"Aurora Carter—Rory to those who mattered—pushed through the green glow of The Raven's Nest's sign, the door's bell jangling like a half-forgotten warning."
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"She'd only moved into the flat upstairs three days ago—cheap rent, proximity to work, and a vague assurance from the estate agent that the owner was \"discreet.\" Rory hadn't ventured down yet."
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"Walls papered with sepia photographs—grainy spies in trench coats, or were they just actors?—and yellowed maps of cities Rory half-recognized: Prague, Berlin, Cardiff."
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"Rory ordered without looking fully—a pint of bitter, thanks—her gaze on the scarred wood of the bar."
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"Last she'd seen him, properly seen him, was eight—no, nine—years ago."
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"Rory's laugh scraped out, bitter as the ale. She twisted her left wrist absently, thumb tracing the crescent scar from that stupid bike crash at twelve—Silas had bandaged it once, grumbling about tetanus while her father laughed. \"Conquering."
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"She nodded, surprised he knew. Childhood friend Eva, the one who'd yanked her from Evan's grip six months back—bruises fading but echoes loud. \"Yeah."
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"\"Liar.\" She met his gaze, saw the flicker—recognition of the hollows under her eyes, the tension in her shoulders from more than rain. \"You, though..."
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"She leaned forward, elbows on wood sticky with spills. Time rushed in, unbidden: Silas at nineteen, no—twenty-five then, vibrant, spinning tales of shadows in Vienna while flipping coasters into her palm. He'd been her father's contact, peripheral MI6 orbit, the exciting uncle who vanished for months. She'd idolized him, scribbled spy novels in margins of textbooks. \"Nostalgia."
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"The woman in the trench coat left, bell jangling, leaving a chill draft. Rory shivered, shrugged off her jacket. Underneath, a faded Cardiff Uni hoodie—relic of ambitions abandoned. \"Folded plenty."
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"Evan—you remember him?"
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"Contacts trickle in—old assets, favors owed."
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"Lost a partner there—good man, faster than me."
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"Silas reached across, hesitated, then covered her hand with his—callused, steady. \"Running's not folding, kid."
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"But Rory—stay."
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"He limped away, serving the suits with clipped efficiency, but his glance back lingered—hazel on blue, bridging the chasm. Time hadn't erased them; it had scarred them both, crescents on wrists and knees. Regret hung in the air, thick as smoke, but beneath it, possibility stirred. The Raven's Nest wasn't just a bar. It was a perch."
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"Rory sipped slower now, watching him move through the dim light. Maps on walls whispered of paths untaken—Berlin's alleys, Cardiff's courts. She'd changed: no longer the girl with stars in her eyes, but sharper, resilient. Silas had weathered into something steadfast, his spymaster edge dulled but not blunted. Conversation flowed in fits as the night deepened—he darted back between orders, sharing fragments: a contact in Yu-Fei's kitchen funneling whispers from Hong Kong, Eva's latest escapade in PR."
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"Midnight neared, patrons thinning. The woman in trench coat returned briefly, slipped Silas an envelope through the bookshelf—gone in seconds. Rory watched, pulse quickening. \"Still playing?\""
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"He nodded, no more words needed. As she climbed the creaking stairs to her flat, rain easing, the weight lifted fractionally. Time was a thief, but tonight, in the Nest's glow, they'd reclaimed a piece. Unspoken regrets lingered, but friendship—mentorship—endured, scarred and true."
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"Aurora Carter—Rory to those who mattered—pushed through the green glow of The Raven's Nest's sign, the door's bell jangling like a half-forgotten warning."
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"Deliveries kept her pedaling through London's arteries all day, dodging cabs and tourists, her thighs burning under the strain."
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"Tall, broad-shouldered, grey-streaked auburn hair swept back, a neatly trimmed beard framing a face etched with lines that spoke of decisions long calcified."
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"Summer before uni, her father's old friend from some barrister circuit, dropping by the Cardiff house with stories that skirted the edges of classified."
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"The weight settled, heavy as the rain outside pattering harder now. Nine years: she'd been the prodigy, quick-thinking Rory with out-of-the-box escapes from fam…"
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"Rory sipped slower now, watching him move through the dim light. Maps on walls whispered of paths untaken—Berlin's alleys, Cardiff's courts. She'd changed: no l…"