| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.75 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.58% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1132 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1132 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "echoed" | | 3 | "throbbed" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "uncanny" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "rhythmic" | | 10 | "throb" | | 11 | "dancing" | | 12 | "scanned" | | 13 | "silence" | | 14 | "oppressive" | | 15 | "echo" | | 16 | "stomach" | | 17 | "flicker" | | 18 | "footsteps" | | 19 | "perfect" | | 20 | "flawless" | | 21 | "profound" | | 22 | "sense of" | | 23 | "intensity" | | 24 | "chilled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 112 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 79.08% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 112 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "tend to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "started to" | | 3 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 113 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 9 | | totalWords | 1132 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "“They will find you. This will guide you.”" | | 1 | "looked" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 1117 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.63 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Eva | 3 | | Rory | 7 | | Shepherd | 1 | | Bush | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 5 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Pendant | 1 | | Evan | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Empress" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Shepherd" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like an explosion" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.883 | | wordCount | 1132 | | matches | | 0 | "not the sweet fragrance of a flower, but something metallic, faintly acrid" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 35.38 | | std | 20.18 | | cv | 0.57 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 71 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 56 | | 3 | 89 | | 4 | 60 | | 5 | 61 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 34 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 49 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 40 | | 19 | 64 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 32 | | 24 | 41 | | 25 | 36 | | 26 | 39 | | 27 | 30 | | 28 | 43 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 5 |
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| 92.73% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "was deserted" | | 1 | "was amplified" | | 2 | "was known" | | 3 | "were gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 183 | | matches | | 0 | "was working" | | 1 | "was hunting" |
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| 16.43% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 113 | | ratio | 0.044 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d memorized their arrangement from previous visits - four ancient oaks, their branches gnarled and twisted like grasping fingers, forming a rough square." | | 1 | "The familiar scent of damp earth and pine needles intensified, overlaid with something else—something cloyingly sweet, like rotting fruit." | | 2 | "It was a riot of color – crimson, violet, gold – under the silver wash of the moon." | | 3 | "She’d noticed it before – a subtle dissonance, a quiet that absorbed all sound instead of containing it – but tonight, it was amplified." | | 4 | "Time wasn't linear here; perhaps neither was space." |
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| 88.27% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1117 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "single, perfect white flower" |
| | adverbCount | 52 | | adverbRatio | 0.046553267681289166 | | lyAdverbCount | 20 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017905102954341987 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 113 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 113 | | mean | 10.02 | | std | 6.4 | | cv | 0.639 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 37 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 40.27% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.2831858407079646 | | totalSentences | 113 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a quick scan, a" | | 1 | "Just the quiet." | | 2 | "Only silence answered." | | 3 | "Just enough to understand the" |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 58.46% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d told Eva she was" | | 1 | "She knew Rory wouldn't deliver" | | 2 | "She pulled the gate open," | | 3 | "Her breath puffed out in" | | 4 | "It throbbed faintly, a familiar" | | 5 | "She’d found it by accident," | | 6 | "Its existence felt…wrong, somehow, a" | | 7 | "It was a feeling she’d" | | 8 | "She consulted the small, silver" | | 9 | "It was smooth, cool silver," | | 10 | "It had appeared in her" | | 11 | "She hadn’t wanted to know." | | 12 | "She'd just begun to listen" | | 13 | "She’d memorized their arrangement from" | | 14 | "It was a riot of" | | 15 | "She didn't intend to stay" | | 16 | "She activated the Heartstone, focusing" | | 17 | "It pulsed steadily, a slow," | | 18 | "It was definitely a stronger" | | 19 | "She’d noticed it before –" |
| | ratio | 0.404 | |
| 60.96% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 83 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "The gate of Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "She’d told Eva she was" | | 3 | "She knew Rory wouldn't deliver" | | 4 | "Eva knew she was hunting" | | 5 | "She pulled the gate open," | | 6 | "The park was deserted, the" | | 7 | "Her breath puffed out in" | | 8 | "It throbbed faintly, a familiar" | | 9 | "The Fae Grove wasn’t marked" | | 10 | "She’d found it by accident," | | 11 | "Its existence felt…wrong, somehow, a" | | 12 | "It was a feeling she’d" | | 13 | "She consulted the small, silver" | | 14 | "It was smooth, cool silver," | | 15 | "It had appeared in her" | | 16 | "She hadn’t wanted to know." | | 17 | "She'd just begun to listen" | | 18 | "The standing stones were harder" | | 19 | "She’d memorized their arrangement from" |
| | ratio | 0.798 | |
| 96.15% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, it flared, a sudden" | | 1 | "To turn and flee back" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled the gate open, the hinges protesting with a rusty groan that echoed in the stillness." | | 1 | "The Grove itself was smaller than she remembered, the wildflowers that bloomed year-round impossibly vibrant even in the growing darkness." | | 2 | "The Heartstone on her chest flared with blinding intensity, and Rory knew, with a certainty that chilled her to the bone, that she wasn't just hunting something…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she asked, her voice sounding small and fragile in the stillness" | | 1 | "she demanded, her voice sharper this time" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |