Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY94MPGZKAT8H0DFP2XT7HF

Run Details

Duration:
19.6s
Cost:
$0.000153
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain hadn’t let up. It was a fine, insistent drizzle that clung to everything – the slick, moss-covered stones, the low-hanging branches of the oaks, and the unsettlingly bright petals of the wildflowers blooming in the Grove. Aurora pulled her threadbare scarf tighter around her face, the damp wool doing little to ward off the chill that had settled deep in her bones. Richmond Park, even in daylight, felt vast and lonely, but here, within the Grove, it was an oppressive, suffocating solitude. She’d told Eva it was a hunch. A persistent, insistent feeling that the pendant – the Heartstone – was strongest here. That’s what the anonymous benefactor, a man she’d only spoken to through encrypted channels, had said. “Dymas,” he’d typed, the name flickering on her phone screen, “the pendant responds to the echoes of Hel.” Dymas hadn’t offered any specifics, just a location and a plea: ‘Find the source.’ The standing stones, ancient and weathered, formed a rough circle around the clearing. They weren't particularly impressive, just dark, moss-covered oak, but they radiated a subtle, almost painful stillness. It felt as though the air itself was holding its breath. She'd checked her watch. Twenty minutes had passed since she’d stepped through the shimmering distortion – the ‘pocket’ – that marked the boundary between Earth and the Fae realm, but the rain hadn’t stopped. It hadn’t lessened. It hadn’t even seemed to shift. The Heartstone, nestled against her chest beneath her worn jacket, pulsed faintly, a barely perceptible warmth against her skin. It was a beautiful thing, the crimson gemstone glowing with a delicate, inner light, held captive by a simple silver chain. She’d never known anyone who’d possessed something like this, let alone a piece of Dymas’s lore. It felt wrong, somehow, this sudden immersion into a world she didn’t understand. A twig snapped behind her. She didn’t jump, didn’t even turn. She simply held her breath, listening. The rain continued its relentless drumming, a white noise designed to mask other sounds. There was silence for a long moment, thick and heavy. Then, another snap, closer this time. A rustle in the undergrowth. “Hello?” Her voice sounded small, swallowed by the rain and the Grove’s unnatural stillness. It was a futile gesture, a desperate attempt to impose order on the growing unease. Nothing. She shifted her weight, her boots sinking slightly into the muddy ground. The wildflowers, stubbornly blooming beneath the rain, seemed to watch her with an unnerving intensity. They weren't actually *watching*, of course. It was just the rain distorting their shapes, playing tricks on her eyes. But the feeling persisted – the sense of being observed. The Heartstone pulsed again, a little stronger this time, and a prickle of something akin to cold fear traced its way down her spine. It wasn't a physical cold, not exactly. It was a deeper, more insidious chill, rooted in the pit of her stomach. She pulled out her phone again, attempting to contact the benefactor. No signal. Just the static hiss of dead air. Damn it. She’d relied too heavily on this connection, on the promise of cryptic instructions. Another sound. This time, it wasn’t a snap or a rustle. It was a melody. Faint, almost imperceptible, like the distant echo of a music box carried on the wind. It wasn't a pleasant tune; it was unsettling, mournful, filled with a haunting quality that resonated deep within her. Aurora slowly, deliberately, turned. Her eyes scanned the perimeter of the Grove, searching for the source of the sound. The rain obscured her vision, blurring the edges of the trees, turning the wildflowers into indistinct blobs of color. The standing stones loomed like silent sentinels, their moss-covered surfaces slick and gleaming in the dim light. The music grew slightly louder, and she noticed something moving at the edge of her vision – a flicker of movement between the trees. She strained her eyes, trying to make out the shape, the form. It was too fleeting, too indistinct to properly identify. Just a shadow, a distortion in the rain. She took a step forward, then another. The ground beneath her feet was soft and yielding, the mud clinging to her boots. The Heartstone pulsed with an increasingly frantic rhythm against her chest, and the scent of damp earth and something else – something sweet and cloying, like overripe fruit – filled her nostrils. “Show yourself,” she said, her voice firmer this time, though the fear was still present, a cold knot in her gut. The music stopped. The silence that followed was even more profound than before, broken only by the relentless drumming of the rain. Then, a voice. It wasn’t spoken aloud, not in the way she understood the word. It was more like a feeling, a sensation that brushed against her mind, cold and unsettling. It wasn’t a voice she recognized, yet it carried a weight of ancient sorrow. *You trespass.* Aurora froze, her heart pounding against her ribs. She didn't dare move, didn't dare look. She simply stood there, rooted to the spot, listening to the voice, feeling its presence. The water droplets clinging to her eyelashes began to coalesce, forming tiny, shimmering spheres that drifted downwards, suspended in the air for a moment before dissolving into nothingness. The wildflowers seemed to lean towards her, their petals brushing against her face with a disconcerting softness. She felt a tightening in her chest, a pressure building behind her eyes. It wasn’t a physical pressure, but a psychic one, a sense of being weighed down, of being observed with something far older and far more powerful than herself. The Heartstone flared with an intense, blinding light, and Aurora instinctively clutched it tighter against her chest. The warmth intensified, spreading through her body, but it wasn’t comforting. It was… invasive. Like a burning brand. Then, she saw it. Just a glimpse, a fleeting impression at the edge of her vision. A shape. Tall and slender, draped in a gown of woven moonlight. A face, partially obscured by shadow, with eyes that burned with an unsettling, otherworldly light. It wasn't human. Not entirely. There was something… *wrong* about it. Something fundamentally and terrifyingly alien. And as the image solidified, even for a fraction of a second, Aurora realized with a sickening certainty that she wasn't just being observed. She was being hunted. The rain intensified, a torrential downpour that completely obliterated the already limited visibility. The music started again, softer now, but even more insistent, more deeply unsettling. And as the figure began to move towards her, gliding effortlessly through the trees, Aurora knew, with a chilling clarity, that the feeling of wrongness wasn’t just in the Grove. It was in her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1117
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
3
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"deliberately"
3"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1117
totalAiIsms34
found
0
word"chill"
count2
1
word"oppressive"
count1
2
word"echoes"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count3
4
word"warmth"
count2
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"impose"
count1
7
word"weight"
count2
8
word"intensity"
count1
9
word"sense of"
count2
10
word"traced"
count1
11
word"down her spine"
count1
12
word"stomach"
count1
13
word"echo"
count1
14
word"resonated"
count1
15
word"scanned"
count1
16
word"loomed"
count1
17
word"sentinels"
count1
18
word"gleaming"
count1
19
word"flicker"
count1
20
word"fleeting"
count2
21
word"profound"
count1
22
word"pounding"
count1
23
word"comforting"
count1
24
word"otherworldly"
count1
25
word"chilling"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"oppressive"
2"echoes"
3"pulsed"
4"warmth"
5"silence"
6"impose"
7"weight"
8"intensity"
9"sense of"
10"traced"
11"down her spine"
12"stomach"
13"echo"
14"resonated"
15"scanned"
16"loomed"
17"sentinels"
18"gleaming"
19"flicker"
20"fleeting"
21"profound"
22"pounding"
23"comforting"
24"otherworldly"
25"chilling"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
51.67% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences94
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords4
totalWords1122
ratio0.004
matches
0"watching"
1"You trespass."
2"wrong"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount1090
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.55
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Grove5
Park1
Eva1
Heartstone5
Dymas2
Aurora6
persons
0"Eva"
1"Heartstone"
2"Dymas"
3"Aurora"
places
0"Grove"
1"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
76.47% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"something like this, let alone a piece of Dy"
1"something akin to cold fear traced its way down"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1122
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean43.15
std23.15
cv0.537
sampleLengths
084
169
283
369
452
529
61
756
845
935
1049
1155
1253
1354
1421
153
1664
172
1830
1945
2041
2135
224
2355
2428
2560
97.80% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences94
matches
0"being weighed"
1"being observed"
2"being hunted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs166
matches
0"was holding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences94
ratio0.074
matches
0"It was a fine, insistent drizzle that clung to everything – the slick, moss-covered stones, the low-hanging branches of the oaks, and the unsettlingly bright petals of the wildflowers blooming in the Grove."
1"A persistent, insistent feeling that the pendant – the Heartstone – was strongest here."
2"Twenty minutes had passed since she’d stepped through the shimmering distortion – the ‘pocket’ – that marked the boundary between Earth and the Fae realm, but the rain hadn’t stopped."
3"But the feeling persisted – the sense of being observed."
4"It wasn't a pleasant tune; it was unsettling, mournful, filled with a haunting quality that resonated deep within her."
5"The music grew slightly louder, and she noticed something moving at the edge of her vision – a flicker of movement between the trees."
6"The Heartstone pulsed with an increasingly frantic rhythm against her chest, and the scent of damp earth and something else – something sweet and cloying, like overripe fruit – filled her nostrils."
92.81% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount140
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"slick, moss-covered stones,"
adverbCount3
adverbRatio0.02142857142857143
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.02142857142857143
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean11.94
std8.07
cv0.676
sampleLengths
05
133
226
320
47
514
616
732
813
916
1011
114
1230
133
146
1519
1621
1716
1813
195
206
216
2214
2310
246
255
2614
2715
281
2912
3015
316
3213
3310
3424
357
3614
3711
382
397
402
4113
422
439
444
4515
4619
474
4815
4919
41.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.32978723404255317
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners31
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences85
matches
0"Then, another snap, closer this"
1"Just the static hiss of"
2"Just a shadow, a distortion"
3"Then, a voice."
4"Then, she saw it."
5"Just a glimpse, a fleeting"
ratio0.071
36.47% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences85
matches
0"It was a fine, insistent"
1"She’d told Eva it was"
2"he’d typed, the name flickering"
3"They weren't particularly impressive, just"
4"It felt as though the"
5"She'd checked her watch."
6"It hadn’t lessened."
7"It hadn’t even seemed to"
8"It was a beautiful thing,"
9"She’d never known anyone who’d"
10"It felt wrong, somehow, this"
11"She didn’t jump, didn’t even"
12"She simply held her breath,"
13"Her voice sounded small, swallowed"
14"It was a futile gesture,"
15"She shifted her weight, her"
16"They weren't actually *watching*, of"
17"It was just the rain"
18"It wasn't a physical cold,"
19"It was a deeper, more"
ratio0.459
54.12% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences85
matches
0"The rain hadn’t let up."
1"It was a fine, insistent"
2"Aurora pulled her threadbare scarf"
3"Richmond Park, even in daylight,"
4"She’d told Eva it was"
5"A persistent, insistent feeling that"
6"That’s what the anonymous benefactor,"
7"he’d typed, the name flickering"
8"The standing stones, ancient and"
9"They weren't particularly impressive, just"
10"It felt as though the"
11"She'd checked her watch."
12"It hadn’t lessened."
13"It hadn’t even seemed to"
14"The Heartstone, nestled against her"
15"It was a beautiful thing,"
16"She’d never known anyone who’d"
17"It felt wrong, somehow, this"
18"A twig snapped behind her."
19"She didn’t jump, didn’t even"
ratio0.812
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"It was a fine, insistent drizzle that clung to everything – the slick, moss-covered stones, the low-hanging branches of the oaks, and the unsettlingly bright pe…"
1"Aurora pulled her threadbare scarf tighter around her face, the damp wool doing little to ward off the chill that had settled deep in her bones."
2"It felt as though the air itself was holding its breath."
3"She’d never known anyone who’d possessed something like this, let alone a piece of Dymas’s lore."
4"It was just the rain distorting their shapes, playing tricks on her eyes."
5"It wasn't a pleasant tune; it was unsettling, mournful, filled with a haunting quality that resonated deep within her."
6"The rain obscured her vision, blurring the edges of the trees, turning the wildflowers into indistinct blobs of color."
7"It was more like a feeling, a sensation that brushed against her mind, cold and unsettling."
8"The water droplets clinging to her eyelashes began to coalesce, forming tiny, shimmering spheres that drifted downwards, suspended in the air for a moment befor…"
9"A face, partially obscured by shadow, with eyes that burned with an unsettling, otherworldly light."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he’d, the name flickering on her phone screen,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
74.2697%