Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY97VFNBBBRXYJHBFXXSFTH

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Duration:
5.9s
Cost:
$0.000254
Provider:
Mistral

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest smelled of aged whiskey and the faintest trace of something sweet—vanilla, maybe, or the lingering scent of a dish Aurora had once helped prepare at Golden Empress. The neon green sign above the door pulsed like a heartbeat, casting a sickly glow over the dimly lit room. Aurora stood at the bar, her fingers tracing the edge of a glass, the cool surface sharp against her palm. She hadn’t come here for the sake of it. Not really. But the bar was where Silas had always been, and the memory of him—of the way he used to laugh, the way his voice carried that quiet authority, the way he’d always have a story to tell—made her pause. She hadn’t seen him in years. Not since the night she’d left London, not since she’d packed her bags and walked out on Evan, not since she’d told herself she’d never look back. But here she was, standing in the same place, the same bar, the same city that had once been her home. The weight of it settled in her chest like a stone. Silas was behind the bar, his back to her, but she could hear him—low, measured, the kind of voice that made people lean in. He was talking to someone else, a younger man with a smirk that didn’t quite reach his eyes. Aurora’s stomach twisted. She didn’t recognize him. Not really. But Silas did. She should leave. She should walk out the door, pretend she never saw him, never heard his voice. But the bar felt too small, too intimate, like it was holding its breath. She took a step forward, the soles of her boots scraping against the worn wood. “Aurora.” The word was a whisper, but it cut through the hum of the room like a blade. She turned, her breath catching. Silas stood there, his hands resting on the bar, his hazel eyes sharp with something she couldn’t quite read. His auburn hair was streaked with gray now, his beard neatly trimmed, but his face was the same—sharp, knowing. He looked older, but not in a way that made her feel old. In a way that made her feel like she’d been waiting for this moment her whole life. “Silas,” she said, her voice smaller than she intended. “I didn’t expect to see you here.” He didn’t answer right away. He just studied her, his gaze flicking over her—her black hair, still straight and shoulder-length, the way her eyes held that same bright blue she’d always had, the way her scar on her left wrist was still there, a reminder of something long past. She hadn’t thought about it in years. Not since the accident, not since she’d tried to forget. “You look different,” Silas said finally, his voice rough. Aurora shrugged. “So do you.” He didn’t smile. “I’ve been busy.” “Of course you have.” She exhaled, running a hand through her hair. “I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to—” “Don’t apologize,” he cut in, his tone firm. “You didn’t come here to apologize.” She looked away, her fingers tightening around the edge of the glass. “I came because I needed to see you.” Silas studied her for a long moment, then turned back to the man at the bar. “You’re not here for the usual,” he said, his voice low. “I can tell.” Aurora’s chest tightened. “I’m not.” Silas didn’t press. He just nodded, his gaze never leaving her face. “You’re not the same person I knew.” She swallowed. “No.” “You left London. You left everything.” She didn’t answer. She didn’t have to. Silas stepped aside, his limp a quiet reminder of the past. “Come on. Sit down.” Aurora hesitated, then followed him to a table in the corner, where the air was cooler, the shadows deeper. She sat, her back straight, her fingers digging into the fabric of her jacket. Silas pulled out the chair across from her, his presence so close she could feel the heat of him. “You’re working,” he said, his voice low. Aurora nodded. “At Golden Empress.” Silas didn’t ask how. He didn’t need to. He knew. He always did. “You’re good at it,” he said. “Better than I ever was.” She looked at him, surprised. “What?” He shrugged. “You’ve got a way with people. A way with food. You don’t just deliver—you make things happen.” Aurora’s throat tightened. “I don’t know about that.” “You do.” Silas leaned forward, his voice dropping. “You always have.” She didn’t want to talk about it. Not here. Not now. But the words kept coming, like they always had. “Eva called me,” she said quietly. “She said you’d been looking for me.” Silas’s expression darkened. “She did.” “She said you thought I was still in London.” Silas exhaled through his nose. “She said you’d changed.” Aurora didn’t answer. She just stared at her hands, the way they trembled slightly. Silas reached across the table, his fingers brushing hers. “You’re not the same person who left.” Aurora pulled away. “I’m not.” “You’re still Rory.” She looked up at him, her eyes burning. “I’m not.” Silas’s gaze was steady. “You were. And you still are.” She wanted to argue. She wanted to tell him she’d changed, that she’d grown, that she’d learned, that she’d been hurt and she’d survived. But the words stuck in her throat. “You’re not the same person I knew,” Silas said again, softer this time. “But you’re still Rory.” Aurora’s breath hitched. “I don’t know what that means.” Silas didn’t answer. He just watched her, his expression unreadable. The silence between them was thick, heavy, like the air in a room that had been holding its breath for too long. Aurora looked around the bar, the familiar details grounding her. The old maps on the wall, the black-and-white photographs of people she didn’t recognize, the way the light flickered across the neon sign. It was all the same. But it wasn’t. Silas reached for his whiskey, the glass clinking against the bar. “You ever think about going back?” Aurora’s stomach twisted. “What?” “To Cardiff. To your parents. To your life.” She shook her head. “No.” Silas studied her for a long moment, then nodded. “Good.” Aurora didn’t understand. She didn’t know what that meant. But she knew, deep down, that she didn’t want to go back. Not really. Not to the life she’d left behind. Not to the person she’d been. Silas stood, his chair scraping against the floor. “I’ve got to go.” Aurora didn’t move. She just watched him, her heart pounding in her chest. “You’re not the same person I knew,” Silas said again, his voice low. “But you’re still Rory.” Aurora didn’t answer. She just looked at him, her eyes burning with something she couldn’t name. Silas turned, his back to her, and walked out of the bar. The door clicked shut behind him, leaving Aurora alone in the dim glow of the neon sign. She should leave. She should go home. But she stayed, her fingers digging into the table, her breath coming in shallow gasps. The weight of it settled in her chest, like a stone. She’d been waiting for this moment her whole life. And now that it was here, she didn’t know what to do with it. She stood, her legs unsteady, and walked out into the night. The city was quiet, the streetlights casting long shadows across the pavement. She didn’t look back. She didn’t know what she was doing. But she knew, deep down, that she had to.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
33.33% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Silas said finally [finally]"
1"she said quietly [quietly]"
2"Silas said again [again]"
3"Silas said again [again]"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.229
leniency0.458
rawRatio0.364
effectiveRatio0.167
84.23% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1268
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"really"
count3
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1268
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"measured"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count2
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"reminder"
count2
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"trembled"
count1
9
word"unreadable"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"familiar"
count1
12
word"flickered"
count1
13
word"pounding"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"tracing"
2"weight"
3"measured"
4"stomach"
5"whisper"
6"reminder"
7"could feel"
8"trembled"
9"unreadable"
10"silence"
11"familiar"
12"flickered"
13"pounding"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences114
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences114
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences151
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1258
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1049
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.1
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Aurora17
Golden1
Empress1
Silas22
London1
Evan1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
places
0"Golden"
1"London"
globalScore0.451
windowScore0.167
74.24% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite reach his eyes"
1"quite read"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1258
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences151
matches
0"changed, that she’dgrown, that she’dlearned, that she’d"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean19.97
std21.19
cv1.061
sampleLengths
0120
16
259
354
43
544
61
790
816
966
109
115
126
1318
1414
1520
1630
175
1819
193
206
217
2215
2352
247
255
2613
2711
286
2919
308
3111
3220
3313
345
359
369
3714
3816
395
403
4110
4210
4331
4417
459
4632
4741
4817
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences114
matches
0"was streaked"
65.32% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs198
matches
0"was, standing"
1"was talking"
2"was holding"
3"was doing"
48.25% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences151
ratio0.033
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest smelled of aged whiskey and the faintest trace of something sweet—vanilla, maybe, or the lingering scent of a dish Aurora had once helped prepare at Golden Empress."
1"But the bar was where Silas had always been, and the memory of him—of the way he used to laugh, the way his voice carried that quiet authority, the way he’d always have a story to tell—made her pause."
2"Silas was behind the bar, his back to her, but she could hear him—low, measured, the kind of voice that made people lean in."
3"His auburn hair was streaked with gray now, his beard neatly trimmed, but his face was the same—sharp, knowing."
4"He just studied her, his gaze flicking over her—her black hair, still straight and shoulder-length, the way her eyes held that same bright blue she’d always had, the way her scar on her left wrist was still there, a reminder of something long past."
98.61% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1058
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.04158790170132325
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008506616257088847
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences151
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences151
mean8.33
std7.12
cv0.854
sampleLengths
030
120
220
39
42
539
66
727
821
911
1024
1118
123
134
142
153
163
1715
1814
1915
201
2117
225
2319
2419
2513
2617
279
287
295
3044
317
3210
339
342
353
363
373
3812
396
408
416
4212
438
4416
4511
463
473
482
493
40.73% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.15894039735099338
totalSentences151
uniqueOpeners24
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
ratio0
45.24% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences103
matches
0"She hadn’t come here for"
1"She hadn’t seen him in"
2"He was talking to someone"
3"She didn’t recognize him."
4"She should leave."
5"She should walk out the"
6"She took a step forward,"
7"She turned, her breath catching."
8"His auburn hair was streaked"
9"He looked older, but not"
10"she said, her voice smaller"
11"He didn’t answer right away."
12"He just studied her, his"
13"She hadn’t thought about it"
14"He didn’t smile."
15"She exhaled, running a hand"
16"he cut in, his tone"
17"She looked away, her fingers"
18"he said, his voice low"
19"He just nodded, his gaze"
ratio0.437
37.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences103
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest smelled of"
1"The neon green sign above"
2"Aurora stood at the bar,"
3"She hadn’t come here for"
4"She hadn’t seen him in"
5"The weight of it settled"
6"Silas was behind the bar,"
7"He was talking to someone"
8"Aurora’s stomach twisted."
9"She didn’t recognize him."
10"She should leave."
11"She should walk out the"
12"She took a step forward,"
13"The word was a whisper,"
14"She turned, her breath catching."
15"Silas stood there, his hands"
16"His auburn hair was streaked"
17"He looked older, but not"
18"she said, her voice smaller"
19"He didn’t answer right away."
ratio0.845
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
ratio0
90.59% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"But here she was, standing in the same place, the same bar, the same city that had once been her home."
1"The silence between them was thick, heavy, like the air in a room that had been holding its breath for too long."
2"But she stayed, her fingers digging into the table, her breath coming in shallow gasps."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"she said, her voice smaller than she intended"
1"Silas said finally, his voice rough"
2"he cut in, his tone firm"
3"he said, his voice low"
4"he said, his voice low"
5"Silas leaned, his voice dropping"
6"Silas said again, his voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
72.2616%