| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 77.62% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1117 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "deliberately" | | 3 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1117 | | totalAiIsms | 34 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "oppressive" | | 2 | "echoes" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "impose" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "intensity" | | 9 | "sense of" | | 10 | "traced" | | 11 | "down her spine" | | 12 | "stomach" | | 13 | "echo" | | 14 | "resonated" | | 15 | "scanned" | | 16 | "loomed" | | 17 | "sentinels" | | 18 | "gleaming" | | 19 | "flicker" | | 20 | "fleeting" | | 21 | "profound" | | 22 | "pounding" | | 23 | "comforting" | | 24 | "otherworldly" | | 25 | "chilling" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 51.67% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 4 | | totalWords | 1122 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "watching" | | 1 | "You trespass." | | 2 | "wrong" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 1090 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.55 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Grove | 5 | | Park | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Dymas | 2 | | Aurora | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Dymas" | | 3 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 76.47% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "something like this, let alone a piece of Dy" | | 1 | "something akin to cold fear traced its way down" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1122 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 43.15 | | std | 23.15 | | cv | 0.537 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 84 | | 1 | 69 | | 2 | 83 | | 3 | 69 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 56 | | 8 | 45 | | 9 | 35 | | 10 | 49 | | 11 | 55 | | 12 | 53 | | 13 | 54 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 64 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 45 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 35 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 55 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 60 |
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| 97.80% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "being weighed" | | 1 | "being observed" | | 2 | "being hunted" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 166 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 94 | | ratio | 0.074 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a fine, insistent drizzle that clung to everything – the slick, moss-covered stones, the low-hanging branches of the oaks, and the unsettlingly bright petals of the wildflowers blooming in the Grove." | | 1 | "A persistent, insistent feeling that the pendant – the Heartstone – was strongest here." | | 2 | "Twenty minutes had passed since she’d stepped through the shimmering distortion – the ‘pocket’ – that marked the boundary between Earth and the Fae realm, but the rain hadn’t stopped." | | 3 | "But the feeling persisted – the sense of being observed." | | 4 | "It wasn't a pleasant tune; it was unsettling, mournful, filled with a haunting quality that resonated deep within her." | | 5 | "The music grew slightly louder, and she noticed something moving at the edge of her vision – a flicker of movement between the trees." | | 6 | "The Heartstone pulsed with an increasingly frantic rhythm against her chest, and the scent of damp earth and something else – something sweet and cloying, like overripe fruit – filled her nostrils." |
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| 92.81% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 140 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "slick, moss-covered stones," |
| | adverbCount | 3 | | adverbRatio | 0.02142857142857143 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02142857142857143 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 94 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 94 | | mean | 11.94 | | std | 8.07 | | cv | 0.676 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 41.13% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.32978723404255317 | | totalSentences | 94 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, another snap, closer this" | | 1 | "Just the static hiss of" | | 2 | "Just a shadow, a distortion" | | 3 | "Then, a voice." | | 4 | "Then, she saw it." | | 5 | "Just a glimpse, a fleeting" |
| | ratio | 0.071 | |
| 36.47% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a fine, insistent" | | 1 | "She’d told Eva it was" | | 2 | "he’d typed, the name flickering" | | 3 | "They weren't particularly impressive, just" | | 4 | "It felt as though the" | | 5 | "She'd checked her watch." | | 6 | "It hadn’t lessened." | | 7 | "It hadn’t even seemed to" | | 8 | "It was a beautiful thing," | | 9 | "She’d never known anyone who’d" | | 10 | "It felt wrong, somehow, this" | | 11 | "She didn’t jump, didn’t even" | | 12 | "She simply held her breath," | | 13 | "Her voice sounded small, swallowed" | | 14 | "It was a futile gesture," | | 15 | "She shifted her weight, her" | | 16 | "They weren't actually *watching*, of" | | 17 | "It was just the rain" | | 18 | "It wasn't a physical cold," | | 19 | "It was a deeper, more" |
| | ratio | 0.459 | |
| 54.12% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain hadn’t let up." | | 1 | "It was a fine, insistent" | | 2 | "Aurora pulled her threadbare scarf" | | 3 | "Richmond Park, even in daylight," | | 4 | "She’d told Eva it was" | | 5 | "A persistent, insistent feeling that" | | 6 | "That’s what the anonymous benefactor," | | 7 | "he’d typed, the name flickering" | | 8 | "The standing stones, ancient and" | | 9 | "They weren't particularly impressive, just" | | 10 | "It felt as though the" | | 11 | "She'd checked her watch." | | 12 | "It hadn’t lessened." | | 13 | "It hadn’t even seemed to" | | 14 | "The Heartstone, nestled against her" | | 15 | "It was a beautiful thing," | | 16 | "She’d never known anyone who’d" | | 17 | "It felt wrong, somehow, this" | | 18 | "A twig snapped behind her." | | 19 | "She didn’t jump, didn’t even" |
| | ratio | 0.812 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a fine, insistent drizzle that clung to everything – the slick, moss-covered stones, the low-hanging branches of the oaks, and the unsettlingly bright pe…" | | 1 | "Aurora pulled her threadbare scarf tighter around her face, the damp wool doing little to ward off the chill that had settled deep in her bones." | | 2 | "It felt as though the air itself was holding its breath." | | 3 | "She’d never known anyone who’d possessed something like this, let alone a piece of Dymas’s lore." | | 4 | "It was just the rain distorting their shapes, playing tricks on her eyes." | | 5 | "It wasn't a pleasant tune; it was unsettling, mournful, filled with a haunting quality that resonated deep within her." | | 6 | "The rain obscured her vision, blurring the edges of the trees, turning the wildflowers into indistinct blobs of color." | | 7 | "It was more like a feeling, a sensation that brushed against her mind, cold and unsettling." | | 8 | "The water droplets clinging to her eyelashes began to coalesce, forming tiny, shimmering spheres that drifted downwards, suspended in the air for a moment befor…" | | 9 | "A face, partially obscured by shadow, with eyes that burned with an unsettling, otherworldly light." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "he’d, the name flickering on her phone screen," |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |