Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY92EHRR107V752GBPJ3RGJ

Run Details

Duration:
30.6s
Cost:
$0.000228
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The wrought iron gate, stubbornly ornate even in the twilight, scraped against the overgrown path as she pushed it open. Richmond Park at night was usually quiet, a hushed expanse of ancient trees and sleeping deer. This… this felt different. Wrong. Rory quickened her pace, the gravel crunching under her boots, a too-loud sound in the oppressive stillness. The air thickened as she approached the standing stones, each oak a monolith against the fading light. They were older than the park itself, older than London, she suspected. The carvings, barely visible beneath a mossy film, seemed to writhe in her peripheral vision, faces contorted in silent screams. She checked the Heartstone Pendant, a deep crimson gem nestled against her collarbone. It pulsed with a faint warmth against her skin, a steady throb that mirrored the anxious beat of her own heart. It hadn't reacted like this since… she didn’t want to think about where it had reacted like this before. This place, though. The Grove. It felt potent. Too potent. Aurora – Rory, to everyone who knew her – had come here searching for a flicker, a whisper of something. Eva had mentioned it, of course. Eva always mentioned things. Fragments of forgotten lore, rumors of anomalies, a cryptic line about "Isolde’s sanctuary." Eva, with her impossible knowledge of things that shouldn't exist. It was Eva who’d gotten her out of Cardiff, out of the suffocating weight of her father’s expectations and the ghosts of a past she desperately needed to forget. The clearing itself was bathed in an unnatural luminescence. Wildflowers bloomed riotously, a jarring splash of color against the deepening gloom. Yellows, purples, blues – hues that didn’t belong in late autumn. It smelled sweet, cloying, like overripe fruit on the verge of decay. She stepped into the clearing, the shift immediate and unsettling. The air grew heavier, a tangible weight pressing against her lungs. The rustling of leaves, a constant background noise in the park, vanished. An absolute silence descended, amplifying the frantic drumming in her ears. Rory scanned the perimeter. The oaks seemed to lean inward, their branches intertwined, forming a dark canopy that blotted out the last vestiges of the sky. She told herself it was the light playing tricks on her, the shadows lengthening and distorting familiar shapes. But the feeling persisted, a prickly unease crawling across her skin. The feeling of being watched. She pulled out her phone, the screen illuminating her face with a sterile glow. No signal. Of course. She’d expected as much. These pockets… they weren't known for their reliable connectivity. "Just a precaution," she muttered, shoving the phone back into her pocket. "Check everything’s okay. Standard procedure." Standard procedure she’d invented herself. Something to anchor her to reality when the world tilted on its axis. A twig snapped. Rory froze, her breath catching in her throat. It had come from the edge of the clearing, just beyond the circle of wildflowers. A deer, probably. Or a squirrel. There were animals in the park. She waited, listening intently. Nothing. She took a tentative step forward, then another. The wildflowers brushed against her ankles, their petals velvety and strangely cold. Another snap. Closer this time. She spun around, her gaze darting across the shadows. Empty. Utterly, unnervingly empty. “Hello?” Her voice sounded small, swallowed by the oppressive silence. No response. Rory’s hand instinctively went to her wrist, tracing the small crescent-shaped scar, a pale mark against her dark skin. A memento from a childhood tree climbing accident, a reminder of a time when the world had felt simpler, safer. Now, the scar felt like a brand, a badge of vulnerability. She told herself to breathe. In. Out. Rationalize. It was just nerves. It was just the darkness. It was just the… A sound. Not a snap this time, but a soft, rhythmic rustling. Like fabric dragging across the ground. It was coming from behind her. Rory didn’t turn. She could feel it, a presence lurking just beyond her awareness. It wasn't a threat, not yet. But it was something. Something… patient. She focused on the Heartstone Pendant, willing it to provide some clarity, some reassurance. The pulsing warmth intensified, spreading through her chest, a frantic flutter against her ribs. It wasn’t just reacting to the Grove; it was reacting to… something else. Something specific. The rustling stopped. Rory held her breath, her muscles coiled tight. She could hear her own heart hammering against her chest, a frantic drumbeat in the suffocating silence. Then, a voice. It wasn’t loud, but it resonated within her skull, a low murmur that seemed to bypass her ears entirely. It wasn't in any language she recognized, but somehow, she understood. *Lost.* The word echoed in her mind, a chilling whisper. Rory finally turned, her gaze sweeping across the clearing. She saw nothing. Only the strange, luminous wildflowers and the looming shadows of the oaks. But she felt it. A presence, close. Woven into the fabric of the Grove itself. Another whisper, closer this time. *You shouldn’t be here.* The scent of overripe fruit intensified, almost choking her. Rory took a step back, then another, her boots crunching on the gravel path that led back to the gate. She didn't run. Running would be pointless. She just walked, slowly, deliberately, her eyes fixed on the wrought iron gate, a distant beacon of normalcy in this unsettling place. As she reached the gate, she glanced back. For a fleeting moment, she saw something. A figure, indistinct and shadowy, standing amongst the wildflowers. It wasn't human. It was… elongated, distorted, its form shifting and blurring at the edges. Then, it was gone. Rory didn’t hesitate. She pushed open the gate, the scraping sound a jarring intrusion on the silence. She didn’t look back again. The moment she stepped back into Richmond Park, the weight lifted. The silence receded. The rustling of leaves returned. Her phone beeped. Signal restored. She checked the time. Only five minutes had passed. Five minutes in the Grove could be five hours, five days, or five lifetimes. Shaking, she dialed Eva’s number. It rang twice before going to voicemail. “Eva,” Rory said, her voice trembling slightly. “I… I was at the Grove. Something’s wrong. Really wrong. I need to talk to you.” She hung up, staring at the locked screen. The Heartstone Pendant pulsed insistently against her skin, a warning. Something had followed her out. She could feel it. And it was closer than she thought.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1080
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"slowly"
2"deliberately"
3"slightly"
4"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1080
totalAiIsms39
found
0
word"quickened"
count1
1
word"oppressive"
count2
2
word"pulsed"
count2
3
word"warmth"
count2
4
word"throb"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count3
7
word"sanctuary"
count1
8
word"weight"
count3
9
word"gloom"
count1
10
word"tangible"
count1
11
word"silence"
count5
12
word"scanned"
count1
13
word"familiar"
count1
14
word"standard"
count2
15
word"tracing"
count1
16
word"reminder"
count1
17
word"rhythmic"
count1
18
word"could feel"
count2
19
word"resonated"
count1
20
word"echoed"
count1
21
word"chilling"
count1
22
word"looming"
count1
23
word"beacon"
count1
24
word"normalcy"
count1
25
word"fleeting"
count1
highlights
0"quickened"
1"oppressive"
2"pulsed"
3"warmth"
4"throb"
5"flicker"
6"whisper"
7"sanctuary"
8"weight"
9"gloom"
10"tangible"
11"silence"
12"scanned"
13"familiar"
14"standard"
15"tracing"
16"reminder"
17"rhythmic"
18"could feel"
19"resonated"
20"echoed"
21"chilling"
22"looming"
23"beacon"
24"normalcy"
25"fleeting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences133
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences133
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences135
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords5
totalWords1081
ratio0.005
matches
0"Lost."
1"You shouldn’t be here."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
97.77% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1053
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.04
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Park2
London1
Heartstone3
Pendant3
Grove4
Rory11
Eva5
Cardiff1
Standard1
Richmond2
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Rory"
2"Eva"
places
0"Park"
1"London"
2"Grove"
3"Cardiff"
4"Richmond"
globalScore0.978
windowScore1
78.57% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a brand, a badge of vulnerabi"
1"murmur that seemed to bypass her ears entirely"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.925
wordCount1081
matches
0"Not a snap this time, but a soft, rhythmic rustling"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean22.06
std18.54
cv0.84
sampleLengths
058
149
263
382
444
544
660
731
817
918
103
1135
125
1320
145
1513
1610
172
1850
1921
2018
216
2226
2343
243
2525
263
2730
281
299
3024
3115
325
334
3429
357
3622
378
3831
394
4022
4119
425
4323
4412
4523
4618
479
487
99.99% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences133
matches
0"was bathed"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs169
matches
0"was coming"
1"was reacting"
79.37% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences135
ratio0.022
matches
0"Aurora – Rory, to everyone who knew her – had come here searching for a flicker, a whisper of something."
1"Yellows, purples, blues – hues that didn’t belong in late autumn."
2"It wasn’t just reacting to the Grove; it was reacting to…"
87.41% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1052
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar,"
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.04752851711026616
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.019011406844106463
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences135
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences135
mean8.01
std6.02
cv0.752
sampleLengths
020
116
21
33
41
517
617
712
820
913
1021
116
1213
133
142
153
162
1720
186
194
2023
2129
229
2312
2411
2512
2610
2711
2812
2911
304
3122
3218
3311
345
3514
362
372
384
392
407
4112
425
435
4413
453
468
4715
483
493
57.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.4
totalSentences135
uniqueOpeners54
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences111
matches
0"Utterly, unnervingly empty."
1"Then, a voice."
2"Only the strange, luminous wildflowers"
3"Then, it was gone."
4"Only five minutes had passed."
ratio0.045
65.05% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences111
matches
0"They were older than the"
1"She checked the Heartstone Pendant,"
2"It pulsed with a faint"
3"It hadn't reacted like this"
4"she didn’t want to think"
5"It felt potent."
6"It was Eva who’d gotten"
7"It smelled sweet, cloying, like"
8"She stepped into the clearing,"
9"She told herself it was"
10"She pulled out her phone,"
11"She’d expected as much."
12"they weren't known for their"
13"she muttered, shoving the phone"
14"It had come from the"
15"She waited, listening intently."
16"She took a tentative step"
17"She spun around, her gaze"
18"Her voice sounded small, swallowed"
19"She told herself to breathe."
ratio0.387
63.60% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences111
matches
0"The wrought iron gate, stubbornly"
1"Richmond Park at night was"
2"this felt different."
3"Rory quickened her pace, the"
4"The air thickened as she"
5"They were older than the"
6"The carvings, barely visible beneath"
7"She checked the Heartstone Pendant,"
8"It pulsed with a faint"
9"It hadn't reacted like this"
10"she didn’t want to think"
11"This place, though."
12"It felt potent."
13"Aurora – Rory, to everyone"
14"Eva had mentioned it, of"
15"Eva always mentioned things."
16"It was Eva who’d gotten"
17"The clearing itself was bathed"
18"Wildflowers bloomed riotously, a jarring"
19"Yellows, purples, blues – hues"
ratio0.793
45.05% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences111
matches
0"Now, the scar felt like"
ratio0.009
61.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"It pulsed with a faint warmth against her skin, a steady throb that mirrored the anxious beat of her own heart."
1"It was Eva who’d gotten her out of Cardiff, out of the suffocating weight of her father’s expectations and the ghosts of a past she desperately needed to forget…"
2"Yellows, purples, blues – hues that didn’t belong in late autumn."
3"The oaks seemed to lean inward, their branches intertwined, forming a dark canopy that blotted out the last vestiges of the sky."
4"elongated, distorted, its form shifting and blurring at the edges."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory said, her voice trembling slightly"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.333
80.4372%