Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8T7ZXHW9A90HM1ZND21BP

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Duration:
9.3s
Cost:
$0.000342
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The neon green sign of *The Raven’s Nest* flickered weakly against the London drizzle, its glow bleeding into the pavement like a bruise. Inside, the air smelled of aged whiskey and something faintly metallic—old blood, maybe, or the scent of secrets left to dry. Aurora Carter—Rory, if anyone asked—leaned against the bar, nursing a gin and tonic she hadn’t touched in twenty minutes. The ice had long since melted into a watery sludge, the glass rim damp against her fingers. She hadn’t meant to come here. Not after all these years. She’d been in the neighborhood for another reason entirely—delivering a takeout order for Golden Empress, the last stop before heading back to her flat above Silas’ bar. But the sign had caught her eye, just like it always had. The Raven’s Nest had been her and Eva’s second home once, back when they were still kids with too much time and nowhere else to go. Back when the world felt like it was theirs to shape, not just survive. The door chimed softly behind her, and she didn’t turn. She knew that walk before she saw him. The way his left leg dragged just slightly, the way his shoulders carried the weight of a man who’d seen too much. She exhaled through her nose, fingers tightening around the glass. “Took you long enough,” a voice drawled from behind her. She turned slowly, bracing herself. Silas Blackwood stood there, older than she remembered, but not by much. His auburn hair was streaked with silver now, his beard neatly trimmed, but his hazel eyes were the same—sharp, assessing, like they always had been. The silver signet ring on his right hand glinted under the dim bar lights, a relic from a life she barely knew. “Si,” she said, voice flat. “I didn’t know you were still here.” He smirked, pushing off the bar to lean against it beside her. The movement was careful, deliberate, like he was reminding her—and himself—that time hadn’t been kind. “Thought I’d retire to the countryside. Turns out I like the city too much.” She studied him. The lines around his mouth were deeper now, his jaw more angular. He looked like a man who’d made peace with things, or at least learned to live with them. She didn’t. “You look different,” she said, because it was the only thing that came to mind. He laughed, low and rough. “So do you.” She ignored that. “You still run this place?” “Still run it.” He gestured to the bar. “Still own it. Still pretend I don’t know half the people who walk through that door.” She took a slow sip of her drink, the gin burning the back of her throat. “And the other half?” His gaze flicked to her, unreadable. “The other half don’t walk through the door.” A beat. The kind that hung between them like a question neither wanted to ask. She changed the subject. “Eva still alive?” Silas’ expression darkened just slightly. “She is.” “Good.” Rory set her glass down. “I should’ve known you’d be the one to tell me.” “You should’ve known a lot of things,” he said quietly. The words hung between them, heavy as the silence that followed. She looked away first, her fingers tracing the scar on her left wrist—the one from the childhood accident, the one that had never fully healed, not like the rest of her. She’d thought about it often lately. “You look like you’ve been doing okay,” Silas said, breaking the tension. “Working at the restaurant. Living above here.” “It’s fine,” she said, because it was. Mostly. She had a job. A roof over her head. A life that didn’t involve running from things anymore. But fine wasn’t the same as good. Silas studied her for a long moment. “You ever think about going back to law?” She barked out a laugh. “Like I’d ever be good enough.” “You were always good enough,” he said, voice low. “You just didn’t want to be.” She turned to face him fully, her blue eyes sharp. “That’s not what this is about.” “Isn’t it?” He tilted his head, watching her. “You ran, Rory. And you never looked back.” The name stung. She’d hated it when he called her that, back when they were kids. Now, it felt like a rebuke. “People change,” she said, her voice tighter. “People do.” He took a slow sip of his drink, a whiskey neat, the way he always had. “But some things don’t.” She wanted to argue. She wanted to tell him she’d changed. That she wasn’t the same girl who’d left Cardiff behind, who’d let Evan break her, who’d thought she could outrun everything. But the words stuck in her throat. Silas sighed, rubbing his left knee absently. The limp was more pronounced tonight, or maybe she was just noticing it more. “You ever think about what you left behind?” The question hit her like a punch to the gut. She swallowed hard, her fingers curling into her palms. “I left behind a lot of things.” “Like me.” She looked away, her chest tight. “You were always going to leave, Si. You were always going to be the one who walked away.” He was quiet for a long moment. Then, softly: “I never left you, Rory.” She turned back to him, her eyes burning. “You left me with Eva. You left me with a life I didn’t want.” “And you left me with a war,” he said, voice rough. “A job that broke me. A life I couldn’t walk away from.” She flinched. She hadn’t known that. She hadn’t known any of it. Silas exhaled sharply, running a hand through his hair. “I was supposed to be the one who made things right. And I didn’t.” “You didn’t have to—” “Yes, I did.” His voice was low, desperate. “I was supposed to be better than that.” She wanted to reach out to him. She wanted to tell him it was okay, that none of it was his fault. But the words wouldn’t come. Because some things weren’t okay. Because some things were just *done*. She looked away, her throat tight. “I should go.” Silas didn’t stop her. He just watched her as she grabbed her untouched drink and made her way to the door. The neon sign flickered above her, casting her in a green glow as she stepped into the cold London night. She didn’t look back. But she could feel him watching her, even from across the room. Even from across the years.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.048
72.75% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1101
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
3"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1101
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"carried the weight"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"unreadable"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"tension"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"carried the weight"
2"flicked"
3"unreadable"
4"silence"
5"tracing"
6"tension"
7"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences87
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords4
totalWords1093
ratio0.004
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"done"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount825
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.73
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven2
London2
Carter1
Rory2
Golden1
Empress1
Nest2
Eva1
Blackwood1
Mostly1
Cardiff1
Evan1
Silas6
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
3"Nest"
4"Eva"
5"Blackwood"
6"Evan"
7"Silas"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
13.64% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like it was theirs to shape, not j"
1"looked like a man who’d made peace with t"
2"felt like a rebuke"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1093
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences115
matches
0"knew that walk"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean23.26
std18.56
cv0.798
sampleLengths
091
179
250
310
464
512
641
735
815
98
108
1124
1220
1314
1415
157
167
1716
1810
1948
2019
2133
2215
2311
2415
2516
2616
2722
287
2922
3039
3129
3226
332
3424
3514
3622
3723
3812
3923
404
4116
4238
439
4441
454
4617
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"was streaked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs163
matches
0"was reminding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences115
ratio0.052
matches
0"Inside, the air smelled of aged whiskey and something faintly metallic—old blood, maybe, or the scent of secrets left to dry."
1"Aurora Carter—Rory, if anyone asked—leaned against the bar, nursing a gin and tonic she hadn’t touched in twenty minutes."
2"She’d been in the neighborhood for another reason entirely—delivering a takeout order for Golden Empress, the last stop before heading back to her flat above Silas’ bar."
3"His auburn hair was streaked with silver now, his beard neatly trimmed, but his hazel eyes were the same—sharp, assessing, like they always had been."
4"The movement was careful, deliberate, like he was reminding her—and himself—that time hadn’t been kind."
5"She looked away first, her fingers tracing the scar on her left wrist—the one from the childhood accident, the one that had never fully healed, not like the rest of her."
76.47% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount299
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.06688963210702341
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.010033444816053512
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean9.5
std6.1
cv0.641
sampleLengths
023
121
219
317
46
55
627
712
826
914
1010
118
1222
1310
1410
155
1612
1725
1822
195
207
2112
2215
2314
243
2512
2618
272
2815
295
303
313
325
338
3416
3516
364
376
388
392
4013
414
423
435
442
456
4610
4710
4811
4931
41.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.28695652173913044
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners33
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
5.37% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences82
matches
0"She hadn’t meant to come"
1"She’d been in the neighborhood"
2"She knew that walk before"
3"She exhaled through her nose,"
4"She turned slowly, bracing herself."
5"His auburn hair was streaked"
6"she said, voice flat"
7"He smirked, pushing off the"
8"She studied him."
9"He looked like a man"
10"she said, because it was"
11"He laughed, low and rough."
12"She ignored that."
13"He gestured to the bar"
14"She took a slow sip"
15"His gaze flicked to her,"
16"She changed the subject."
17"he said quietly"
18"She looked away first, her"
19"She’d thought about it often"
ratio0.537
27.07% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences82
matches
0"The neon green sign of"
1"Aurora Carter—Rory, if anyone asked—leaned"
2"The ice had long since"
3"She hadn’t meant to come"
4"She’d been in the neighborhood"
5"The Raven’s Nest had been"
6"Back when the world felt"
7"The door chimed softly behind"
8"She knew that walk before"
9"The way his left leg"
10"She exhaled through her nose,"
11"a voice drawled from behind"
12"She turned slowly, bracing herself."
13"Silas Blackwood stood there, older"
14"His auburn hair was streaked"
15"The silver signet ring on"
16"she said, voice flat"
17"He smirked, pushing off the"
18"The movement was careful, deliberate,"
19"She studied him."
ratio0.866
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount4
totalSentences82
matches
0"Now, it felt like a"
1"Because some things weren’t okay."
2"Because some things were just"
3"Even from across the years."
ratio0.049
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she said, voice flat"
1"he said, voice low"
2"she said, her voice tighter"
3"he said, voice rough"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"a voice drawled (drawl)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.048
76.5244%