Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9673S3D7G8HM6TB02Q6EW

Run Details

Duration:
17.7s
Cost:
$0.000146
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain tasted like iron. Rory tilted her head back, letting the cold droplets plaster strands of black hair to her forehead. Richmond Park, usually a riot of green and gold, was submerged in a bruised purple twilight. The ancient oak standing stones, normally silent witnesses to the park’s rhythm, felt…watched. She’d been walking for nearly an hour, the path dissolving into a tangle of mud and ferns the deeper she went, until she’d stumbled upon it: The Fae Grove. It wasn’t a dramatic reveal, no shimmering curtain of light or booming heralds. Just a subtle shift in the air, a prickle on the skin, and the unsettling sense of having stepped through a membrane into somewhere else entirely. The Heartstone Pendant warmed against her chest, a low thrumming vibration against her ribs. It pulsed with a faint, insistent crimson glow, a heartbeat of its own that seemed to synchronize with the thickening dread settling in her stomach. She'd been told to come here, anonymously, by a voice on a burner phone – a voice that hadn’t revealed its own name, only a cryptic instruction: “Where the echoes bloom.” This place felt like an echo, distorted and amplified. She checked the small, worn map she’d printed, a painstakingly reconstructed route based on fragmented entries in a forgotten archive. It didn’t explain *why* she was here, only *where*. The purpose, the reason for this unsettling pilgrimage, remained a frustrating, amorphous weight in her chest. The rain intensified, drumming a frantic tattoo against the leaves, a chaotic percussion that seemed to mock her efforts to remain calm. She pulled her waterproof jacket tighter, the familiar scent of diesel and spilled noodles – a comforting reminder of her life above Silas’ bar – offering little solace. Everything was too still. Too quiet, punctuated only by the relentless rain and the rhythmic thrumming of the pendant. A rustle in the undergrowth. Not the casual shifting of small animals, but something deliberate, circling. Rory froze, her hand instinctively reaching for the small, multi-tool clipped to her belt. She hadn’t intended to come prepared for anything beyond a damp evening, but the unsettling atmosphere had compelled a tightening of her grip, a primal awareness she hadn't realized she possessed. “Hello?” Her voice sounded thin and reedy, swallowed by the rain and the vastness of the grove. Only silence answered. She started walking again, forcing herself to move, to analyze, to *do* something other than succumb to the rising tide of unease. The wildflowers, stubbornly blooming year-round, offered a bizarre, almost lurid beauty. Blood-red poppies, sapphire bluebells, and dazzling white daisies clustered amongst the moss-covered stones, their colors unnaturally vibrant against the gloom. They smelled faintly of something metallic, like old coins and something…else. Something faintly unclean. Another sound. This one closer. A snap of a twig. Rory stopped again, holding her breath. She swept her gaze across the deepening shadows, trying to pierce the gloom. Nothing. Just the rain, the stones, and the disconcerting feeling of being observed. The Heartstone Pendant pulsed stronger, the crimson glow intensifying, casting flickering shadows that danced around her like mocking spirits. It felt hot against her skin, almost painful. She rubbed it absently, attempting to ground herself, to regain some semblance of control. As she moved, she noticed patterns in the moss on the standing stones - not random growth, but deliberate arrangements, intricate spirals and geometric shapes. They felt…familiar, like something dredged from a half-remembered dream. And then she realized. They weren’t just patterns. They were symbols. Crude, almost childlike, but undeniably symbols. A single, spiraling eye. A crescent moon bisected by a jagged line. A hand, outstretched and incomplete. The rain stopped abruptly, leaving a thick, humid silence in its wake. Rory felt a cold dread grip her. The air grew noticeably colder, the scent of metal intensified. The Heartstone pulsed with a frantic, agitated rhythm. She wasn’t alone. She didn’t see anything, not exactly. But she *felt* it – a presence, a weight pressing down on her, a suffocating awareness of something vast and ancient lurking just beyond the reach of her vision. It wasn’t malevolent, not overtly, but profoundly, unsettlingly *other*. A whisper. Barely audible above the dripping rain, like the rustling of silk in a forgotten tomb. It seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once. It wasn’t a voice in her ears, but a sensation, a vibration in her bones. “Lost, little dove?” Rory didn’t turn. She couldn’t. Her muscles were locked, her breath caught in her throat. She simply stared into the dense shadows, trying to pinpoint the source of the voice, trying to convince herself it was a trick of the light, a delusion born of fear. The Heartstone pulsed violently, the crimson glow now almost blinding. A faint humming filled the air, rising in intensity, bathing the grove in an unsettling red luminescence. “You came seeking the bloom,” the voice continued, closer now, laced with a chilling amusement. “But some blooms are best left undisturbed.” A movement. This time, she saw it. A flicker of movement at the periphery of her vision. A tall, slender figure, partially obscured by the shadows beneath one of the standing stones. It was humanoid in shape, but impossibly thin, almost skeletal. Its limbs were elongated, its joints bent at unnatural angles. It wore a cloak of woven moss and shadow, and its face was hidden in darkness. Rory instinctively raised her multi-tool, her fingers tightening around the handle. She didn’t know what she was facing, but she knew she had to defend herself. “Who are you?” she managed to croak, her voice barely a whisper. The figure didn’t respond. It simply tilted its head, a slow, deliberate movement that sent a shiver down her spine. And then, it raised a hand. Not a threatening hand, not yet. Just a hand, pale and delicate, with impossibly long fingers. It reached toward her, slowly, deliberately, as if gathering a fallen blossom. As the hand approached, Rory noticed something embedded in its palm – a single, perfect crimson poppy. And within the poppy, nestled deep in its center, was a miniature, perfectly formed Heartstone Pendant. Identical to hers. The voice, now a clear, resonant whisper, echoed through the grove. “We have been waiting for you, Rory Carter. You are exactly as we envisioned.”
created_at"2026-02-20T19:42:21.827Z" 2/20/2026, 7:42:21 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.714
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1054
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"deliberately"
2"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1054
totalAiIsms33
found
0
word"sense of"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count4
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"echoes"
count1
4
word"echo"
count1
5
word"fragmented"
count1
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"chaotic"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count2
9
word"comforting"
count1
10
word"reminder"
count1
11
word"solace"
count1
12
word"rhythmic"
count1
13
word"silence"
count2
14
word"gloom"
count2
15
word"intricate"
count1
16
word"whisper"
count3
17
word"silk"
count1
18
word"intensity"
count1
19
word"chilling"
count1
20
word"flicker"
count1
21
word"down her spine"
count1
22
word"perfect"
count1
23
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"sense of"
1"pulsed"
2"stomach"
3"echoes"
4"echo"
5"fragmented"
6"weight"
7"chaotic"
8"familiar"
9"comforting"
10"reminder"
11"solace"
12"rhythmic"
13"silence"
14"gloom"
15"intricate"
16"whisper"
17"silk"
18"intensity"
19"chilling"
20"flicker"
21"down her spine"
22"perfect"
23"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
59.80% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences86
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tended to"
2"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences89
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords5
totalWords1056
ratio0.005
matches
0"why"
1"where"
2"do"
3"felt"
4"other"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount1013
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.69
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Heartstone"
discoveredNames
Park1
Fae1
Grove1
Heartstone5
Pendant3
Rory7
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Rory"
places
0"Park"
1"Fae"
2"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
32.81% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like an echo, distorted and amplif"
1"percussion that seemed to mock her efforts to remain calm"
2"as if gathering a fallen blossom"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.841
wordCount1056
matches
0"Not the casual shifting of small animals, but something deliberate, circling"
1"not random growth, but deliberate arrangements, intricate spirals"
2"not overtly, but profoundly, unsettlingly *other*"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean44
std25.9
cv0.589
sampleLengths
0119
179
245
369
461
520
667
742
841
968
1037
113
1244
1342
143
1546
1627
1722
1868
1926
2012
2154
2236
2325
84.86% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences86
matches
0"was submerged"
1"been told"
2"were locked"
3"were elongated"
4"was hidden"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs150
matches
0"was facing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences89
ratio0.056
matches
0"She'd been told to come here, anonymously, by a voice on a burner phone – a voice that hadn’t revealed its own name, only a cryptic instruction: “Where the echoes bloom.” This place felt like an echo, distorted and amplified."
1"She pulled her waterproof jacket tighter, the familiar scent of diesel and spilled noodles – a comforting reminder of her life above Silas’ bar – offering little solace."
2"As she moved, she noticed patterns in the moss on the standing stones - not random growth, but deliberate arrangements, intricate spirals and geometric shapes."
3"But she *felt* it – a presence, a weight pressing down on her, a suffocating awareness of something vast and ancient lurking just beyond the reach of her vision."
4"As the hand approached, Rory noticed something embedded in its palm – a single, perfect crimson poppy."
89.37% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount303
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.0429042904290429
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.0297029702970297
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean11.87
std7.92
cv0.667
sampleLengths
05
117
216
313
429
513
626
714
825
940
1020
119
1216
1322
1428
154
1615
175
1811
1914
2031
2117
223
2322
2411
2520
2611
273
282
293
305
316
3213
331
3412
3519
368
3714
3825
399
404
414
423
436
444
458
465
4712
487
4910
46.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.33707865168539325
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners30
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences81
matches
0"Just a subtle shift in"
1"Too quiet, punctuated only by"
2"Only silence answered."
3"Just the rain, the stones,"
4"Barely audible above the dripping"
5"Just a hand, pale and"
ratio0.074
66.91% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences81
matches
0"She’d been walking for nearly"
1"It wasn’t a dramatic reveal,"
2"It pulsed with a faint,"
3"She'd been told to come"
4"She checked the small, worn"
5"It didn’t explain *why* she"
6"She pulled her waterproof jacket"
7"She hadn’t intended to come"
8"Her voice sounded thin and"
9"She started walking again, forcing"
10"They smelled faintly of something"
11"She swept her gaze across"
12"It felt hot against her"
13"She rubbed it absently, attempting"
14"They felt…familiar, like something dredged"
15"They weren’t just patterns."
16"They were symbols."
17"She wasn’t alone."
18"She didn’t see anything, not"
19"It wasn’t malevolent, not overtly,"
ratio0.383
64.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences81
matches
0"The rain tasted like iron."
1"Rory tilted her head back,"
2"Richmond Park, usually a riot"
3"The ancient oak standing stones,"
4"She’d been walking for nearly"
5"It wasn’t a dramatic reveal,"
6"The Heartstone Pendant warmed against"
7"It pulsed with a faint,"
8"She'd been told to come"
9"She checked the small, worn"
10"It didn’t explain *why* she"
11"The purpose, the reason for"
12"The rain intensified, drumming a"
13"She pulled her waterproof jacket"
14"Everything was too still."
15"A rustle in the undergrowth."
16"Rory froze, her hand instinctively"
17"She hadn’t intended to come"
18"Her voice sounded thin and"
19"She started walking again, forcing"
ratio0.79
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The rain intensified, drumming a frantic tattoo against the leaves, a chaotic percussion that seemed to mock her efforts to remain calm."
1"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed stronger, the crimson glow intensifying, casting flickering shadows that danced around her like mocking spirits."
2"It simply tilted its head, a slow, deliberate movement that sent a shiver down her spine."
3"It reached toward her, slowly, deliberately, as if gathering a fallen blossom."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she managed, her voice barely a whisper"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She'd (would)"
1"the voice continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.571
71.2957%