparse, a group of traders in ill-fitting suits at the far end, a librarian-looking woman nursing a whiskey, a man in a trench coat poring over a leather-bound book that’s definitely not a textbook."
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"They’d been inseparable until Rory was 18, when Evan—blond, loud, a boxer with a temper—had started showing up outside their school, then outside her house, then inside her bed."
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"Evan’s voice had echoed in her head—*You think I won’t find you?*—and she’d taken the first train to Cardiff, where her father was a barrister, too busy with his cases to notice she’d moved into the spare room."
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"She’s wearing a tailored blazer—navy, charcoal pinstripes—over a silk blouse that’s probably expensive, and black heels that click too loud against the floor."
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"Only it’s heavier now, the smile tentative, the eyes—once so bright, like she had the whole world in a jar—hazy, like she’s been squinting into the sun too long."
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"“Yeah. Me.” She sets the wine glass down, too hard; it rattles."
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"He’s got the left leg bent slightly, the knee swollen, the limp she’s grown used to—though she knows he’d deny it if she asked."
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"For a second, Rory sees the girl she used to know—the one who’d sneak into Rory’s window to share stolen chocolate, who’d scream at Rory’s dad for being too busy with his cases, who’d cried into her pillow when Rory left."
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"For years, she’d thought Eva had gotten tired—tired of chasing her, tired of watching her break."
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"But they’re warm, too—warmer than Rory remembers."
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"Rory laughs, a sound she hasn’t made in a long time—bright, unguarded, *hers*."
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"Time has passed, sure, but it’s also made space—space for healing, for regret, for the kind of connection that doesn’t need words, just a hand to hold."
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"The bell above the door jingles, a high, tinny sound that cuts through the hum of conversation at The Raven's Nest."
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"Rory Carter pauses mid-sip, her thumb brushing the condensation beading on the cheap wine glass she’s claiming as her own."
2
"The light from the green neon sign—the *Nest* script bleeding green onto the brick wall—slants across the room, painting the old maps and black-and-white photos…"
3
"It’s too late for the dinner rush; the crowd is sparse, a group of traders in ill-fitting suits at the far end, a librarian-looking woman nursing a whiskey, a m…"
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"She’s wearing a tailored blazer—navy, charcoal pinstripes—over a silk blouse that’s probably expensive, and black heels that click too loud against the floor."