| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 76.85% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1080 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "utterly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "deliberately" | | 3 | "slightly" | | 4 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1080 | | totalAiIsms | 39 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "quickened" | | 1 | "oppressive" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "throb" | | 5 | "flicker" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "sanctuary" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "gloom" | | 10 | "tangible" | | 11 | "silence" | | 12 | "scanned" | | 13 | "familiar" | | 14 | "standard" | | 15 | "tracing" | | 16 | "reminder" | | 17 | "rhythmic" | | 18 | "could feel" | | 19 | "resonated" | | 20 | "echoed" | | 21 | "chilling" | | 22 | "looming" | | 23 | "beacon" | | 24 | "normalcy" | | 25 | "fleeting" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 133 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 133 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 135 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 5 | | totalWords | 1081 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "Lost." | | 1 | "You shouldn’t be here." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.77% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 1053 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.04 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Park | 2 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 3 | | Grove | 4 | | Rory | 11 | | Eva | 5 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Standard | 1 | | Richmond | 2 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Cardiff" | | 4 | "Richmond" |
| | globalScore | 0.978 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 78.57% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a brand, a badge of vulnerabi" | | 1 | "murmur that seemed to bypass her ears entirely" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.925 | | wordCount | 1081 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a snap this time, but a soft, rhythmic rustling" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 49 | | mean | 22.06 | | std | 18.54 | | cv | 0.84 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 49 | | 2 | 63 | | 3 | 82 | | 4 | 44 | | 5 | 44 | | 6 | 60 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 35 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 50 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 43 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 30 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 29 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 31 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 23 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 23 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 7 |
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| 99.99% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 169 | | matches | | 0 | "was coming" | | 1 | "was reacting" |
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| 79.37% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 135 | | ratio | 0.022 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora – Rory, to everyone who knew her – had come here searching for a flicker, a whisper of something." | | 1 | "Yellows, purples, blues – hues that didn’t belong in late autumn." | | 2 | "It wasn’t just reacting to the Grove; it was reacting to…" |
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| 87.41% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1052 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar," |
| | adverbCount | 50 | | adverbRatio | 0.04752851711026616 | | lyAdverbCount | 20 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.019011406844106463 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 135 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 135 | | mean | 8.01 | | std | 6.02 | | cv | 0.752 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 1 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 57.78% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.4 | | totalSentences | 135 | | uniqueOpeners | 54 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "Utterly, unnervingly empty." | | 1 | "Then, a voice." | | 2 | "Only the strange, luminous wildflowers" | | 3 | "Then, it was gone." | | 4 | "Only five minutes had passed." |
| | ratio | 0.045 | |
| 65.05% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "They were older than the" | | 1 | "She checked the Heartstone Pendant," | | 2 | "It pulsed with a faint" | | 3 | "It hadn't reacted like this" | | 4 | "she didn’t want to think" | | 5 | "It felt potent." | | 6 | "It was Eva who’d gotten" | | 7 | "It smelled sweet, cloying, like" | | 8 | "She stepped into the clearing," | | 9 | "She told herself it was" | | 10 | "She pulled out her phone," | | 11 | "She’d expected as much." | | 12 | "they weren't known for their" | | 13 | "she muttered, shoving the phone" | | 14 | "It had come from the" | | 15 | "She waited, listening intently." | | 16 | "She took a tentative step" | | 17 | "She spun around, her gaze" | | 18 | "Her voice sounded small, swallowed" | | 19 | "She told herself to breathe." |
| | ratio | 0.387 | |
| 63.60% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 88 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "The wrought iron gate, stubbornly" | | 1 | "Richmond Park at night was" | | 2 | "this felt different." | | 3 | "Rory quickened her pace, the" | | 4 | "The air thickened as she" | | 5 | "They were older than the" | | 6 | "The carvings, barely visible beneath" | | 7 | "She checked the Heartstone Pendant," | | 8 | "It pulsed with a faint" | | 9 | "It hadn't reacted like this" | | 10 | "she didn’t want to think" | | 11 | "This place, though." | | 12 | "It felt potent." | | 13 | "Aurora – Rory, to everyone" | | 14 | "Eva had mentioned it, of" | | 15 | "Eva always mentioned things." | | 16 | "It was Eva who’d gotten" | | 17 | "The clearing itself was bathed" | | 18 | "Wildflowers bloomed riotously, a jarring" | | 19 | "Yellows, purples, blues – hues" |
| | ratio | 0.793 | |
| 45.05% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, the scar felt like" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 61.69% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "It pulsed with a faint warmth against her skin, a steady throb that mirrored the anxious beat of her own heart." | | 1 | "It was Eva who’d gotten her out of Cardiff, out of the suffocating weight of her father’s expectations and the ghosts of a past she desperately needed to forget…" | | 2 | "Yellows, purples, blues – hues that didn’t belong in late autumn." | | 3 | "The oaks seemed to lean inward, their branches intertwined, forming a dark canopy that blotted out the last vestiges of the sky." | | 4 | "elongated, distorted, its form shifting and blurring at the edges." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory said, her voice trembling slightly" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |