Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY97NN5503K7R8X9C2SENGJ

Run Details

Duration:
38.3s
Cost:
$0.000231
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The gate of Richmond Park loomed, a wrought-iron arch choked with ivy. Rory adjusted the strap of her delivery bag, the weight of the Golden Empress’s duck and plum noodles a dull ache against her side. She’d told Eva she was working late, but Eva knew her better than to believe that. She knew Rory wouldn't deliver to Shepherd's Bush at eleven o'clock at night. Eva knew she was hunting something. She pulled the gate open, the hinges protesting with a rusty groan that echoed in the stillness. The park was deserted, the paved paths dark and empty under a sky bruised with twilight. Her breath puffed out in white clouds, briefly illuminating the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. It throbbed faintly, a familiar discomfort she barely noticed anymore. The Fae Grove wasn’t marked on any maps. She’d found it by accident, a few months ago, chasing a lead that ended up being a dead end. But something about the place had snagged her, held her. Its existence felt…wrong, somehow, a ripple in the fabric of reality. It was a feeling she’d learned to trust. She consulted the small, silver chain around her neck, the Heartstone Pendant warm against her skin. It was smooth, cool silver, the crimson gemstone deep and unsettling. It had appeared in her flat, a week after she’d escaped Evan, left with a cryptic note: *“They will find you. This will guide you.”* She hadn't asked who “they” were, or who had sent the pendant. She hadn’t wanted to know. She'd just begun to listen to it, to follow its faint pulse toward places that hummed with an uncanny energy. The standing stones were harder to find in the dark. She’d memorized their arrangement from previous visits - four ancient oaks, their branches gnarled and twisted like grasping fingers, forming a rough square. As she stepped between them, the air shifted. The familiar scent of damp earth and pine needles intensified, overlaid with something else—something cloyingly sweet, like rotting fruit. The Grove itself was smaller than she remembered, the wildflowers that bloomed year-round impossibly vibrant even in the growing darkness. It was a riot of color – crimson, violet, gold – under the silver wash of the moon. An hour outside, she'd estimated, could be minutes, or days, inside. She didn't intend to stay long. Just a quick scan, a confirmation. She activated the Heartstone, focusing on its warmth. It pulsed steadily, a slow, rhythmic throb. Until now. Now, it flared, a sudden surge of heat that made her gasp. The crimson stone glowed brighter, casting dancing shadows amongst the wildflowers. It was definitely a stronger reading than she’d ever gotten before. Rory scanned the clearing. Everything *looked* the same. The trees, the stones, the riotous flowers. But the silence felt different. Thicker. Oppressive. She’d noticed it before – a subtle dissonance, a quiet that absorbed all sound instead of containing it – but tonight, it was amplified. She took a step, and a twig snapped under her boot. The sound seemed to echo endlessly, bouncing off the trees, magnifying until it felt like an explosion. She froze, listening. Nothing. Just the quiet. The heavy, swallowing quiet. She started to walk again, her hand instinctively tightening around the delivery bag. Unease coiled in her stomach. It wasn’t a rational fear, not like the terror she’d felt when Evan had cornered her in their cramped flat. This was something deeper, something primal. The feeling of being watched. A flicker of movement. At the edge of her vision, between the trees. She whirled around, heart hammering against her ribs. Nothing. “Hello?” she asked, her voice sounding small and fragile in the stillness. “Is anyone there?” Only silence answered. She told herself it was the shadows, playing tricks on her eyes. The Grove was known to affect perception. Time wasn't linear here; perhaps neither was space. But then she heard it. A rustling in the undergrowth, too deliberate to be the wind. A soft, scraping sound, like something dragging itself across the ground. Rory held her breath, straining to hear over the frantic beat of her own heart. The Heartstone pulsed again, more rapidly now, a frantic warning. She moved toward the sound, her footsteps cautious and silent. The scent of rotting fruit was stronger here, cloying and suffocating. She passed a patch of phosphorescent mushrooms, their caps glowing with an eerie luminescence. And then she saw it. A single, perfect white flower lay on the forest floor, near the base of one of the oaks. It hadn’t been there before. It was strikingly out of place amongst the vibrant colors of the Grove. And it was… wrong. The petals seemed too smooth, too flawless, the scent emanating from it not the sweet fragrance of a flower, but something metallic, faintly acrid. As she bent to examine it, a sound made her jump back. A sigh. Long and drawn out, like the rustling of dry leaves. Rory spun around, searching the shadows. “Who’s there?” she demanded, her voice sharper this time. The only response was another sigh, closer now. And then, a glimpse. A flash of white, disappearing behind a thicket of brambles. She took a hesitant step forward, then another. The Heartstone burned against her skin, radiating a painful heat. She pushed her way through the brambles, ignoring the stinging scratches on her arms. The clearing beyond was different. Darker. The wildflowers were gone, replaced by a tangled mess of thorny vines and decaying leaves. The air was thick with the scent of decay. And there, in the center of the clearing, was a figure. She couldn’t make out any details, only a vague outline shrouded in shadow. It was tall and slender, almost impossibly so. It didn’t move, didn’t speak. It simply stood there, radiating an aura of profound stillness. Rory’s mind screamed at her to run. To turn and flee back through the standing stones, back into the relative safety of Richmond Park. But something held her rooted to the spot. A morbid curiosity. A sense of inevitability. The figure slowly began to turn, its movements languid and deliberate. As it turned, she could see more of it. Just enough to understand the source of the metallic scent. It was human-shaped, roughly. But its skin was the color of bone, stretched taut over a skeletal frame. Its limbs were too long, too thin. And its eyes… its eyes were empty sockets, black and bottomless, reflecting the moonlight like pools of ink. It raised a hand, impossibly long and slender, and beckoned. The Heartstone on her chest flared with blinding intensity, and Rory knew, with a certainty that chilled her to the bone, that she wasn't just hunting something in the Fae Grove. Something had been hunting her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.75
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.58% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1132
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1132
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"throbbed"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count2
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"uncanny"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count2
9
word"rhythmic"
count1
10
word"throb"
count1
11
word"dancing"
count1
12
word"scanned"
count1
13
word"silence"
count2
14
word"oppressive"
count1
15
word"echo"
count1
16
word"stomach"
count1
17
word"flicker"
count1
18
word"footsteps"
count1
19
word"perfect"
count1
20
word"flawless"
count1
21
word"profound"
count1
22
word"sense of"
count1
23
word"intensity"
count1
24
word"chilled"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"weight"
2"echoed"
3"throbbed"
4"familiar"
5"pulse"
6"uncanny"
7"warmth"
8"pulsed"
9"rhythmic"
10"throb"
11"dancing"
12"scanned"
13"silence"
14"oppressive"
15"echo"
16"stomach"
17"flicker"
18"footsteps"
19"perfect"
20"flawless"
21"profound"
22"sense of"
23"intensity"
24"chilled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences112
matches(empty)
79.08% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences112
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tend to"
1"seemed to"
2"started to"
3"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences113
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords9
totalWords1132
ratio0.008
matches
0"“They will find you. This will guide you.”"
1"looked"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1117
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.63
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Golden1
Empress1
Eva3
Rory7
Shepherd1
Bush1
Fae2
Grove5
Heartstone5
Pendant1
Evan2
persons
0"Empress"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
3"Heartstone"
4"Evan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Shepherd"
3"Fae"
4"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like an explosion"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.883
wordCount1132
matches
0"not the sweet fragrance of a flower, but something metallic, faintly acrid"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean35.38
std20.18
cv0.57
sampleLengths
071
159
256
389
460
561
617
734
846
932
107
1149
1222
1315
143
1527
1627
1725
1840
1964
2024
2115
2222
2332
2441
2536
2639
2730
2843
2910
3031
315
92.73% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences112
matches
0"was deserted"
1"was amplified"
2"was known"
3"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs183
matches
0"was working"
1"was hunting"
16.43% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences113
ratio0.044
matches
0"She’d memorized their arrangement from previous visits - four ancient oaks, their branches gnarled and twisted like grasping fingers, forming a rough square."
1"The familiar scent of damp earth and pine needles intensified, overlaid with something else—something cloyingly sweet, like rotting fruit."
2"It was a riot of color – crimson, violet, gold – under the silver wash of the moon."
3"She’d noticed it before – a subtle dissonance, a quiet that absorbed all sound instead of containing it – but tonight, it was amplified."
4"Time wasn't linear here; perhaps neither was space."
88.27% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1117
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"single, perfect white flower"
adverbCount52
adverbRatio0.046553267681289166
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.017905102954341987
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences113
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences113
mean10.02
std6.4
cv0.639
sampleLengths
012
124
216
313
46
517
616
716
810
98
1019
1110
1211
138
1416
1511
1637
175
1820
1910
2023
218
2219
2320
2418
2511
266
276
288
297
302
3112
3211
3311
344
354
367
375
381
391
4024
4111
4217
433
441
453
464
4713
485
4920
40.27% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.2831858407079646
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners32
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences104
matches
0"Just a quick scan, a"
1"Just the quiet."
2"Only silence answered."
3"Just enough to understand the"
ratio0.038
58.46% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences104
matches
0"She’d told Eva she was"
1"She knew Rory wouldn't deliver"
2"She pulled the gate open,"
3"Her breath puffed out in"
4"It throbbed faintly, a familiar"
5"She’d found it by accident,"
6"Its existence felt…wrong, somehow, a"
7"It was a feeling she’d"
8"She consulted the small, silver"
9"It was smooth, cool silver,"
10"It had appeared in her"
11"She hadn’t wanted to know."
12"She'd just begun to listen"
13"She’d memorized their arrangement from"
14"It was a riot of"
15"She didn't intend to stay"
16"She activated the Heartstone, focusing"
17"It pulsed steadily, a slow,"
18"It was definitely a stronger"
19"She’d noticed it before –"
ratio0.404
60.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount83
totalSentences104
matches
0"The gate of Richmond Park"
1"Rory adjusted the strap of"
2"She’d told Eva she was"
3"She knew Rory wouldn't deliver"
4"Eva knew she was hunting"
5"She pulled the gate open,"
6"The park was deserted, the"
7"Her breath puffed out in"
8"It throbbed faintly, a familiar"
9"The Fae Grove wasn’t marked"
10"She’d found it by accident,"
11"Its existence felt…wrong, somehow, a"
12"It was a feeling she’d"
13"She consulted the small, silver"
14"It was smooth, cool silver,"
15"It had appeared in her"
16"She hadn’t wanted to know."
17"She'd just begun to listen"
18"The standing stones were harder"
19"She’d memorized their arrangement from"
ratio0.798
96.15% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences104
matches
0"Now, it flared, a sudden"
1"To turn and flee back"
ratio0.019
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She pulled the gate open, the hinges protesting with a rusty groan that echoed in the stillness."
1"The Grove itself was smaller than she remembered, the wildflowers that bloomed year-round impossibly vibrant even in the growing darkness."
2"The Heartstone on her chest flared with blinding intensity, and Rory knew, with a certainty that chilled her to the bone, that she wasn't just hunting something…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she asked, her voice sounding small and fragile in the stillness"
1"she demanded, her voice sharper this time"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
80.9313%