"Winter’s breath fogged her helmet visor, and she pushed it up with a gloved hand, her left wrist brushing the crescent scar—old, from a childhood fall off her dad’s barrister’s bookcase, when she’d been reaching for a copy of his favorite poetry collection."
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"The scar had throbbed then, too, a sharp pain that had made her dad carry her to the hospital, his barrister’s tie loose around his neck as he rambled about “stupid, beautiful curiosity.” Now, it tingled without cause, a faint prickle she couldn’t shake, a reminder that curiosity had always gotten her into trouble—like the time she’d followed Evan into that abandoned warehouse, like the time she’d fled Cardiff for London at Eva’s behest, like now, when she was chasing a pulse from a mysterious pendant."
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"She’d found it tucked into her flat’s mail slot three weeks prior, no note except a scrawled symbol she’d googled to no avail; the unknown benefactor’s silence had gnawed at her cool-headed resolve until last night, when the pendant’s faint pulse had bloomed into a throb so hot it had woken her from a dream of oak stones and twisted laughter."
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"The dream had been vivid: she’d been standing in a clearing of wildflowers, the oak stones rising around her, and a voice had whispered her name—Rory—through a mouth full of broken teeth."
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"Now, as she tied her bike to a gnarled ash tree—its branches bare, a contrast to the something she’d spotted through the trees—her phone buzzed."
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"She’d left the flat at 12:45; the ride should have taken 20 minutes, but she’d been pedaling for what felt like an hour."
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"Codex said they were ancient, and now she felt it—their bark was cold as tombstone marble, carved with lines she couldn’t parse in the moonlight, lines that seemed to shift when she blinked, lines that looked like the symbol on the pendant’s packaging."
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"The smell hit her next—jasmine and honey, thick enough to taste, a scent that had no business in January, a scent that reminded her of Eva’s garden in Cardiff, the garden where they’d hidden from Evan after he’d yelled at her for forgetting their anniversary."
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"This was the Fae Grove, she realized—she’d heard Eva mutter about it once, a hidden pocket between worlds, a place where time didn’t follow the rules, but she’d written it off as urban legend."
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"High, tinkling, like a child’s, but twisted—too sharp, too long, as if it was being stretched through a crack in the earth."
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"She didn’t know about Hel portals—didn’t know the artifact’s purpose beyond the benefactor’s vague implication that it would keep her safe—but now it felt like a warning."
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"Panic nipped at her, but she forced it down—cool-headed, intelligent, she reminded herself, and she began to circle the clearing, running her hand along each stone to find a crack, a mark, anything that would lead her out."
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"A whisper brushed her ear—“Rory”—and she jumped, spinning around."
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"It sounded like Evan, but wrong—like Evan’s voice had been dipped in tar and left to rot."
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"The pendant’s pulse burned her chest, and she realized with a jolt that the warmth was a warning—this thing was tied to whatever the Hel portal was, whatever the benefactor had sent her to stop."
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"A minute passed, or an hour—she couldn’t tell."
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"She couldn’t remember how long she’d been there—minutes, hours, days?"
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"Then she stood, brushing dirt from her jeans, and began to circle the stones again, her eyes scanning for a crack, a mark, anything that would lead her out—all the while knowing that the shadow was still out there, waiting, and that the pendant’s next pulse would be a warning she might not be able to outrun."
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"The oak stones shifted once more, and a single wildflower pushed through the dirt at her feet—its petals black, not the bright hues of the others."
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"She’d woken screaming, her ex’s face flashing before her eyes: Evan’s cold smile, his hand clamped around her wrist, the way he’d said she’d never escape him."
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"She’d lied to Yu-Fei about a family emergency to duck out mid-shift, her quick thinking weaving a story that had the restaurant owner pressing a steamed bun int…"
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"The oak standing stones rose ahead, their trunks hewn into rough pillars that marked the clearing’s boundary."
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"Codex said they were ancient, and now she felt it—their bark was cold as tombstone marble, carved with lines she couldn’t parse in the moonlight, lines that see…"
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"The smell hit her next—jasmine and honey, thick enough to taste, a scent that had no business in January, a scent that reminded her of Eva’s garden in Cardiff, …"
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"High, tinkling, like a child’s, but twisted—too sharp, too long, as if it was being stretched through a crack in the earth."
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"Panic nipped at her, but she forced it down—cool-headed, intelligent, she reminded herself, and she began to circle the clearing, running her hand along each st…"
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"The pendant’s glow brightened, and she noticed a faint hum coming from it, a sound that matched the thrumming in her bones."
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"She pressed it harder against her chest, as if it could shield her from the something that was watching her, the something that had made the stones shift."
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"She closed her eyes, focusing on the pendant’s pulse, on the memory of her dad’s poetry, on anything that wasn’t the shadow’s rumble."
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"A low whine escaped it, a sound that made Rory’s teeth ache, and it retreated, darting between the stones and vanishing into the dark."
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"Then she stood, brushing dirt from her jeans, and began to circle the stones again, her eyes scanning for a crack, a mark, anything that would lead her out—all …"
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"She touched her wrist scar, the crescent mark a reminder of her childhood curiosity, and vowed that this time, she’d outthink the thing that was hunting her."
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"She didn’t know what the Hel portal was, or why the benefactor had sent her here, but she knew one thing: if she didn’t find a way out soon, the grove would swa…"