Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9DJDKEXR6W9BKCJ910QTA

Run Details

Duration:
33.4s
Cost:
$0.000217
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The wrought iron gate groaned as Rory pushed it open, the sound strangely loud in the stillness of Richmond Park. It was late, almost midnight, and the park was deserted save for the rustling of leaves and the distant hum of city traffic. Familiar, yet tonight, alien. She’d chosen this spot deliberately, knowing the rumors, dismissing them as folklore. But the air here already felt heavier, colder than it should. She adjusted the strap of her delivery bag, the weight of the Golden Empress order a mundane anchor in the unsettling atmosphere. Yu-Fei would be furious if she was late, but the urgency of her task – the reason she’d sought out the Fae Grove – trumped a scolding. The standing stones were easy to find, gigantic oaks gnarled with age, their branches intertwined like skeletal fingers. They marked the boundary, the locals said, between the world and… something else. Rory hadn’t paid much attention to the stories growing up in Cardiff, attributing them to overactive imaginations. Now, staring at the ancient wood, she felt a prickle of unease crawl across her skin. She’d come for the Heartstone. The pendant, a deep crimson gem nestled in a simple silver chain, pulsed warm against her chest. She clutched it, the familiar heat a small comfort. It had been left for her, anonymously, with a cryptic note: *“Where the veil thins, the stone will guide.”* She'd initially dismissed it, thinking it some elaborate prank, but her friend Eva had insisted, her usually jovial face unusually serious. "Something's happening, Rory. Something old." Rory stepped beyond the stones. The park vanished. The manicured lawns and formal flowerbeds dissolved into a riot of wildflowers, impossibly vibrant, blooming under the moonlight. The scent was overwhelmingly sweet, bordering on cloying. The trees here were different too, taller, older, their bark a strange, silver-grey. This was the Fae Grove, a pocket of ancient wilderness tucked away within the sprawling London park. It was beautiful, undeniably so, a landscape pulled straight from a fairytale. And utterly wrong. Rory's breath caught in her throat. The air tasted thick, almost syrupy, clinging to the back of her throat. The silence wasn't the peaceful quiet of a deserted park; it was an expectant hush, a stillness so profound it made her ears ring. She scanned the clearing, the delivery bag feeling suddenly cumbersome. The moonlight filtered through the canopy, dappling the ground in shifting patterns. The Heartstone pulsed faster, a subtle throb against her ribs. It always did when she was close to… something. A twig snapped. She froze, every muscle tense. It could have been an animal, a squirrel or a rabbit. But the sound had been too deliberate, too *sharp*. She held her breath, listening. Nothing. “Probably just the wind,” she muttered under her breath, the sound swallowed by the heavy air. She started to walk, heading towards the centre of the clearing, the Heartstone drawing her forward. The wildflowers brushed against her legs, their petals strangely soft, almost velvety. As she moved, she noticed details she hadn't seen before. The flowers weren't uniform. They were… arranged. Deliberately placed in patterns she couldn't quite recognize, intricate spirals and looping designs. As if someone—or something—had been tending to them. Another snap. Closer this time. Rory spun around, heart hammering against her ribs. The shadows stretched long and distorted in the moonlight, playing tricks on her eyes. She saw a flicker of movement at the edge of the clearing, a dark shape disappearing behind a thicket of silver-barked trees. “Hello?” she called out, her voice sounding thin and reedy in the oppressive silence. “Is anyone there?” No answer. Only the rustling of leaves, which now sounded less like a natural breeze and more like… a sigh. She took a hesitant step forward, then another. The Heartstone pulsed steadily, a warm beacon in the growing darkness. She focused on it, grounding herself in its familiar warmth. “It’s just nerves,” she told herself. “Eva’s probably winding me up.” But the feeling of being watched intensified, a tangible weight on her shoulders. She felt eyes on her, assessing, observing. The feeling was subtle, insidious, creeping into her mind like a tendril of ice. A low humming started, almost imperceptible at first. It vibrated through the ground, through her bones. It wasn’t unpleasant, not exactly. It was… mesmerizing. Like a lullaby sung in a language she didn’t understand. She glanced up at the trees. The silver bark seemed to shimmer, reflecting the moonlight in an unnatural way. And then, she saw it. At the base of one of the oldest oaks, partially obscured by trailing vines, was a figure. It was tall, impossibly so, its form indistinct, shrouded in shadow. All she could make out were the vague outlines of limbs and a head tilted slightly as if studying her. She blinked, trying to clear her vision. When she opened her eyes, the figure was gone. “It's the shadows,” she insisted to herself, but her voice lacked conviction. The humming grew louder, weaving itself into a complex melody. The wildflowers began to sway, their petals trembling as if caught in an invisible current. Rory stumbled backward, bumping into one of the standing stones. The rough bark scraped against her arm, leaving a faint red mark. She didn’t notice the mark. She was too busy staring. Something was different about the trees now. The shadows weren’t just stretching; they were *shifting*, coalescing into shapes. Vague, unsettling shapes that resembled… faces. Distorted, twisted faces with hollow eyes and gaping mouths. They weren't carved into the bark. They *were* the bark. She backed away slowly, her hand instinctively going to the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a relic of a childhood accident. It throbbed with a sudden, sharp pain. The air grew colder, the cloying sweetness intensifying, suffusing the clearing with a sickly, almost nauseating aroma. A voice, whisper-thin and utterly devoid of emotion, echoed in her mind. *“You shouldn’t have come here, little mortal.”* Rory whirled around, desperately searching for the source of the voice. But there was nothing. Only the trees, the flowers, the shadows. And the growing certainty that she was not alone. She began to run.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.556
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
66.28% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1038
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count2
1
adverb"utterly"
count2
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"deliberately"
1"utterly"
2"suddenly"
3"slightly"
4"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1038
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"familiar"
count3
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"pulsed"
count3
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"profound"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"throb"
count1
7
word"intricate"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"oppressive"
count1
10
word"beacon"
count1
11
word"warmth"
count1
12
word"tangible"
count1
13
word"vibrated"
count1
14
word"complex"
count1
15
word"throbbed"
count1
16
word"whisper"
count1
17
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"weight"
2"pulsed"
3"silence"
4"profound"
5"scanned"
6"throb"
7"intricate"
8"flicker"
9"oppressive"
10"beacon"
11"warmth"
12"tangible"
13"vibrated"
14"complex"
15"throbbed"
16"whisper"
17"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences100
matches
0"felt a prickle"
85.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences100
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
1"seemed to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords18
totalWords1033
ratio0.017
matches
0"“Where the veil thins, the stone will guide.”"
1"sharp"
2"shifting"
3"were"
4"“You shouldn’t have come here, little mortal.”"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount994
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.7
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory7
Richmond1
Park1
Golden1
Empress1
Fae2
Grove2
Cardiff1
Heartstone4
Eva1
London1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Empress"
2"Heartstone"
3"Eva"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"Cardiff"
5"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
78.57% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite recognize, intricate spirals and looping designs"
1"as if studying her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1033
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean31.3
std20.28
cv0.648
sampleLengths
070
149
264
376
45
559
615
743
841
93
1031
1116
1266
135
1444
1517
1620
1729
1811
1934
2034
2124
2248
2316
2412
2547
2610
2743
2830
2917
3019
3131
324
94.74% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences100
matches
0"was deserted"
1"been left"
2"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs169
matches
0"were *shifting"
32.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences104
ratio0.038
matches
0"Yu-Fei would be furious if she was late, but the urgency of her task – the reason she’d sought out the Fae Grove – trumped a scolding."
1"The silence wasn't the peaceful quiet of a deserted park; it was an expectant hush, a stillness so profound it made her ears ring."
2"As if someone—or something—had been tending to them."
3"The shadows weren’t just stretching; they were *shifting*, coalescing into shapes."
82.77% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount999
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount48
adverbRatio0.04804804804804805
lyAdverbCount25
lyAdverbRatio0.025025025025025027
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean9.93
std6.59
cv0.664
sampleLengths
020
123
24
312
411
522
627
718
811
92
1017
1116
125
1317
149
1540
165
175
183
1918
208
2113
2217
2312
243
256
2613
2724
2810
2912
3010
318
321
333
345
3511
369
375
381
3916
4016
4112
4210
434
442
451
4613
478
482
493
44.87% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3269230769230769
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners34
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences89
matches
0"Deliberately placed in patterns she"
1"Only the rustling of leaves,"
2"Only the trees, the flowers,"
ratio0.034
67.19% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences89
matches
0"It was late, almost midnight,"
1"She’d chosen this spot deliberately,"
2"She adjusted the strap of"
3"They marked the boundary, the"
4"She’d come for the Heartstone."
5"She clutched it, the familiar"
6"It had been left for"
7"It was beautiful, undeniably so,"
8"She scanned the clearing, the"
9"It always did when she"
10"She froze, every muscle tense."
11"It could have been an"
12"She held her breath, listening."
13"she muttered under her breath,"
14"She started to walk, heading"
15"She saw a flicker of"
16"she called out, her voice"
17"She took a hesitant step"
18"She focused on it, grounding"
19"she told herself"
ratio0.382
77.98% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences89
matches
0"The wrought iron gate groaned"
1"It was late, almost midnight,"
2"She’d chosen this spot deliberately,"
3"She adjusted the strap of"
4"Yu-Fei would be furious if"
5"The standing stones were easy"
6"They marked the boundary, the"
7"Rory hadn’t paid much attention"
8"She’d come for the Heartstone."
9"The pendant, a deep crimson"
10"She clutched it, the familiar"
11"It had been left for"
12"Rory stepped beyond the stones."
13"The park vanished."
14"The manicured lawns and formal"
15"The scent was overwhelmingly sweet,"
16"The trees here were different"
17"This was the Fae Grove,"
18"It was beautiful, undeniably so,"
19"Rory's breath caught in her"
ratio0.764
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences89
matches
0"Now, staring at the ancient"
1"As if someone—or something—had been"
ratio0.022
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The wildflowers began to sway, their petals trembling as if caught in an invisible current."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she called out, her voice sounding thin and reedy in the oppressive silence"
1"she insisted, but her voice lacked conviction"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she called out (call out)"
2"she insisted (insist)"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.667
81.0361%