| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.714 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.77% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1054 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "deliberately" | | 2 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1054 | | totalAiIsms | 33 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "sense of" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "stomach" | | 3 | "echoes" | | 4 | "echo" | | 5 | "fragmented" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "chaotic" | | 8 | "familiar" | | 9 | "comforting" | | 10 | "reminder" | | 11 | "solace" | | 12 | "rhythmic" | | 13 | "silence" | | 14 | "gloom" | | 15 | "intricate" | | 16 | "whisper" | | 17 | "silk" | | 18 | "intensity" | | 19 | "chilling" | | 20 | "flicker" | | 21 | "down her spine" | | 22 | "perfect" | | 23 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 59.80% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "tended to" | | 2 | "managed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 5 | | totalWords | 1056 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "why" | | 1 | "where" | | 2 | "do" | | 3 | "felt" | | 4 | "other" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 18 | | wordCount | 1013 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.69 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Park | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Pendant | 3 | | Rory | 7 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 32.81% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like an echo, distorted and amplif" | | 1 | "percussion that seemed to mock her efforts to remain calm" | | 2 | "as if gathering a fallen blossom" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.841 | | wordCount | 1056 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the casual shifting of small animals, but something deliberate, circling" | | 1 | "not random growth, but deliberate arrangements, intricate spirals" | | 2 | "not overtly, but profoundly, unsettlingly *other*" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 44 | | std | 25.9 | | cv | 0.589 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 119 | | 1 | 79 | | 2 | 45 | | 3 | 69 | | 4 | 61 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 67 | | 7 | 42 | | 8 | 41 | | 9 | 68 | | 10 | 37 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 44 | | 13 | 42 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 46 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 68 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 54 | | 22 | 36 | | 23 | 25 |
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| 84.86% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "was submerged" | | 1 | "been told" | | 2 | "were locked" | | 3 | "were elongated" | | 4 | "was hidden" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 150 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 89 | | ratio | 0.056 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd been told to come here, anonymously, by a voice on a burner phone – a voice that hadn’t revealed its own name, only a cryptic instruction: “Where the echoes bloom.” This place felt like an echo, distorted and amplified." | | 1 | "She pulled her waterproof jacket tighter, the familiar scent of diesel and spilled noodles – a comforting reminder of her life above Silas’ bar – offering little solace." | | 2 | "As she moved, she noticed patterns in the moss on the standing stones - not random growth, but deliberate arrangements, intricate spirals and geometric shapes." | | 3 | "But she *felt* it – a presence, a weight pressing down on her, a suffocating awareness of something vast and ancient lurking just beyond the reach of her vision." | | 4 | "As the hand approached, Rory noticed something embedded in its palm – a single, perfect crimson poppy." |
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| 89.37% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 303 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 13 | | adverbRatio | 0.0429042904290429 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0297029702970297 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 89 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 89 | | mean | 11.87 | | std | 7.92 | | cv | 0.667 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 31 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 25 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 46.07% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.33707865168539325 | | totalSentences | 89 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a subtle shift in" | | 1 | "Too quiet, punctuated only by" | | 2 | "Only silence answered." | | 3 | "Just the rain, the stones," | | 4 | "Barely audible above the dripping" | | 5 | "Just a hand, pale and" |
| | ratio | 0.074 | |
| 66.91% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d been walking for nearly" | | 1 | "It wasn’t a dramatic reveal," | | 2 | "It pulsed with a faint," | | 3 | "She'd been told to come" | | 4 | "She checked the small, worn" | | 5 | "It didn’t explain *why* she" | | 6 | "She pulled her waterproof jacket" | | 7 | "She hadn’t intended to come" | | 8 | "Her voice sounded thin and" | | 9 | "She started walking again, forcing" | | 10 | "They smelled faintly of something" | | 11 | "She swept her gaze across" | | 12 | "It felt hot against her" | | 13 | "She rubbed it absently, attempting" | | 14 | "They felt…familiar, like something dredged" | | 15 | "They weren’t just patterns." | | 16 | "They were symbols." | | 17 | "She wasn’t alone." | | 18 | "She didn’t see anything, not" | | 19 | "It wasn’t malevolent, not overtly," |
| | ratio | 0.383 | |
| 64.94% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain tasted like iron." | | 1 | "Rory tilted her head back," | | 2 | "Richmond Park, usually a riot" | | 3 | "The ancient oak standing stones," | | 4 | "She’d been walking for nearly" | | 5 | "It wasn’t a dramatic reveal," | | 6 | "The Heartstone Pendant warmed against" | | 7 | "It pulsed with a faint," | | 8 | "She'd been told to come" | | 9 | "She checked the small, worn" | | 10 | "It didn’t explain *why* she" | | 11 | "The purpose, the reason for" | | 12 | "The rain intensified, drumming a" | | 13 | "She pulled her waterproof jacket" | | 14 | "Everything was too still." | | 15 | "A rustle in the undergrowth." | | 16 | "Rory froze, her hand instinctively" | | 17 | "She hadn’t intended to come" | | 18 | "Her voice sounded thin and" | | 19 | "She started walking again, forcing" |
| | ratio | 0.79 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 83.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain intensified, drumming a frantic tattoo against the leaves, a chaotic percussion that seemed to mock her efforts to remain calm." | | 1 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed stronger, the crimson glow intensifying, casting flickering shadows that danced around her like mocking spirits." | | 2 | "It simply tilted its head, a slow, deliberate movement that sent a shiver down her spine." | | 3 | "It reached toward her, slowly, deliberately, as if gathering a fallen blossom." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she managed, her voice barely a whisper" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "She'd (would)" | | 1 | "the voice continued (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.286 | | leniency | 0.571 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.571 | |