Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8RS8AE7E51WVKZ9AMNMBV

Run Details

Duration:
20.0s
Cost:
$0.000661
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The neon green sign of *The Raven’s Nest* flickered like a dying ember as Rory Carter pushed through the heavy door, the bell above it chiming softly in the damp London air. The scent of aged whiskey and cigarette smoke hit her first—familiar, comforting—before the hum of low conversation and the clink of glasses settled over her like a second skin. She’d been avoiding places like this for years, but tonight, after another shift at the Golden Empress, the weight of the city had pressed down too hard, and she’d needed the quiet of the Nest’s dim corners. She slid onto a stool near the back, where the light was thinner, and ordered a gin and tonic from a bartender who didn’t even glance up. The glass was cold in her palm, the ice clinking against the sides as she took a slow sip. The liquid burned just enough to distract her from the ache in her wrist, the one that flared when the weather turned. She flexed her fingers, tracing the crescent-shaped scar with her thumb—a childhood accident, nothing more. But sometimes, like tonight, it felt like a reminder of something else entirely. A shadow stretched long across the floor as the door swung open again. Rory didn’t look up, but she knew. The air shifted, thickened, like the moment before a storm breaks. Then, a voice—deep, roughened by years, but still unmistakable. “Well, well. If it isn’t Rory Carter.” She turned. Silas Blackwood stood there, filling the doorway like he always had—tall, broad-shouldered, his auburn hair now streaked with silver, his beard neatly trimmed. His left leg gave the slightest hitch as he moved, a limp she’d forgotten about until now. He wore a dark wool coat, the kind that looked expensive even when it was rumpled, and his right hand rested on the hilt of a cane she hadn’t noticed until he shifted his weight onto it. For a heartbeat, neither of them spoke. Rory’s pulse jumped. *Silas.* Here, in this bar, of all places. The last time she’d seen him, she’d been nineteen, fresh out of Cardiff, her future still a blank page. Now, she was twenty-five, and the page was half-filled with mistakes. “Si,” she said, her voice steadier than she felt. “I didn’t know you still ran this place.” He smirked, the kind of grin that used to make her stomach flip. Now, it just made her chest tighten. “Still here,” he said, sliding onto the stool beside her. “Still pulling strings.” The bartender appeared without being summoned, setting a whiskey neat in front of Silas. He didn’t thank him, just lifted the glass in Rory’s direction. “You look good,” he said. “Healthy.” She almost laughed. “You’re one to talk.” His hazel eyes flickered over her—her black hair, still straight and shoulder-length, her simple black top, the way she sat with her shoulders slightly hunched, like she was bracing for something. “You always did have a way of looking like you were about to outrun trouble,” he said. “Still do.” Rory swirled her drink, the ice rattling. “Funny. I was just thinking the same about you.” Silas chuckled, low and dry. “Nothing’s changed, then.” No, nothing had. Not really. She’d left Cardiff under the cover of night, her bags packed, her mother’s voice still ringing in her ears: *You’re throwing everything away.* And Silas—well, he’d been the one to slip her the train ticket, to tell her not to look back. *Some doors shouldn’t be opened twice,* he’d said. She took a sip, the gin sharp on her tongue. “You look… different.” “Older,” he supplied. “Not just that.” She gestured vaguely at his cane, the way he moved. “You’ve got that limp now.” His jaw tightened. “Old knee. Prague.” Ah. The job that had ended his career. The one he never talked about. Rory remembered the way he’d come back from that assignment—quieter, sharper, like he’d been honed down to something leaner. “You still do it, don’t you?” she asked. “The spy stuff.” Silas took a slow sip of his whiskey. “Occasionally.” “Bullshit.” She set her glass down. “You’re still in it. I can see it in your eyes.” He studied her for a long moment, then exhaled through his nose. “Maybe.” The word hung between them, heavy. Rory’s fingers twitched. She wanted to ask how he’d ended up here, running a bar in Soho instead of pulling levers in some shadowy government office. She wanted to know if he ever missed it, if he ever wondered what might have been. But the questions died on her tongue. Because she knew the answer. Silas had always been the kind of man who thrived in the dark. He’d been her guide through the murkier parts of Cardiff—late-night walks through the city’s underbelly, whispered secrets in the back of his father’s old Jaguar, the way he’d taught her how to disappear when she needed to. Back then, she’d thought she was invincible. Now, she knew better. “You’re working at the Golden Empress, aren’t you?” he said suddenly. Rory blinked. “How did you—?” “London’s a small city when you know where to look.” He swirled his glass. “Delivery driver, part-time. That right?” She nodded, suddenly self-conscious. “Yeah. Pays the bills.” “And the rest?” “The rest what?” “What do you do when the deliveries are done? When the money’s in the bank?” Rory’s grip tightened on her glass. “I read. I walk. I—” “You’re still thinking about law, aren’t you?” The question hit like a punch. She hadn’t told anyone that. Not even Eva. “No,” she said quickly. “I mean—” “Don’t lie to me, Rory.” His voice was gentle, but there was steel in it. “I know that look. You’re still chasing it.” She stared into her drink. “It doesn’t matter.” “Bullshit.” Silas leaned in, his voice dropping. “You think I don’t know what it’s like to want something and not be able to have it?” The words stung. Because he did know. He’d wanted to stay in the game, to keep pulling strings, to be the man who called the shots. Instead, he’d ended up here, behind a bar, running a front for who knew what. “This isn’t the same,” she muttered. “Isn’t it?” He gestured around them—the dim lighting, the old maps on the walls, the way the air hummed with something unspoken. “You think I don’t see the way you look at this place? Like it’s a ghost of what you could’ve been?” Rory’s breath hitched. “I don’t—” “You do.” He reached into his coat pocket and pulled out a silver signet ring, the kind that looked like it belonged on the hand of a man who still had power. “I still have contacts. Still have ways of making things happen.” She should’ve known. Of course he did. Silas Blackwood wasn’t the kind of man who just walked away from the game. He’d just learned how to play it differently. “What are you saying?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. “I’m saying you’re still Rory Carter. The girl who could talk her way into anywhere. The girl who wasn’t afraid to fight for what she wanted.” He set the ring down on the bar between them, the metal catching the dim light. “I’m saying if you want to go back to school, if you want to actually do something with that mind of yours, I can help.” Rory’s heart pounded. This was it. The moment she’d been waiting for, the chance to finally turn the page. But the weight of the past pressed down on her, the years of running, of hiding, of telling herself she didn’t deserve it. “Why now?” she asked. Silas’s expression darkened. “Because I see the way you’re looking at me. Like you’re waiting for me to let you down.” The words landed like a blade. She looked away, her throat tight. “I’m not waiting for anything.” “Bullshit.” His voice was rough. “You’re waiting for me to tell you it’s too late. That you’ve messed up too much. That you don’t deserve it.” Rory’s hands trembled. She hadn’t realized how badly she’d needed to hear that until now. “Maybe I don’t.” Silas reached across the bar and took her wrist, his fingers warm against her skin. She flinched, but he didn’t let go. Instead, he turned her hand over, tracing the scar on her inner wrist with his thumb. “This isn’t the only one, is it?” She pulled back. “What?” “You’ve got more scars than just this one.” His voice was quiet, but it carried the weight of something she couldn’t name. “On your soul.” Rory’s breath came fast. She wanted to deny it. To tell him he didn’t know her anymore. But the truth was, he did. He always had. She looked down at her drink, the ice long since melted. “I don’t know if I can do it,” she said softly. “Not after everything.” Silas was silent for a long moment. Then, he reached into his pocket and pulled out a folded piece of paper. He slid it across the bar to her. “This is the address of a contact. A professor at LSE. He owes me a favor.” His eyes held hers. “You want to go back to school? You want to actually do something with that brilliant mind of yours? Then you start there. And when you’re ready, you come back to me.” Rory stared at the paper. It was that simple. That impossible. “What if I say no?” she asked. Silas’s smirk was back, but it didn’t reach his eyes. “Then you’re still running.” The words hung between them, sharp and true. She thought of all the doors she’d closed, all the chances she’d let slip through her fingers. Of Evan, of Cardiff, of the life she’d left behind. And of the life she was still waiting for. Rory picked up the paper and tucked it into her pocket. “I’ll think about it.” Silas nodded, like he’d expected nothing less. Then, he raised his glass. “To second chances.” She clinked hers against his, the ice rattling. “To second chances.” For a moment, they just sat there, the weight of the past and the promise of the future pressing between them. Then, Silas stood, his cane tapping softly against the floor. “I’ll be in the back if you need me.” Rory watched him go, the way his limp was more pronounced now, the way he moved like a man who carried the weight of the world on his shoulders. She thought of all the times he’d been there for her, all the ways he’d helped her disappear. And she wondered, not for the first time, if she’d ever really been the one in control. She finished her drink in one long swallow, the gin burning all the way down. Then, she stood, her fingers brushing the paper in her pocket. Maybe it was time to stop running.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
55.07% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"he said suddenly [suddenly]"
2"she said quickly [quickly]"
3"He gestured around [around]"
4"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.319
leniency0.638
rawRatio0.227
effectiveRatio0.145
72.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1840
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"softly"
count3
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count2
3
adverb"suddenly"
count2
4
adverb"quickly"
count1
5
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
2"really"
3"suddenly"
4"quickly"
5"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.09% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1840
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"comforting"
count1
3
word"weight"
count4
4
word"tracing"
count2
5
word"reminder"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"trembled"
count1
11
word"carried the weight"
count2
highlights
0"flickered"
1"familiar"
2"comforting"
3"weight"
4"tracing"
5"reminder"
6"pulse"
7"stomach"
8"unspoken"
9"whisper"
10"trembled"
11"carried the weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences133
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences133
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences178
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords14
totalWords1822
ratio0.008
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"Silas."
2"You’re throwing everything away."
3"Some doors shouldn’t be opened twice,"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
91.69% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount1372
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.17
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Rory16
Carter1
London1
Golden1
Empress1
Nest2
Blackwood2
Cardiff4
Silas15
Soho1
Jaguar1
Eva1
Evan1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"Carter"
3"Nest"
4"Blackwood"
5"Silas"
6"Eva"
7"Evan"
places
0"London"
1"Golden"
2"Cardiff"
3"Soho"
globalScore0.917
windowScore1
91.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a reminder of something else"
1"looked like it belonged on the hand of a"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1822
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences178
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs70
mean26.03
std22.72
cv0.873
sampleLengths
098
196
240
37
42
577
648
717
833
931
107
1150
1216
138
1455
1513
163
1718
186
1944
209
2117
2213
2356
245
2561
2611
275
2819
298
303
313
3215
3311
347
3520
3623
378
3825
3947
4043
415
4243
4329
4412
4567
4642
474
4821
4917
94.71% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences133
matches
0"was rumpled"
1"been nineteen"
2"being summoned"
3"been honed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs257
matches
0"was bracing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences178
ratio0.051
matches
0"The scent of aged whiskey and cigarette smoke hit her first—familiar, comforting—before the hum of low conversation and the clink of glasses settled over her like a second skin."
1"She flexed her fingers, tracing the crescent-shaped scar with her thumb—a childhood accident, nothing more."
2"Then, a voice—deep, roughened by years, but still unmistakable."
3"Silas Blackwood stood there, filling the doorway like he always had—tall, broad-shouldered, his auburn hair now streaked with silver, his beard neatly trimmed."
4"His hazel eyes flickered over her—her black hair, still straight and shoulder-length, her simple black top, the way she sat with her shoulders slightly hunched, like she was bracing for something."
5"She’d left Cardiff under the cover of night, her bags packed, her mother’s voice still ringing in her ears: *You’re throwing everything away.* And Silas—well, he’d been the one to slip her the train ticket, to tell her not to look back."
6"Rory remembered the way he’d come back from that assignment—quieter, sharper, like he’d been honed down to something leaner."
7"He’d been her guide through the murkier parts of Cardiff—late-night walks through the city’s underbelly, whispered secrets in the back of his father’s old Jaguar, the way he’d taught her how to disappear when she needed to."
8"“Isn’t it?” He gestured around them—the dim lighting, the old maps on the walls, the way the air hummed with something unspoken."
90.90% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1389
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount70
adverbRatio0.0503959683225342
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.012239020878329733
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences178
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences178
mean10.24
std8.63
cv0.843
sampleLengths
032
129
237
327
419
522
615
713
813
97
1011
119
127
132
1423
1517
1637
177
183
198
2019
2111
229
238
2413
257
2610
273
2814
2911
305
311
323
334
3431
3517
362
377
389
395
403
413
422
4342
448
4510
463
473
4813
495
46.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.25842696629213485
totalSentences178
uniqueOpeners46
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount9
totalSentences121
matches
0"Then, a voice—deep, roughened by"
1"Instead, he’d ended up here,"
2"Of course he did."
3"Instead, he turned her hand"
4"Then, he reached into his"
5"Then, he raised his glass."
6"Then, Silas stood, his cane"
7"Then, she stood, her fingers"
8"Maybe it was time to"
ratio0.074
51.40% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences121
matches
0"She’d been avoiding places like"
1"She slid onto a stool"
2"She flexed her fingers, tracing"
3"His left leg gave the"
4"He wore a dark wool"
5"she said, her voice steadier"
6"He smirked, the kind of"
7"he said, sliding onto the"
8"He didn’t thank him, just"
9"She almost laughed."
10"His hazel eyes flickered over"
11"She’d left Cardiff under the"
12"She took a sip, the"
13"She gestured vaguely at his"
14"His jaw tightened."
15"She set her glass down"
16"He studied her for a"
17"She wanted to ask how"
18"She wanted to know if"
19"He’d been her guide through"
ratio0.421
71.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount94
totalSentences121
matches
0"The neon green sign of"
1"The scent of aged whiskey"
2"She’d been avoiding places like"
3"She slid onto a stool"
4"The glass was cold in"
5"The liquid burned just enough"
6"She flexed her fingers, tracing"
7"A shadow stretched long across"
8"Rory didn’t look up, but"
9"The air shifted, thickened, like"
10"Silas Blackwood stood there, filling"
11"His left leg gave the"
12"He wore a dark wool"
13"Rory’s pulse jumped."
14"*Silas.* Here, in this bar,"
15"The last time she’d seen"
16"she said, her voice steadier"
17"He smirked, the kind of"
18"he said, sliding onto the"
19"The bartender appeared without being"
ratio0.777
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount6
totalSentences121
matches
0"Now, she was twenty-five, and"
1"Now, it just made her"
2"Because she knew the answer."
3"Now, she knew better."
4"Because he did know."
5"To tell him he didn’t"
ratio0.05
84.55% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She slid onto a stool near the back, where the light was thinner, and ordered a gin and tonic from a bartender who didn’t even glance up."
1"He wore a dark wool coat, the kind that looked expensive even when it was rumpled, and his right hand rested on the hilt of a cane she hadn’t noticed until he s…"
2"He smirked, the kind of grin that used to make her stomach flip."
3"Rory watched him go, the way his limp was more pronounced now, the way he moved like a man who carried the weight of the world on his shoulders."
34.09% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she said, her voice steadier than she felt"
1"Silas leaned in, his voice dropping"
2"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
3"He set, the metal catching the dim light"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.174
leniency0.348
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.029
84.5278%